Hey guys im back…. Today im writing the saddest one…. Its full of emotions and pure love…..
The night is shattered and blue stars shiver in the distance. The night wind revolves in the sky with an pleasent smell….. The air seems to lost its freshness….
Man’s pov
on nights like this i used to held her in my arms…. I used to kiss her under this endless sky…. it was when she loved me…… why my love couldn’t stop her from departion…. Why you proved me wrong? Why my eyes couldn’t keep her still….. You left me….. You left me alone when i needed you the most…. How could you do this to me….. I can feel the immense night its still immense without your presence…. My eyes searched for you…. But i couldn’t find you beside me…. Its the same night and same moon. But we are not the same…. We had changed with the passing of time…. I heard once that love is not love that alters when its alteration finds or remover to remove…. then how you said that you loved me instead of saying love you…. i love her and she loved me is certain…. Now she will be another’s, she wont be mine thats true…. Even that trurth turned bitter to me….. Sweet is fine but sweeter is not as it may turn into bitterness…. you where my friend that was sweet but when you become my love it was sweeter but soon turned into bitterness when you left me…… To love is easy but its really hard to forget…. Though she left me one thing is for sure that this will be the last pain that she mAkes me suffer
Girl’s pov
I love you to the debth and breadth of my life. In every night and day i need you beside me in my single needs but its not possible…. My love is pure and i dont expect anything in return…. Your love was enough for me to live this whole life. I loved you… I love you and will love you forever…. its upto god if he writes your name in my destiny…. I dont know what almightY had intended to bring in my life….. i dont know why troubles stormed into our life but i know one thing for sure and that is during seperation instead of degrading or fading our love would expand further…. I am incomplete without you…. I know now our life is in dark but iam sure that one day light would spark…. Now we are seperated but soon we will get united if not in this life then in other life…. Our love wont remain incompleted now we may seperate…. As inorder to run faster we need to take a step back…. Please do
I love you but situation is not in our favor….. it was like piercing a glass into my heart when i said that i loved you and not love you…. I had to as i was forced to
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awww………kitna zyaada sweet & heart touching tha ye intro…….dear agar shuruaat itni amazing hai, toh aage toh ye ek dum faadoo hone waali hai…….jaldi se ispe likhna shuru karo, can’t wait to read this…….luv u a lot Sana……
as prinku say everything i have no more words but i tried……………..
this was amazing, mind blowing, heart touching, sad you know after reading this intro i’m just speechless…………………what i said to you because i have no words……………………
can’t wait for next part…………………….please update next one soon……………………
love you………………..tc………………………….bye……………….
So sad and emotional but nice intro……how are u dost……
wowwww
amazing words dear
nice
Superb dear. It was mind blowing. It was really emotional but I enjoyed each and every line. I hope this is kaanchi ff. Pls post soon. Luv u so so so so much. Take care.
Its very emotinal….. And amazing
Bestie…..it’s amazing dear….u nailed it girl…emotional intro….do update soon & lots of love to u ?
I am speechless…It is superb and fabulous…
Soooo much emotional it was.. Update soon..
This is just fabulous.I loved it to the core.??????
Keep writting dear.???
So so sooooooooooo much touchy intro yaar… ye toh trailer h to picture toh hamaal macha degi start it soon… bye lovv u sis tc
Dhamaal not hamaal