The Abyss-Ishqbaaz-ff-by Aashi
Chapter- 19 A
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Rudra was nervous, that would be an understatement, for he had decided to break the news of his relationship with Soumya before the elders. Soumya had talked sense when she had said she wanted to be clear and honest about their relationship, so the elders don’t feel cheated on knowing it from someone else and start their blame- game, or either of them go through the accusations like Shivaay.
Om’s eyes met a welcome sight after his dreary day, to see his mother at the table, talking to his daadi and chhoti maa. Her laughter sounded in the hall like tinkling of bells, happy, cheerful, carefree, like it did when he was a kid. It was On who was the most worried about his mother’s constant disappearance but the better reaction and state of Jhanvi calmed his nerves and all his worries. “Om!” she crossed the room in happy strides and hugged him tightly, ” baccha, you’re back. Jao jaakar muhh- haath dho lo, dinner is about to get laid” she said, caressing his face. “Abhi aaya maa” he said and went upstairs, feeling much better already.
Anika felt strange to see Shivaay in the room before dinner, as she combed her hair and looked presentable for the dinner table. It was almost an unspoken agreement between them, not to be there while the other dressed or groomed but Anika felt his eyes follow her every movement. Irritated by Shivaay’s actions, unable to take it any longer, she spoke up ” Kya tarr rahein hain mujhe Billuji?” and froze. It was a year since she had referred to him as Billuji, used her tapori language on him.
” I’m here to ask the most beautiful lady, if she would grace me to the dinner tonight?” Shivaay felt ecastic, his Anika was slowly coming back to life and chuckled at her reaction as he caught the sound of ‘O teri’ at his gesture.
Hi everyone, this is me Aashi back with the second part of chapter 19. I’m trying to take the story forward as I myself can feel it is getting boring. I will be back the next week hopefully with the new chapter. Do comment your feedbacks and your take on the story. Keep reading and commenting. Take care ?.
Thank You Everyone.
By Aashi.
18 Comments
Superb ?
Thank you Di. Do keep reading and commenting
Superb?
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It is awesome dear.. Dear there is a time leap…
Yes Di there was a short time leap like three months. Thank you for your comment. Do keep reading and commenting
Oh my om is here in dis epi?????? though in a small scene I’m glad ??? n I trust u dat u’ll fulfill my wish soon(which I mentioned in last 18A epi)???? n of course I’m sure as u said my waiting would worth it? as I know u r a amazing writer so u’ll definitely describe om’s opinions n feelings regarding shivika marriage perfectly.I must say u r too good @ portraying emotions of each character of ur ff?? looking forward 2 dat.?? N about dis epi my favorite scene is omvi(om & janvi) hug?? they r always a bliss 2 watch ?? n shivay taking annika 2 a dinner ?????? n annika’s reaction ?? “o teri”????? loved dat scene too.eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi dr.byeeee tc???
Thank you Dinu again for your wonderful comment. I’ll try to give more Om scenes in the next chapter. I’m really thankful of your appreciation and will try to update the next chapter soon. Do keep reading and commenting?
Superb update
Thank you Di. Do keep reading and commenting
awesome, wonderful, fabulous…we are not at all getting bored…i am so happy Anika finally spoke her usual language…way to go Aashi…waiting to see how things turn now….love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Thank you Di. I am not really sure how things will work but thanks for the encouragement. I love the original Anika and hope to bring her out. Do keep reading, take care?
This story is not boring at all…..Amazing episode….loved it…waiting for next….do update soon…lots of love ? ?
Thank you Niya for your compliments and support. Do keep reading and commenting
AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Thank you UF. Do keep reading and commenting
Hey aashi di! Actually j read your ff in one go, so my first comment in here! I love it! Absolutely love your writing style. But I’ve some confusions like- u mentioned about some contract between shivika, what happened to gauri? Did shivaay explain her everything and she went back silently? Anyways, post soon. Loads of love and best wishes and happy new year❤❤❤
Hello Nandini, I’m so very happy to get your first comment and I really thank you for all the approval. The contract thing will be cleared in the 21st chapter and yes Gauri did go quietly but messed up her own life, explained in next chapter. Happy new year and yes- the next chapter has been posted in two parts, do read and comment. Take care.