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Recape Part 17
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Shivavy- u both go sleep now.
Om- Shivavy and u?
Shivavy- I’m not feeling sleepy.
Rudy- I’m also not feeling sleepy too O u go
Om- rudy shivavy wants to be alone for sometime so come.
Rudy- how do u know O?
Om- ab chal.
Omru- good nite shivavy bhaiya.
Shivavy- smile.
Rudy- O I’m telling u these rajputani hum obros ki band bajey ge.
Om- o really we will see.
Shivavy thinking- what? to do that she start smiling again i want her tadi, her tasha back that’s what SSO fall for in love with her. She wants divorce from me but I’m not going to give divorce to her what she think of herself that SSO will free her from my love. Anika u r my passion my sensation.
Devi g- Shivavy what are u thinking beta?
Shivavy- dadi g u here r u fine.
Devi g- no beta I’m worried for Anika she promised dev that she won’t hurt herself from now onwards but physically she might not hurt herself but mentality she’s hurting herself. I never knew that she will that room which was her world.
Shivavy- dadi when SSO is here then my dadi don’t need to fear I’ve promised u na that I’ll return u back ur Anika to u then I’ll and SSO never break his promise.
Devi g- have she eaten anything.
Shivavy- no dadi g actually she senses that i cooked food so she refused to have it and when gauri cooked both Anika and bhavay were sleeping.
Devi g- Shivavy now u too sleep .
Shivavy- dadi g can i ask something from u.
Devi g- sure .
Shivavy- is Anika get irritated from something?
Devi g- nope.
Shivavy- ok fine dadi g u go and sleep i’m also coming and thanks for coming here i feel relaxed.
Devi g- Shivavy! actually she’s.
Shivavy- hold dadi hands of. what? dadi g please tell me.
Devi g – she don’t get irritated but gets jealous.
Shivavy- jealous and Anika. No , no.
Devi g- Shivavy yes she is jealous of dev.
Shivavy- dev uncle ? Please explain me in brief .
Devi g- though Anika keep distance from dev but when she use to comes Anika get annoyed with dev aur phir Anika ko manana dev k liya mushkil he nahe na mumkin ho jata tha.
Shivavy- means?
Devi g- she’s Anika’s second cousin Shallu but
Shivavy- and Anika is jealous of her because she don’t like anyone to get close to her baba specially Shallu.
Devi g and shivavy- screaming kyun k Anika ko nahe basand k us k baba us k elawa kisi aur ko attention dey aur na shallu Anika ki baba k pas aye. Both did hi-fi.
Shivavy- Yahoooooo! Dadi ap nay to khirkitod news di hai. Ab Anika say “JEALISIKA” bano ge meri tadibaaz billi.
Devi g- now leave me and concentrate on ur plan.
Shivavy- smirks. Get ready Anika to burn.
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Next morning
Gauri- bhavay, bhavay get up.
Bhavay- what di? After such a long time I’m sleeping so relaxed don’t distrube us.
Gauri- bhavay ki bachi get up see u have put both legs on di. it’s 7 am ?
Bhavay- kya hai? guari di itni subha subha
Gauri- bhavay , di uth jaye ge utho and help me in preparing di breakfast she hasn’t taken her dinner and u also come please slowly come out.
Bhavay- “u r too bad.
Gauri- same too u and next time till di don’t get fine u r not going to sleep with di.
Bhavay- not fair di.
Gauri- walk carefully.
Gayu- Shivavy bhaiya u woke up?
Shivavy- what Anika is doing ?
Bhavay- yawning. di is sleeping
Shivavy- she’s fine na?
Gauri- bhaiya actually di couldn’t sleep whole night properly so I’ve given her injection at night.
Shivavy- what and why u didn’t told me before?
Gauri- bhaiya it was really late so i didn’t feel good to disturb.
Bhavay- di I’m going to my room
Shivavy- u perpare her breakfast I’m going to her.
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“Out House”
Anika- sleeping
Shivavy- step in smile appear on his face to see her sleeping. Shivavy i think i should not disturb her she wouldn’t sleep whole night too. But wait she use to tease me with her wet hairs now it’s my turn.
Shivavy blows Anika face.
Anika- rub her face on pillow hmm
Shivavy- smile hides she looks so cute. He again blows Anika face
Anika-mmmhhh bhavay nahe karo
Shivavy- giggles
Anika- open her eyes. U? Why u came here ?
Shivavy- this whole RM is mine and i can go anywhere anytime got it.
“Kya janu sarye romance ki dhai kar de. U where looking so adorable and se*y?
What to do yaar u r really boring janu? ” i think I’ve to find some “Shalluuuuuu”
Anika- stares shivavy
Shivavy- smile what? I’ve said something wrong u say to me but u r so un-romantic janu.
Anika- stop calling me this.
Shivavy- what? Un-romantic
Anika- nahe us k baad
Shivavy- crawls to Anika. Kya nahe is ka matalab u r romantic? So let’s do some romance come….
Anika- give kick to him
Shivavy- aaaah!”januuuu”
Anika- haan yeh he main ap ki koi ja…
Shivavy- “JA…NU”
Anika- haan
Shivavy- aarye. “wow! U accept it that u r my janu now come give me huggy.
“Tora mere pass ao na”
Anika- ” Naheeeeee”
Shivavy- cover his ears. kya? naheeeeeee! Huggy nahe karni direct kissy karo ge mwah wali?
Anika- batmeez.
Shivavy- janu
Anika- nahe hoon
Shivavy- kabhi haan, kabhi nahe koi confuse hai to clear kar lo phely.
Yeh kya baat hui phely kehati ho k janu “nahe” ho ab keh rahe ho “haan”
Anika- zip her mouth turn her face to other side.
Shivavy- now speak up phely to bohat bolti thi ab kya huwa . U r getting affected?
Anika- nope i don’t care about u nor ur words have any affect on me. Happy
Shivavy- u r lying
Anika- i don’t have the habit to lie and don’t u have any work to do.
Shivavy- O! thankyou u reminder me I’ve some work I’ll be back at lunch time till then u can visit my room and relax there.
Anika- I’m fine where I’m right now. U go u might be getting late.
Shivavy- smile u look so cute when u show anger to me.
Gayu- Anika di ur breakfast.
Bhavay- Shivavy bhaiya what u r doing here? U have to meet someone?
Shivavy- yes I’m think what to wear that purple suit it’s suits me the best.
Anika- mutters self praising.
Shivavy- mainey sun liya.
Gayu- smile.
Shivavy- passes flying kiss to Anika. “Jealisika”
Omru- Shivavy bhaiya what’s next?
Shivavy- dev uncle……..
Rudy- dev uncle ?
Shivavy- time to make ur Anika bhabi jealous
Om- jealous aur Anika bhabi that’s not possible.
Shivavy- dekhtaye jao ab agaye agaye hota hai kya.
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Bhavay- hello! Yes sir
Commissioner- hello! ACP bhavay congrates government recognized ur work and today u will be given the bravery award
Bhavay- what? Sir me.
Commissioner- yes u now tell me. where u want the avenue?
Bhavay- sir i want this to be held in RM
Commissioner- that’s great so see u tonight at RM
Bhavay- yes! Sir jai Hindi
Commissioner- jai Hindi ACP
Bhavay- dadi , dad , Anika di, gauri di
Devi g- what happened why u r shouting?
Bhavay- dadi! No first I’m going to tell Anika di come with me.
Anika- walking in garden
Bhavay- running Anika di, Anika di
Anika- kya huwa? and run slowly
Bhavay- Anika di, dadi, gauri di today I’m being awarded “The Brave Police Officer” bhavay hug Anika tightly thankyou Anika di it’s all because of u.
Anika- no bhavay it’s only ur hard work I’ve not done anything for u people.
Devi g- smile ýes it’s all because of ur Anika di. Congrats ACP BSR.
Gauri- bhavay I’m really happy for u and did u inform dad about this. And where u r going to be awarded
Bhavay- opps! I forgotten and yes where’s our heaven RM is my avenue.
Devi g- gazes Anika wasiey dev hai kahai subha say us ki koi call nahe i. Let me call him and inform him about his doll success
Anika- yes he didn’t call. But when is the ceremony?
Bhavay- tonight
Gauri- and u r informing us now. How we are going to manage in such a short period? uff bhavay
Anika- gauri don’t worry
Omru- yes gauri / chullbul bhabi when obros are here then u rajputaniyon don’t need to worry about anything kyun Anika bhabi
Devi g- chalo , chalo sab kam per lag jao.
Om- where’s shivavy ?
Gayu- we have seen shivavy bhaiya he’s gone somewhere
Devi g- haan mainey bhi dekha usay bohat khush tha woh bohat set ho kar gaya hai. Anika did he inform u where’s going?
Anika- why he’s going to inform me?
Bhavay- Anika di there’s one big problem
Anika- what? Tell me
Bhavay- actually i want new dress
Gauri- lo’ shuru ho gaya is ka
Bhavay- dadi i want new dress bus woh bhi abhi.
Rudy- come let me take u for shopping.
Om- we have to do tonight preparation u come with me.
Bhavay- yes and i want to go for shopping with Anika di and gauri di.
Anika- bhavay take gauri with u.
Bhavay- makes puppy faces please na di.
Gauri- di come na it’s long time we have not spend time together.
Anika- ok fine let’s go dadi ap sath chaley ge
Devi g- no beta I’ve to give instructions to servants too. U go and enjoy but take gaurds with u.
Omru- have a good day rajputaniyon
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Shopping mall
Bhavay- Anika di see this it’s so nice na
Anika- yup it’s so pretty like our doll
Bhavay- di I’m saying that it will look more beautiful on u.
Gauri- yes di
Anika- i don’t need them. U came here for ur shopping or mine
Gauri- trio
Bhavay- please di. It’s long time u have not bought anything for urself
Anika- when u urself have decided that till i would take this u both are not going to leave me than. why u asked me?
Gayu- Anika di formality hahaaaaaa
Anika- naughty.
Gauri- bhavay that’s enough now. R u going to buy whole mall?
Bhavay- any doubt. gauri di?
Anika- Gayu let’s go now.
Bhavay- fine Anika di.
Shivavy- spying them. So rajputani are on shopping mode.
Anika- senses shivavy
Gayu- di from whom u r looking for?
Anika- no one.
Shivavy- “jhooti”
Gauri- come di
Shivavy- Hello dev uncle where r u?
Dev- I’m waiting outside.
Shivavy- I’m coming. And where’s she?
Dev- she’s inside
Shivavy- good
Aniriya- coming down
Shivavy- follow a girl strikes with her
Girl- bags fall down.
Shivavy- I’m really sorry let me help u.
Girl- it’s ok i can manage
Shivavy- smiling no, no it was my fault so let me help u
Girl- so nice of u.
Shivavy- that’s my pleasure to help such a pretty girl in town
Girl- u r flirting, right?
Gauri- bhavay see he’s Shivavy bhaiya na
Bhavay- Shivavy bhaiya in mall.
Gauri- yes and with a girl
Anika- eyes gets widen
Gayu- look Anika di Shivavy bhaiya is holding that girl shopping bags.
Anika- “meri taraf say usay godh may uthaye i don’t care about this.
Bhavay- whispers in gauri ear. Di who it can be?
Gauri- mujhe kya pata.
Anika pov- that’s why he’s was in hurry now i got it. why he wants to wear that purple suit ? To shop with that girl.
Shivavy- ur jealousy time started Anika.
Gayu- Anika di kya huwa?
Anika- kuch kaha.
Gayu- stares eachother?
Anika- if u both want to spend ur whole day u can I’m going back home
Gauri- smiling Anika di gusa aa raha hai na.
Anika- I’m not angry ok.
Bhavay- kyun nahe aye ga Shivavy bhaiya was smiling so widely and he call himself SSO but now look at him he’s looking like “coolie”
Anika- frown bhavay.
Gayu- Gape. Look Shivavy bhaiya is now opening car door too for her.
Anika- drive let’s go
Dev- thumbs up.
Shivavy- too reciprocates.
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“Rajput Mansion”
Devi g- how long u guys going to take?
Omru- dadi g don’t worry
Dadi- haan devi g
Rudy- dadi!
Jhanvi – aur mummy bhi
Om- mom, dadi. what a pleasant surprise?
Devi g- preeto u should have inform me i wouldn’t have send rajputani out for shopping.
Jhanvi- it’s ok maa g. Where’s Anika?
Omru- shopping
Dadi- that’s good Anika is gone out her mood will get change
( hahaa we will see)
Devi g- but it’s long time they have not came back
Dadi – aa jaye ge. But congrates bhavay deserve that
Jhanvi- yes mummy g my trio daughter-in- law are very brave
Dadi- specially Anika puttar
Devi g- let me call them. Anika shouldn’t stay outside for long time.
Bhavay- dadi g u don’t need to call see we r back with bags.
Gayu- greets dadi and jhanvi.
Dadi- puttar Anika kaha hai?
Devi g- she’s staying in out house.
Jhanvi- what?
Omru- mom, it’s Shivavy bhaiya plan to bring Anika bhabi tadi back. Like Anika bhabi did to bring old SSO back
Dadi- means history is going to be repeated
Bhavay – yes aur is ki shurwat bhi ho gaye. Kyun gauri di?
Omru- kya?
Guari- giggles. Bhavay let’s go
Om- kuch humaye bhi to batao.
Gauri- “jo dekhnay may maza hai woh bataney me nahe”
“Out House”
Anika- having flashback of shivavy with girl.
No what i have to do with that? Meri taraf say duniya ki sari larkiyon ko apni jaib may lay kar jaye mujhe kya.
I’m ASR who don’t care about him. Yes i’m ASR so. What he do’s I’m hell concern about that.
Gauri- Anika di……
Anika- what? Why u r so shocked?
Gauri- sign Anika to look down.
Anika- roll her eyes down.
Gauri- smile. Di u have spoiled all dresses under ur feet.
Gusa aa raha hai na? Mujh bhi aa raha hai Shivavy bhaiya ko esa nahe karna chaiye tha.
Anika- why I’ll be angry? I didn’t like these dresses so i myself spoil them that’s it.
Gauri- but I’ve not ask for any justification. From my side break all the mirrors of RM and splash water tank.
Anika- but I’m telling u because i don’t want u think something like that.
Gauri- but I’m not thinking like that…..
And this happens
Anika- Gauri nothing happens like that got it I’m ASR. Go from here call my maid’s
Gauri- Shivavy bhaiya……
Anika- naam bhi nahe lo
Gauri- bitting her nails di ur maid’s are fired
Anika- how did that?
Omru- SSO
Anika- u all go from here
Rudy- bhabi if u have some work we can do that for
Anika- no need just go from here. Gauri u too and i don’t need any thing.
Omru and Gauri- paka na
Anika- haan paka jao ab.
Omru and Gauri- wave bye Anika di/ bhabi
Anika- again start spoiling bags under her feet
Screen freezes on Anika feet
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Precape Anika to save pinky aunty life.
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Soon Anika’s jealous mode swtich gets on
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Thanks alot Nandini dear for ur suggestion and for ur wishes.
I’m really happy that u pinpoint my mistakes i feel to good.. keeping helping me dear. And i try to act upon ur advice??.
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21 Comments
It feels so good that if you advice someone, she doesn’t gets offended Instead tries to improve it. You are too good. Best wishes always. Love.
Hey nati! There’s one more thing which might help you. Like if you write someone’s thoughts or actions like anika-rolls her eyes down then u can write it like anika rolls her eyes down and it feels more suitable as well. Because many times it appears as a dialogue. Example. If anika says it to herself you can write it like A- “I must do something”. You caN write it like anika thinks that she should do something as it appears more as if you’re reading.a book. Don’t mind all this dear. Bestest wishes.
Thanku Nandini for ur help and advice I’ll definitely do that next time
Awesome dear love it
Nice
Thanku dr
Amazing ??what a rocking update it was , eagerly waiting for jealousy asr that’s gone be super existing plz post next part soon…….
Thankyou
toooo good….
Thanks sharmin
Awesome… interesting too…. Update the next part soon…
Thanks dr for ur comment
Superb update
Thanks alot dr for ur comment
Wow!!!!!
Jalakud ASR…. Loving this track soo much di…. Post ASAP…
Thanks u bunny for being my support and soon I’ll update the next one
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Sorry Lili i didn’t get u…. what u want me to plz come again.
Sorry Lili i didn’t get u…. what u want me to do? Plz come again if u don’t mind dr
It is nice one dear
Thanks u Nitika dr for reading my ff daily