Hey guys, this is Pavithra here. I am back with my first ff’s fourth chapter. A Big thanks to those who commented on the previous chapter including Niyu di, Mansi di(Naina0411), Mansi di, Aalu, Anuradha di, Fenil bhai, Vipra di, varshu,Ashu,Athira chechi and my dearest friend at school,Aadila….. Sry, if I forgot anyone! And thanks to silent readers too?
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RECAP: Keerthi and Madhav remembers their childhood bond of friendship..
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Their exams are over and they are finally relieved from their stress when Mishal noticed Keerthi sad..
One day,Keerthi was eating her lunch and was lost in her thoughts.
Mishal came to her and said
Mishal: Keerthi, I know I am your best friend and I know you share your problems with me. And I understand you well. These days, I can see that you are very upset. What is making you upset Keerthi?? Tell me. I won’t tell anyone. Its making me sad yaar..
Keerthi:(faintly smiling) my Mishal, why are you thinking like this? I don’t have any problem… You are just imagining…
Mishal: OK,Keerthi, I have to believe you now as its sure that you won’t say anything…
Keerthi: (in her mind) oh god, why am I sad? I actually don’t have any idea about it! I think I should tell Mishal, for my sake!
They got a free period and Madhav and team was paying football… They took a lil break… They started to drink water.. Madhav looked around for Keerthi…
Madhav: (in mind) where is Keerthi??
And he finds her far away and he says:
I will break this distance Keerthi and one day you will be near me…
At that time in Keerthi’s side…
Keerthi called out at Mishal. Keerthi signaled her to sit near her.
Keerthi: you were right Mishal.. I am sad for only one thing…
Mishal: I knew it, and what is this one thing??
Keerthi: I will tell you but we should go to class.
Mishal agreed
They reached their classroom, no one was there as everyone was in ground..
Keerthi sat near Mishal… And said
Mishal: so now tell me Keerthi…. I won’t tell anyone.. I promise…(smiling)
Keerthi: The problem is love….
Mishal: Keerthi, tum kisko pyar kartha hai?
Keerthi nods….
Mishal:who is it???
Keerthi: It is…..
Mishal: it is whom?? Please say fast… Why did you hide it from me??
Keerthi: I had to hide it.. I cant tell anyone because its secret and no one should know it.. It was my mistake to Iove him and I can’t get out of it now…
Mishal: hmmmm… I can’t believe that u are in love! Tell me who is it..
Keerthi: It is……..
When she was about yo say Madhav, a girl came and said..
Girl: Keerthi didi, Radhika ma’am is calling you…
Keerthi: oh! I am coming… Mishal, I will tell you later.. Ok
Mishal: OK….? ( in a sad tone)
Keerthi goes downstairs to Radhika madam’s room and finds Madhav in front of the teacher.
Keerthi entered room and came near where the teacher was sitting when she found that she was near to Madhav.
Madhav and Keerthi was standing in almost 5cm distance. Keerthi’s and Madhav’s heart began to thump very fast..
THUMP… THUMP… THUMP!!!
They were standing so near after years
Keerthi shot a glance at Madhav while Madhav did the same!
Teacher interrupted…
Teacher: I called you because you both have scored the same mark. I mean in total its the same!
Keerthi and Madhav looked at each other!
Teacher: Congraluations! You both have scored 98.5%!
Keerthi and Madhav said thanks.
Teacher:Now you can go…
They went out of the room. Both of them in two different ways..
Madhav called Keerthi from behind..
So,Madhav and Keerthi came face to face…….
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PRECAP :- Keerthi and Madhav’s handshake. Keerthi writes about her feeling for Madhav!
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Hope you guys enjoyed this one. Ignore the grammatical and spelling mistake. Ignore the short forms if there is any. This was the fourth chapter for my ff – it was a mistake to love you. I will update the next chapter as soon as possible…
Thanks for reading. I want all your love and support.. Don’t forget to hit the like button. And let me know what u think of the story by dropping in a comment…
By,
Pavithra?
35 Comments
It’s outstanding mindblowing awesome amazing superb and many more. I loved it.
Thanks ashu for commenting.. Thanks a lot.. And thanks for those sweet words of urs!! Love u..?
Wow! ?
Amazing chapter Devu! ?
I loved it! ?
Madhav and Keerti are so cute!! ???
I am waiting for your next chapter impatiently!
Keerti and Madhav’s handshake!
Keerti writing about her feelings for Madhav!
Precap is fabulous! ?
Loads of Love! ❤️❤️❤️
Mansi di… What a beautiful comment!!! Thanks so much di… I will try to update soon… Update urs too!! The story is too interesting for me?
People who had lost their love can understand the feeling of this story!!!??
Thank you! ?
True!
Fabulous pabi! It’s outstanding… I can imagine the situation between keerthi and madhav when they were standing too close…. Very beautiful story…. Loved it from the bottom of my heart…
Oh?? my dear Anuradha di??.. Glad u liked it this much!! Yes even I can understand that beautiful situation…?? thanks for commenting…
Amazing !!
Thanks bhai.. Thanks a lot!!!
It’s a beautiful chappy pavithra.I am curious to read the next one.. update soon?
First of all Charu, call me pavi or devu pls.. I don’t like people calling me my full name!!
Thanks for commenting dear? I will try to update soon as possible!!! I don’t like typing actually!!??
Amazing devu fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!! I want Mishal and Keerthi should unite. Waiting for Keerthi and Madhav to talk. upload soon
Thanks vipra di for commenting!! And thanks for this sweet words of urs…
Mishal and Keerthi??? Or u mean Madhav and Keerthi?? Anyway, its all a suspense thriller (mot much?!)I won’t break the suspense as I want u to be thrilled!!!
I will update soon as possible… Thanks…
Oops!! No thanks di!!! I forgot.. Ignore those thanks pls!!
oh god my autocorrect! it was madhav actually 😀
its nice and much interesting pavi kutti post the next episode early
Thanks di!!! Thanks a lot for commenting… I loved u calling me pavi Kutti!!!
Thanks for those lovely words…
I will try to post next episode early di.. Thanks for supporting?
Superbbbbbbbb update?????Loved it completely❤❤❤❤❤KeerDhav are amazing????Precap????Update soon ?
Thank u mansi di.. Thanks a lot?
Keerdhav??? u said it!!! I will try to update soon as possible…
paviiii….my heart is also beating like
THUMB!!!…THUMB!!!…THUMB!!…
for the next chapter..
As idea polichu tto!!!!
I will try to update soon???
I’m excited yaar…..
love u so much…… u r the best in the world ??
Luv u too?? u are also the best na!!! We three are one!! No matter what comes between us right???
dear it very rare when i can come on comp .
its been 5 days so soorry for late. no ur msg i got yesterday but im sorry for future
its soo good n i felt soo relive that i was not so late.
excited for the next.
dont hurry take ur time
give us the best of urs
No problem aalu… No problem if u were late for commenting…anyway u commented na!!.. Yes, is I’ll take my time aalu.. Don’t worry.. And u wait and watch.. U r going to get the best from me??
It is awesome dear, loved it lil sis …..sorry for late comment my dear…..finally u update…how much I wait for this…..Pavi , update soon & love so much sis ? ?
Thank u sooo much di…? and no problem for late comment… I missed u as much as u were waiting for me to update!! I am missing u a lot.. My first friend here and u were the first one whom I called di??
Love u too and I will try to update soon??
Miss u too my lil sis & u also the first one whom I called lil sis…..Love u 1,2,3 till infinity ? ?
Super ……… Paviiii………
Thanks dear for commenting!!
Ninakku ake Randy words ariyullu??? Ayyo daridryam!!!
Enthivadeeyyy?? Ennalum Ni comment cheythallo.. Athu mathi enikku!!!??
oho…..so, kuch kuch hota hai waala moment between madhav & keerti……haha……..sweetuuuu, day by day this plot is growing more & more interesting…….post the nxt epi soon………luv u a lot my sweety pie……….
Thank u so much di??.. I will try to update soon as possible??luv u alotttt??
oh such a miss keerthi was about to tell abt madhav but a girl interrupted her . wow , madhav and keerthi got same marks , superb . awesome epi overall , loved it , make it a little bit longer if u can , because i love to read ur story ?. really sorry fr the very late comment i had exams , thats why could not visit tu at all
Thanks varshu…? I don’t like to the at all!! That’s why I always have short epi!! And the next chapter has been published… U can check it out if you have time ?
No problem for late comment!!! Again thank u??
Amazing buddie…..
I can visualise the emotions and feeling ????????❤❤
Thanks di… Love u a lot!???