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Here is the next episode……in few episodes may be 1 or 2 episodes you may come to know how ShivAahi’s confrontation happened….wts the reaction of Shivaay when he saw Maahi with Kaal…..nd all…
Nd one more important thing ….after ShivAahi’s confrontation the upcoming episodes hv so much fun to read…..so don’t stop here ….stay connect to read…..
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Episode: 51
When Annika informed the others…they all came inside nd stood around the bed….Kaal slowly opened her eyes….she saw Shivika ,Omri nd Rumya….seeing them she smiled weakly…
Shiv: Kaal ….he called softly….
Anni: how r you …….she enquired….
OmRu: yaar …..Di…
With a smile she slowly lifted her hand nd showed thums up sign….
Seeing it Shivaay said in tears with a smile “ You Devil”…..she smiled…they all smiled wiping their tears ….Just then rang Shivaay’s phone…he saw the name nd said..”Dadi”…
Shiv: Dadi…
Dadi: Billu…subhe subeh tum sab kaha chalegayi….
Shiv: Dadi…already on the way…don’t worry….okay said he disconnected the call nd looked at Om…
Om: I will go ….said he went out with Gauri…..
Dr. came nd after checking her….he said she is out of danger now…Kaal looked at Shivika ….they understood …Shivaay told Dr. to shift Kaal from ICU to room…..nd Shivaay also told Dr. if the elders would ask him say it as an accident without noticing Kaal.….Dr.KUlkarni nodded nd left to make preparations for shifting her….Kaal sighed Dr.Kul as shift her to spl floor…nd he nodded without noticing anybody…
Annika told others specially Rudra as just say its an accident to the elders nd Dadi without hearing Kaal as Shivaay didn’t want that Kaal come to know as he know the truth.……he nodded…after nearly 2 hours….Dadi nd Senior Oborois nd Prinku entered into the spl room ……
Dadi came near her nd called “Gudiyaa”…her eyes filled with tears……Kaal opened her eyes hearing Dadi’s voice….she saw all the family members….her eyes filled with tears….Jahnavi noticed it nd she came near her nd wiped her tears…..
Jah: Kaal…ro math….ham sab hai na….
She smiled…..
Tej: kaise huva yeh accident….
For his question Kaal looked at Tej with surprise thinking as “accident ….which accident”…
Shiv: wo breaks failed bade papa……
Hearing his answer she got more surprised….
Dadi: wo Ali kaha hai…..
Om: kyon Dadi….
Dadi: wahi inki security haina….tho….
Om: Dadi…there is no fault of Ali….yeh Devil khud gaadi leke chaligayi bina Ali ko bathake…..
Dadi: Gudiyaa….yeh sach hai…..
Kaal smiled looking with confusion at Om…..she didn’t understand wts going on nd about which accident they r talking…..really Shivaay didn’t know the reason or Shivaay intentionally misleading her…..
Dadi: don’t do it in future…..Billu….order Ali don’t give the keys to her….she ordered Shiv….
Shiv nodded but Rudy is Rudy….
Rudy: iss Devil order karegitho koun manna karega…..
All laughed for his words…..but still Kaal didn’t understood who said that she was injured bcz of accident…..is it Shivaay’s plan to know the truth from her or he really didn’t know…..
They all spent few minutes nd Tejvi told the Obros nd Obahus to take care of Kaal nd left….Prinku also left with the others as per Kaal’s wish….after they left …she looked at the boys nd girls…..
Kaal: wt will you do by staying here….go …go nd do your works…..she said thinking about Maahi…..she don’t know why her heart strongly want to see Maahi at that moment…if they all stay here its not possible to Maahi to come there…..but she forgot the capacity of Maahi…..nd what he did….
Shiv: why should we…if we leave….ek aur baar ghaadi leke ghumoongi kya…..he asked her…..
Looking at Shivaay with a smile…..
Kaal: iss haathonse drive karneko lagbug 15 din lagegina….she asked while showing her hand…..
They all surprisedly looked her….
Gauri: Di …aaptho ajeeb chiraiyya hai….
Shiv: you Devil…..kabhi suderaga nahi tu…..
Kaal: why should I change myself?…..
Om: why didn’t you want to change yaar……
Kaal: yaar…..this Billu changed for his Billi…
Shiv: you Devil….
She smiled seeing his expressions…..she continued….
“You changed for Gauri….Rudy is changing for Saumya….you all are changed for your soulmates….meri zindagimein aisa koi hai nahi tho there is no question of changing myself….right…
Anni: Kaal….mujeh poora yakin hai….ek din tumhari zindagimein bhi ek aisa insaan aayega…tab sirf tum nahi ….tumhara poora zindagi aur duniyabhi badal jaayegi…..
Kaal: ( in mind) aayega nahi Annika….aagaya….but I am the person not allowing him to come into my life…..
Gau: Di….koi hai…..she asked Kaal seeing her in thoughts….
Kaal: haan….nahi tho….waise from when did you start saying future Annika….
Anni: I don’t know about future….but I am sensing it strongly….
They all smiled….looking at Shivika….
Kaal with a smile in her mind……Shivaay you got a perfect life partner….your soulmate…..bilkul tumhaara jaise hai Annika….stay happy forever my friend…..
They all stayed at the Hospital with Kaal throughout the day….at night …Shivay decided to stay along with Annika in the hospital nd other will leave nd come next day…Omri nd Rumya left saying bye to Kaal….as per Kaal’s instructions Rosy left nd Ali stayed there…..
Kaal slept early after completing dinner bcz of medication….Shivika slept in the sofa…..
In the early morning….Kaal woke up feeling a little pain nd want to call Annika….She looked Shivika to call Annika but she immediately closed her eyes nd shut her mouth turned aside and felt more pain in her shoulder while turning suddenly forgetting the injury on the left……..
Kaal: (in mind) yaar……I closed my eyes nd shutted my mouth but how can I close my ears yaar…..
She said it bcz when Annika leaned on Shivaay while sleeping in the sofa….Shivaay woke up nd saw her ….seeing her the naughtiness woke up in him nd he started flirting her….for his acts she woke up with a jerk nd looked at Kaal with a little fear nd warned Shivay….but when he started romantic talk ..for his words nd his naughty acts she got nervous nd started trying her best to stop him….at that moment Kaal woke up with pain …when she want to call Annika she heard nd saw Shivaay’s romantic avatar…..she immediately turned aside forgetting the injury nd got more pain than before….
She didn’t understand how to call Annika…she looked at the side table on which kept a glass with water….she very difficulty lifted her right hand baring the pain in left nd tried to shake the table …after few attempts she was succeeded….glass fell on the floor making a sound nd broke….for its sound Shivika came to sense looked at Kaal….
Annika rushed to Kaal…carefully turned her nd rested her properly asking…..
Anni: kya huva Kaal….are u alright?…
Kaal: aaahhh…..its paining Annika….said showing the injury…
Annika looked at the shoulder….
Anni: o my God…its bleeding….Shivaay….she shouted
But before Shivaay call Katherine…Katherine came inside in hurry nd checked……
Katherine: bcz of the movement its started bleeding nd pain also…..said she removed the bandage nd cleaned the wound….again bandaged nd prepared an injection nd gave….
Within that time Kaal suffered with much pain but she tried to suppress her pain inside….in such state also her eyes searched for Maahi as her heart sensed him around ….but she didn’t find him….
Maahi felt her pain….yes they don’t know Maahi also stayed at the hospital throughout the night…when Kaal felt pain….he felt something inside him….he came there to check her….seeing Kaal nd hearing Annika’s words he informed Katherine before Shivaay…
Kaal before fell into sleep….
Kaal: (in mind) where r u Maahi ….i don’t know why should I want to see you …my heart sensing you but I didn’t find….how r you Dost nd where r u….
Maahi who stood at the second door in darkness…..
(in mind) “to save me you got ready to bare the pain….you may hide it from others…but not from me….you did it for me…wt can I do for you tell me Gudiyaa”….after few seconds he decided wt to do for her…looking at her with a smile he left from there….
OmRi came with needed stuff…..
That day Commissioner visited Kaal along with Ranveer…..seeing Ranveer….ShiOm got furious….but bcz of the Commissioner they didn’t say anything ….but Kaal understood that why Ranveer came with the Commissioner….
Commissioner enquired about her condition nd the incident …..Shivaay explained him…without noticing anybody she sighed Ranveer to leave from there as early as possible as she didn’t want the police interference in this ….he understood nd remembering Commissioner about the meeting with IG …..he left with him…
After few minutes leaving Gauri…..Shivika nd Om left…..Gauri sat beside Kaal nd started talking…Kaal enquired about Maa and asked her about her childhood….Gauri shared all the things with her nd how she was separated from her sister nd so on….she happily spent with Kaal…..
By evening when Om entered in the room he found Gauri alone….he went near her nd hugged from back when she is cutting the apple for Kaal….
Gau: Omkaaraji….aap….chodiyena ……koi dekhega….
Looking around…
Om: nobody is here….
Gau: Di aayegi….
Om: where is she…
Gau: wo wash room mein…
Om: teek hai no problem…you know today I am so happy….he said with full excitement…..
Gau: kyon…
Om: 2 of my paintings selected for a competition….i am so excited for it ….said while hugging her tightly…
Gau: sach mein….yeh tho khushiki baath hai….happily said while trying to comeout from his grip….
Om tightened his hug saying” you r the reason for this” nd kissed her….when he tried to kiss her one more time….suddenly they heard a knock on the door…leaving her they both looked at the entrance but they didn’t find anybody….
Om: I will check…..said when he moved towards the entrance they both again heard the door knock…
Gau: ajeeb hai …yaha tho koi nahi …aur yeh awaaz….
Kaal: door knock waha nahi ….yaha…shall I come out guys…..she asked their permission with a naughty voice from inside the wash room….
Omri exchanged looks nd Gauri slightly blushed…
Om: arrey yaar ..comeout….why r u asking our permission….
Kaal: issliye poocha ki aapki romantic movie khatam hui ya nahi….she said while comingout from the wash room with a naughty smile….
Gauri went near her nd helped her to reach the bed…
Gau: aisa kuch nahi hai Di….Omkarajine bahut khush hai….
Kaal: really baath kya hai Om….still a naughty smile dancing on her lips…..
Om: wo actually 2 of my paintings selected for the National Competition….
Kaal : wow congrats nd all the best ….you will definetly win the prize….she wished him…
To put an end to her teasing….
Om: Shivaay nd Bhabhi didn’t came??….
Hearing it Kaal tried to see behind the bed nd under the bed….
OmRi didn’t understand ….
Om: wt are u doing yaar….
Kaal: nothing I am just searching for them…mere jaise wo bhi khahi chupi hogi…..she said with the same naughtiness….
Gauri: lo wo aagaya….said seeing Shivika who just entered in the room….
Shiv: r u waiting for us…..he asked….
Kaal: haan Shivaay …to continue their movie….
Anni: movie…kaise movie…naam kya hai….bahuth din hui movie dekhkar…..
Om: Kaal….he called with little anger….
Kaal: yes Mr.Omkaara…mein hu Kaal….wt can I do for u….she asked with the same smile….
Om looked her with anger….Gauri felt uneasy….Annika didn’t understand the situation…but Shivaay understood seeing her smile that Kaal teasing Om for something that happened few minutes back….
Shiv: you Devil…stop it yaar…..he said in order to rescue his brother from that awkwardness….
Kaal: teek hai baba….sshhh gupchup….said while keeping finger on her lips….
“waise tum donom bhai mujeh kyon phasarahi hai yaar”……she asked still keeping the finger on her lips…..
ShivOm looked her with anger….she smiled and nodded her head like an innocent child as “ okay no more teasing”….
They both smiled seeing her….
The next day Shivika left early as Shivaay hv an important meeting…..Shivaay said “I will send Rudra nd Saumya here”…but Kaal denied nd said “ don’t worry …she is fine now nd Rosy nd Ali are here so after completing all the works you will come..okay” …They both accepted nd left from there…
After few minutes…she got down from the bed nd slowly went near the window….stood at the window she focused outside….Rosy came inside …seeing Kaal at the window…she went near her….
Rosy: good morning Maam….
Hearing her wish ….without turning….
Kaal: Rosy…I need a cup of tea…plz….
Rosy: wt Maam….she asked with surprise….
Kaal: wt you heard is right…go nd bring a cup of tea….
Rosy: Maam…tea!!?? Obhi inti subeh…you didn’t drink normal one….wt you want to drink ..its impossible to get it here…how can I arrange maam??
Kaal: Rosy..plz…I need it badly…go nd try…goo…said she leaned on the window wall…..
Rosy cameout with a dull face….she didn’t understand how to get the tea…she came nd sat beside Ali….Ali noticed her dullness…..
Ali: wt happened Rosy….you are looking very dull…..
Rosy: Maam asked to bring tea….
Ali: what!!??
Rosy: haan she asked for tea…its not possible to get it here bcz it’s a special one….nobody can prepare it except Maahi Sir….
Ali: do one thing ….call Mery nd ask her to prepare it…..
Rosy looked at Ali with a little anger…
Rosy: idea mere paasbhi hai…..but it will take one hour….
Ali: haan …u r right….ek kaam karthe…..
Rosy: wt….
Ali: call Mery nd take the details about its preparation …give it to hospital’s canteen chef….he will prepare it….
Rosy smiled for his idea nd said…” idea okay but from where should we get those ingredients that will use in its making at this time….
Ali: you r right…its just crossed 6 O’clock….
They both sat with dull faces thinking as how to get tea nd fulfill their Maam’s wish….just few minutes later….
“Rosy” …for the call they both lifted their heads nd looked the person who called her….seeing Maahi they both got surprised nd stood….
Rosy: Sir aap….
Ali didn’t understand that “how did Maahi Sir know that Maam is alone right now”…
Maahi: wt happened…tum donom aise kyon baiti….
Rosy: wo Maam want tea….but here we didn’t get it….
Maahi smiled….
Maahi: take this nd give her …said he showed the flask which he brought with him…..
Rosy suprisdedly looked at it shouting “Sirrr”
Maahi nodded with a smile nd gave her the flask….”thank you Sir…thank you very much” saying excitedly she took the flask nd went indie the room….Maahi smiled….
Ali: (with lots of confusion)…Sir..shall I ask one question?…..
Maahi looked at him nd said….”how did I know that she need tea right now…am I right”….
Ali nodded in yes with a little opened mouth…
Maahi: tum sab Kaal ko jaantha hai….lekin mein unko “Samajthahu”….saying with a smile he moved to the room….
Meanwhile….Rosy went inside nd pouring tea in the cup she went near Kaal….before Rosy call her the aroma of the tea surrounded Kaal…smelling it she immediately turned back thinking as Maahi came…she saw Rosy but her focus turned towards the entrance…
Kaal: (in mind) I know u r here…come infront of me….why I am feeling like this….i don’t know
Rosy: Maam …tea……
But she didn’t respond for her call nd still her focus laid at the entrance….
Rosy: Maam…r u waiting for someone….she asked observing her…..
Kaal: no …no….not like that…..said she took the tea nd inhaling the smell she closed her eyes to enjoy it….after completing the sips …holding the empty cup …..still with closed eyes…..
“Rosy….how is Maahi…..is he alright…..why didn’t he come infront of me….i know….i know why he didn’t come but kuch tho raasta nikal saktha haina wo….” She questioned….
Rosy: Maam….really u want to see Sir….
Kaal: (still with the closed eyes) patha nahi……dil chahithi dekhneko….lekin dimaag sochithi rokneko…samajamein nahi aathi kiski baath sunnu ya maanu….mein jaanthihu wo yahi hai….
Rosy: how did you know Maam Sir yahi hai…but I didn’t find him….she asked…..
Kaal: I know….i can sense……where is he …..tell me Rosy ….where is he…nd how is he?….she asked but she didn’t get answer….
Kaal: arrey answer me Rosy….why did you become silent….asking she opened her eyes nd got shocked seeing Maahi who stood with a smile infront of her instead of Rosy…..she didn’t understand what she is seeing ….she immediately closed her eyes thought bcz of over tinking about Maahi she felt Rosy as Maahi…..so after few seconds composing herself she slowly opened one eye nd saw Maahi who still stood with a smirk….she stood with widened eyes nd little opened mouth…..but her deep black eyes are shining with new colors…..
Hai guys how is it……thank you very much for your awesome support nd plz do comment…I am eagerly waiting for it…..thank you very much nd stay tuned to know how will ShivAahi’s confrontation take place in coming episodes…..thank you nd take care…bye for now nd will meet you all in next episode soon….
12 Comments
nice story writing
Hai Srikar.. Thanks alot
nice story writing and like to all the episodes
Thanks for your appreciation dear
nice story & i like all episodes
Thank you dear that u liked my ff
wow.. rikara ki romance??….and kaal ki naughtiness ? ?..but my fav.. is mahika scene ????..will be waiting for the next..pls post ASAP..till then take care and keep smiling??
Thank you very much for you lovely comments dear?
It is nice and amazing dear
Thank you Nikita_jai29
RiKara’s naughtiness… and Maahi’s teasing….!!! Bechari Kaal… Jaaye toh jaaye kahan??!!!
Yet another fun filled, beautifully described episode!! Trust me… I am actually able to visualise this actors as I read your narrative!!! Such vivid descriptions!!! Super se Upar!!!
It’s a wonderful experience!! And am waiting for the next episode!!!
Wow Firooza i am very happy for ur review… Thanks alot?