Chapter 13
Hi my lovely readers ???!!! I know I said that I’ll post “Soch Na Sake 4th shot” but I honestly don’t have any ideas to write for that today, so I’m posting this ???. Since you guys were so curiously excited to know about Mishti’s and Kabir relationship, I’m gonna reveal it today, without dragging.
It was very sad to see I had lost around 10 readers seeing the amount of likes/dislikes I got for the last part, but very happy to see 2 new silent reader’s comments. Ishwari & Darshika, thank you so much!! And all the lovely readers and commenters, thank you so much for you support ???.
Ok now let’s get back to the story. Hope you guys like it ???.
Previously on “Unwritten Love Of Destiny”,
All the while this chit chat going, Sanchi’s eyes were looking for someone. She noticed him talking with Dr. Malhotra.
**Kabir…… He look so handsome today. I think people start to look more good when they her older ???. What’re you doing Sanchi? He’s a married man. I’m sure Riya is around somewhere** She thought. Then she saw a little girl holding his hand, looking around. Little girl saw her and smiled sweetly. **Oh that’s Mishti! His daughter…… she’s so adorable ???**
Little Mishti released herself from Kabir’s hold and ran to Sanchi. By now Pratish and Ishveer have disappeared and Sanchi was talking with a random guest. She felt something tugging her dress. She saw Mishti looking at her smiling ???. She excused herself from the guest she was taking and bend down to get matched to Mishti’s height.
“Hello little princess! How are you?” Sanchi asked.
Mishti greeted her back. “Hi Sanchi aunty!!! ??? Wow…… You wook so pwetty today!! Come!! I’ll inter- intra-”
“Introduce?” Sanchi asked when the little girl was stammering.
“Yes… that word!! So big na, cwan’t wemember ???…!!! I’ll intaduce you to mommy, come!!” She didn’t give time for Sanchi to say a word and dragged her towards a lady.
“Mommy! Mommy !! Wook!!” Mishti called her mother
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“What’s it my princess?” Asked Mishti’s mother who was turned other side.
“This is Sanchi aunty!! She hwped me yesterday!!” She introduced Sanchi to her mother.
The lady turned to Sanchi. Sanchi was ??? totally shocked!! She was expecting to see Riya but……
“Hi Sanchi, I’m Avni Kapoor. It’s really nice to meet you! You know Mishti and Kabir told me how you helped her. Thank you so much Sanchi!!” The lady introduced herself.
Sanchi replied covering her shock. “Hi Avni, nice meeting you too ???. And no, it was nothing. Little Mishti here was crying and that’s why I……”
“Again, thank you so much ???” – Avni
“Mommy, isn’t she pwetty?” Mishti interrupted.
“Yes my princess, she is. But not more than you!” Avni said lifting her in her arms. “So Sanchi, I heard you and Kabir know each other?”
**Know each other? We just didn’t know each other, we loved each other!! But our destiny didn’t want us to be together.** Sanchi thought painfully and changed the topic quickly.
“I gotta go now Avni, my friends are looking for me!”
“Is that so? Just give a sec and I’ll get my husband. You should talk with him too!!” – Avni
“I will! But later, Avni. Gotta go now. Excuse me!!” Sanchi hurries away thinking, **Is she- is she Kabir’s WIFE??? Did he remarried? What happened to Riya then?**
As she was going to where her friends were, someone called her from behind.
“Sanchi!”
She turned around to see who it was.
“Riya??”
They hugged each other.
“Others told me you came. Gosh girl…!! You look gorgeous today!! So, how are you? Couldn’t talk to you for 10 years!!” Riya asked pleasantly. She and gang became very good friends 10 years ago
They talked about various things but not a word about Kabir. Then, a tall handsome man came and wrapped his arm around Riya’s waist.
“Oh Sanchi, this is my husband, Karthik Dhanraaj! Karthik, this is my friend, Sanchi Mishra.” As Riya was saying, Sanchi was trying her best to hide her surprise but Riya notices it. So she decided to answer the silent question.
“Kabir and I went our separate ways a long time ago, Sanchi. We realized that we aren’t made for each other. We belong to different people!”
“Well that was good for me!!” Karthik too joined the convo. “If she didn’t divorce him and come to UK, how would I find the love of my life ??????” He said while looking at Riya, lovingly.
Sanchi smiled seeing them ??? “I’m happy for you guys”
“Riya always said you’re a good friend of hers. You were in America right?” – Karthik
They talked about stuff. Then Riya suddenly popped a question. “So Sanchi, I know you aren’t married yet, but any boyfriend?”
“Boyfriend? No Riya I’m married!!” Sanchi replied.
“WHAT!!! ???” Riya exclaimed.
“??? ha ha ha god Riya ??? just look at your face!!! Yeah I’m married, but to my work!! Not a person ???” Sanchi laughed.
Riya sighed and slapped her hand. “What the he’ll Sanchi? You almost gave me a heart attack!”
“??? no problem yaar! I’m a cardiologist, remember? ???” Sanchi replied still laughing. “Anyway, I don’t have time for a relationship Riya, I’m more focussed on my career”
“Ok!” Riya’s eyes had an unknown glint which Sanchi couldn’t understand.
Then someone said everyone to dance. Veer came out of no where and dragged Sanchi to the dance floor. From the corner of her eye she saw Kabir dancing with Isha. **Why isn’t he dancing with his new wife? She’s dancing with some other guy ???**
Just as the song ended, Ram and Garv came to the front.
“May I get your attention, everyone? Ok, you guys have danced with the person you wanted to dance. Why don’t we see who your destiny wants you to be paired with?” Said Ram excitedly.
“Yeah, so we’re gonna play a small game. All girls have to take a chit from this bowl, which we wrote all guys names and dance with the partner your destiny choose for you” explained Garv.
Everyone got excited for this but Sanchi didn’t want to take part in it.
“C’mon yaar!!! It’s been 10 years!! At least do this much for us na?? Please please please please!!!” Veer started to whine and finally she agreed.
All girls stood in a line. Each took a chit from the bowl.
Many weren’t lucky to get the partners they wanted.
Gayatri got Dr. Manchanda
Neeta got Dr. Malhotra (much to Gayatri’s dislike ???)
Adarsh got some old lady. The lady looks thrice older than him ???.
Avni got some handsome, drop dead gorgeous guy, which Sanchi didn’t know.
Riya got Karthik and had a wide smile ???.
Pragya got Satish. ( “Jai mata di!!!” She whispered )
Isha got Veer ( **thank you bhagwan ji!!! If I dance with a random girl, yeh devi ji would kill me later!!** Veer thought silently. )
Last but not least, Sanchi’s chit said the one and only……”Kabir”. She tried to exchange her chit with Avni, but she had already went to the guy she got.
So she slowly went near him. It was the first time they met face to face today. As she got near him, Kabir understood that she got his name.
He offered his hand for her to take. She accepted politely, but didn’t look at him properly. Not even a simp glance. He led her to the dance floor. She placed her free hand on his shoulder, still without making any eye contact. He placed his free hand on her waist and pulled her closer to him. A shiver ran through her whole body with his touch and her eyes met his. Both of their hearts skipped a beat at their closeness ???.
They started to sway with the music, and when a familiar song started to play, they couldn’t get their eyes away from each other.
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi to
Mujhe jeena aya hai
(Unlike the last time, this time Sanchi’s whole attention was on Kabir. They were so lost in each other without a care of their surroundings.)
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deevani
Main zard sitaara
(He twirled her and pulled to him)
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Main tera ho jaaun
Jo tu karde ishara
Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Tere khushboo se takaraaun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Wo khwab tu
(They felt like they were the only people in the world ???)
Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paya hai
Tujhpe marke hi to
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
(Their dance was actually a sight to watch. All the couples around them had stopped dancing to watch them. It was that much romantic ???)
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deevani
Main zard sitaara
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tere bin ab to
Na jeena gawaara
Maine chhode hain baaki sare raste
Bas aaya hoon tere paas re
Meri aankhon mein tera naam hai
Pehchaan le
Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Ye jaan le
(He made her fall in his arms and caught back pulling her to him………. ??? it’s really hard to explain the dance in my mind, you guys just imagine the most romantic dance you’ve ever seen!)
O karam khudaya hai
Tera pyaar jo paya hai
Tujhpe marke hi to
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deevani
Main zard sitaara
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Mein bheta musafir
Tu thehra kinara
He twirled her away and got her closer, finishing the dance. They were on that pose without moving, lost in their own world. They came to their senses when others started to clap. They moved away from each other quickly and went away.
Kabir disappeared suddenly. No one knows where he went. While Sanchi went to the bar area to get a drink. A soft drink actually. (Just because she was in a western country, you can’t expect her to drink!! Jaya will kill her if she gotta know, that Sanchi’s drinking alcohol ???)
As she was slowly sipping her drink, she heard a group of girls gossiping about her.
“Hey, look!! It’s her!! The one danced with Kabir sir!!” – girl 1
“Yaar, she’s even more beautiful up close!!” – girl 2
“She’s so lucky to get to dance with the hottest doctor alive ???!!!” Girl 3 added dreamily.
Girl 4 was listening silently.
“I heard someone saying that she was his intern 10 years ago ???” – girl 2
“Do you think he likes her?” Girl 1 asked her friends curiously.
Sanchi choked on her drink hearing that.
She stopped listening to them and went to find her friends thinking, **Crazy girls!! Don’t they know he’s married and have a kid??**
While the girls were still gossiping.
“Don’t know ??? may be!! What’s stopping him na? ???” – girl 3
“Yeah, he’s a rich talented and a handsome single guy ???. She’s a gorgeous girl. Both are doctors. And on top of that they know each other from before so-” girl 2 was rudely cut off by a loud noise.
The silent girl 4 slammed her glass on the table silencing them. “SHUT UP!! Just shut up ok!! I’m sure there isn’t anything like that!!” She said angrily.
“But Maya, you need to face the reality!! Didn’t you see the way he looked at her while dancing? It was like he’s in love with her!! It was like long lost love, met after sooo long ??? and their eye lock!! It was sooo deep…. And intense…. And soo longing…. ???” girl 2 explained dreamily.
“No!! I am very sure that Kabir sir doesn’t love that girl. He doesn’t even like her ???. Didn’t you see he just disappeared after the dance!! That’s because he doesn’t even like her!! And guys, why are you doing this to me? You know very well that I love him and yet you say stuff like this!! Why are you hurting me like this??” The girl named Maya said sadly.
Meanwhile Avni came to Sanchi.
“Hey Sanchi, we’re leaving now. So came to say goodbye!” She said pleasantly. Then the guy who Avni was dancing earlier came too, carrying a sleeping Mishti on his arms.
“Hello Sanchi, Avni told me that you’re the one who helped Mishti the other day in the mall. Thank you so much yaar!! By the way I’m Neil, this little girls dad and this lovely lady’s husband” he held out his hand towards her for a handshake but Sanchi was looking like she just saw a ghost ???. (??? funny how life turns out, isn’t it? ???)
Avni shook her by her shoulder. “Kya hua Sanchi? Are you alright?”
“I thought you’re Kabir’s wife!! And- and Mishti, isn’t she his daughter?” Just as she blurted that out, Neil bursted out in to laughter ???.
“I don’t know what made you think that but no, he’s NOT my husband!!” Avni said while trying to control herself from laughing but failing miserably ???.
“But I thought when you said Avni Kapoor……”
“That’s because I’m a Kapoor too. ??? I’m Neil Kapoor, Kabir’s cousin. We’re doctors from SDCH Kolkata branch. And trust me Sanchi, no one -I repeat- no one can handle this mad lady here except me ??? Specially, not my innocent khadoos cousin ???” Neil explained to her earning a death glare from his wife ???.
“Besides, Kabir isn’t married right Neil?” Avni said winking at Neil ???.
Neil too got the hint. “Haa…… He got married around 10 years ago I think. But soon got divorced ???. He didn’t get the girl he loved. Well, that’s what masi told me!! After that, he didn’t got married. Many girls tried to win his heart. They still do. (He signed towards the bunch of new interns, who were gossiping about Sanchi and Kabir earlier.) ??? Poor Kabir!! I think he still loves that girl!!!” Said Neil.
“Anyway, all these are old stories. You’re not that girl he loves na? So you don’t have to worry!!” Avni said a little too cheerfully ???.
“Yeah!! Don’t think of it much. We should go now. I hope we’ll meet again Sanchi, bye ???!!” Both bid her goodbye and went away.
Sanchi was lost in her thoughts deeply. The words Neil said earlier, echoed in her ears repeatedly.
“I THINK HE STILL LOVES THAT GIRL!!!”
“I THINK HE STILL LOVES THAT GIRL!!!”
“I THINK HE STILL LOVES THAT GIRL!!!”
She felt a pang in her heart.
**NO!! IT CAN’T BE!! he’s just mistaken!! Just because he divorced Riya and didn’t get married again, doesn’t mean he still loves me!! Maybe he has a different reason ???. Yes!! That’s it!! He has a different reason, for not to get married!! But am I just convincing myself? What if what he said is true and Kabir still loves me???????????????**
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So that’s all for today ???. Next part will have some friends time and a sleepover. Don’t know which one I post next but wait for it ???.
And if you like today’s part press the like button and if you don’t like it press the dislike button and give me your reviews ???. Until I return with a new chapter stay safe!!! Love you all ???
18 Comments
It was tooo good…i loved it..n sry as i cant write long comments(likhne ko toh mre paas bhut kuch h) as my xams????…hope u understand..bye sweetie n luv u??
What a episode yaar ruchu……..I am get speechless reading this episode yaar……….it is amazing,mind blowing,awsome,outstanding,fantastic and wonderful episode………..I am eagerly waiting for the next part yaar……….love u ruchu dear
Awsome ?❤
Awsome just loved it ❤
Thank God. Now m happy. .. awesome episode . I got all my answers in this episode. Waiting for next one. Post soon. Luv u sweetie.
Wow! Superb.. Awesome…. Finally the misunderstanding is been cleared .Vut Sanchi is bit confused about Kabir.. Let’s wait for the next episode…. Take care.. Post as soon as possible…. Baye
But ***Sanchi
awesome episode dear….i m feeling very reliefed now after knowing that mishti is not kabir’s daugghter……ur writing skills is just perfect…..keep writing dear…..will be waiting for d next ep…..????
Hi ruch
Nice episode
Its amazing….. Loved it….. And post any one u like boyh are just so amazing
The episode was fantastic. I mostly liked Ria in this episode. Post next episode ASAP
as usual mind blowing and out of the park for me loved it dear
Thank God and u too. I m relieved that Mishti is not kabir daughter. I m eagerly waiting for their confession. New Maya drama well it’s again twist and drama. Sorry for giving dislike button in ur previous update.
Fntstic,,epsd..
Omg ruwani.. This is outstanding.. Sorry for not commntg on last one?u know wedding season so i m busy in shopping and all. I just got time nd read both at once thank god i did’t read last part alone??.. Otherwise surely m to marr jati suspense me??.. Lovv u ?? post nxt asap..anyone as u want.. Bye tc
Super episode…?????????????????????????????
Aww…..awesome Ruch I can’t explain how glad I am to know that the way to Kanchi is clear.Riya ia soooo good yeah here. Umm….about the dance I imagined Kanchi’s previous dance with all the attention to Kabir that Veer had snatched before!!! Can’t wait for next epi…..
First of all let me say sorry to u bcz I felt very bad about kabir riya mrrg now I’m fine plz now make them clear all misunderstandings plz