It was early morning when mishras were having breakfast
J- finally my daughter is coming back
Subil- haa till 15 years she lived in London because of that malhotra he wanted to kill her
J- aap please shaant ho jaye
Suddenly they heard bell jaya open and found a dashing man standing out side
J- are kabir beta tum abhi
Kabir took blessings of her
K- mam wo sunil sir se baat karni thi
JAYA greets him
He came inside he was just like their son
Jaya pov
Kaash meri beti ko kabir jaisa husband Mile
Suddenly they found a girl who was too beautiful she was setting her luggage kabir was mesmerised to see her jaya and sunil were happy
S- kabir she is sanchi my daughter
Kabir smile
Soft music in Bg
She came and hugged both of them but after seeing kabir she gave a weird expression
S- who is this mahapurosh now
K- dr kabir
S- oho I got ithe u are an intern and had came to impress my dad if u than katlo he is hitler he wouldn’t be impressed easily
Sunil glared her while she ran towards the room
S- kabir I m sorry for her behaviour I may go and tell her itself that u are her senior
K – no sir today in party she would know
S- okk
K- now I have to live patients might be waiting I just came to take ur signatures
Sunil singed the papers
He went
Actually during evening there was engagement of kabir’s best friend as well as a hospital doctor niel khanna
In some weird place
Sunil mishra now ur daughter will suffer because of u he is in jail na now u will beg in front of me I will destroy sanchi u thought u are doing favour on me by allowing me to work in ur hospital no I am here only for revenge he laughed and the guy is veer(sorry guys could not get any other one).
In evening
Sanchi’s room was messy she didn’t ate anything jaya came and pats her forehead and says oho saachi u are not ready common live ur work
Soon she got ready in beautiful attire and went to the party there all were mesmerised to see her especially kabir but riya she could not bear it and make her fall but kabir saves her in nick of time they have a eyelock both were lost in each other eyes when they came to senses she says thanks but suddenly he noticed a waiter was coming with a bottle and was going to pour her face he immediately pushe’d her around him and his her like a saviour he was protecting her the chemical fell on the petals which burned all were shocked accept veer he was angry
To be continued
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Superb yaar……. it’s amazing start…….. kanchi’s 1st meeting is awesome yaar……..kabir save sanchi that scene is so so beautiful and amazing yaar…… please yaar update soon……..I love it so do much…………love u dear……
Should I continue guys I know it’s a boring one but through ur comments I will be able to continue this so I live this all on u havery a nice day
interesting.. Please continue..
Go on prachi this storyline is awesome!!! Veer’s the villain Sunil alive malhotra in jail. Too good ???
Prachi…….. sweety why did u feel so?…its not at all boring……& dear, agar tum comments ke liye worried ho, then uski chinta mat karo, kabhi kabhi time ki shortage ki wajah se koi koi readers hain, jo comment nehi kar pata, that doesn’t mean ur ff is boring…..u plz continue…..koi nehi bhi karega, tab bhi teri ye dii & kai aur bhi hain….jo tujhe comment zaroor karenge….ok…..anywz, bohut late ho gayi hai……….gud nt………..tc……..luv u sweetu………..
please sisi continue i like your new concept for this ff………………….ff is amazing and totally new for all of us……………..post next one soon…………………….and don’t say it is boring ok…………………..i enjoyed it………………..love you little sisi………………..tc………………..see you soon……………………….
Continue……Its nice one and I loved the concept…….but there is a request Please dont use Veer as negative…..though I’m Kanchian but I love him also and nor I see him negative nither it suits him sooo……you can use Vikrant instead of him….he can be vikrant malhotra…..malhotra and vikrant both are evil in sdch also so while reading your ff we will get proper feeling of villain…….I hope you did not mind…..next as your wish…..baki I loved your starts
Dear I am really sorry as I didn’t rear the comments before but now onwards I will not use him as negative
Yes u should continue it
Boring. ……don’t ever dare to say again ok….it’s very interesting plot dear. I loved it so so so so so so so so much. If u don’t mind then pls do post as soon as possible ☺☺Luv u nd take care.
amazing
Twist and tale. It’s amazing.looking for another one
Awsome mindblowing Epi prachi.. kanchi’s first meeting is just superb… veer as a villain.. anand in jail… so mysterious post nxt asap ..bye tc