Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……based upon the response on this episode, i will be uploading the next episodes……
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Shivaay and Anika after disconnecting Tej’s call, were heading towards their respective rooms when they listened to a newly wed couples arguing…
Bride ” it’s too cold to go to the hill top view now…as much as i would love to see the view, i would equally get concerned about your health”
Groom ” we have come here to enjoy na…the black clouds passing by the hill top view and we amidst them will be a super feeling..I don’t want to miss itl
Bride ” but your health? You know you get cold so soon…i promise we go tomorrow morning”
Groom ” we will go now or never”
The bride and groom continued their argument while Anika and Shivaay smiled looking at them and then at each other….
Shivaay ” Ms. surpanka if not they…. shall we have the enjoyment of that view?”
Anika ” i was waiting if you would ask me or not…even if you catch cold, I don’t mind but i want to be between clouds” she spoke opening her arms as wide as possible and raising her toes….
Shivaay ” then what are we waiting for…let’s go before we get late”
They ran towards the last tourism bus for the day and hopped in….they reached the place and started walking in…slowly they neared the place ….it was a magnificent view….the valley, the sky, the rocks, the hills, the clouds, the cold…everything was being dreamy but something missed….Anika’s eyes twinkled with joy and Shivaay’s eyes twinkled with pride to see Anika so…
They sat back on a rock talking absolutely nothing…shivaay was feeling cold…Anika moved near him and draped the shawl over both of them…she held his hand and rested her head on his shoulder…shivaay wrapped his hands around her…
Now it was perfect…the valley, the sky, the rocks, the hills, the clouds, the warmth everything was perfect….the warmth that was missing came and joined
After sometime of sitting and viewing the scenery, Shivaay felt wetness on his hand…he looked at Anika and she had tears…
Shivaay positioned himself straight and asked with concern ” what happened? Why are you crying? Did i do something..”
Anika placed her hand on his lips, stopping him blaming himself , wiped her tears and spoke
Anika ” you know what…. me and my bestie always had this dream of visiting such scenic places…had she been today, she would have enjoyed the same as i am enjoying..we used to discuss silly things…like …we will go to some scenic place and enjoy the view..we will off course stare at some handsome boys too…i used to tease her that.. she would just not stare but marry any random handsome boy and her kids would be Ms.World and Mr.World….she used to tease me saying…” She took a pause, looked at Shivaay and then again looked at View going silent
Shivaay ”come on tell me…how did she used to tease you?”
Anika ”nothing” she smiled amid tears
Shivaay ”oh come on Ms.Surpanaka…you can say it”
Anika ”you will feel weird after listening…i mean i will feel awkward and embarrassed too”
Shivaay ”i promise how much ever weird it would be i wouldn’t laugh…now don’t torture me with this suspense”
Anika ”okay..fine..i will say…but remember your promise….if you break it…i will break your legs …”
Shivaay ”i don’t want to limp whole my life…so i will not dare and with the prank you did …i understood i must be very careful with you”
Anika ” She used to tease me that….i will find someone in my life in such a scenic place and then…. i will not wait till my marriage with him, to have my first kiss…the guy would look deep down at me and take me into a kiss……”
She paused and Shivaay eyes widened in surprise, yet he kept his promise and didn’t smile…
Anika continued ”he he he he he…how funny and silly are these talks….will these ever happen….seriously we were stupid…” her face got paled
She again continued ”i miss her…i miss her a lot Mr.Ritchie Rich..had i the power, i would have wiped that day of my life forever….” Anika spoke emotionally….
Shivaay rubbed her back and said ” Ms.Surpanaka…wherever she is now, she will be enjoying this through you…as you have only said..you are soul sisters…then how is it possible that you alone are enjoying ?”
Anika smiled with tears and with choked voice said ” yeah true…” she looked at him and pressed his hand and spoke ”Mr.Ritchie Rich, you sure know how to make up my mood”
Shivaay ” is it…first time i got a compliment from you..i think i should celebrate”
Anika ” okay enough…let’s go back..tomorrow is a typically hectic day”
Shivaay ”as you say”
Anika ”whatever it is tomorrow before leaving i will once again come here to make some more memories for me and my bestie”
Shivaay smiled at her and they held hand in hand and walked towards their hotel to get themselves some rest !!!
————NEXT MORNING
Anika woke up early and got ready as she knew she had to shop…Shivaay too woke up and knocked the room door of Anika….
Shivaay ”Hey Good morning” he moved ahead to place a kiss
Anika ”good morning” she turned back…
Shivaay ruffled his hair and then set it back properly for his thoughts…
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich…i am thinking to pack the bags first and then go ahead with rest of the day…what do you say”
Shivaay ”No… because we have to adjust the gifts of our friends too”
Anika ”ohh ya…i forgot….”
They both walked ahead and after having their breakfast hopped on to the shops to pick up gifts for their gang , also bought some exclusive handmade chocolates for entire class….
During return they visited the nearby places….and called up OmRu and Prinku
Om ”Shivaay …you are going there right…check your suitcase inner zip…i packed everything required….is Anika near by Prinku wants to talk to her”
Shivaay ”yeah…she is here”
Anika took the receiver and spoke to Prinku
Prinku ”Di…did you check the packet i gave”
Anika ”ohh shoot…i forgot completely”
Prinku ”Diii…go first and check it…it’s for today ”
Anika ”what ..that means you knew everything before? i mean did you know Tej uncle will say all that to us”
Prinku ”yeah..me, Rudra and Om bhayya infact everyone except you two knew about this…had we said this before you left , we knew Shivaay bhayya and you would deny…so we planned to say it yesterday night”
Anika ”ohh God”
Prinku ”enjoy”
Anika ended the call and looked at Shivaay
Shivaay ”What?”
Anika ”Tej uncle had asked us to go to that party right ….everyone except you and I knew about this…prinku just said me…this was all preplanned”
Shivaay ”these days my family is becoming super naughty and hiding things from me”
Anika ”hey… don’t say a word against them…except you all of them are super awesome”
Shivaay ”and what about me?”
Anika ”you are what you said them”
They both reached the hotel and confirmed each other that they would meet at sharp 5 ‘o clock to go to the venue….Shivaay booked a car for the venue…they returned to their rooms…..
Anika packed her stuff and finally opened the packet Prinku has given…she was mesmerised to see the stuff inside the packet…a big smile adorned her lips…..
Anika TAM ”What will Mr.Ritchie Rich think of me when i wear these? ahh…why am i always thinking about him…how does it matter what he would think of me…off course i will look good..no doubt…but will he see me the same way as he saw me during my entry in freshers party and yesterday while i came after i came before him to proceed to final round…again i am thinking of him…stop it Anika for good..you have to attend the party and then come back and leave from here….so stop thinking and take a quick nap”
She set the alarm for an hour and went to sleep…..
On the other hand….
Shivaay in his room thought of Anika
Shivaay TAM ”i feel i am having the best time of life …i never thought being with Ms.Surpanaka will be so easy and fun….she is stupid, cute, idiot, adorable, strange, funny…..i never get the time to have stress with her being around me, stress which i used to have always till last year…..she is something else…she completely changed my thoughts about her….by the way.. why the hell am i thinking about her…i have lots of things to clear up…so let me concentrate there….what might be she doing now…shall i check…naah …she is sister of kumbakaran…she will be definitely sleeping….thank God Sahil is not here else…he would have asked me ”Mr.SSO…do i look like Kumbakaran from any angle”…both brother sister duo are extremely adorable…well…i just hope she gets ready on time….”
He finished his packing and sat back with some book setting the alarm after one hour to get ready…..
————TWO HOURS PASSED BY……
Shivaay came out of his room locking it behind……he wore a Black Tuxedo and was looking dashing as usual…..Anika too came out of her room locking it behind….Shivaay looked at her mesmerised once again…Anika felt a bit shy….
Shivaay TAM ”She is just perfect…the silver gown …her matching ear rings with that simple yet elegant necklace…hair perfectly in a bun with some strings of hair falling on to her face…minimal make up…and that clutch…she is looking like a bride…prinku i must say …you chose the perfect dress for her …she is stunning…God ..i hope today i control myself”
Anika ”How am i looking…is it too gaudy?”
Shivaay ”You are looking per..”
Anika ”what?”
Shivaay ”you are looking Good…the car has arrived shall we leave….”
Anika ”yeah”
They both sat in the car….
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich….do you know the couple we are going to meet…i mean Tej uncle said that they are your business partners”
Shivaay ”i know Uncle , but never met Aunty…today will be the first time i will be meeting her…actually uncle looks after our estates near by Kodaikanal….he is more of family friend rather than any business partner… today is their Golden Jubilee Anniversary….so bade papa insisted us to go…and i too agreed…when i said ” what about Ms.Surpanaka, she will be alone”…you know what he said ”off course you are taking her…give the call to her..i will say her and i am sure she will not deny me” …he trusts as much as he trusts me….not bad Ms.Surpanaka, you made a really good place in my family”
Anika ”and all this because of that car accident…else i would have never met them..and this bond would have never formed…thanks Mr.Ricthie Rich for that accident”
Shivaay ”you are really strange…those were the days you didn’t wish to speak to me..and today you are thanking me for the accident…”
Anika ”i am not strange..i am khidkitodh…”
Shivaay ”what did you say?”
Anika ”nothing”
Shivaay ”we reached …you wait inside …i will open the door after paying the driver…”
Anika smiled …Shivaay got down..paid the driver and opened the door for Anika extending his hand like a true gentleman….Anika held his hand and came out…..
Now it was usual that all the heads turned towards Shivaay and Anika..they walked hand in hand and went straight to Mr & Mrs Martin….
Mr.Martin ”Shivaay…welcome welcome…Tej has said that you will be coming here…it’s a real pleasure to meet you…but Tej didn’t say you are married and above all none of you invited us” he said looking at Anika
Shivaay ”Uncle… Uncle…i am not married….she is my friend ” he spoke a bit worried
Anika came forward and said ”Namasthe” folding her hands….
Mr.Martin ”Namasthe Beta…what’s your good name”
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka” he whispered…Anika gave Shivaay a deathly glare and turned towards Mr.martin and said ”I am Anika”
Mr.Martin then introduced Shivaay and Anika to Mrs.Martin …they both congratulated the elderly couple and gave them the Bouquet they bought while coming towards the venue….
Mr.Martin ”the live music will start in few minutes…i will be glad if you both will dance along with the other couples…”
Shivaay -Anika ”whaat?” they looked at each other first then at the elderly couple and then said ”nooooooo”
Mr.Martin ”i am not asking you…i am saying you…If you say No still, then i will call Tej and make him talk to you….i know very well Shivaay , you never deny him for anything”
Shivaay looked at Anika with almost given up looks…Anika smiled….
The live music started and all the couples along with Shivaay and Anika stepped on the dance floor……the soothing music was perfect for some ball room dance…..both of them danced in sync….the music which started from soft one was getting intense and Shivaay-Anika forgot about the rest and surroundings and danced to the music…..
Shivaay turned Anika…Anika took a step ahead…he held her hands and pulled back…she hit his chest backwards….Shivaay held her waist…Anika closed her eyes…he lifted her up…Anika extended her hands in air…he swiftly dropped her down…she maintained the balance and landed perfect…they were dancing in rhythm…and their proximity was reducing with every move…with the music at peak on intensity, they both came very near …so near that they both could feel their breaths….Anika stepped back…….
Shivaay held her hand and turned her around moving both their entwined hands over Anika’s head..They were in a back hugging position… though there was no hug…Shivaay’s breath fanned over Anika’s nape…it was getting uncontrollable for both of them…..Anika turned and looked at him intensely…shivaay reciprocated the looks with equal intensity….she made him leave his hand and started running from there…….
Shivaay called her but she ran…….He quickly went to Mr.Martin and bid bye to him and ran from there to locate Anika……
Shivaay thought she would be returning to room…so he quickly went to their hotel and knocked room door…none opened…he got tensed where she would be……
Shivaay TAM ”ohh God…where did she go…what was wrong with her…it was wrong with me too…we came very near to each other…forget it…where will she be?”
Shivaay then got striked of her location…he ran to the hilltop edge view , the same place they visited last night…he remembered Anika saying that ”whatever it is tomorrow before leaving i will once again come here to make some more memories for me and my bestie”…
He quickly went to that place
————-Meanwhile
Anika reached the same spot where they were last night …she extended her hands in those passing clouds and spoke to herself
Anika ”Bestie…i know you always listen to me….you know what…you were right…you always used to say me …that one day i will find a man with whom i can just sit and spend hours together…and i will not be even aware of what this feeling will be….i think you were right….i found that man..he is Mr.Ritchie Rich..i mean Shivaay Singh Oberoi….please now don’t ask me to call him Shivaay singh Oberoi..i wouldn’t do so…i will always call him Mr.Ritchie Rich…i don’t know what is this feeling called….but i know that i can just sit back and spend hours together with him…but…but does he feel the same that i am feeling? he is rich…. bestie..and i am …also you know about my 2 rs luck na …anyways, i came here leaving him at the venue to say all this to you..i know you will be listening to me…now i will leave…he will be tensed”
She turned to go when she saw Shivaay coming towards her ..Anika was surprised…
Anika TAM ”i can not be friends anymore with him…the feeling that i am going through is not feeling of friendship….it is some thing beyond friendship…we are no more best friends…what will he say if i say him all this…no i don’t want any misunderstanding to pop up between us…so i better shut my mouth and behave normal..but how will i ?”
Shivaay stopped at a distance and looked at her, Anika as looking at him with a hope…Shivaay was remembering the dance they did with every step he was taking towards her…….his urge to kiss her and mark her as his grew stronger…….he neared her…and looked at her deep down….Anika tried to apologise
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich..i am so” before she could complete
Shivaay placed his lips on hers….she closed his eyes…he made her place her arms around his neck and then held her waist………..
Anika remembered her besties teasings once again ”You will find someone in your life in such a scenic place and then…. you will not wait till your marriage with him, to have your first kiss…the guy would look deep down at you and take you into a kiss……”
There was a lighting in the sky !!!
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Precap : How would Anika react now? will the bond grow or the bond break ?
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This was the Twenty Eighth episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
50 Comments
So awesome.. No words perfect kiss ? and prefect place ? 1st kiss of shivika.. What Annika going to do.. eagerly waiting for the next update
Hey Nisha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Hi VHM….I’m ur silent reader..awesome as always…… I just hope shivika’s bond doesn’t break
Hey Sameera…first of all welcome…. thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode….let’s hope for the best for both of them….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Aflatoon chappy Sissy.Loved it to the core.can’t wait for next.i was scared thinking at party something will go wrong but nothing happened (i was thinking Past will come again before Anika in party) thank God aisa kuch nhi hua.aap bahut bure ho hihihi.
Hey Bro…..thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…ye meri ff hain…regular jaise nahi rehne ki poori koshish karoongi…haan kabhi kabhi thoda cinematic likhna padta hain…tumhari behan hoona….awee i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care…accha ji ab sab bolne ke baad fir se mein buri ban gayi hoon..jaaooo ab gussa hone ki baari meri
awesome di
Hey Pritika….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…….loads of love and best wishes to you and Riyanshi …keep smiling and take care
Haye! So beautiful. Par it ended sooo soon????. Post soon. Love. I really don’t know ki iske baad inka reaction kya hoga? I can’t-can’t wait ?? keep writing.
P.s.- butterflies in my stomach after reading this????❤
Hey Nandini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode…butterflies already ? ha ha ha ha ……next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
hello akka..mind blowing epi??…first kodiakanal lo aa spot description wow???.. actually nenu kooda veldhamanukuntunna but always postpone aipothundhi?..then anudi valla bestie ni talachukovadam and valla masti and wishes gurthu chesukovatam is very emotional??..kani billu ki telusu anudi ni ela cheer up cheyyalo..cute billu??..then ohho billu wanted to give good morning kiss?? good good..then them buying gifts for their frnds and chocolates for the entire class soo sweet of them..and prinku packet dress and matching jewel aaa…akkada anudi and billu POV explained very well akka??…again he got mesmerized seeing her.. then like a true gentleman he opened the door for her and offered his hand and like a couple they came in????..andhari dhishti tagiluntundhi..dhishti teeyali vallaki..Mr.martin vallidharu hubby wife anukovadamlo thappemiledhu they look so perfect together??..and then the dance nuvvu just some soothing music for ball dance annav gani valla dance description chadhuvuthunnappudu naa mind lo o jaana play ayyindhi..he he??..and then anudi went to the place and shared her feelings with her bestie..and mana caring singh oberoi vethukkuntu vachesadu..but i never expected this scene akka..OMG i mean their first kiss??..i dont know about anudi but i blushed hard actually very hard??..but but precap is little scary i mean anudi’s reaction and about their bond..cant wait to know ..soo thwaraga post chesayi…take care and bye for now???..and haa keep smiling????…..love you loads❤️❤️❤️…
Hello Prabha…thank you so much chelli..…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode…nuvvu rasinadi chaduvuthunnappudu naaku nenu raasina episode lo nenu chesina imagination gurthu vacchindi…ammo nuvvu kuda blushing aa? awee….so cute …..next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Awesome episode akka… Enjoyed to the core… Really a luvely one…
Hey Sukeer….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
It is awesome… I am dead on the kiss… U r the best… Update soon dii
Hey Nikki….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…OMG wake up wake up…you too are the best dear…….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Wow! It was beautiful… Awesome… I loved it to the core. Waiting for Ms Surpanakas reaction… Please post as soon as possible and take care..
Hey Aafiya….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
awesome
Hey dear….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Awesome mind blowing Lovely part… But u stopped in between itself tis s not fair di… Excited for the next part… Post it soon di… Can’t wait… Take care di… Luv u lot di ??
Hey Sissy….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot my support system……awee you know me na , i love to keep it midway so that you all come with enthusiasm to know further…sorry old habit can’t help….i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Wowwwww superb update??.Don’t know what to say….Loved each and every part??…Waiting for next update..
Byee?..Love you?..
Hey Nila….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Awesome update
Hey Alekhika….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Wow Super Hari it’s so sweetest update
It’s so amazing year..first kiss of shivika Wow it’s so beautiful ..waiting for annika reaction
Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy and elated to know that you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Awesome di…fabulous update Loved it to the core ????I’m so excited for the next part update soon di
Love you ?? Take care and stay safe
Hey Harini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
My god di…… That kiss was unexpected and perfect. Uffffffff…… please post the next update soooooon. I want to know the reaction right now ???
The dance, that perfect scenery, anika’s pov perfect just perfect. ….
Shivaay love you man and of course Hari di Love you….. ❤❤❤???
Hey Kiki…good to see you back….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy to know that you liked the episode…awee how sweet of you dear….….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
A first kiss is so special that every being wishes to have it. Be it the leaf unfurling itself to be kissed by the first slant of Suns rays or be it the mother who kisses her newborn. Each kiss has a story behind it. It is not necessary that it has to be good. But a kiss is a kiss. The feeling is unique to each person and you, my dear, bought it out beautifully.
The tenderness of the moment, the glow of warmth it brings and the prelude before the very intense moment was portrayed with finesse.
Applauding this update, I say that I absolutely loved and relived it.
Hey Harshad…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…the way you wrote those lines were so amazing to read…i am sure , you are sure shot writer…just let me know if you are writing anything anywhere, i would be more than happy to read them……..thank you so much for reading and letting me know that you liked the episode.. ….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Hey there!
I am no writer and I have no idea if I’d be a good one to top it all! Thanks for the compliment though! I’ll certainly think of penning down my thoughts if time permits me in future. And I’d certainly let you get a wind of it. For sure 🙂
Lots of love
Harshada
Wow???!!! Amazingly beautiful????
The way you described the scenes, I felt like I was watching it….. … Be it the hill top view or the ball room dance???
You are really unpredictable!!!!!
I wished for their realization and confession but Aap ne toh direct first LIPLOCK de dia!!!!
Surprising but contended?????
Ab to bas ek hi Khuahish hai ki shivika ke beech koi aur duriya na aaye……… Especially TIA…… Koi aur tamasa na create kare
Excited???? for the next
Post ASAP
Hey Pakhi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am unpredictable awee he he he he …everyone does say me the same…mera kuch nahi ho sakta…lol ..Shivika tho spearte ho gaye prologue mein tho aapne padha hi hoga na….jaise mera kuch nahi ho sakta waise Tia ka bhi kuch nahi ho sakta….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Actually n really I’m not loving,liking nattractve n impressive from today’s episode. I’m fan,cooler,Ac, centralized n decentralized Ac n more more most to that when I read one of our ff about 4brothers(shivaay on my n mahi) n 3 sisters(ani gauri n shreya) n soumya. Sorry I didn’t remember story name. N most favourite to u n searched for your ff every time that u narrated that jungle incident their union n they come to know about mahi brother truth n then they leave on n they move to Shillong n start new business.i enjoyed n loved this story because how nicely n romantically u wrote this ff.i should new words to praise it writing style like anika.n next sudden turn of events .Wow,aww n great appreciation to this ff but u did not gave end episode.finally my favourite a trip that has changed their lives forever it’s awesome n super what not.as usual n really you wrote very well to the end .It’s very difficult to blink our eyes for second.its amazing n awesome.well done n keep it up. I loved from first letter to the precap n full stop.ha haa waiting difficultly for it next .Post so soon n his note n take care
Hey Raji…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot….i read your opinion a couple of times and showed it to my husband too…you made me remember two of my personal favourite ff’s among three of my favourites…the one which you were referring to was THE PAST AND THE PRESENT…that ff was not special because everyone liked it…it was because it gave me innumerable friends , sisters, countless love and best wishes…..then the TRIP THAT CHANGED THEIR LIVES , i know how hard it was for me to write it as i was marked that i can only write mysteries…it was more to prove myself….this ff is also very close to me for very special reasons which i would let you before the last episode….thank you so much for writing all that and making me feel so very special….
well i really became so emotional and wrote all those…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot… i am so happy and glad to know that you liked the episode….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Woooooooow Di super first ?
it too beautiful shivika dance sequence ?
Waiting for (Anika reaction) no lovely di ka kidikithod episode ?
Lovely di……….
Hey Megha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee that’s so sweet of you dear and i am so happy to know that you liked the episode….….next episode tomorrow without fail….loads of love and best wishes to you …keep smiling and take care
Sorry vhm for so many mistakes typed I hope plz u understand while reading.im liking loving n what not from yesterday’s n today’s episode .I read 3ffs before this story also.they are very well written n best too.dont mind i forgotten those names .but this ff firstly I did not noticed.
Then but by Ur name I’m started first episode onwards I read upto now.this is absolutely fantastic n very pretty.aacha today is most beautiful than the wonderful yesterday’s episode.ithna cute n perfect I liked n lived with each n every sentence from billu to Billi n Billi to billu their confusing state to their masti .its marvellous n post soon. can’t wait more
Hey Raji…no worries dear…i can understand what you wanted to emote and sure shot you emoted them in the best way…so glad to have you by my side in this journey….next episode tomorrow without fail…keep smiling and take care
Wowwwwwwwwww……
Amazing and Awesome…
Shivika first kiss…. I loved it…
U r fantastic…
Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you for letting me know how much you liked this episode ….love you loads and loads of best wishes to you…..keep smiling and take care…Tanz you too are awesome and you know that
FIRST KISS…!!!
Beautiful… U r Superb , Amazing , Awesome nd…. (aur word yaad nahi aaraha hain)…
I love love love… this chappy moreeeee… Love it to d core….
U just made everything perfact before d kiss… Just perfact like ur writing… Love U… Love U sooooo much…
Eagerly waiting for Shivika’s reaction…
What i said above i really mean it I love U soo much , bt U know na not more then Akki…
Hey Gorgeous…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee am jumping with joy reading your opinion excpet the last few words….love you more and more for this Gorgeous…you made the start of my day more wonderful…..love you loads…keep smiling and take care….waise i know you love me lots and lots…no need to say you mean it and all…..next episode i am going to upload in few minutes//all set from my side…
First kiss????in a beautiful scenic view….amazing….loved it
Cant wait fr the next???
Amazing epi
Hi VHM, I have been missing for a while because I am travelling, so I am catching up with my elixir.. What a beautiful love story to tell. I cannot wait for it. Please enjoy the season and all the best for you and your beautiful family. Please stay blessed..Best wishes for 2018 and beyond. ????