Hi yudkbh people… Thank u for accepting me in ur family… So this is a thought that cracked… Me today.. so thought to give a try…
Hope u will like it…
Samina os : realisation of his love…
My first ever work on samina…
Fingers crossed…
So this story is from.. Naina got to know abt the truth… And is frustrated…and everything what we saw in the show.. and then they r coming to school first time after mount Abu trip..
At canteen in school..
Swathi : Naina… Eat na…
Naina busy in scribbling something in her rough note…
Naina: tu kaa.. mujhe man nahi kar raha ..
Swathi : par kyun… Aur waise Kya likh rahe ho…subha subha..
Naina: Kuch nahi…
Swathi teasingly… : Achha … Sameer ke liye love letter likh rahe ho…
Naina lost her cool… Well it’s natural for anyone in her position… Loving some one eternally… And got to know that he did that for some stupid bet.. .. crushed her heart… She was not able to let her emotions out… And she used frustration as a key for.. it.. however she felt guilty for scolding Preeti.. but she had no other way to show that she isn’t normal..
Naina shouts: bas swathi… Ek bar kah Diya .. mujhe man nahi kar raha hai… Kyun bar bar Puch rahe ho…
Swathi confused..: par Naina.. meine aise Kya Puch Diya… Tum itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho..
Naina : Haan Mein gussa hun…. Aur wo bhi tumhare wajase …
Swathi angrily..: meine Kya Kiya… Pata nahi tujhe Kya hua.. mount Abu trip ke baath.. tum bilkul badhal Gaye ho.. pagal..
Naina gets irritated.. hearing mount Abu… Which led her to some flash backs.. shouts..
Naina: Haan pagal hun Mein.. ab jaa..
Swathi gets angry and was about to go… But stopped and smirks and snatched the book in which Naina was writing something…
Naina : SWATHI….
Swathi: sorry Naina… Par mujhe yeh dekhna hai ki tum aisa Kya likh rahe ho..
Saying she started running..Naina runs behind her..
Naina: swathi ruk…
Swathi: catch me if u can…
Naina runs behind her and holds her hand.. and in that both fall down.. and the book goes and falls near Sameer..
Sameer takes the book and looks here and there..
Naina with her arms crossed over her chest: kahan hai Mera note..
Swathi busy in searching: mujhe Kya pata..
Naina : mujhe Kya pata Matlab… Book tumhare haath me tha na..
Swathi: Haan Meri ma… Par tu aise sawal karegi ya doondne me mathath karogi..
Naina sighs and starts searching..
On the other side Sameer opens the book and starts reading..
Sameer:
tujhe pe Barosa Kiya kudh se bhi zayadha
Sapne me bhi nahi Socha aisa ek din aayega..
Lekin sapno ko tut Kar tumhne Bata Diya ki
Jaago yehi Sach hai..
And after the last line the paper was wet because of the tears which fell from naina’s eyes..
Sameer touches the paper.. and feels guilty for breaking her heart..
He remembers all the moments between them… And unknowingly a tear escapes from his eyes…
He sees naina searching for the book..
And goes near her..
Naina sees Sameer.. and was about to go when..
Sameer: Naina…
Naina closes her eyes and her fist and controls herself .. from shouting…
Sameer looks at her mixed emotions…and bends his head down.. being not able to look at her..
Sameer : woh tumhara book..
Naina looks at book and tries to snatch it.. but sameer keeps his hand back..
Naina looks at him and turns her face disgustingly. ..
Sameer : Naina Jo bhi hua uske liye I’m really sorry..
Naina crosses her arms against her chest…
Sameer: I was going to tell u about that bet.. and before that they came and ruined everything…
Sameer looked at her hoping for some reply … When he got none he continued..
Sameer: but Naina.. I left that bet thing before itself.. I really didn’t want to hurt u I can’t see u in pain..
Naina keeps quite… And closes her eyes..and a long tear escapes her eyes .. remembering everything..
Sameer: Naina pls… Kuch toh bolo… See …if u want u slap me .. beat me.. scold me.. but don’t me silent.. ur silence is making me to feel more guilty.. pls Naina..
Naina snatches the book from him and goes leaving him to remain in guilt..
Actually it wasn’t just guiltiness that was piercing his heart… The truth is that… he wasn’t able to see his love in pain.. and that too because of him..
At evening…
Sameer was sitting in bike… With Munna and pandit drinking rasna..
Sameer remembers… How Naina covered him with blanket..how she gave roti to him…how they spent their night talking to each other …on that campfire … day…how she gave the sweater to him… How she confessed her love… How his mother told that he was allergic to love… and lastly… What she wrote in her book…
He closes his eyes… And bangs his hand in his bike…
He hears someone ringing cycle bell two times… He remembers their signal… And turns… Thinking it might Naina… But it was someone else… He gets sad.. and was about turn… When he sees naina coming… There…
He smiles… And stares at her…
At that time… Someone comes and blocks her way… Naina looks at him…
Sameer is facing Naina… And facing that someone’s back…
Naina : bhaiya…
The person is Arjun…
Arjun: Naina.. kyun… Tum aaj kal itni udhas ho..
Naina: nahi bhaiya.. aisa Kuch nahi..
Arjun: tike chodo… Chalo hum Pani Puri kayenge..
Saying he holds her hand..
Sameer who sees this gets angry…and closes his fist..✊
Naina: nahi bhaiya..
Arjun ( keeping his hand in her face): Naina.. Kuch hua .. toh mujhe Bata Sakti ho..
Seeing this sameer burns in jealousy… That how can Naina allow some other boy to touch her..
Naina fakes a smile..: nahi bhaiya … Mein bilkul tik hun… Tike Chalo hum Pani Puri kathe..
Arjun gets happy and hugs her…
Sameer loses cool…seeing his Naina hugging some one else…
Sameer to himself..: how can she allow someone to hug here… When i was about to kiss her that day… She scolded me alot… And now…. And who is that idiot … How dare he hug Naina… I’ll not leave…
Saying he goes near them… And holds his collar and turns him saying..
Sameer: tumhari itni himath…
Arjun turns and finds Sameer folding his fist and was about to punch him…
Sameer sees Arjun and gets shocked..
Arjun trying to release himself from his clutch..
Arjun: array… Kya kar rahe ho…
Munna and pandit come and tries to remove sameer’s hand from arjun’s shirt
Sameer was still in shock..
Naina gets angry…
Naina : Sameer chodo usse…
Saying she pulls Arjun …holding his arms..
Sameer hearing Naina’s voice comes back to reality… And leaves his collar…
Sameer: wo Mein.. sorry.. mujhe laga..
Naina: Chalo bahiya…
Saying she drags Arjun from there…
Sameer looks at sadly..
Pandit: tumhe Kya laga Sameer…
Sameer : mujhe laga ki..wo Arjun nahi hai..wo
Munna: ..wo koi aur hai… na…
Sameer glared at him.. and then bends his head…
Sameer slowly: Haan…
Pandit: par tujhe itna gussa kyun aaya…
Sameer angrily: kyunki wo Naina ko gale lagaya…
Munna smiles: Naina Kisi aur ko gale lagaye… Tujhe kyun farkh padtha hai…
Sameer: padtha hai mujhe Fark… Kyunki…
He stops.. finding no words to complete his sentence…
Pandit: kyunki tu usse pyaar Karne lage ho..
Sameer thinks and then says..
Sameer: nahi… Aisa Kuch nahi…
Munna: toh phir kya…
Sameer remains silent…
Pandit: maan le mere Bhai… Tu usse pyaar Karte ho…
Sameer: nahi… Naina ek achhi ladki hai… Mein usse aur taklif nahi Dena chahtha hun…
Saying he goes from there…
Pandit: ab Kya Kare..
Munna: Kuch nahi… Time will tell what to do..
At sameer’s home..
Sameer is lying in his bed.. with all naina’s picture..that he took in mount Abu… Displayed in his bed…
He looks at her pics… And smiles..
He looks at pic which he during campfire…( Instead of taking principal)..
Sameer: I never thought u r this much naughty….
He looks at the pic which he took during sunrise..
Sameer: I never thought..that behind this studious Naina… A fun loving girl is there…
He looks at the pic which he took when he gave her teddy bear..
Sameer: u look more beautiful..when u leave ur hair free…
He looks at the pic which he took during boat ride..
Sameer: this glasses ? suits u more than me..
He hears a voice..
Person: Sameer…
He fastly covers blanket over the pictures..and sits up as if he did nothing…
Sameer: nanu…
The person is nanaji..
Nanaji smiles and then goes and sits with him..
Nanaji: beta… I’m sorry … Us din meine tumhe thapad maara..
Sameer smiles: nahi nanu.. mujhe bura nahi laga…
Nanaji smiles and caress his face…
Nanaji: beta… Ek baath puchun..
Sameer: ji nanu …
Nanaji: sameer tum us din kaha ki.. tumhne Kisi ki Dil thoda..
Sameer bends his head.. the smile which he got after looking at her pics… Was now overpowered by guiltiness…of breaking her heart..
A fast flash back… Clashed his mind….
How she said.. ” Mein tuhara parva Karti hun” and.. how she said” I love u sameer” …and how the seniors came… How he asked them to go… How he said ” Naina tum unki baaton me math aa “… And how she asked … ” Haan ya na Sameer”… How he bends his head… How she dropped the sweater and started back walking…
His chains of thought was broken by nanaji..
Nanaji: beta…Kya hua..
Sameer: Nana wo…
Other side.. in Naina home..
Her pov:
Nahi Naina.. tu galath Kar rahi ho… U r letting ur anger for Sameer on others.. nahi.. aage se aise nahi hoga.. ( she closes her eyes and remembers everything.. from their first meeting to the last breakup.. and cries… After sometime she opens her eyes and wipes her tears with a determination)… Nahi Sameer… From now u r no one to me… I’ll never ever think about u… From now u have no place in my life…
End of pov..
She gets up goes to Preeti who was sitting angrily… In the swing..
Naina: Preeti..
She turns her face angrily…
Naina: I’m sorry… Preeti …
Preeti: mujhe nahi chahiye tumhari yeh sorry…
Naina cries… : Preeti mujhe maaf karo na… Jo bhi meine Kiya… Meine kaha.. uske liye I’m really sorry… Tum…tum..mujhe thapad Maro…
Saying she takes Preeti hand and slaps herself…
Preeti takes her hand… Back..
Preeti: yeh Kya kar rahe ho…
She wipes her tears…
Back to sameer’s home…
Sameer: Haan nanu… Meine bahot badi galti ki…
He says everything… From the moment he accepted the bet… To what he did today…
Nanaji looks shocked..and then smiles..
Nanaji : tum usse pyaar Karte ho..
Sameer: aap..bhi…nahi nanu.. aisa Kuch nahi… Pata nahi kyun aap log aise kah rahe ho… Munna aur pandit.. bhi yehi kaha..
Nanaji: kyunki yehi Sach hai…
Sameer : nahi nanu..
Nanaji: beta Sameer.. tumhare aakhon se saaf saaf dikh raha hai..tum usse pyaar Karte ho…
Sameer stares at him questioningly..
Nanaji.. laughs and
Nanaji: u will realize it soon.. ab so jaa..
Sameer nods his head…
Nanaji gets up and was about to go..but stops and says..
Nanaji: Sone ke pehle..take her pics from bed..
Sameer gets up shocked…and asks..
Sameer: aapko kaise pata..
Nanaji smiles and caress his hairs..
Nanaji: Mein tumhara nanu hun…
Other side naina home…
Preeti: mujhe bhi maaf karo Naina…
She says holding her one ear..
Naina remembers Sameer doing the same during campfire.. Naina closes her eyes and thinks..” nahi Naina.. uske baare me math soch..”.. she opens her eyes … And hugs Preeti…
Other side in the sameer’s home…
Sameer is lying… and With his elbow.. he raises his head..and looks at naina’s pic…
Sameer: Kya Sach me.. Mein tumhse pyaar Karne lage hun???
He remembers Munna saying…” Naina Kisi aur ko gale lagaye… Tumhe kyun farkh padtha hai..”… He closes his eyes..and imagines…naina getting married to someone else…
He opens his eyes…shouting…” NAHI……”…
Sameer: nahi…aise nahi hoga… Mein tumhe Kisi aur ke Saath nahi dekh Sakte Hun…. Kyunki tum Meri ho..
Reality strikes him… He thinks… What he had just said..now..
Sameer: Meri ho….??… Iska matlab…Mein usse pyaar karta hun…
He takes… Naina’s pic in his hand..and jumps…in happiness…
Sameer: I love u naina…
Back to Naina home..
Naina: u have no place in my life now Sameer maheshwari…..
Saying she goes to bed..
Back to Sameer home..
Sameer: Mein kudh se vadha karta hun… Sameer maheshwari.. .. Naina Agarwal …ki Dil jeeth Kar hi rahega… Lekin is baar.. Kisi shrath.. ke liye nahi… Mere pyaar ke liye….
He goes to sleep… Happily realising his love… However it accompained by guilt of breaking her heart…
Both goes to sleep …with determination…
Naina determined not to see him in her life again…
And Sameer determined to get at back…
The end..
Let’s see whose determination …is more powerful…guys.. the rest we will be seeing in the show..
Hope u all like….
Thank u for reading…. I know this os..is really bad… But don’t forget to drop ur valuable comments…
No proof read…. So sorry for any mistakes…
Chappals and tomatoes are also welcomed…
Thank u..
With love..
Devihaa
10 Comments
Don’t worry this much i loved your story and definitely everyone will love this
Keep going
We are expecting more stories like this
All the best
Amazing
Beautiful OS
We’re all waiting for Sameer’s love realisation
Very good… Keep writing like this.
Wowwww that was awesome?. No need of tomatoes ?. Keep writing devi?
Wow wow wow!!! Truly an amazing work done. You wrote so well.
AWESOME EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT PERFECT SUPERB?????????
Take care and stay safe ?
Great?
Awesome❤️❤️
Its amazing…but post the nxt part of ths os nd make a hppy wala ending…hope u will keep my request…post asap…