Hello People!
My exams just got over.. I thought of writing something.. So here are just a few shots.. Just tell me which couple you want.. RagSan or SwaSan?
Okay so let’s start:
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(A beautiful house is shown.. Not too big nor too small.. Beautifully painted with a lush green garden.. Scent of roses is all around.. Okay so lets peep inside the house.. A girl is shown.. She is wearing a white anarkali.. Long beautiful black hair.. Pink rosy lips.. Large doe eyes.. But but.. There is something in her beautiful eyes.. Well what is it? Oh my God! Its tears! Yes, her eyes are glassy.. Tears rolling down her cheeks.. She is seeing a photo on which a garland is there)
Girl(sniffs): Seven.. Seven years have passed Papa..
(The photo is of her father, Vansh Kapoor)
Girl(cries silently): Why? Papa.. Why you left me? Everyone left.. You.. Dadi.. Mrs Saxena aka My Mom.. Hahah.. My mom.. Huh.. She has no right to be called a Mom.. She is heartless creature.. But Papa.. You? You didn’t even think once about me before going?
(An old woman in late 50s come and place hand on her shoulder)
Old woman: Betaa..
(The girl turns and hugs her tightly)
Girl(cries): Nani.. It has been seven years but.. Still.. I.. I miss him Nani.. He was my Hero.. My Saviour.. My everything.. But.. Nani.. He left me..
Nani(tries to consile her): Beta.. Its all fate.. His time came so he went.. And (wipes her tears) Tell me how your Papa will feel seeing his princess crying.. hmm??
Girl(wipes her tears): Sorry Nani..
(Looks at photo) Sorry Papa.. I am sorry.. But your princess miss you Papa.. But (smiles with glassy eyes) i know you are always with me and will always be.. Watching me.. See i fulfilled your dream na.. You wanted me to be a doctor.. Here i am.. A proud and successful doctor ..
Nani(smiles): Yes.. Your papa must be very proud of you my dear..
Girl(smiles): I know Nani..
(Suddenly her eyes were full of hatred)
Girl(with hatred): Tum.. Tum sab.. Jinki wajah se Papa chalay gaye.. You all will never live happily.. Bhagwan tumhe kabhi khush nahi rakhay ga..
Nani: Beta..
Girl: I know Nani.. I know.. Papa always used to say “Forgiveness can save relations but Hatred will just break them apart” But i cant and i wont forgive those monsters.. Mai kya Nani.. Bhagwan bhi unhe kabhi Maaf nahi karay ga..
Nani: And me too..
Girl(wipes her tears): Anyways.. I am going.. Or else i will get late..
Nani(kisses her forehead): Be careful and take care
Girl(waves her): Yea Bye Nani!
Nani: Bye meri jaan
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(Another house is shown.. No no not a house.. Mansion.. Yes, a beautiful lavish Mansion.. Nameplate reads “Maheshwari’s” Lets see what’s happening inside)
(A man in mid 40s is shown having breakfast.. Woman of about same age is sitting beside him.. They are RamPrasad and Sujata Maheshwari.. Both are talking.. Meanwhile, Handsome young man descends the stairs wearing a police uniform.. Perfect features, Handsome and well built body.. He is Our Hero “Sanskar Maheshwari”)
Sanskar: Morning Mom and Dad
Ram: Good Morning Beta..
Sujata(smiles): Chotu.. Come..
Sanskar(irritated): Mom! Stop calling me Chotu! I am big now! What if my staff hears! Huh!
Sujata(laughs): Haha.. Okay okay.. Sanskar.. My dear son, come and have breakfast..
Sanskar(smiles and kisses her cheeks): Okay!
(He sits and starts having breakfast.. Just then a healthy man comes and salutes Sanskar)
Man(salutes Sanskar): Sir!
Sanskar(nods): Morning Pankaj..
Pankaj(sees the food and licks his tongue): Paratheeeee..
Sujata(smiles): Come Pankaj Beta.. Have breakfast..
Pankaj: Sure sure Aunty Ji!
(He was about to sit when Sanskar glares him.. Pankaj pouts)
Sanskar: Stop making faces! Kha kha k aur kitna mota hoga haan?
Sujata(hits Sanskar’s head): Sanskar!
Sanskar: huh what wrong i said! Anyways… Whats the news?
Pankaj: Sir.. ACP sir has called.. We have to leave immediately
Sanskar: Okay lets go..
Both leave..
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I know this is short but..This is just a small glimpse..
This is just a few shots story.. I will upload this story daily but it depends upon your response..
Full character introduction will be revealed in the next episode..
Do comment and tell how it is?
Main imp thing the couple.. What you want.. RagSan or SwaSan? Must tell..
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