Chapter 15
Hello lovelies ???. So here’s the next part!!! Today is really a very special day to me, coz this is my 50th post in TU ???. Never thought I would come this long when I first started to write the intro of my first ff ???. I came this long only because of you my friends ???. So this chappie is dedicated to all my readers in TU!!! Love you all ???. (I have more things to say but I’ll tell them at the end ???)
Previously on “Unwritten Love Of Destiny”,
Sanchi was breaking down ???. Riya wiped her tears away. “Oh ho!! Stop it na!! It’s not the time to cry now!! It’s the time to win back your love ???”
Sanchi looked at her questionably.
“What did you think? I told you all these just because I’m out of my mind? I’m telling you this so you and Kabir could have a future together!!” – Riya
“No Riya. It’s too late now. It’s been 10 years. He doesn’t love me now” Sanchi said sadly.
“Listen to me Sanchi!! Yes, we got divorced 9 years ago but I know Kabir still loves you!! Not just me… Veer, Isha, Pragya… All of us know that!! YOU, WERE THE ONLY ONE, THAT COULD ENTER KABIR’S HEART!! HE LOVED YOU THEN, HE LOVE YOU NOW, AND HE WILL LOVE YOU ON THE FUTURE TOO!! Even if you go somewhere again, do you think he’ll stop loving you? No Sanchi, he won’t do that. You wanna know why? Coz he can’t!! He can’t coz he loves you with everything he has!! His heart, his mind, his soul…. everything!!”
Sanchi just hugged Riya when she said this, sobbing ???. Riya patted her on her back consoling her. “If you wanna cry, then cry as much as you want today. But from tomorrow, you’re gonna be busy. You’re gonna be busy by changing your life. I want to see the both of you happy, ok? Get your life back!! ???
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……….next day morning……….
All were having breakfast in Malhotra Mansion. All means Ishveer + Rithik + Kabir and Sanchi + Pratish + Anand and Gayatri ???.
Everyone is having a normal conversation. Kabir who drank something last night is normal too. The topic came to Sanchi.
“So Sanchi, are you excited for today? After all its your first day in SDCH as a doctor. Last time you were an intern.” – Anand
“Yeah uncle, can’t wait to start working!!” Sanchi replied excitedly.
“Waise Sanchi, why didn’t you come with Sunny yesterday?” Pragya asked winking Veer ???.
“Haa yaar!! It would’ve been more awesome if he was here!!! Why didn’t HE come with you?” Asked Veer.
“He was busy, Veer. He just started work here and need to adjust so much. He too came to India after a long time na? Besides, his new boss is kinda creepy!!” Said Sanchi.
“Oh ho!!! Seems like Sunny’s boss has a crush on Sanchi!!” Veer clapped happily ???.
Kabir who was listening to all these, gripped his fork tightly.
“Veer!!! Are you mad?? ??? I’m just telling that his boss is a little weird, that’s all!! Besides ???…… he’s too old for me. I think he’s around his 60’s” Sanchi said thoughtfully.
“Aww he is definitely old” all laughed ???.
Sanchi slowly stole a glance from Kabir and saw he was still gripping his fork like he want to break it.
“Ok, you all seems to know this Sanchi’s Sunny guy right? But who’s this guy anyway?” Asked Riya not noticing Veer’s hint, not to ask that question.
Kabir’s face look murderous when he heard ‘Sanchi’s Sunny’ part. ???
“Ah! Sorry Riya I forgot you don’t know him ??? (Sanchi took out her phone and showed a photo to riya). Sunny is my little brother!! He’s an engineer ???” she explained to her.
Kabir was in close distance that he could see the photo. He was relieved to see it was the same man he saw her with, in the mall the other day ???. **So he is her brother, huh? That’s good!! ??? Wait, what?? Why am I happy?? No Kabir, you MUST keep your distance with her!!** he advised himself.
After breakfast, all came to their cars to go to the hospital.
Satish is dropping Pragya and Karthik is dropping Riya at SDCH. Isha’s going with Veer, Kabir and Sanchi have their own cars.
Sanchi was looking for her purse but can’t find it. “It may be in the room. You guys go, I’ll come ???” she went back inside.
“Ok guys, she’ll be back in around 10 mins. I made dad agree to keep talking with Dr. Kabir for a while. So we have 10 mins to do whatever we want to do!!” Isha said hurriedly and others nodded.
After 10 mins, Sanchi came with her purse and saw that everyone has left except 2 cars. One was Kabir’s and the other one was Dr. Malhotra’s. As she went to her car, Anand went to his car passing her.
“See you at the hospital, Sanchi” ??? he said pleasantly and went.
She went near her car and saw, two of her tires was punctured.
“Oh god!! Not on my first day!! Now what do I do? I don’t have time for this and other’s went too!! What should I do!!!” She went inside to talk to Gayatri.
……….behind some bushes……….
“Ok mom, she’s coming inside now. You know na what to do?” Riya told someone over the phone.
………..inside the mansion……….
“Don’t worry, I know what to do.” Gayatri said someone over the phone. She hung up and turned to see Sanchi.
Sanchi explained about her car.
“I’m really sorry Sanchi, but mommy ji took one car and the other one is at the service station ???…….. wait a minute!! You can go with Kabir!! He’s still here!! Kabir…!!!” Gayatri yelled for Kabir.
“No aunty, it’s not necessary! I can manage!” Sanchi was trying her best to stop her but she wasn’t ready to listen.
“No beta, it’s your first day!! You shouldn’t be late!!” – Gayatri
Just then Kabir appeared holding a file.
“Ah Kabir! There you are!! Look na, this poor girl’s car got two punctured tires. There aren’t any cars right now in the house. Can you take her with you? After all you two have the same destination!!” ??? Gayatri said in one go not letting Sanchi stop her.
Kabir looked at her. Sanchi looked back apologetically. “It’s alri-”
“No problem, you can go with me” Kabir said cutting her off.
“Great!! Ok then Sanchi, go with him before it’s late! Bye ???” Gayatri waved at them and disappeared.
They came and got in to the car silently. Kabir inside the car it was silent too.
Actually, the silence was unbearable for both. But no one knew what to talk about. Kabir had enough and decided to break the silence.
“So…… how was US?”
“Good. Wasn’t easy to adjust to a new country, it’s so different everything there. Cloths, food, culture…… everything! But it was nice ??? the hospital I worked there was amazing ??? all the doctors and nurses were very friendly and supportive. Never out casted me as I wasn’t one of them ???”
A smile crept to his face hearing her talk about her life in US so fondly ???.
“How was you?” She asked.
“Nothing special…… same boring life” – Kabir
“And aunty? Is she ok?” – Sanchi
Kabir stopped the car. He was looking front but his face twisted in pain.
“Kabir? Kya hua?” Sanchi asked worriedly.
“Maa……” He took a deep breath. “Maa ab iss duniya mein nahi hai……”
Sanchi gasped. “K-kya? A- aunt- aunty j-ji? K-kab?”
“6 years ago……” He said slowly.
Tears escaped her eyes without her knowing ???. “I’m sorry Kabir, I didn’t know……???”
He turned to her and saw her in tears. His hand went to wipe the tears away naturally. Sanchi looked at him and they both got lost in each other’s eyes for a while. Kabir suddenly looked uncomfortable and said, “Don’t cry on your first day!” And started the car. They reached the hospital.
Kabir and Sanchi both entered the hospital together. A strong wind blown. All turned to see them. The interns were there too.
Every one clapped to welcome Sanchi. Miss Fernandez came forward and hugged Sanchi, giving her a flower bouquet ???.
“Aagaya roshini!!!!” She said even surprising her more and let go of her.
The interns were totally shocked.
“Man, yeh naya doc, really must be something out of the world! Otherwise have you ever seen evil witch Fernandez lady behave like this?” Boy 1
“Yeah man! This is unbelievable! And look at her! She’s beautiful!!” Boy 2 agreed.
“Yeah man she’s beautiful!!” Boy 1.
“Miss Fernandez, yeh roshini nahi hai, yeh tho Sanchi!!” Veer said grabbing everyone’s attention.
“Dr. Veer! I know her name isn’t roshini! (She frowned at him ???) What I meant was that when Sanchi left here, the whole hospital became so dull. Now that she’s here again, the lost brightness of this hospital had already returned.” She said smiling ???.
“Yaar Sanchi, miss Fernandez missed you so much! She was asking about you everyday” ??? said Isha.
“I missed you too miss Fernandez!!” Sanchi side hugged her.
Anand came forward. “Yes, we all missed Sanchi very much and we’re very happy that she came back for us ???. Dr. Sanchi will be the head of the cardiology department from today. And interns! This special news is for you. Dr. Sanchi here was one of the most excellent interns of the history of Savitri Devi College & Hospital. So along with Dr. Kabir she will teach you guys too!!” He announced with his famous reality show host wala tone ???.
All interns cheered except for one girl how was frowning ???. That’s Maya. She didn’t like that Sanchi’s gonna teach them too.
All boys cheered loudly making Kabir frown ???. (Ha ha ha seems like the boys have a crush on Sanchi ???)
Sanchi made a signal to stop their noise. “Thank you everyone ???. I’m really honoured to get a chance to teach you, specially with Dr. Kabir. He was my mentor too. And I’m telling you, what I am today, made possible because of my internship here, under the guidance of Dr. Kabir” she looked at Kabir and smiled ???.
Kabir didn’t expect to here something like this but he too gave a small smile ???.
The interns got another shock seeing their khadoos hitler smiling. Mind You! They never saw him smile!! So this really made gave them a 200 volt shock ???.
………. (whispered convo )……….
(Maya’s character will be played by the girl who plays Anjali in ‘Sasural Simar Ka’)
“Oh my god!! ??? has more handsome when he smile ???” Maya said dreamily.
“Hmm ??? she just got here and already made Kabir sir smile….” said girl 1
“What’re you trying to say, Disha?” Maya asked from girl 1 harshly.
“You saw na, the two came together, and not even half an hour later she got sir to smile. And there’s still the last night dance……” the girl named Disha gathered the events in summary.
“I told you there’s nothing like that!!” – Maya
“How can you be so sure?” – Disha
“Because I love him!!” – Maya
………. (end of whispered convo) ……….
“I hope we’ll be able to work well ???” Sanchi finished her little speech with a smile.
All clapped.
“Alright everyone!! That’s enough. Get back to work!” Kabir said sternly and the interns and nurses turned to go.
“Still khadoos” Sanchi mumbled behind his back but unfortunately, he heard her. And some other interns too, including Maya and Disha.
Kabir turned to her and folded his arms in front of his chest and slanted his head in a questioning way.
“Did you say something?” He asked in his usual khadoos tone.
Sanchi got nervous. “Yeah… n-no I mean yeah, I asked where’s my cabin?” She said trying to smile.
He raised an eyebrow at this.
“Oh! Your cabin is right next to Dr. Kabir’s cabin!!” Veer replied cheerfully ???.
“O Teri…… ah ok thanks Veer” Sanchi said normally.
“And your cabin has an adjacent door to Dr. Kabir’s cabin too” Veer added smiling like a Cheshire cat ???.
Sanchi just smiled and went near him. “I’m gonna kill you, my dear matchmaker ???” she whispered to him evilly and went to her cabin.
Veer turned to see Kabir looking at him pointedly.
“Veer, how did the cabin next to mine got vacant? Last time I cheched, it was Dr. Awasti’s cabin.” He asked going closer to him.
Veer got more nervous. “Um um……Dr. Awasti um…… asked for a different cabin. Yeah! Dr. Awasti asked for a different cabin, so dad decided to give this to Sanchi ???, my patients are waiting for me, Dr. Kabir! I’ll talk to you later” he disappeared before Kabir say anything more.
Kabir just shook his head and went to his cabin.
“Dekha tumne! She called him khadoos and he didn’t do anything about it!” – Disha
Maya frowned and went away.
(No romance scenes today. Hey!! Don’t glare at me!! It’s her first day na? Try to understand!! Little by little, little by little the love story would progress ???. They waited 10 years for each other, let them go slowly. What if something bad happen if their story went in hurry? We don’t want that to happen, now do we? ???)
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So that’s all for today ???. Next part you’ll see more Kanchi moments, and someone will challenge Sanchi too ???.
Ok, now about what I wanted to tell you.
1. Sorry for not posting earlier coz I was busy with uni.
2. I had replied your comments for my 13 chapter as usual but all my replies and more than a half of your comments for the chapter 14 had disappeared after ‘The Maintenance Day of TU’!!! So I’m not replying to chapter 13’s comments coz I’m lazy and not replying to chapter 14’s comments, coz it’ll be unfair for the commenter who I lost the comments ???. So don’t be sad, but I’ll reply to you from this part!!! ???
3. Supriya, Swara, Risu & Erica thank you so much new silent readers for commenting and if I forgot any silent reader, please scold me and tell me that I forgot you ???
Last but not least, if you like today’s part press the like button and if you don’t like it press the dislike button and give me your reviews ???. Hope you like my fiftieth post, sorry I couldn’t do anything special ???. So until I come back with another post, stay safe!! Love you all ???.
30 Comments
lovely ep…..ur writing skills is awesome dear….but plz post next ep asap or else i will be big wala katti with u….understand???
Don’t be katti Darshu ??? next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon and thank you so much dear ???
Congrts ruwani dear for ur half century issi baat p kal dono fs ho jaye???.. Amazepi as ususal.. Loved kanchi moment.. Veer and gang as a matchmaker.. Superbly execute the plan… Sanchi’s sunny guy part nd kabir’sreaction is hilarious.. Gud ni 8 sweety mujhe nind aa rahi h.. Lovv u tc.. Post nxt asap..???
Thank you so much dear ??? glad you liked it and the next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon!! Love you too ???
I m glad that sanchi has come back.. bring them back together . can’t wait anymore…HV been waiting for 10 years?
Thank you so much Magan ???
Congtatulations for ur 50th post on tu dear…… And coming to the chapters it amazing….. Loved it
Thank you so much Amnaa ???
Awsm mindblowing dear pls update next part soon
Thank you Risu ??? next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon dear ???
ruwani ruwani how any one can write such a beautiful story hmm……!!! just kidding……….
this was superb, mind blowing, amazing story after so many days you came
please i requesting you can you be regular if it’s possible because i can’t wait for next part of your ff………
post next one asap……………tc…………….see you soon……………love you a lot…………….
Thank you so much Dhruti dear ??? I’m trying to be regular but with studies and all its really hard ???. The next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon and love you too ???
First of congo dear for your silver jubilee on TU. To isi baat pe next episode jaldi to banta h ??? kya karu ab or wait nhi ho rha. Or rhi baat is episode ki to ye awesome nhi maha awesome h. Hahaha filmy ho gya kya but really amazing writer u r dear. But ek baat bolu kusum ko aise hi tapka diya bin use uske pote poti ka muh dikhaye. Chal koi nhi tune likha h to kuch soch ke hi likha hoga . Now I don’t want ur laziness. Post as soon as possible it’s my order ??? (dost hoon na itna haq to banta h boss) luv u loads dear ???
Thank you so much Priyu ??? let’s see what I’ll do with Kusum’s death ???. Next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon dear ??? love you too ???
Awesome.. Fabulous. Post as soon as possible. .take care.
Congratulations for your 50th update in TU. May it go to 500to 5000 update.. You always make us delight by posting your ff.. All the best….
Aww that’s so sweet of you ??? thank you so much sweetie ???
Thank you so much Aafiya ???
congrats for your 50th post and i also happy that yesterday i attempted my exam very well hope i qualify prelims and coming to epi its awesome and sanchi saying still khadoos and feeling bad for kabir his mother died when he said i also feel like crying and thankyou for being writer friend here inspite of bad story line of sdch
Thank you so much Swetha ??? and congratulations for your exam too ???. I’m here this long is only because of the current crappy story line of SDCH dear ???. I know like, me many of you don’t like it. So I’m sharing my ideas ??? love you sweetie ???
congratulation for your 50 th post. post next epi asap. egearly waiting for next episode
Thank you Shinie ??? next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon ???
Conga 4 50th post…luv u baby doll!!!…it was amazing…..and Anjali as Maya…perfect?????…Anjali is best 4 negative character???………update soon
Thank you Dhruvi ??? glad you liked Anjali for Maya ???
So so superb and interesting and amazing and outstanding episode ruchu………… you’re rock ruchu……….
Thank you so much Anu ???
Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuu………………hip hip hurray…hip hip hurray……….o balle balle o balle balle………this was my dance specially for u sweety……arey half century landmark koi choti baat nhi hai yaar……….& yaar, what a blockbuster epi………just toooooooooo good……….veer ka match maker ban na…….sanchi ko kabir ka adjacent kabin milna……..sunny ka part………mind blowing……..luv u a lot sweety………btw dear, I’ve posted my os………jab bhi time mile, padhlena ek baar, but warning……..sad os hai…….haha………luv u a lot Shona……….bye……….tc
Riya dear, thank you so much for this lovely comment AND your special dance ??? glad you liked this part and the next part is already submitted so you’d get to read it soon dear ???. Not only I read your os, I commented on it as well!! It was beautiful ???. Love you too ???
Superb.
Thank you Kajal ???