IN LOVE….AGAIN…. ISHQ KA RANG SAFED …Second Part
Hello buddies… I am back with the second part of the story IN LOVE….AGAIN….Before starting the second part,just a quick recap…. Dhaani,a widow and a mother of 3 years old Suhaani is seen spending her time with kids in the orphanage while Suhaani is with her Daadi..Suhaas,Suhaani’s uncle loves her like no one…and does the duty of loving his honey Suhaani… Dhaani’s mother in law wants someone for Dhaani who would hold her hand and walk with her wiping her tears and pain.She cannot see Dhaani like that…faking her smile but living in utter pain….So ..what has fate in store for Dhaani…keep reading…Thank you..
So here it goes like this….
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The second part of the story begins……
Not only Dhaani,but there is someone else as well living the life with immense pain in his heart….. A lavish mansion is shown in Mumbai. A man is shown talking in dominating tone… His face is shown… He is Viplav… Viplav Tripathi.. multimillionaire in Mumbai…He hangs up the call…and then looks at the clock on the wall and then goes towards the window… He smiles and thinks Richa…. It’s our Ruchi’s birthday in few minutes…wish you were here…why did you leave me Ruchi…why??? He leans his head in the window folding his hands… closing his eyes and letting his tears roll down his cheeks….
Scene shifts…. It is morning …. Someone tiptoes to a room, opening the door…. A cute boy is seen sleeping. His supereman, batman, spiderman, racing cars are all messed up, lying on the ground…while the boy has cute smile on his face…The person who tiptoed is revealed to be Viplav…who smiles seeing his son sleeping peacefully and caresses his hair…He kisses his cheeks …and says Happy Birthday my baby..and tears roll down his cheeks which he wipes before Rishi could even notice it…. Rishi smiles seeing his dad…and pouts cutely asking for his gift..Viplav smiles…and shows a new toy racing car to his son as his birthday gift… Rishi smiles.. and gets excited seeing that gift…and thanks his dad in his baby voice… Viplav could not help but chuckle at his little munchkin’s antics… His son kisses him…and goes out to show his gift to others in house… Viplav smiles…and thinks… I miss you Richa..Why did you go leaving me??4 years without you…4 freaking years… He then wipes his tears and goes out when he gets a call… He then receives the call and says…. Raj…I will be there… You just keep everything ready…okay!!
Here,Rishi is with his family,his grandmother,his buaa(Viplav’s sister).Rishi is sitting in Kanak’s lap…and is doing antics with his new gift. Kanak smiles seeing it..and asks if he liked it?? Rishi pouts happily…and then Shaalini, Viplav’s sister, teasingly says Rishi…my boy…what will be your age now?? Rishi pouts and says 5(faaaaaiv)… Hearing this…ladies laugh…and Kanak says beta..you will be four… not five okay…Rishi says FOOOOOL(as in a kid saying four)… They laugh because of the little one’s antics…The little one is happily playing with the ladies..He asks where is daddy??? They look on …Shaalini then says…Rishi…every year..your daddy brings cake and we all enjoy your birthday,right??? Toh this time also…he went to fetch a cake…you like cake,right??? Rishi nods in yes…but daddy won’t come like always… They look on…and Shaalini says ..baby…how did you know?? Rishi says…photo album…in his baby voice..Shaalini then says..baby daddy has lots of work in office… but you know what..he always says that he misses your birthdays..and he is sad about it… Rishi then asks if he is sad to miss my birthday..why doesn’t he come?? Will he come today?? Kanak and Shaalini look on while Kanak has tears in her eyes thinking about Viplav and Rishi… Shaalini then says let’s see okay… and goes to play along with him and his racing car that his Daddy brought for him..
After sometime,Shaalini comes back saying Rishi slept while playing…Kanak then says,Rishi is turning to a big boy now…till last year…he would be busy with gifts he got…and had no idea about where his dad goes on this day…Shaalini then asks her mom not to take tension…as Bhaai will manage like every year… Kanak asks how?? Rishi will go to school in sometime..others will be there with their parents..what will we answer him when he will ask about his mother?? Will his little brain would be able to understand that his mom would never be there… Viplav will go through the same pain with Rishi’s questions… Rishi’s innocent questions would be hurting Viplav…god knows what will happen if he goes through the same pain from which it took him 1 whole year to come out…yaad nahi tujhe…he used to stay distant with Rishi…he used to steal Rishi’s glances but never come to hold his son… It took one year to make him understand that the innocent soul needs him… not his anger and carelessness.. Shaalini nods….and says …Maa.. I was thinking…if we should make Bhaaiya agree for remarriage??? Kanak looks on….Shaalini continues.. Rishi will get a mom…Bhaai ki puri jindagi padi hai saamne…he won’t be able to live alone Mom…he needs someone to take care…Rishi would be growing… his questions will be growing as well… Till today…he thinks…koi mom nahi hoti…its only Daadi and Bua in his life…no other lady…but this won’t go for long Mom… He needs a mother who will love him forever..Kanak nods and says you know Viplav…he will never agree.
Scene shifts… Viplav is seen in the the temple…Raj comes to him and says everything is ready…. The priest performs the puja…and makes Viplav repeat few mantras… atlast Viplav is asked to offer prayings for the deceased one for whom puja was held… Viplav sighs…and joins his hands… Viplav thinks… it is getting difficult Richa… 4 years without you passed…but I don’t have any strength now.. why did you go leaving me??? Why?? I am weak now… tired of all these things..can’t I come to you?? He comes out of the trance when priest says something… He gets up..and gives the priest his dakshina and comes along with Raj and asks about office..Raj replies something and asks if he will go to office today as well.. Viplav sighs saying Yes… Raj looks on…On the way,Raj asks to stop the car… He then asks Viplav to come out.. Viplav complies not knowing what his friend his upto.. Raj then asks looking at Viplav… tu kabse haar manne laga??(Since when you started feeling defeated??) Viplav looks on… Raj says I know everything okay…. Why can’t you see that you can’t fall weak..your family needs you.. Rishi…your child needs you…Viplav sighs..and says I know…I know it… but what to do?? I see everything getting messed up everyday…Everyday I wake up to feel the void of my life…everyday I sleep with the void of my life….My Richa is not with me… everything seems right….but actually nothing is right…. You know Raj…I am fed up?? Raj looks on and asks fed up of what?? Your family???your life??? What?? Answer me damn it!! Viplav says with everything…Raj then makes Viplav look at him…and says Viplav… do you know what?? You are being selfish… When you know that Rishi…and your family needs you,you are fed up of everything…will Richa Bhaabi would be happy to see you like this?? Tell me… will she be happy if you ignore Rishi for the whole day…but that kid is happy thinking daddy takes out time for him when needed…now he must be busy…. Do you think…your love for him on his birthdays only is enough??? Can’t you see??Can’t you see that your kid’s age is of playing with his family…his daddy… and be happy… but he thinks…daddy manages his time…but still not able to spend time with him because he is super busy in his work…Is this what a four year old kids think about?? No Viplav… It is all your fault… Can’t you spend time with Rishi instead of staying aloof for the whole day and coming infront of Rishi during his birthdays only… You are wrong Buddy…. Your child needs you… Imagine if Richa Bhaabi would be here,things would have been different…but can’t you fulfill your responsibility as a parent…. You have to be there for Rishi… Viplav looks on… Raj then hugs him and says Viplav… I know nobody can feel the pain and void of your life..but look at Rishi..uski kya galti hai…yahi ki he was born and Richa Bhaabi could not survive while giving birth to him… arrey…that innocent soul does not know what is motherly love… the only ladies in his life are your mom and Shaalini..don’t you think you should be there for him…make him feel that no matter what his daddy is with him.. Viplav is crying..Raj consoles him and says he had no intention of making him cry… but this reality check was necessary for you buddy… just don’t stay distant with Rishi… Viplav says what do I do Raj?? It takes me a lot of guts to talk to Rishi… today was his birthday…but I could not be there like always watching him enjoy….whenever I see his face.. I see the void of my life..Raj.. I see the… saying these he chokes…but Raj hugs him again…and says mat ro…we will go home…and you will be there for Rishi’s birthday…tune bola you feel the void of your life looking at his face…today…go home…celebrate Rishi’s birthday with him…and see how his face will show his happiness…you will see the happy face of Richa Bhaabi… she would be happy through Rishi… so close to you yet soo far…Try it buddy… your son needs you… Raj then says…Rotlu..rona band kar…okay… Viplav chuckles… and Viplav wipes his tears while they get seated in the car to go home…..
PRECAP: TWO PEOPLE ..WITH THE SAME PAIN… THE VOID OF THEIR LIFE….WILL THEY MEET AND FILL THE VOID ??
So guys…here goes the second part of the story….it is all about Viplav and his little munchkin Rishi…hope you liked it…slowly….the story will progress…the first and this part were the sneak peak to the lead’s life….
Thank you …keep supporting..and keep loving….
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Major blunder spotted…..
Viplav’s wife:Richa….
Viplav and Richa’s son:Rishi
Sorry for the blunder..guys….Happy reading?
I am facing severe eye pain now because of workload and stress…., so i will not be able 2 give updates of any of my ff’s for some days, sorry yaar..I took leave today from office as am going hospital ……Will cum back after some days in this page and then i will read this one…..Sujiee… love u loads
Reni… for now you should think about your health… Take care…don’t stress yourself and your eyes…just take care… I am not going anywhere so once you become perfectly alright…you can come here and read the story anytime…will be waiting for you… take care… lots of love….
Wonderful and painful episode yaar….really viplav is crying I can’t imagine yaar sujjiee…
But u showed ur complete writing skills….they are really very good…if u keep full focus on writing…u can be a good writer dear….because the words u r using are very different yet easy to understand….
I am waiting for viplav and dhaanis love and how they will meet…
Come soon dear…
Byee…..
Take care…
Nd keep smiling….??
Lalitha…thank you for your comment dear….
While writing …I was thinking about the scenes Mishal gave as Viplav…and was remembering those episodes when he cried….
Thank you for all the good words yaar… I am happy that you liked the style of writing…Thank you dear…
I too am eager to write the part where Viplav and Dhaani will meet… that will take a bit of time…but you will get to read it for sure…
you too take care dear…
bye …lots of love….
Hello Sujie,
Thanks for the quick update. You have portrayed the episode so well. We can actually visualize the scene unfolding in your story.
Please update the next quickly…Very eager to know what happens next.
Take care.
Hello Janice….
thank you for commenting dear…I am glad you liked it…I will try to post the next part soon..??you too take care
Amazing Sujie! The pain you defined through which Viplav is going, was really emotional but well written. Loved Raj’s words as he pacified him like a true friend. Now waiting for the progression of story.
Loads of love<3
Hey Mahaa…thank you for the comment yaar …will try to post the next one soon…keep supporting ?lots of love to you too
Wow, yet another beautiful description of poured emotions, i am able 2 visualize it while reading and could feel that pain , too gud yaar……I loved it to the core……Now waiting 2 see how vidha will meet and how they will mange their kids ??? Totally an awesome story and u are writing very well yaar….. I enjoyed it a lot…….Thanks for the quicker update…..sujjiee…
Reni….
Hope you are doing good…take care okay…thank you for the comment…I am glad you managed to come here…Thank you for liking it dear….I will be making them meet soon…working on that…but will take some time…keep supporting dear….lots of love ?I hope I will not disappoint you….