Hello guys!! Here is three shots for my sweet friend shubhangi. She is waiting for this story so I’m going to give regularly and this idea is her. This is in fact a treat for all my lovely readers as I crossed 1K followers on wattpad. This is unbelievable for me and much beyond my expectations. I heartily thank to all tu readers who suggested me to join it.
This will be surely three shots no extension as I always do??.
Let’s begin:
Hidden Admiration
(SwaSan Three Shots)
Shot 1:
This story will be mostly expressing sanskar’s feelings for his pa swara. He behaves like a love sick puppy and is mad for swara who never noticed him like that. Only his mother sujata know how much crazy he is for swara. Let’s see how they will unite???
Characters:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 25 years old, rich and popular business. He is ground to earth and is very professional and stern towards his employees. He hates his step sister ragini and hardly talks to her. He is close to his mother and share everything with her.
Swara Gododia: 23 years old simple beautiful and innocent girl. Her main motive is to work and earn for livelihood. Her heart was broken when she was just 9 years old and her parents left her in orphanage as they were getting divorced and none of both want to take swara’s responsibility so they left her alone. Since then swara is confined to herself. She never say bad to anyone nor speak much. She respect and follow the orders of Mother Mary who has bought her up and educated her.
Ragini Maheshwari: 27 years old sanskar’s step sister. She has so much of ego and arrogance of being belonging to very rich family. She is not sujata’s biological daughter and is ram’s first wife’s daughter. She keep on ranting about her high status that’s the reason Sanskar hate her alot. Ragini always insult middle class people.
Sujata Maheshwari: a kind lady, sanskar’s mother and ragini’s step mother. Sanskar is her everything. She never differentiate between Sanskar and ragini but don’t like when ragini behave rudely with her. She is Ram’s second wife who married her after his wife died who was ragini’s mother.
Ram is no more so everything is handled by Sanskar.
Mother Mary: swara’s care taker in orphanage. She is her adviser and swara never deny her.
Shot 1:
Maheshwari Industries:
Sanskar is looking again and again at his wrist watch sitting in the luxurious cabin of his multi storey building. He is waiting when it will be 9’o clock and a wide smile spread on his face as he heard knock on the door followed by a sweet voice flattering Sanskar’s heart.
” may I come in Sir” a girl asked standing on the other side of the door.
” yes” he said loudly. ” I’m dying to see you” further he mumble slowly.
A girl in early twenties enter inside wearing light purple and pink combination anarkali which was enough for sanskar to gasp his breathe.
” good morning sir” girl who is of course swara wished him in the most professional way. Sanskar just nodded his head. He is master in hiding his feelings and vulnerable state. Swara went and removed the curtains from windows. Then set the files on his table, she is doing everything very neatly and with perfection. She never look at sanskar once also which is very contrast to other girl who unnecessarily droll over him.
” I will let you know your schedule soon Sir” Swara said and left the cabin.
” huh! Today also she didn’t noticed me. Two hours I took to get ready for her in the morning and all got wasted. But she really don’t give attention to me or just pretending??? Don’t know now I can’t live without her. From last one year she has driven me crazy for her now I have to talk to mom” sanskar was lost in his thoughts how to get swara in his life.
Swara is going to her cabin when she bumped with someone.
” hey you don’t know how to walk” shouted ragini who herself was dug in the mobile.
” I’m so sorry mam” swara apologized sincerely though the mistake was not completely her.
” low standard people” ragini said.
Swara didn’t pay any heed just left from there as everyone know what type of girl ragini is and she know one thing “show off”.
Afternoon,
Sanskar came out of his cabin to see whether swara had her lunch or not. It’s his daily routine as he know she forget in her work. As sanskar reached her cabin, he signed as she is surrounded with so many files. Sanskar got confused as he didn’t give her this much work.
Sanskar came inside the room and called her ” swara”
Swara got startled as she was indulge in the file. She instantly stand up as her boss is there.
” yes sir” she quickly said.
” which files you are completing I didn’t gave” sanskar picked one file to check.
” ragini mam has given me to complete” swara informed him.
Sanskar got angry and went out. Swara signed and again got busy in her work. Such a workaholic.
” no need to complete these files” sanskar again came and order her. Swara stand up in dilemma. Sanskar went to peon and asked him to call ragini.
” but mam said” swara was about to explain when ragini made an entry.
“Why u called me sanskar bhai” ragini asked irritatedly.
” why you had given work to swara” Sanskar greeted his teeth.
” she is our employee and meant to work only” ragini said sarcastically.
” just shut up swara is my pa and will work for me. You said u don’t need any pa to handle your work now do yourself but don’t say to swara” Sanskar almost shouted. Swara got scared at his reaction.
” Sanskar bhai why u r overreacting she is mere servant of us” ragini said uninterestingly.
” get lost ragini if u say a word to swara I will throw u out of the office” Sanskar roared.
” its my office also” ragini said and giving a glare to swara left. Swara’s eyes got teary, she got pissed in this brother sister fight.
As sanskar look at swara’s scared face he calm himself.
” Swara no need to listen to ragini and go and have your lunch” Sanskar order. Swara nodded and went to canteen.
Night:
Sujata ragini and sanskar are having dinner. When sanskar said
” mom plz can u go and ask swara for marriage I can’t wait more” sanskar said frustratedly.
” are you serious bhai u will marry such a low standard girl” ragini blurted making faces.
” you better stay out of my life ragini I’m not like you who change her boyfriend everyday” sanskar said.
” how can you say like this bhai” ragini shouted.
” bcoz this is truth” Sanskar voice was filled with sarcasm.
” okay tell me swara’s address” sujata said diverting the subject.
” it’s heaven orphanage and talk to mother mary she take care of swara” sanskar said. As he has already found the whole information about her just don’t have guts to express his feelings.
” okay I will go tomorrow” sujata said with a smile.
” bhai now u will bring orphan here” ragini give unbelievable look as she was not knowing swara is orphan.
” ragini if u say a word to swara I won’t mind showing you worst of me” sanskar said and left.
Sujata signed as its their daily drama.
Next day, sujata went to meet mother Mary and she got so happy that such a rich and humble family came to ask swara’s hand. She can’t deny them bcoz she wish now swara deserve happiness.
” if u don’t mind we can do this marriage in church coming Sunday” Mary said as they have church in their orphanage.
” its okay we want swara as our dil so it doesn’t matter how marriage happens” sujata smile.
” okay from our side we will prepare for it” mother said.
” okay will inform further plans” sujata told and left.
Later, Mary informed swara about her marriage. Swara agreed as Mary has selected a boy for her and she don’t have any problem. But the thing that shocked and made her nervous was she is going to marry her boss. She brushed away her thoughts convincing it’s coincidental.
Sunday
Sanskar’s pov:
I came to church with my mom and sister. I’m so happy today bcoz I’m going to marry my love. After our alliance got fixed swara didn’t came to office as she has to prepare for the marriage. Once I talked to her on phone and she don’t know that I send mom to ask for marriage. So I preferred to keep quite and tell her later.
Here she comes in white gown having a bouquet of lily flowers in her hand. Her beauty is indeed adorable. She is slowly taking steps with mother Mary handling her gown. Her gaze is at floor and mine at her.she came and stood in front of me. I slightly smile seeing her little pinkish cheeks.
I heard father asked us to exchange the rings. She placed the ring in my finger and I also lifted her delicate hand in mine and made her wear the ring.
father recited few words and ask me if I accept swara as my wife?
” I do” I said in an audible voice. The same thing he ask from swara if she accept me as her husband. I felt so happy when she whisper ” I do”
” you may kiss” father said. Ohh god I forgot about this. Swara look at me once, her obs met mine. She look nervous but I think I’m more than her. I can’t escape there are so many people waiting in the hall. I took one step closer to her. She is as usual staring at the floor but she lifted her gaze at me. I slowly lean and softly kiss her lips just for few seconds. It was me who did while she didn’t make any moment.
I moved back and was tensed about her reaction. But the next moment she smile at me slightly that was like cheery on the cake after the kiss. My lips curve into a bright smile.
“Finally she is mine” I just want to dance now in happiness but somehow controlling my self.
Later we left to have lunch.
To be continued…
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Next part tomorrow.
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28 Comments
awesome continue
Amazing… Bt one thing… I want swasan marriage with all Hindu rituals … When they both will fall for each other. …if that’s OK for u then…
aww sooooooo cute sanky n ragsan step siblings agar ragsan fan group ko pata chala RSBA(Ragini Sanskar Bachao Aandolan) start ho jayega
beautiful
Awesome
Awesome dear
so cute swasan
amazing
waiting
Amazing dear loved it
Just loved it dear
Wow..superbbb…awsmmm. .. So nice… Post soon ..Tc
Super awesome ???
Awww soo sweet love story of Sanskar ??????????. Poor boy, her PA don’t even noticing him?. But finally sujju dear did everything fine and made Swara Sanskar’s forever??????.
And this Ragini huh?????? jealous fellow don’t know anything except showing off
I’m happy Sanskar face good answer to her.
Shadi ho gai ab agey kya hoga, jaldi post karna OK???????
Awesome dr. But ragini is elder than sanskar Right?? Then y she is calling sanskar bhai??
Nice story marsuuuuuuuuu I loved the start continue soon…
amazing… that nagin accha kiya sanskar ne…. she deserves that…swara is so sweet n simll…n Christian wedding great… let’s see how will she fall for him….
Wow Mars…New story.. it’s as usual amazing.. live sick Sanskaar.. Serious Swara.. loved this combo.. ❤❤❤ Felt very bad for Swara..but am happy that she got her Sanskaar..?? And I so loved someone’s relation with Sanskaar Sanskaar’s attitude towards her.. ????? Now waiting to read how Swara will fall for her Sanskaar.. ?❤ Thank you.. Tc.. ??❤❤??
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And congratulations dear.. I so wish you reach more heights in your life.. Be Happy dear.. ❤❤❤❤❤
AWwwww… So much hidden love Sanskaar has for Swara.. ???.. Sooo cute.. Poor Swara had to go thru so much.. but thank God she has now got Sanskaar and sujata in her life.. m sure she will be happy in her life.. ❤️❤️❤️.. Hate Ragini… ???.. She is sooooo annoying.. Hope she doesn’t trouble our Swara and sanskaar is always there for her.. ??.. Wanna see how Swara will fall in love with Sanskaar and how Sanskaar is gonna get her out of her past.. ???.. Superb story and can’t wait to read the next chapter coz it is soooo sweet.. They are married and can’t wait to see how Swara will adjust and fall for him.. ???.. In love with this story and can’t get over it.. Thankkkk you for another beautiful story…
amazing part…..
Beautiful start
Always awesome.
Awesome dear……
The concept is Beautiful now plss update soon OK ??
Nice……
Awesome
Beautiful
awesome….somethings were funny???