I was thinking that I should continue or not?? What do u all think…??
Sorry if it hurts anyone’s feelings….n also sorry because its abit too long…
Chinki-(Whispers) avni yaar we r stuck very badly … He is Mumbai’s don ‘Master’ … He is very dangerous… If he kills us today then maybe he will go to jail but he gets bail before even entering police station… Avni we r gone, u were a true friend avni I will never forget u .. Our journey was till here only … Bye bye see u in heaven
(She dreams of her deadbody taken away)
On the other side-
Dd-Sirji u r awesome I mean no officer have progress so much in this case like u r doing
Neil-Dd no need to praise so much now when I will put the handcuffs on the fraud gangs hand that time u praise me… (Smiles)
A old woman shouts plz help my granddaughter plz someone help… Looks like u r an officer Plz beta u help me they kidnapped my granddaughter (shows towards the van)
Neil n dd sits in jeep n follows the van
On other side-
Avni-Aare u r friend or enemy instead of giving courage u r scaring me… Chinki- chinki
Chinki faints
Avni- Oh no! Chinki- wake up … truely died or what.. aarre so soon u can’t die leaving me alone in this problem wake up
Master-Oye do something n bring this girl to sense she will die when I will shoot her like this with her own wish she can’t die
Suddenly an ideas pops in avni’s mind
Avni- Master (she shouts)
Master gives an angry look with gun pointing towards her
Avni-Master(says calmly with low voice) u wanted to know why I broke ur car glass windows right
Master-From that time I was asking u this question but u didn’t reply so I (points gun)
Avni- I will tell u wait… (Thinks if i am not wrong he is very big don of Mumbai ‘Master’ but when he hears any love story he gets emotional Great… then suddenly she sees a holding of bride n groom dress)
Avni- I want to say (acts like crying) u know I loved a person his name was (she sees a poster of Salman Khan)….. salman khan
Mastet-Salman khan?? not only u love salman khan all girls love salman khan…
Avni-( Thinks .. What name I said) yes but I mean he was different only his name was salman khan rest!! … but my parents didn’t agree for our marriage so we .. We planed to escape
Master-(Little emotional) then what happened
Avni- Then we both escaped n got married but but but…
Master-Hurry up tomorrow I have to leave for pune
Avni- But while returning n while crossing the road he met with an accident n died……(acts like crying)And u know the car which did his accident was of the same model n colour that u have n from that time I have a problem whenever I see this kind of cars I can’t control myself from breaking them
Avni thought that master would get emotional n leave them but instead the opposite happened he took his gun n one of the guards gun n started firing in the air…
Chinki who came to sense by the time hearing the noise again fainted
Avni- Oh no what the hell .. What happened?? Why he became so angry like a bull who is shown red colour??
Gaurd1-Not red colour but incomplete love story
Avni- What?
Gaurd2-Yes our boss loved one girl very much but she left him n married someone else from that time whenever boss hears ‘incomplete love stories’ he kills that person
Avni- Whaaaaatttttttttttt????
On the other side-
Neil stopped that van n the goons came out
Goon1-Oo officer no need to show Herogiri just leave or else
Neil- Or else what listen I am giving u first n last warning leave that girl or else u all even won’t be able to walk properly…..
2 goons comes to attack neil but he beats them badly n they fall on the ground…
Dd goes to free the girl…
More goons attack neil but neil (author-our hero) hits them badly n they all fall on ground screaming/bleeding in pain but suddenly one goon from the back hits neil’s head with a bear bottle n neil starts bleeding but he fights with him n he too falls on ground bleeding heavily from his nose/mouth
Meanwhile another jeep comes n the officer with his team arrest them
Dd-Sirji oh God u r bleeding very badly come let’s go to hospital
On the other side-
Avni- (Thinks .. This is called apne hi legs mai kulhari marna) what do I do now??
As master was about to pull the trigger saying I hate Incomplete Love Stories
Avni- (shouts) Stop he is alive yes he is in the hospital let’s go there n see na chinki has also not come in sense till now
Master-Ok but if it turns out lie then I won’t spare u
Avni n Neil come to the same hospital
As neil was doing his bandage next to neil room was Chinkis room
Avni- what will I do now
Master-Will u say where he is
Avni-Yes but remember what I said.. I said let chinki come in sense first then…
Master-She came in sense
Avni- U also had to come in sense now only
Chinki- What but why …(avni tells everything to chinki) Wow what a story u told him avni super n where will u get ur husband now??
Suddenly she spots neil going with bandage in his head … She tells avni I think I got ur husband while avni looks with confusion chinki runs behind neil calling him Jiju.. While neil looks bag chinki says how r u jiju
Neil- (Confused) Who jiju ,what jiju, what r u talking
All of them comes there n avni gets shocked
Avni- What the hell chinki don’t tell me that u r thinking to make him my husband in front of master
Chinki- Avni do u fine any other option n any such person now
Avni- But him..
Chinki- Avni u only decide how u want to go from this hospital-
1)Savely by walking on ur own legs or
2)Ambulance taking our deadbody
Avni- 1 one
Chinki- Perfect then act with me, jiju how r u is ur pain now little less
Neil- What … what r u talking
Avni- Baby u again forgot us right (acts like crying) u know I am waiting for that day when u will regain ur memory n take me home with the right of a wife
Neil- Whaatt???
Dd-Sirji this is so shocking u didn’t tell ur parents or even me that u r already married wait u just wait I am calling aunty right now
Neil- (Takes away the phone) What r u doing dd have u gone mad
Dd-No I am perfect but u became mad Mr. Neil Khanna u destroyed a girls life u secretly married her n kept her hidden from all of us … Why?? I never expected this from u sirji… Never
Neil- Shut up dd stop this melodrama and u miss what r u planning to make me mad first throwed things at my face than doing all this baby drama … What??
Avni- (Thinks oh so his name is neil khanna) I know its not your problem baby after that accident u have this amnesia (again acts like crying) she goes near master n says after that accident though he survived he forgot everything our love our marriage his sali even me even his name….
Master gets teary eyes hids all the gun n goes near neil
Master-Wow salman khan wow u r very lucky to have such a loving n caring wife
Neil- What?? I just can’t understand what is happening n who is salman
Dd-Sirji total how many secrets do u have u even didn’t tell anyone that ur name is not neil but salman khan
Master-Its OK don’t put pressure on ur head but truely u have goddess in ur wife she loves u so much she is still waiting for u to recover n take her home… U will surely become OK one day and if u need any money for treatment then surely tell me … OK (He blesses avni n leaves)
Neil n dd r still very confused neil looks at avni as if she tried to kill him, as he goes near her to talk to her avni n chinki both leave from there running here n there……..
Neil- Crazy stupid girls … Next time if I get them I won’t spare them directly I will put them in jail….
Precap-Kumar comes to police station… Neil looks at some sketch n says they….
6 Comments
ossum aditi. i loved it. the way r showcasing every situation and the smartness played by avni which is off course by u is making the story more interesting… continue it and don’t worry about votes ad comments bcoz even i don’t get comments in some of my ff here bt i do get votes. if u r on wattpad do notify me.. all the best and update soon…..
Hey hii aditi.if you don’t mind can I know where r u from???and I just want to say ur storyline I mean avni selling that rings and cheating all remembered me one film in which heroine doe the same…so can u please tell me where r u from??
hi i am newly reading this story and u are doing a great job . ur story is totally rocking the way u show each nd every scene is totally enjoyable. dont get upset and continue ur story , i am looking forward.the way u are showing the story,i wish naamkaran writers should have shown the same way. but no regrets i am now. GUD JOB GIRL.
Sorry khyathi I can’t tell
But I think the movie which u suggested is power. Right?
Raviteja he is so funny. I love his comedy.
Thanks hiroyi