Aliya is back… With 2 new stories…
Many hv commented and pm me that why i haven’t posted my stories.. that’s bcs i m hvng my exams and today i had an exam which i thought would be tough bt it was easiest paper…and today i was lil free and thought to give these promo’s which popped many days ago…now u ppl hv to choose one story in both….in second one if you feel ragsan has no importance then its wrong..bcs i kept a mystery there…!and on 27th i m hvng a toughest subject..plz pray for me…☺☺☺
Let’s begin with the promo
Love story of a 2 selfish ppl…
Lak:i don’t know ragini how to tell you bt…
Rag gives assuring smile: laksh tell me i m with you…
Lak: actually… actually ragini
…i…i…love swara… I m really sorry Ragini…. It may hurt you… Bt
Rag was in the verge of crying…
Bt controls
Rag: do Swara love you…?
Lak:i don’t know… Bt i hv decided that of any girl will enter my life means then it will be swara…
This sentence pierced Ragini
Rag without saying anything goes from there.. While laksh keeps calling her.. He was feeling guilty and light
Guilty bcs may be ragini would be hurt
Light bcs he told this to Ragini…
After few days…
Maheshwari’s cake to baadi
They were happy….
All gets eachother…
Dadi was the most happiest person ever…. Bcs she thinks that her kanha ji is with her
Now ragini has made swara realise swara her feelings for laksh
Lak proposes swara infront of all…
Sw looks at rag.. She gives her assuring smile
Sw smiles…. And nods
Bt soon RAGINI’S smile changes into smirk…
Dadi was shocked…. She starts to scold by ragini stops her
Rag:dadi… Its the past that… We were engaged.. Now i m not even his fiance… And u worry for me don’t worry i hv better plans for me…my married life
Dadi caresses her hair and gives glare to swalak and sharmishta and leaves from there
Everyone in the Maheshwari’s were overwhelmed by the thought of ragini bcs everyone knew that how ragini liked laksh… Bt all the thing is planned by destiny… Bt this time ragini’s words had a different meaning….
After few days ftn got started….
On roka ceremony
A group of 5 friends entered there… Who it could be????
All Maheshwari’s were shocked to see the person standing in the middle…
If you ppl guessed or not i don’t know
Bt i vl reveal him and he is SANSKAR
Suji goes and hugs him and he hugs her back….
And his friends are nikhil karan kavitha and kavya
(Don’t worry cabir vl enter in fic..i m recreating ek nayi kahani)
Everyone meets him.. He introduces his friends to everyone
(He has returned from US)
His eyes fall on Ragini who was serving starters to guests…
Lak sees him:sanskar…wr r u lost?
San: who is she??
Lak: Ragini.. Swara’s sister…
San:hmm… Is she married?
Lak suspicious: why?
San: its casual
Lak: San never asks anything for casual…
San pats his cheek:smart
Lak:dont do anything with her…she is a pure soul
San:do i look like impure..
Lak:wow kya guess kiya…ek dum sahi..bt i vl tell u a quick update abt ragini…she is good heartrd kind…and never gets angry on anyone
San;bt this time she vl
He goes…
Sw sees lak shocked:wat??
Lak:nthng..dear..waise i couldn’t complement u…u r looking hot
Sw blushes…
In a dark roon
She was standing in the alone
Rag: laksh is only mine….and only mine.. And no one can take him from me… Not even swara… Four lak i can do anything…. Every possible thing…i just need to make sure that lak should love me back
San:i hv to gain ragini’s love anyhow? And i hv decided that and today i m promising that i will make ragini mine.. If she will or not!
It’s just a sneak peak…
Wat do you think?? Will it be nice?
Many would be angry on me bcs i showed ragini as negative? Bt u know wat i love vamps!!! Bt don’t worry i won’t make ragini wamp here!!! And it’s the story of 2 selfish lovers!!! Bt ragini won’t be mahaan
The second one…☠☠☠
Swalak a newly married couple
Lak has covered swara’s eyes and he opens her eyes and she sees a big palace.. She hugs him in the happiness
Bt soon she remembers a fortune teller
F.t: in that palace..ur post has connected…! So find yourself..u vl get all answers for the questions
They enters the palace…
Which is beautiful arranged wen she came previous time it was all a mess
Swara felt the palace is connected to her…
Soon the day passes… Sw wanted to go upstairs bt Laksh tell her to test as she is tired of travel.. She to thinks to go next day
Night
Swalak were sleeping….
Sw wakes up and sees that
The door has been opened a little
Sw moves towards the door
Sw: i had locked the door…may be laksh hv opened it and got to lock…
Bt soon she sees a shadow passing
She gets scared…
She sees nobody was there… She thinks to wake laksh… Bt soon she thinks that she is hallucinating
She was abt to lock the door…
She listens foot steps….tak tak tak…
She goes out being scared and sees none was there
She takes a big sign of relief bt soon she sees the shadow passing upstairs…
Sw:kaun hai….kaun hai wahaan….
Pin drop silence
Sw could listen her speeding her heart beats… Her mouth went dry…
She being scared…forwards her steps towards the stairs…
She went upstairs
Sw: who’s there here??
Now she listens the footsteps again…
Now she listens the sound of gunguroo
Chan chan chan…
Sw moves towards a room she opens it… It was dark…. She was sweating very hardly
She couldn’t see anything…
She decides to move back…
She feels that someone is standing infront of her….
She gulps and errors her sweat through her hands
Sw: who is there
She moves lil front and passes her hands…. She feels a soft skin
Immediately she takes her hand back
And she screams…
Someone runs from there….. She could listen the gunguroo…
Lak comes listening her scream.. He ons the light…
Sw was in shock
Lak: SWARA….
Sw:lak..wahan koi hai!
Lak gets in and ons the light bt none was there
Lak:see swara none was there..u were just hallucinating…
Sw nods in no
He hugs her:u r just scared..nthng else…u are hallucinating…chalo lets go..
Lak takes her
Sw looks at the room…
Sw herself:no…there is someone…i felt the someone’s hand..and wn i screamed she ran..yes it was a girl…bt who was she????
Hmm..no Ragsan in the scene ryte… Sanskar will play swalak’s friend bt ragini hmmm????socho socho…guess karo..
Who has swara felt?? Who was that girl.. If she was??? And wat past is connected with swara???
And now u ppl hv to choose anyone from this bcs i vl post that after my exams…
If you didn’t like both then u can tell clearly.. No issues…
After my exams i VL be regular
23 Comments
Iprefer 2 but want ragsan
ONE
Both are good but want which story is full of RAGSAN.☺
Sissy both stories are amazing but my vote is story 1 because want to see ragsan’s ????selfishness towards their loved ones.
First one
Oh dear..u stolen my concept???..the sane concept which running in my mind past 1year…its ok???..sorry dear im kidding i jst thought same concept but i kmw u wrote better than me??…all the best ur exams dear…missed u so much…waiting for ur stories..
Which one??first one??
Oops sorry..i m still having many concept… Actually i thought write a promo for other 2 concept..bt at a ryte moment i changed..??i didn’t know you thought the same… Before too hpnd the same… One of my concept matched which Shri thought to ryte…
Write**
And i think i hv become idea chor??????
And thankyou
Great minds think alike, even I have been thinking to post a Ragsan story with the plot of Story 1. But that’s okay, whoever does full justice to the story deserves to write it. 1, it will be Aliya ❤
Superb 1st
2 plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssddssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
2 is different from 1 but less don’t like swalak. Decision is your’s.
One
Tough to decide b’coz both are interesting. My first preference is RAGSAN ff first
2nd
No 1. Update aashiqi
Want both??????????
woooooooooow …… first one is amazing …. second one a bit cofusing ……. let’s see .. so my vote for first story ……… love lucky ….. love sanky . love swara . love rags . but hates swalak
Awesomeeee one
Nice.secon one but show more ragsan
Superb dear, interesting