Hello everyone! Here and os for our little sister’s birthday Iqu written by yashu and me. We wish our sister to have a blockbuster year also happy and healthy life. Go ahead and read the os and bless our Iqu too….. Happy Reading
It was early morning time. A boy of about 22 years just came out from the bathroom singing Shri Ram’s Aarti.
He was combining his hairs standing in front of the mirror just then he saw someone’s reflection in the mirror?? and turned immediately.
“Ragini ji…What are you doing in my room at this time?? Ram Ram Ram” he said.?
A beautiful girl of about his age was standing in front of him. She was dressed in a white T-shirt black jacket and black Capri.
That boy widened his eyes in shock and muttered,”How you came here??”?
“By pipe Laksh..” Ragini winked..?
Laksh turned and said,”Ragini ji does it suit a girl to do such things ?”?
Ragini came and stood in front of him and said crossing her hands near her chest and said,”She has to do when the boy doesn’t do these all things.”? She narrowed her eyes and continued,”Laksh I don’t know what’s problem with you? I fall in love with you first, I followed you everywhere, I proposed you..”
Laksh sat on the bed and started recalling how they met and what all things she did.
Flashback
“Oh god mumma! Why r u always pushing me to go to temple? God will accept our prayer from wherever and whenever we pray him.” Ragini muttered to her mom irritatingly ? and then she looked up in sky and said,”hey naa bagwan ji?!”?
“Yes yes, my grandma. Now go inside and pray him to give you some sense,? I will join you after buying the flowers. Go” said her mom trying to control her laugh. Ragini stamped her foot and turns abruptly.?
But she got bumped with the wall.? She hissed in pain while rubbing her forehead. She felt some flowers showering on her and heard hissing sound from other side too. She opened her eyes to see a man looking at her disapprovingly and bent down to pick up his things.
‘Oh I bumped on a man, nah! A handsome man!! hehehe?. But what was this handsome man doing at temple?’ thought Ragini.?
That man obviously Laksh?, looked Ragini’s mobile on the ground and then at her. But she was standing like a statue looking at him like a teddy bear?. He sighed and took her mobile along with his things and gave it to her and mumbled “Sorry madam ji!” and went from there.?
Ragini looked at her mobile then at his disappearing figure who was walking between the crowd without bumping on anyone especially ladies while muttering ‘Ram Ram Ram’. She slowly whispered ‘Aww..he is so cute’? with a cute smile. Suddenly her mother hit her head saying “Stop daydreaming and go inside” for which Ragini just rolled her eyes? and went inside. Her mother sighed “Ram ji! Take care of this brainless girl”?
Next day Ragini was jogging having earphones in her ears.? She was humming that song and got lost in the melody of that song that she even forgot she should walk carefully as she was on street.? As usual she got bumped with someone but this time she had fallen down. ?
“Ouch! Don’t you have eyes idiot?”? Ragini yelled and looked at the idiot. Once again it was Laksh.? He narrowed his eyes and said “Devi ji I think you should check your eyes first.”he forwarded his hand for her help. She too gave in with an amused face.? He pulled her strongly and so she falls into his arms. She shyly looked into his eyes who was looking at her in shock. She whispered “I love you”?? and ran away from him, while he looked at her in horror.?
Flashback ended?
“Ragini ji.. please go from here..” Laksh said.?
“Laksh why don’t you understand I love you… Even our families had agreed what’s the problem then?”?
“Ragini ji I don’t believe in this love now devi ji leave me plzz..” Laksh said.?
She frowned him and said,”One day you yourself will pray God to make me yours..I bet.. you will do more efforts than I did to Impress me.”Ragini gave him two fingers salute and came down from the pipe line.??
Laksh closed his eyes and joined his eyes and said,”Ram ji please give this girl some brain. Siyavar Ramachandra ji ki jai Pavan Sut Hanuman ki Jai”? He opened his eyes and started doing his Pooja arrangements.
The next day..
Ragini was sitting on a bench in the public. She closed her eyes and started singing a song.? The sugar-coated words of hers fell in someone’s ears.
That person came and stood behind Ragini’s bench.?
She was just engrossed in her singing. That person then said,”Such a melodious voice you have aww…”? Ragini stopped singing as she found the voice familiar. She turned immediately to check whether that person is the same about whom she is thinking.? Seeing that person Ragini uttered,”You…”? Ragini stood up on her place and that person looked her and got lost in her eyes. While looking in her eyes he said, “Woww… you are more beautiful than your voice is.”?
Ragini blushed? and looked down but then she realised what he said she looked up in shock. ?
“Are you in sense??? What happened to you suddenly? ” She whispered in shock.??
“Yes beautiful seeing you I lost all my sense and yeah I’m not fine I got lovestruck. ” He said with a mischievous smile.?? Ragini looked him without blinking.
“Will u like to honor me by accepting me your boyfriend Ms. Angel??” He said with a million dollar smile.???
Ragini coughed hearing him and said,”What…??” ??
“Yes.. you heard right… please make me your boyfriend.” He said.?
“Oo..changed so much..now see my nakre too..” She thought and smirked.
“Umm..I am not interested.”? Saying this she started going but stopped after taking few steps when he hold her hand and pulled her towards him.
“Where you were going ?? First answer me whether u will accept me or not??” He said.
“If I say that I won’t..”? She said but before he could reply her, his phone rang. He picked the call and said,”Hello..oh ya..I am just coming..ok..” He cut the call and then turned to Ragini and gave her a smile and said,”Ok beautiful now I have to go. I don’t know how I will manage to live without u till tomorrow. Will you come to save your lover tomorrow here…?? “???
Ragini blushed and her cheeks became crimson red. She bit her lower lip and nodded positively.??
He smirked and went from there.
“Laksh…I seriously love you??… and now you too love me..awwww… You love me but you were doing your Dramebaazi from starting na.. you are so cute..?” She smiled widely hugging herself.
In night Ragini went to a pub.? No it’s not like she is spoilt girl. She went there for her friend’s birthday party only and that too when her friend insisted so much. She was sitting in a corner having a cold drink glass in her hand. She was sipping it while looking the people dancing there. Just then her eyes fall on someone who was surrounded by girls.? He was dancing with them and seeing him the cold drink glass slipped down from Ragini’s hand.? She got shocked and her blood started boiling up in anger.?? She stood up from that chair and gritting her teeth she muttered,”Now leaving his Bhajan Kirtan he started coming in pubs too…!!?”
She went from there without being noticed by anyone. She was walking on a road now.
“You didn’t do right Laksh… You never looked me properly but today you were dancing with those girls..I know I am little crazy type girl..but I also get hurt.” She mumbled and her eyes brimmed up with tears.??
Next day she was sitting, Just then she saw someone approaching towards her.
“I don’t want to talk to you.. just go away from here…” Ragini bellowed.?
“But what I did..??”He asked.
“What you did..?? Who was dancing in that pub with those flirtatious girls.” She said with disgust.?
“Laksh..” He said.
She narrowed her eyes and said,”See how proudly you are saying..” ?
“But it was Laksh..” He replied.?
“Oh! So who are you..??” She asked.?
“Satya.” He said and smiled.?
“Satya..” Ragini uttered in shock.?
“My name becomes more special when you say it in your honey like sweet voice.” He said while smiling mischievously. ??
“What?? It means you are suffering from multiple personalities?!!” Ragini asked in horror. ???
Satya laughed loud and said “God had given you beauty but missed to give you brain.” He continued to laugh?
“Don’t laugh at me you pig. you are confusing me more” Ragini said and pouted.?
“He is my twin brother cutie.” He said looking at her pout.?
“You both are twins!! How come I don’t know about it before?” Ragini asked to herself.?
“So beautiful what is the answer for my proposal??” Satya asked winking at her.?
It’s a next shock to Ragini. “So you only proposed me, not him?” ???
“Of course its me ‘the good boy’? and not that ‘player?'” Satya proudly said.
An another shock to poor Ragini??? “Player!?”
“Yeah! He acts like a very traditional and cultured boy at dawn and acts like a player at dark. Don’t you know it baby doll?” Satya asked innocently? Ragini slowly muttered “But I love him!”??
“Ouch!” Satya screamed holding his chest.? Ragini looked at him concerned and asked “What happened?” “It hurts!” He said patting his left chest with a hurt look?. “It’s ok heartie let’s see another beauty”? He whispered to his heart. Ragini glared at him and playfully hit his arms saying “jerk!”? Satya smirked and said “The handsome jerk!”? Ragini couldn’t help but laugh at him, seeing her angelic laugh he too laughed with her.??
After some time, Satya returns to his house while whistling and twirling keys around his finger? and was about to enter his room but someone blocked his way?. He looked up and saw his twin bro standing before him with a stern face, arms crossed on his chest. With his look, Satya could say that he was going to ask something about his activities. So he had a charming smile and greeted him??
“Good evening twinie!” for which he got a death glare.
“I am not here to greet you Satya. What are you doing with Ragini ji?” Laksh asked with stern voice.?
“Oh you mean angel? I was just…”
But Laksh interrupted “Just what Satya??”
Satya smirked and said “It’s none of your business bro. Now move away!”?
“You should not do your naughty things to Ragini ji. She is so innocent and pure hearted girl. Don’t do silly things and break her heart. I am warning you Satya.” Laksh said seriously.??
“Offoo! Why are you suddenly advising me about heart breaking?” Satya asked innocently.? “Oh wait! She is the one who is in love with you naa bro? Oh ok! I understood!! I won’t mess with her” Satya said mischievously with knowing look.?? Laksh bewildered and asked “What do you mean by ‘I understood’?”?
“Arey! You are loving her and trying to protect her from this good boy. Right naa player?” Satya winked at him.???
“What? Love? No no no no! Ram Ram Ram Ram! I don’t love her. It’s just I am warning you as she is so innocent for you. Don’t mess with her or it won’t be good for you.” but Satya gave him a smirk and said,”I don’t care..? and wase bhi jahan khatra nhi wahan Satya nhi. (Where there is no danger there won’t be Satya.)” ??
Laksh glared him and tried to gulp his anger?. He turned and started going from there but Satya dialed Ragini’s number “Hello beautiful!” He chirped loudly?. Laksh stopped on his foot and listened to his conversation.? “Tomorrow let’s meet at sunshine theme park and have fun for the whole day” Satya said smirking? and went inside his room leaving Laksh to burn in anger? or say jealous.?
Next day, Ragini was tapping her foot from one ride to another.? She made him too ride with her. They both were roaming without even releasing their hands.? Ragini was all the time saying something stupidly and blabbering about her craziness?. He was listening to everything with an admiring face and a small smile.??
It becomes evening they both were tired and sitting close to each other quietly on a bench. “He didn’t even speak..nah…flirt with me from morning! It’s weird!”? thought Ragini. She was about to ask that and tapped his shoulder but her eyes falls on cotton candy shop?. “Yes Ragi..” He was about to say but Ragini cut him? by saying “I want that!! I want that!! Go and get it for me! GOO!” He looked at the cotton candy shop and went to get it.?
Two men were there..they were seeing Ragini with lust filled eyes.? They started coming towards her. “Hey..she is the best singer Miss Ragini Gaddodia right??” One of them said.
“Yaa..omg..Ragini..you here..it’s our pleasure to meet you.. sweetheart sing a song for us too..” the other one said and hold Ragini’s hand.
“Leave my hand” Ragini shouted and somehow managed to free her hand. Those men look each other with a smirk and coming towards her said, “Please..sing oh come on… Please..” They were coming towards her but Ragini was moving backwards?. But then her back hit with someone and she got shocked. She turned and saw him with cotton candies.? He hide her behind him giving her cotton candies and said “Now enjoy the show”??
He turned towards them and said “She will sing for you.” Ragini who was hiding behind him got shocked by his statement. she looked towards him and he also turned towards her and gave her a smile.? Then turning towards those men he said,”Ya..she will sing..but there is a problem..she can’t sing without music..Especially of piano’s..”?
“Oyee hero…stop your nonsense..” One of them said and our hero hit his mouth with a strong punch..? “Hey…how you punched him..” the other one asked. He looked towards him and smirked “like this only….?” saying he punched him too strongly. Both men fall on the road and their teeth started shaking… because of getting so strong punches.??
“All right..now your teeth became piano..now she will sing…” He said and sat near them..
“How were my punches..????” He asked. Those men joined their shaking hands hearing his statement.??? “I don’t know about Ragini ji but you must be singing in your heart…”Lage 440 volt chune se tere” He said while standing up. ?They both ran away from there for their mere life.?
He came near Ragini who was laughing. He asked her,”Are you fine.” ?
Ragini hugged him and said,”I am fine Satya.” ?
He started coughing and said,”What you said..??”?
Ragini made her face like giving expression’What?’ she said,”I said I am fine Satya..”?
“I am not Satya Ragini ji..I am Laksh.”He said.?
Ragini hit his shoulder,”Nah..I know you are Satya. Laksh can’t do this.”? “What..?? What do you mean Ragini ji.??” Laksh said in shock.?
“Means….you are really Laksh?” Ragini asked bewildered?.
“Haan!” Laksh said in obvious tone.? Ragini looked at him with wide eyes and remembered the whole day with him. She smiled widely and hugged him tightly saying “Love you so much Laksh!”?? She broke the hug before even Laksh hug back and kissed his cheeks loudly ‘Ummaaahhhh’??. She ran away from there blushing, leaving a stupid smile on Laksh’s face! “I love her”?? He whispered to himself.
From nowhere Satya jumped on his back shouting “Congratulations twinie!!”? Laksh was surprised with this and Satya said,”Finally my stupid brother fall in love..yahoo I succeeded..!!!” ???
Laksh was looking him in confusion he asked,”What do you mean you succeeded??”?
“I am your twin bro..but I think we are more connected.. you didn’t got to know that you are in love with her but I got to know that you love her..when I reached home from U.S. mom and Ragini’s mom were talking about you both that how you became total devotee and don’t even care for Ragini. But I decided that time only that I will make you fall for her. And now see the results..” Satya winked?
Now Laksh hugged him and said “Thanks twinie…but now I need to confess my love too.. I don’t know how to?….so….will you do this on my behalf?…please please my bro…for this twinie…please…??”
Satya glared at him and then he saw Laksh with mischievous eyes saying “Ok I will propose her and marry her and have my own kids. And you chant our marriage’s hymns Pandit ji.. What say?!” He asked with a smirk.??? Laksh shoot him dangerous glares?? and said “Fine devil?! I will propose her myself and make her mine! Only mine?! We both will have our own kids?.” He showed his tongue to him? and ran from there. Satya couldn’t help but laugh at his twin.???
Now, it’s shown Laksh walking behind Ragini saying “Ragini! Ragini! Ragini! Please listen to me??. Ragini!” Ragini who was showing her back to Laksh now turned and looked at him with an attitude said “First you annoyed me by saying RAM RAM RAM! Now you are annoying me saying RAGINI RAGINI RAGINI! Just go away from me.”? She again turned and smiled widely and walked with attitude leaving Laksh to stand pout.?? Satya hit his head and said “Now use plan B idiot?!” Laksh shook his head and said “She is very angry on me, she won’t listen to me.”? Satya glared at him and said “Fine! I will make beautiful mine, bye!”?? Laksh’s eyes widens in shock whereas Satya shouts “Ragini!”? Laksh immediately closed his mouth and pushed him behind the tree? before Ragini sees Satya. Now Laksh said “Ragini!” ??with all his love by which Ragini turned towards him and Laksh started to sing?.
Sapno mein aayi ke jaayi ke ori kuriya
Hamari churayi le neendiya
(Laksh sat on a bench and closed his eyes?? and Ragini came in front of his eyes. She bid him bye with a smile and started going and Laksh opened his eyes immediately)??
Sapno mein aayi ke jaayi ke ori kuriya
Hamari churayi le neendiya
Humpe girayi ke haire, tu bhijuriya
Humse churayi le humka
Baharon mein tu hai, nazaron mein tu hai
(Here Ragini was looking him with confusion? and Laksh stood up from the bench and came to her with a rose.? Ragini took it and hit Laksh with it on his head? and threw that rose. She went from there but Laksh started looking her face in each person?)
Dekhoon jidar main, wahan tu tu dikhayi de
Prem ki naiyya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiyaa ko paar tu lagayi de
Prem ki naiyya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiyaa ko paar tu lagayi de
Lagayi de.. Lagayi de..
(Laksh came to Ram ji’s temple and started doing acting like to do prayer in front of him?. Then a pandit came and said,”Laksh when you will marry?” ?At that moment Ragini entered in the temple with her mom and Laksh came to her and sung,
“Haan katt te katt te katt na jaaye
Bina hi pyaar ko paaye
Dekho meri saari hi umar, karoon main kya
Kahin to hoga koi upaaye, ke tu meri ho jaaye
Chahe mujhko tu bhi umar bhar, karoon main kya”
Ragini pushed him while smiling? and Laksh fell down, he stood up and sung
“Kya mantar padhu main
Kya tantar karoon main
Aankhon ki chahat tujhe bhi dikhayi de”
(He then noticed that Ragini is going he looked towards God’s idol and sung,?)
Prem ki naiyya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiyaa ko paar tu lagayi de
Prem ki naiyya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiyaa ko paar tu lagayi de
He then ran behind Ragini but find her on a stage singing,
Oh oh oo aa o u aa ou..
Eie i e ie..
Silly willy really really willly
You making me a love tonight
Eie i e ie..
Silly willy really really willy
You making me a hot tonight
Eie i e ie..
Silly silly silly willy willy
Want you give me your love
Silly silly silly wont you
Give it to me baby
Silly silly silly willy willy
Want you give me your heart
Silly silly silly wont you
Give it to me baby..”
Ragini was singing this while pointing the microphone towards Laksh?? and Laksh was just looking her being mesmerized? at that time Satya came on the stage and started flirting with Ragini??. Laksh became angry? and he went there and pushed Satya down.??
In next scene Laksh again saw Satya hugging Ragini ?and Laksh came there and separated them while singing,
“Dil ko dil ki prem kahani, zaroori hui sunani
Dil ki baat kaise main kahoon, karoon main kya
Samjhe na tu baat woh pagli, ke dil ki adla badli
Ab to bin kiye na main rahoon, karoon main kya.”
Now Ragini was sitting in a garden and she was reading a book someone tapped her shoulder and Ragini put her book down to see who’s there. She show some small kids were standing having roses in their hands.?? Ragini took it and asked with a smile,”Who gave these roses?” Those kids pointed towards Laksh who was standing beside a tree crossing his arms and legs like lord Krishna. ??
Ragini came to him and asked,”Why you gave these?”?
Laksh didn’t found answer and Ragini went from there. Laksh hit his head and mumbled,
“Main reh bhi na paaun
Main keh bhi na paaun
Bole bina kaise tujhko sunayi de”
He then looked upwards in sky? and sung
Prem ki naiyya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiyaa ko paar tu lagayi de
Prem ki naiyya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiyaa ko paar tu lagayi de
Laksh sat on that bench only and said,”Ram ji? now please make Ragini mine..I love her.?.I got to know so late but I love her..?”
Someone tapped his shoulder from behind and Laksh snapped his head towards that person.? She was Ragini. She was standing there with a wide smile.?
She said,”You love me!!”?
Laksh stood up and nodded in approval. She came to him and hugged him tightly.? She said,”Now say that again I don’t believe it..”?
Laksh took some steps backwards and then said in a loud voice filled which was filled with love,”I love you Ragini!!!!!”??? Ragini kissed his cheek and he hugged him.??
Now a mansion with beautiful decorations is shown.?? Two left feet in similar shoes were tapping on the ground. Slowly similar sherwani’s for both persons is shown. They both had crossed arms on their chest. They both were having a sly smile on their face. ?Obviously they both were ‘the great twinies’.? Opposite to them, a beautiful bride looking like an angel is shown.? Obviously she is ‘the beautiful Ragini’.? But she is having a pissed off look??. Of course it’s because of the twins.?
“Come on Ragini! Say…who your groom is. The one whom you select now will be your life partner for all the seven births…(He said with devilish smile?)…so say clearly. Who is your groom?” Says one great twinie 1!?
“Yes Ragini! Don’t think it’s just a game, it’s your beautiful life (He said while winking at her?).. Find the odd one out within 5 mins.” Says another great twinie 2!?
Ragini scowled angrily? but suddenly smiled naughtily? saying “Remove your sherwani both of you!” Both looked at her with wide eyes ? but twinie 2 recovered quickly “Offoo darling! There is much more time for it!” he said winking at her.?? Ragini smiled devilishly?? at him and said “Thanks for your information Satya!”? Twinie 2 looked shocked? and immediately said “Ragini! I am Laksh…only he is Satya!!”?? Ragini laughed and jumped happily shouting “I found you Laksh!” Laksh smiled sheepishly? while twinie 1 i.e. Satya glared at Laksh for spoiling his plan. ??
Satya moved forward and gave a red rose to Ragini saying “To the most beautiful world bride!”? Ragini blushed and takes it from him while Satya winked at her? to make her blush more which in turn made Laksh to glare at him more??. Laksh side hugged Ragini and kissed her cheeks. “My girl is always beautiful but today she is standing like a majestic queen” Laksh said proudly???. Ragini hide her face on his chest shyly while Laksh smirked at Satya? who rolled his eyes to him. ?
Raglak were married by following every rituals??? while Satya rubs his invisible tears on his cheeks.?? Laksh elbowed his twinie while Ragini giggled.? They three shared a group hug.
Both the family witnessed their antics and prayed Ram ji to give all the happiness to them and blessed them to be like this always!! ?
❤Happy ending ❤
27 Comments
Nice
Happy birthday iqa
Awesome
Fantastic dear
oh …. happy birthday to the deary ……
so amzing .. well my also shocked that i have read a raglak os ….. but it was just awesome …
Awesome happy birthday Iqu
Superb dear
Superb update
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Amazing
so cute loved it nice amazing superb next part soon don’t be a late plzz update all the ff try to regularly for raglak or ragsan Plzz raglak or ragsan writer u guys so inactive plzz write more be regular bcoz now their is very less raglak or ragsan ff plzz write for them actually temish and tever fan is really need Ur ff as now they are not getting temish or tever pics plzz keep writing and all those who ended plzz start new one and who stopped in middle plzz keep writing and keep both are amazing pair and. Raglak aka temish iconic pair alive always forever so writer plzzz Plzz watch rishta likhenga hum Naya in TV give trp @tejasswiprakash needs u guys bcoz channel @sonytvofficial is weak in trp plzz don’t let awesome show and amazing performance by tejasswi suffer @sumeetm give awesome production
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Awesome dear
Amazing shot nd happy B’day iqu
Interesting dear
Happy birthday Iqra di
Lovely os with lovely raglak
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Awesome episode
awesome harini….loved it alot…tkcr dear…
happy birthday Iqu choti…may Allah give you all blessings and happiness to u….love u dear…tkcr of you both…
Different shot
Amazing dear and loved it
Simply awesome di
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CUTEST STORY EVER!!!! I was smiling so hard reading this, it was hilarious and sweet❤❤
Best story
Happy Christmas dear ???? I’m sorry for very late comment. Outstanding story dear ??? Raglak scenes are beautiful ????? and satya’s character is also interesting. Love you dear and take care ????????