Broken Dreams – Avneil
Chapter 1
Trust
this sign – * (stands for Avni’s Pov)
this sign – / (stands for Neil’s Pov)
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* Sometimes i wonder so much about something which makes me take an action. Life is twisted. i wonder if there is still time to fix everthing. i trusted him but he..disappointed me. Meri Dil Ka Dhadkan Tha Woh.
whenever i think of him, a name comes to my mind. which is – juhi or should i say chutiya chuhi. i never knew that she would ruin me. i never knew that she wanted to break me into pieces. i wish that i never met neil. how could he be so cheap. *
‘avni maa’
a girl named mishti said.
as avni heard mishti, she wiped away her tears and took mishti in her lap.
‘maa no crying today, today is a very special day. it’s finally my birthday. im seven years now’ – mishti said.
‘yes and today we will go to amusement park’ avni said, as she kissed mishti’s stomach.
‘remember 2 years ago, when i turned five. superman and that juhi masi got married. i wanted you and superman to get married, but’ mishti said, she couldn’t say anymore.
avni tears started to flow down but she quickly wiped them away.
‘okay stop mishti and get dressed’ avni said.
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the scene shifts to a guy who is seen holding a picture. in the picture they’re are three people, which are avni, mishti and himself.
/ i miss you so much tubelight. trust me i didn’t know that chuhi was in the mandap. i can’t believe that the day vidyut got arrested, i kissed juhi thinking that it was you. i didn’t know that i was kissing juhi, i thought i was kissing you. it was misunderstanding. i wish u could believe me. i hate juhi, im only with her because i can’t tolerate her. im giving myself the most disgusting and worst punishment. pls tubelight come back. i want u so bad. i love you avni. im sorry. /
Suddenly someone from behind hugged and he knew who it was. he pushed the person back with his arms.
‘oww’ the girl yelled as she got hurt.
‘sorry juhi’ he said to her.
‘anyways baby i came here to tell u that it has been two years to our marriage and to celebrate it we are going to amusement park’ she said.
‘are u f**king kidding me’ he said.
‘no’ she laughed.
neil rolled his eyes and went to the bathroom to change.
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8 Comments
It’s nice but why juhi and Neil??? I just can’t tolerate Neil with anyone else.
You think it was easy for me to write this. I also can’t tolerate Juhi. I chose this because i wanted a character like Neil to hate Juhi, Neil would be shouting and exposing Juhi alot!
Then it’s so good.
It was super.. Loved it a lot.. But why juhi and Neil?? We want avneil… Oh!! Its u Niki?? Where were u yaar?? Its been weeks!! Even sami is not coming… Where were u??? Missing u yaar…
I wrote this because i wanted Neil to hate juhi and expose her badly in this fanfic
Oh… Nice concept Niki… Well done and keep writing…
its superb nikita. u always come with unique story, i loved it and i have no objections regarding juhi and neil. not bcoz i love juhi (offcourse who will love that dayain) but bcoz it will be interesting to see how avni and neil will become avneil. i have no confessions but yah i have a request. plz if u can make avneil confessions through misti and also update if u can update in alternate days. if u can, then only. plz do read my ffs and tell me how’s it and also tell sami to come and post her ffs. i am really getting impatient. all the best.
Thsx so much for the words. Thanks for encouraging me to write more x