Avneil OS: Meherbaani (in neil’s version)

**Neil’s pov**

Its almost been a year that the incident took place. Avni, carefully clutched in my arms, leaving her body behind, the soul leaving for its heavenly home. The incident came to me in a shock. The girl whom I loved, my 1st love dying in my arms struggling to say all the words she could managed to say to her parents, my parents and well to me too. “sirji, jeep ah gayi hai”. I heard dd calling me. I sighed. After that tragic incident I became a police officer but 1st I had to go for a training which lasted for 9 months and after that I became the ACP of Mumbai. I came to the jeep and sat in the front. I still remember that day how we met. I swear to god she was the most beautiful thing I have ever saw and well the most smartest girl also.

Hai Saaz Tu, Tera Tarj Main
Tu Hai Dawa, Aur Marz Main
Dildar Tu, Khud Garz Main
Hai Geet Tu, Tere Lafz Main
Tu Hai Dua, Aur Farz Main
Azaad Tu, Aur Karz Main

A boy wearing a white shirt and a black demins came to view after he parked his bike in the parking lot. He was the most handsome guy in the college. He was in 3rd year yet he was single. Ever wonder y? he had honey chocolate orbs and well shaped face cut with light, fully grown yet well kept beard. His best friends were MitAli, vidyut juhi and dd. He came near them and said.

Neil: yo, guyz. Wht’s up.

Ali: hey neil: u know today my bestie is joining our college.

Neil: really!!! Wht’s her name?

Mitali: her name is avni.

Vidyut: waiting eagerly to meet her.

Juhi: guyz, we will met them bt 1st let us go to our class or else we will be late.

Neil: u all go I will come back in a jiffy.

Juhi, vidyut, dd, MitAli: kk, bye neil.

Neil and the others parted away. Neil was walking towards the canteen when he collided with a girl. His reflex made him hold her by the waist to prevent her from falling and also to remove the hair strands tht was covering her face. He was extremely shock. Well either bcoz of his reflex tht made him to remove the hair strands, desperate to look at her face or to have the view of the world’s most beautiful girl. Well not exactly world’s beautiful girl but for him. the girl had closed her eyes thinking she did fall and was waiting to touch the ground. But when she didn’t feel the cool marble floor against her face, she opened her eyes only to look at the most beautiful orbs she had ever came across. She was healthy and had milky white skin. She had deep black orbs, hair touched her waist and a smile which was killing neil from inside. They stood like tht for who knows for how much time before breaking the eye contact. Neil straightened her and mumbled an apology. The girl just smiled at him and said tht it’s kk. She asked him the principal’s office and went from there after saying thnx. Neil stood there, transfixed, grazing about the beautiful incident before coming back to earth.

Hai Shaam Tu, Tareef Main
Tu Chain Hai, Takleeef Main
Tujh Se Mila Toh Paa Liya, Har Cheej Main
Hai Khwaab Tu, Taabeer Main,
Maana Tujhe Taqdeer Main
Tera Hua Iss Bheed Mein, Iss Bheed Mein

Neil came to the class and took his seat waiting for the other one to come and have a seat. When no one came to seat beside him, he wondered who must be the partner to seat with him. he glanced around but couldn’t find anyone without seat. The teacher came inside and then only he came to know y? the teacher was followed by the girl tht he collided before. She introduced herself as avni Ayesha and the teacher told tht she would b starting her journey with them. Avni was asked to sit beside neil. Neil and avni introduced themselves and thts how all it began. FRIENDSHIP. They started spending time with each other visiting each others house not aware of the thing tht their families were rivals of each other. Doing projects and all. Their families members also not aware of tht they were their rivals child, happeeiily accepted their friendship and thought they were perfect for each other.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

Hai Saaz Tu, Tera Tarj Main
Tu Hai Dawa, Aur Marz Main
Dildar Tu, Khud Garz Main
Hai Geet Tu, Tere Lafz Main
Tu Hai Dua, Aur Farz Main
Azaad Tu, Aur Karz Main

Time went by and their friendship grew more strong and also they developed love for each other also bonded much stronger. It was the time for the final xms. The xms ended much faster then they expected. Neil who was hell worried to propose avni or not was encouraged by their friends, comforting him by their words. After the xms neil proposed avni and she happeeilly accepted bcoz she also had feelings for him. soon they told their respective families and they agreed to get them married.

Hai Shaam Tu, Tareef Main
Tu Chain Hai, Takleeef Main
Tujh Se Mila Toh Paa Liya, Har Cheej Main
Hai Khwaab Tu, Taabeer Main,
Maana Tujhe Taqdeer Main
Tera Hua Iss Bheed Mein, Iss Bheed Mein

It was a fine summer day. Both the families decided to come to a café to talk about their child’s future. But when they came face to face each other they only badmouthed each other.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

They dragged both of their child with them and left. Both the families decided to get them married with some one else. But they didn’t know tht their friends would come to their rescue. Both avneil ran away with their friends to get married. But they got caught by their families. a huge fight was broken between their families and between them some one took out a revolver to kill neil. but before the bullet hit neil avni came n front and got shot. she fell on neil’s arms and was breathing her last breaths. she managed to fumble few words b4 she closed her eyes.

Hai Tu Hi Toh Hai Bewafa,
Tu Baarish Meri, Savera Mera
Main Tera Hoon Raasta,
Hai Kashti Teri, Kinara Mera
Hai Tu Hi Toh Hai Bewafa,
Tu Baarish Meri, Savera Mera
Main Tera Hoon Raasta,
Hai Kashti Teri, Kinara Mera

i came out of my world as i reached my destination. THE MEHTA MANSION. I ran to reach the door and and rang the door bell.she came to open the door. My avni came. She was beautiful as she was. Didn’t changed a bit. Well she did bt only to grow more beautiful.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

sab log kehte hai yeh pyaar hai jo avni wapas mot ke muh se wapas ah gayi lekin main kehta hu ki yeh uski meherbaani hai jo woh wapas ah gayi mot se larkar. Hai teri meherbaani.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

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