Hi! I know that I am extremely late to update the next chapter of my ff but I promise to update it by Friday. Please bear with me until then. I am writing this OS on the occasion of Samridh Bawa’s birthday…
Happy Birthday to the cutest actor ever! ?
This OS begins from the time Naina asked Sandhya about the expired medicines…
Sandhya: Karan! Naina is accusing me of something I did not do!
Naina: Karan! Believe me! I didn’t…
Karan: Naina! How could you accuse Maasi Maa?
Naina: Give me a chance to explain Karan…
Karan: Get out!
Naina looked on, shocked and whispered, “What?”
Karan: I said get out!
Naina silently packed her bag and left quietly with tears in her eyes and a broken heart. She was leaving and she wasn’t taking anything with her. Neither the broken promises nor the shattered dreams. She had been vulnerable when it came to him and he had shattered all her dreams by mistrusting her.
That night, both Karan and Naina were restless.
Aaj ro len de ve jee bharke
Meri saanson se daga karke
Tu gaya mujhko fanaa karke ve jaaniya
Mera zakhm-e-dil hara karde
Iss gham ki ab dawa karde
Nazron ko ba-wafa karde ve jaaniya
Naina thought about the first time she met Karan, the way they became friends, their confession of love and then how Karan mistrusted her. She broke into tears. The worst kind of pain didn’t come from enemies, it came from people you trusted and loved.
Aadat hai teri
Ya tera nasha hai
Kaise bataaun tujhko rehbara
Ve aaj ro len de ve jee bharke
Meri saanson se daga karke
Tu gaya mujhko fanaa karke ve jaaniya
Karan thought about the way Naina changed him, how she inspired him and then how Maasi Maa said that Naina accused her of changing his medicines. He broke down.
Six-seven months later
Karan was passing by Sandhya’s room when he heard her laughing wickedly.
Maasi Maa was on the rocking chair with a medicine bottle in her hand.
Maasi Maa: Naina! I feel so bad for you! Tch tch! Bahot bura hua na! Karan didn’t even imagine that I had planned all of this! I still keep this bottle safely, it reminds me of your defeat!
Karan: Maasi Maa!
Maasi Maa: Karan!
She tried to hide the bottle from him but was unsuccessful.
Maasi Maa: Yes! I did all of this! I created misunderstandings between you and Naina!
Karan: But why?
Maasi Maa: Bhai Saahab promised to make my son the heir of Bharat Industries as I had worked so hard but then you were born and my son didn’t receive what he deserved. That is why I did all of this.
Karan’s world came crashing down. The person he had trusted the most had betrayed him. But he had betrayed the person who had trusted him the most! He didn’t know what was more painful! Naina had trusted him more than anything and he had taken barely a minute to mistrust her!
He couldn’t sleep that night. He thought about her and the way he had betrayed her. He hated himself for doing this to her. He had broken so many promises! Promises of staying with her always, promises of trusting her and most importantly the promise of supporting her! It had been so easy for him to just walk away like that without thinking of her or anything she had done for him. He knew that breaking her trust was like crumpling a piece of paper, how much ever, he tried to smoothen it over, it wasn’t going to be the same again!
The next day, Karan went to the restaurant where he had first met Naina. The first thing he saw when he entered was Naina.
Naina saw him and quickly rose and walked away.
Karan ran behind her.
Karan: Please, Naina! Just one last chance!
Naina: Even, I had asked for one chance, Karan! What did you do? You broke my heart into a million pieces. What did I do? I cried alone and loved you from a distance but I never begged for a space in your life!
Karan: I am sorry, Naina. Par agar tumne apni zindagi mein kabhi bhi mujhse pyaar kiya hai to mujhe ek mauka do. I promise you will never regret it!
Naina: No, Karan!
Karan: So, you don’t love me?
Naina: You broke my heart but I still love you with all the broken pieces.
Karan kneeled down and took Naina’s hand into his.
Karan: I’m sorry, Naina! It was too late when I realized my mistake! I’m asking for one last chance! Please!
Karan started crying. He couldn’t bear to lose Naina. She was the reason he existed. She was the password to his life! He was guilty of mistrusting her but he really loved her. Naina couldn’t bear to see him crying. She bent down and looked into his eyes. His eyes reflected love and Naina knew she would be taking a wrong decision by not forgiving him.
Naina hugged him.
Naina: I love you!
Karan: I love you too!
“Life had broken him just as it had broken her. But when they got together, their pieces became whole. And they continued on their journey, together, mended as one.” ~Steve Maraboli
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Please do ignore any typos…I re-wrote it as my original OS was deleted by mistake…
16 Comments
Hi Mansi Di, I loved it I thought it was really nice to read. Maasi Maa really was evil. I loved Nairan were both remembering their time together at the same time. It was really good, please write more oss.
Love,
Sofia
Thank you so much Sofia!
I will surely write more OS’.
Loads of love! ❤️️❤️️❤️️
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Awesome simply cute !!
Thank you Bhaiya!
Mansi , amazing…..well written…..loved it…..lots of love to u & ya, don’t forget to send me links if u update ur ff dear ? ?
Thank you Niyu!
Yes, I’ll send you the links…
When are you updating Daastan?
Love you! ❤️❤️❤️
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Awesome wali os…short and sweet
Love defined in less words…
Loved it…
Thank you!
Glad you loved it!
Hi!! I loved this one!! This os is really sweet… Sandhya again the evil lady! ?? But atlast they are together!! Write more os like this. Will love to read them also. I too wanted to write one but the exams!! Anyways once again loved it. Keep writing!! Loads of love.?
Thank you so much Anushka!
I know, the exams are a huge barrier…I struggled to write this OS…
Loads of love to you too! ❤️❤️❤️
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Wow! Awesome.. Superb…
Thank you Aafiya!
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This was amazing Di!
I loved it.
You told us about true love in one os…
I loved the song.
Love you
Mallika
Thank you so much Mallika!
Love you too!
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I loved this os a lot… Really good mansi…. Ah.. But l missed samridh bhaiyya’s b’day!!.. But felt happy to know that u posted this os on his b’day…
Thank you so much Seyal!
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