MAJESTIC AUGUST : JUST FEEL IT – Rikara, Rumya FF- Part 9 [PRIVEER SPECIAL]
Hello friends, How are u all ??? After almost 4 weeks I am updating this ff and pls forgive me for this late update…..I underwent severe prblm for my left eye and I was hospitalized for some time which made me 2 keep distance from everything……I am undergoing treatment and I can’t do much work as I have 2 take immediate care for eye since condition went critical…….Now am feeling better and expecting a fast recovery …..Any ways thanks for liking my articles beyond of it’s faults and I am grateful 2 all of u who have supported me here throughout this ff…..And this one is short and focused on priveer as I couldn’t make long episode…..
Links for previous parts are here…..
Part 8 here
Pls read all parts and kindly drop ur views….
@ Oberoi mansion….Hall…..Scene – 15….Priveer scene….continues…
Priyanka : It’s true ranveer…..
Ranveer ; No it’s not possible…….Prinku, I think it’s just ur stress only……
Prinku : Why don’t u understand, I am a mental patient ……
Ranveer : I don’t want 2 understand anything, priyanka…….I just want 2 see u as happy only…….
Priyanka : U really wants me 2 live happily ??
Ranveer : Of course…..[ranveer holds prinku’s face in his palms]Priyanka……I am ready 2 do anything for u…..
Priyanka : Then stay away from me…..
Ranveer : What ??
Priyanka : Haan ranveer……..I don’t want 2 become a burden for u……
Ranveer : Priyanka…..I agree that I scolded u and slapped u , but no way was left for me and what I did was ……
Priyanka : [interferes and releases ranveer’s hand] Ranveer, trust me I don’t have any complaints on u, U was absolutely right because attempt 2 suicide is not a solution for getting rid of prblms…….I have understood this fact now and I have decided 2 fight with mental disorder alone…..Once shivay bhaiya will arrive, I will spend some time with my brothers and will leave this oberoi mansion ……..After that I will come 2 our…Home…. ……[prinkua stares ranveer’s eyes] sorry…… randhawa nivas and ……I will stay with u also….But that will be the last day for me in that house…….I will leave this place forever……
Ranveer gets shocked……Ranveer : Pls don’t do this…….it’s a big decision and before taking it pls look back…..
Priyanka : When I luk back I am able 2 find my faults only……Weak girl who is not capable of doing anything , who gets nervous on small things and who is not able 2 control herself…….[prinku burst into tears]
Ranveer : No priyanka….. who said u are weak ?? I have seen the brave prinku who stood for her brother omkara when I threatened her for the mistake which happened accidentally in the past….. I have seen the bold priyanka who convinced whole oberoi family for marrying me……I have seen the wonderful girl in priyanka who tried 2 adjust with my family and who is….
Priyanka : Enough !!!![prinku interrupts ranveer] This is ur heart’s saying only, ranveer……..Reality is something else…….I am consulting a psychiatrist……
Ranveer : I knows it and I find medical prescriptions in room also……[ranveer places his hands on prinku’s shoulders] Look @me priyanka…….I don’t believe in those pieces of papers…..
Priyanka : Do u trust me ranveer ?
Ranveer : I trust u more than myself…..
Priyanka : Then accept the reality and stay away from me…….I don’t want to end our relationship, but I need a separation from u…….Because the more I will stay with u, I am scared whether anything will happen 2 u and I will…..I will…..This is truth and pls believe it….
Ranveer : I will accept it but don’t ask for a separation…….We can fight together and…..
Priyanka : [interrupts] Pls….I can’t risk ur life for me, it will hurt me a lot…..Pls ranveer, pls allow me 2 separate from u…..Pls…
Ranveer : U really need this ??[priveer share an emotional eyelock]
Prinku shuts her eyes and nods her head…….
Priyanka : I need another favor from u…….
Ranveer : Yeah….[ ranveer gets emotional] Sure…..
Priyanka : As soon as I will leave oberoi mansion, pls come and pick me 2 randhawah house……I just want 2 stay there for some time and once it gets finished pls drop me 2 shardhah mental asylum…..
Ranveer : What ??? Mental asylum…….Priyanka , u are fit and fine…..Pls don’t degrade urself….
Priyanka : Pls ranveer, Dr. Vardhan told me that soon I will lost my mental imbalance fully….
Ranveer : Just because he is a doctor u believed his words ?? Just try 2 believe in my words …..and allow us 2 sort out the prblm together……
Priyanka : Ranveer……I don’t want 2 see u in trouble for me……U will get happiness if we will live separate….
Ranveer : I can bear bullets on my chest, I can fight with dirty criminals, I can risk my life for this country, but I can’t suffer the pain of separation from my wife…….I can’t live without u priyanka… [ranveer bend @ his own knees and burst into tears]
Prinku rushes and hugs ranveer……..Ranveer rounded his arms on prinku’s waist and literally cries…..
Priyanka : Pls ranveer……..Pls……Don’t cry……I am telling it for ur sake only……
Ranveer : I don’t need any sake without u…….
Priyanka : Ranveer, do u love me ?? [Ranveer nods his head with teary eyes…..] Then promise me that u will allow me 2 stay separate from u……..Pls…….Right after our marriage, First time I have asked u something and I hope u won’t disappoint me……[prinku extend her hand 2wards ranveer]
With a painful heart ranveer holds prinku’s hand and weeps in tears……
Priyanka : I am sorry ranveer, but I love u a lot……..[prinku kisses ranveer’s forehead, ranveer burst in tears and priveer hug each other tightly]
BGM……”Ajab Hai Ishq Yaara
Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyaan
Gam Ke Khazaane Milte Hain Phir
Milti Hai Tanhaiyaan
Kabhi Aansoon Kabhi Aahein
Kabhi Shikve Kabhi Naalein
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Mujhe Din Ke Ujaalon Mein
Teri Yaadein Tadpayein
Teri Yaadein Tadpayein
Raaton Ke Andheron Mein
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Machal Machalke Is Dil Se
Aah Nikalti Rahi
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki
Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
Toh Loot Gaye Haan Loot Gaye
Toh Loot Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein….Tadap Tadap ke iss Dil “ plays….
After a while, priveer releases themselves from hug and they wipe out each other’s tears….. In the midst, gauri enters there with a tray of rumali rotis and juice for ranveer……priveer stay back in their positions and gives a fake smile…..
Gauri : I think u both were seriously discussing something and I disturbed u…..
Priveer : No bhabhi…..
Gauri : Is it, then why u both looks so gloomy ??
Priyanka : Wooh wooh ranveer…….Bhabhi……
Gauri holds prinku’s hand and smiles… Gauri : Prinku, I can understand it…..U missed ur husband a lot, is it ?? [priveer stare each other’s eyes] When we loves some one so deeply from heart, we can’t imagine a minute of our life without our love…….
Ranveer : Separation brings the biggest pain, pains will come in life and we have 2 bear it…..
Gauri : Oh, ranveerji…..She just stayed here for two days only and u are saying as if u both are going 2 live separately ……
[Priveer stare gauri’s eyes and gets shocked….] I am just kidding only……I feel absolutely happy 2 see u both together……What we use 2 say….Haan….. Made for each other…..[gauri makes priveer 2 hold their hand together] U guys are made for each other……..
Ranveer : Bhabhi, how is rudra ??
Gauri : Oops!!! I was preparing the dish in kitchen and almost forgot 2 ask omkaraji how is he…… I will come back in few minutes…….Ranveer u pls have this……[gauri goes inside]
Priveer stare each other’s eyes……
Priyanka : Ranveer…….
Ranveer : I have 2 leave…….
Priyanka : Ranveer, pls have ur food …
Ranveer : Why ??
Priyanka : I will feel gud if u will take fud before me……
[Ranveer sits on the couch …..Prinku serves fud and stares ranveer…..]
Ranveer : I am ready 2 do anything for making u happy, prinku…….I just want 2 say that pls think of giving another chance for our relationship……Pls think abt it once more…..I am not forcing u…….[prinku didn’t utters anything, she feeds ranveer] They share an eyelock….
BGM….” Jo tu mera humdard hein” plays….
PRECAP … BEGINNING OF CHANGES IN LIVES, HOW LOVE WILL WIN ??
9 Comments
Its so emotional literally crying imagining Prinku’s condition and Ranveer’s helplessness.loved it.Changes always came with some happy note and some sad note and relationship have to survive.
Thanks fenu and sorry for making u 2 cry…..While typing this one i was also finding much hard 2 control tears ,it happened just like that…….Will read ur articles soon
It is emotional dii… Take care of yourself.. Stay blessed and happy…
Thanks nikki
AWESOME EMOTIONAL ? INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear renima di
PriVeer conv and scene?? PriVeer gauri conv? It’s very nice part??????
Take care and stay safe?
Thanks uf
It’s very emotional update dear…awesome
Take care of yourself and stay safe
U made me emotional yaar.feeling bad 4 priveer’s???? why cnt she tell her problems 2 his brothers.?? Hope ranveer will change her mind somehow. Tysm 4 posting dis ff.i was missing dis.n i’m extremely sry 4 d late comment.hope u’ll forgive me.?☹️? Eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi dr?? byeeee tc??
*priveer