Marring the seclusion
Looking through the garden she felt it for one last time as in to capture every part of it in her eyes for the rest of her life, and flashbacks of that accident danced in her eyes. She was again starting to feel helpless enough to leave this idea of departure but she knew she had to do it for the sake of both of them.
perhaps she was late because suddenly he came in front of her, “so you have decided you won’t stop….hun? And taking her bag in his hand and brushing his hand to hers said softly. “Please stop being a 5 years old girl and come inside.”and she found her fingers already interwined through his fingers.
she tried running away but in no time was caged by him ,and tears started pulling in her brown eyes, “please, let me go. Why you are stopping me when we don’t even live as a couple .”
“Because I want to give us a chance and you are not agreeing to that.”
Before we say a good bye to breaking the silence ,I want to give you guys this second one coming just as we finish the former.
Tell me your views about this, I’ll be waiting for your response. With love Morusya.
p.s. – also the cover it holds is imaginary one and maybe after your response we can decide together who we want as the couple.
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Hey Morusya…
Sorry for late comment…just saw it now…
And it was quite interesting…Liked it.
Will be waiting for u to continue this one…If it becomes a Krisyysm ff…it’ll be fantastic for us Kriyyam fans…and if u hv chosen some other couple for the story…then also it’ll be awesome…catching storyline.
hey ,why saying sorry, actually you can see you are the first one to discover it in my readers ,i mean you commented first. i guess many haven’t seen it so i was going to attach it with this chapter but forgot ,will attach the link and an author note in the next chapter .
and no no i haven’t thought anyone as a couple so i put it in general fiction list , i sincerely wanted you guys to decide. yeah i too want to make it a Kriyyam fan fiction ,just wanted to know if there were any more option 🙂
also we will start it as we finish Breaking the silence which i myself don’t know when is going to end, i feel too attached that i don’t want it to end, i hope i am not dragging it . 🙂
Amazing
thank you dear.
It’s interesting story.
U can go for PriVeer -Priyanka and Ranveer from ishqbaaz,Kriyaam,AvNeil,SwaSan or MeghNal. In my views this story can go with this couples.
oh thank you so much dear for taking out the time for suggesting me, and priveer sounds intresting 🙂 also it will be a two couple story so let me think about this one.
Yeah think well !! Choice is yours !!
Wow so nice and awesome and wonderful and amazing I loved ur idea so much. After completing that ff u write this ff I loved it so much. Keep writing Kriyam ff. We can’t forget them