Today I’am ending my ff.You all requested me to continue but I thought its better to end the ff than make it worst in upcoming.Thanks to all for supporting me through comments & reading.Thanks to all silent readers & other readers.It was my first ff.But you all welcomed me with heart.So thank you.Here the last chapter of my ff.
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Recap:Neil was kidnapped by Laksh.
Episode:45:-
Next day Police came to home.
SI:Good morning Sir.
Ashish:Morning take your seat sir.
They sat.Everyone came.
SI:We came for a enquiry.
Prakash:,Carry on.
SI:When he became missing?
Shwetha:He was not here from morning.
SI:Did he or you all had any enimies?
Nithin:No Sir.
SI:Did any call came asking money?
Prakash:Not upto this.
Avni was silent.A call came for her.It flashed unknown no..She scared.
Avni:Excuse me.
She left for outside.Aryan was playing in mobile phone outside.They didn’t saw eachother.
Avni:What are you doing?Whatever you want ask me.
Otherside:You want to see Neil na?
Avni:Yes.
Other side:So come here which i’am going to say.
Aryan saw Avni.
Aryan:Mamma looks desp.Come let’s see.
Avni:OK.I’am coming.
Avni left when Aryan came near.
Aryan:Where is Mamma going?
Avni left on car.She reached on godown.She came inside.
Avni:Neil…Neil…Is anyone here?Ne….
Avni saw Neil was sleeping in chair.She ran towards him.
Avni:Neil..Neil…Wake up..Its me Avni..Neil..
Neil wakes.
Neil:Avni…
Avni touched his cheek.They became teared.
Avni:Who did this?
Neil:He..He..Laksh..
Avni shocked & took her hands back.
Avni:What?Laksh?Laksh can’t do this.
Neil:Why not?Why don’t you trust me?
Avni:You didn’t identify him after meeting him?
Neil:I didn’t saw his face because of mask.Just he said.
Avni:And you trusted.Neil,Laksh can’t do this to you because he is your….
A voice:Brother Neelesh.
They turned.It’s Neelesh.Avneil become shocked.
Neil:Bhai…
Avni:Laksh,what are you doing?
Neelesh:Can’t you see?
Avni:Why are you doing this?
Neelesh:Because of you Avni.Only for you.
Avni:For me?Why for me?
Neelesh:Because I love you..
Avneil stunned.
Avni:What?You know what are you saying?
Neelesh:I know.Why?I can’t love you?I don’t know when I started to feel for you.You know when I said something before 6 years when we came back from college.
FB starts.
Neelesh:Avni,you marry me.After that you both never be parted.
FB ends.
Neelesh:Everyone laughed at me.You know I pit your photos in front of your home.Because I knew that I’ll never get Avni up to you with her.
FB starts:-
Studio.Neelesh in a black jacket.
Neelesh:Bhai,yesterday’s photos..
Photographer:It is as you said 2 copies.
He took this & smirks.Then he put it imfront of Avneil’s home.
FB ends.
Neelesh:But the whole college stood with you & my plan failed.Then parents send me with Di.After that they made plan against you both.They planned your marriage.I felt list hearing that but I became happy after hearing your plan.I thought when Neil marry Reina I can get Avni.You saw someone in yiur room is me Avni.But..You fell in love with her.And Avni suicided in front of me.I nevercfelt that you died.So I came in search of you & found.Then I male yiy against family.Because I feared parting from you.
Neil was in anger.He picked chair with angry.
Neelesh:Then you wished to go back.But your family said that they can afford only one.Truth is this that I never talk with them about it.Its my words because I knew that you’ll send Aman Bhai instead if you.But Neil came in search of you & you both became one.But I never allow so I kidnapped you.Its for you Avni.For our love.
Avni:Just shut up Laksh.How chaep are you?You saw na?You tried up to this but we are one.We are AVNEIL HAMESHA SAATH SAATH.
Neelesh:Oh!
Neelesh slapped Neil.
Avni:Laksh stop it.Leave him.
Neelesh:No I’ll kill him.
Avni:Laksh,you can’t do this.He is your brother.
Neelesh:No.He is my enimie.If anyone stood against my love I’ll kill him.
Neelesh pointed Neil with a gun.
Avni:No.Leave him.What you want?
Neelesh:Marry me.
Avneil became shocked.
Neil:How dare you?
Neelesh:Just shut up.Be silent.If you marry me I’ll leave Neil.Otherwise I’ll kill him & comitte suicide.Think Avni..
Neil:Avni,no..I can die.But you can’t marry him.
Neelesh:Think Avni,otherwise..
Neelesh pointed gun to Neil.
Avni:I’am ready.
Neil become shocked.Avni cried.
Neelesh:Good come.
Neelesh made fire.He pulled Avni forcely for taking pheras.They took 5 rotations.While taking 6th someone pulled Neelesh.He fell down.Its Neil.
Avni:Neil..?
Avni looked back.Aryan was standing there.
Avni:Aaru?
FB starts.:-
Aryan:Where Mamma is going?
He sat on dickey & came inside.He saw everything.While the time of pheras he made Neil free.
FB ends.
Avni:Aaru..
Aryan:Mamma..
A fight happened between Neil & Neelesh.
Neil:Did you want Avni?My Avni..She is mine.Only Neil’s.
Neil pushed him.He fell near Aryan.He took Aryan on hand.
Avni:Aaru..
Aryan:Mamma…Mamma..
He cried.
Avni:Laksh no.
Neil:Bhai,leave him.
Neelesh:No you want to hit me..slap me..Come on.
Avni:Please leave him.
Neil:Avni,only one thing he can’t see.Our love.Come & give me your love..
Avni:Love?Neil..
Neil:Come on Avni.We hadn’t any other option.
Avneil came near.
Neelesh:No..No..
They came near to kiss.Someone pulled Neil.Its Neelesh.They fights.Avni hugged Aryan.
Avni:Are you OK Champ?
Aryan:Yes Mamma.
Police & family arrived there.They picked Neelesh.
Avni:How this?
Aryan:I called at home.Papa’s phone was with me.
Prakash:Neelesh,you did this?
Shwetha slapped him.
Shwetha:Against your brother???
Prakash:Take him.
Police left with Neelesh.
Neelima:None can make you both part.
Aman:Yes.Friendship to love.
Neil:I got my Punjabi girl back.
Avni:And for me my Punjabi boy.
They hugged.After 4 years.Shore if a sea.A boy & a girl sitting together.The boy was desp.
Girl:Swaroop,when you feel sad come near me.
Boy:I’am always coming Swathi.
The girl stood.
Swathi:oh!You destroyed.If you can’t say dialogue correctly go to hell.
The boy also stood up.
Swaroop:You shut up.You are always taking mistakes.
Swathi:Papa,see he was blaming me.
Swaroop:No Maa,she started first.
Avneil was standing together a little far away.
Neil:Both are dramebaaz like your Mom.
Avni:Oh!Sir..you are best always na?Best in worst..
Neil:Excuse me mind your words.
Avni:Can’t you do this?
Swathi:Shut up.
Swaroop:We called you to console us & you both are worst than us.
Avni:What did you say?
Avneil chased the children.They took them on hand.Avneil came to kiss them.But children move down & Avneil kissed each other.
Neil:Its cheating.We are not playing with you both.
Swathi:Papa,you are child than us.
Avni:You are cheaters & also changing matter.
Swaroop:Maa,we failed in childish in front of you.
Swathi:No cheating.
Swaroop:Come.
They hugged & kissed.
A voice:Excuse me.
They looked forward.Someone tooled their family photo.
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THE END
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Hope you all enjoyed the last chapter.Thanks to all who read,commented & supported my episodes.Sorry for the mistakes.Muss you all.Love you all.Keep smiling,keep loving,keep blessing.Here I’am Athira signing off.Bye.
9 Comments
Love it please post another ff I’ll miss your ff good luck
Thank you Aisha.Miss you toooo.
it’s a wonderful & outstanding episode ever. I am just loving the every moment of your storyline. 1st the way avni got to know about neil & came to search for him & fighting between brother against brother all scene are really interesting. The way you making photo stealing suspense from the beginning & make our confusion clear at the end that’s just remarkable. At the you very beautifully show a happy family where there two child of avneil. Overall you are trying to give your best to make this last episode a long lasting happy chapter which is just mind blowing. I wanna go but only now I can remember all those beautiful moment. I hope that it’s not last talk of my end. your last episode is too good to attractive. All well that ends well. Best of luck my dear sister. Love you a lot.
Thank you Bhai.Thank you sooo much.
????????? yaaaaar sanju….. U r awesome… I loved ur suspense. Swati nd swaroop rocked. I don’t know what to comment. Gonna miss ur ff badly. Try to write a new one soon after ur xams. Kyunki hame tumhari ff ki aadath pad gayi hai. Yaar write more… U r very talented. Best of luck yaar for ur bright future and coming xams.
Today’s epi is a memorable one. I can’t forget this chapter ever. Because it is a package of emotions. Luv u sanju…… Luv u………..?????
Its for u.. Ur fav dairy milk…..???
Thank you Fasy.Love you a lottt my bestie.
Chechi… What was it?? There r no words to explain… Because everything was perfect in the chapter.. The suspense was unbelievable!!! Loved it very much… Will miss this ff so much… More than that will miss u chechi.. Ummaaa??
Thank you Pavi.Thanks a lot.
Are u going to deactivate Chechi?? Missing u a lot…??