Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.I am new to write TU SOORAJ MAIN SAANJH PIYAJI FF.Hi Friends,Sisters & Brothers.Glad to meet u all.If u like my FF,Please give ur valuable comments.A warm welcome to my FF.U can share ur feelings.U can give ur suggestions & opinions.I promise i make u feel glad when u read my FF.
I like the story of Tu sooraj main saanjh Piyaji.
Its a meaning full story full of Sincerity, Emotions,Cunning,Fight between Truth & False & Love.
But if u all like,then only i will continue story dears.Please give ur support & love.
The story starts :
A girl is shown.She is travelling in train.All of a sudden,It’s started raining.She sat beside window and enjoying the rain by keeping her hands in and out.The train stopped at Ladno…
kanak came out of the train.And started dancing in rain…
Just then,Umashankar came and saw her while dancing…
He mesmerized by her beauty…
Kanak saw one Jalebi Shop.There the old man got all equipment to prepare Jalebis.
But his hand is shivering while making the Jalebis…
Kanak : Dadaji i will help u?
Dadaji : No beta.I will manage.I had 35 years of experience…
Kanak laughs and says,
Dadaji i am ur Grand daughter know? Listen to me,Now see ur Grand daughter kanak’s hand Jalebi.People will make lines to eat them.And Dadaji u will recall ur old moments…
Dadaji laughs and says “YES”…
Kanak started preparing Jalebis…,
A tempting smell coming,all people gather there to eat them.That too it’s raining heavily.So people like to eat some hot type of food.
First she gave Jalebi to Dadaji…
Dadaji : Waaah kid!It remembered me my old days…
She gave Jalebis to all people who came,
All people appreciate her for making such fantastic Jalebis…
Finally,she gave all money to Dadaji…
He thanked her…And gave 500 Rs…
Kanak : Dadu i don’t want money,Give me ur blessing’s…
Dadaji hugs her and made her wear a chain…And says my blessings always
with u…This chain is of Lord Hanumanji will help u…
Both Dadaji and Kanak says
“JAI BAJRANGH BALI”…
Kanak bid bye to Dadaji…
Uma saw all these moments.First he mesmerized by her beauty.Now he fall for Kanak and her pure heart…
Just then,
Her duppata fly and fall on uma.
Uma felt a chandan smell…
Kanak ran and came to take her duppata.
Just then,storms came…
Kanak fears and hugged Uma tightly…
Tu Sooraj Main Saanjh Piyaji plays as background music…
Kanak fainted…
Uma lifted her and took her to his home…
No one there in home,except Shiv…
All went to kerala…For Uma’s maa treat ment…
Precap : Kanak open her eyes…And saw Uma…She screams loudly…Uma controls her…And introduces himself as Uma shankar and his brother Shiv…
Kanak call Uma as Brahmachari…
Uma & Shiv laughs…
Hope u all liked it…
Please give ur valuable comments…
And likes if u like it…
If u all liked it…Then only i will continue FF…Please share ur views friends…
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22 Comments
Good start sakash?
Hug in first meet itself?…this ff is too fast n sweet.
Thanks
Waiting for your next update
Hi Bhaana.Glad to meet u dear.I am glad u liked it.
Thank u so much dear.Hug reciprocated dear???…
Yes it’s fast.Thank u.
I will post next part soon dear…
Hi Sakash, thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading… lovely first meeting for Kanak & Uma & I liked the fact that it was true to their characters… I look forward to reading the next part ?
Hi Meera.Glad meeting u dear.Thank u so much.I am glad u liked title name and story dear.Sure dear.☺☺☺
I will post next part ASAP dear…
nice story keep it up. love it
Hi Mavisboamah.Dear may i call u Mavis?
I am glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much.
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yes mavis is my first name so you can call me mavis. welcome
Ok…Thanks Mavis…???
Amazing start….
Hi Ashu.Glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much…???
Nice sakash keep it up
Hi Shreya.Glad to meet u.I am glad u liked it.
Thank u so much dear.☺☺☺
It was a cute story Sakash? I could actually imagine Rhea Sharma and Avinash rekhi as I read.. and u maintained that bubbly role of Kanak ? waiting for the next part?
Hi Neha.Glad to meet u dear.I am so glad u liked it dear.Yes i try my best to keep Kanak bubbly role.
I will post ASAP dear…☺??
Lovely start sakash,superb writing..i love kanum characters in TSMSP,Thanks for this first part,Eagerly waiting for next one..
Hi Avanti.Glad to meet u.I am glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much.It means a lot to me.
I too like their characters.It’s really apathetic story,need guts to do it.No need to thank me dear,instead i am thankful to u,for giving ur support.
I will post next part ASAP dear…☺??
Hey….Hi…
Wow!! Hot jalebis in romantic rainy season…kanak’s behaviar is so cute…
Uma fall in first sight love…good….
Hi Maan.Glad meeting u dear.Yaa hot Jalebis.
Haha yes Uma for Kanak’s cute behavior dear.
I am glad u liked it.Thank u so much dear.☺??
Hey sakash title is really good I mean really suiting with the picture from where u get this picture of Uma n kanak yr as i haven’t seen it before
Hi Shreya.I got this picture from Tu sooraj main saanjh piyaji images on net…When i typed title name i got this pic…
Ok but nice
Ok…???☺☺☺