SwaSan OS: Hate or Love? (Part I)
Hi all..Remember me? I’m Shrinjal back..So sorry for not uploading my FF. I am not getting time for it.. I just hope I will continue it and will try my best, but I’ll be continuing after March.. So I want to present you a OS from my side..
And I can’t tell that you will like it or not, because I’m writing it in hurry and even the thought occurred to me suddenly this morning..
I know this is supposed to be ONE short, but as I’m not getting time and have to submit projects tomorrow, I’m submitting in two parts. I promise to post next part very soon!
Let’s start?
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We see a big mansion. As we go inside it, we see a couple taking pheras. They both were very happy.. As we zoom in, we see they are Swara and Sanskar.. Swara ‘s happiness had no bounds, but there Sanskar was thinking something.
Finally, their marriage is completed and after all the rituals, they are free to go to their room. As they go inside the room, Swara hugged Sanskar tightly.
“I’m so happy Sanskar..Finally we are married,” She said hugging him.
He pushes her tightly and she was about to fall but gets saved. “Yes, Finally, I can take my revenge from you,” He said smirking.
“What revenge?” Swara said not understanding anything.
“Don’t remember anything?” He said raising his eyebrows.
“That day you slapped me?” He asks.
Then she remembers..
“That day when I doubted you?” She asks remembering it.
“Yeah” He said with a smirk.
“Just because of you I lost my reputation and I wanted revenge, and now Finally, I will make your life hell” He said getting angry remembering the day.
“But I apologized to you and how can you do this..you..you..lo..love me know?” She asks getting teary eyes and was about to faint.
“You apologized so? That day I felt so embarrassed.. All were making fun of me, you cannot understand it..And about love, what made you think that I love you? I just pretended to love you to marry and make your life hell,” He said angrily.
“I know you are lying..You love me.. I know,” She said crying loudly and holding his shoulders.
“You think that,” He said and held her waist and pulled her towards him and pushed her towards the wall. Now she was between him and the wall. His bought his face close to hers..
“It’s better you remember that I do not love you and married you so that I would take revenge,” He said angrily and whispered as she was so close to him. Next moment he again pushed her and went to washroom to change his clothes. Swara sat there and began crying loudly.
“Why did you do this Sanskar.. I just slapped you.. Why did you do this…….” She kept on crying and then he came out of washroom.
“You can go in,” He said without looking at her and she went in with her clothes.
And when she came out, He was doing some work in laptop and when he looked at her he closed his laptop and saw her walking towards bed.
“Where are you going?” He asked.
“To bed, to sleep ofcourse,” She replied with a blank look.
“You will sleep on couch,” He said and went towards bed.
“Why? I’m your wife..” She said.
“So? I already told you and I want no more arguments,” He told and threw the pillows on couch for her. She give him an unbelievable look and went to sleep on couch.
Both were facing in opposite directions and Swara was weeping the whole night.
“Why does it always happens to me?” She always asked this same thing and started crying.
Precap: Part 2, Last part
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I promise I’ll update next part soon. And do tell me your views about this OS, is it a good plot or not?
I’ll be waiting…
Thanks!
Take Care..!!
35 Comments
mind blowing
fab
waiting
Thanks a lot Fariha..?
I hope this will get a good end ? waiting eagerly for next part ?? I like your writing style dear ???
Thanks a lot di..?
waiting nice
Thanks a lot Anu?
Hi Shrinjal! Remembered me… Proposed you… It was interesting! Really eagerly waiting to know what happened. And why she slapped him and was that slap so big that Sanskaar did this with Swara? How will this become a love story????
Hey Hemi! Ofcourse I remember you?
Thanks a lot dear..?
awsome srinjuuu.. welcome back
Hey Mica..How are you?? And where’s your account??
Thanks a lot dear..?
Nice.. Please post next post soon.
Thanks a lot Tara..?
loved it
Thanks a lot Pravee..?
Awesome dear……..interesting…….
Thanks a lot Tamil..?
Superb..welcome back dear..tc..
Thanks a lot dear..?
nice….. curious to know more
Thanks a lot Rini..?
Awesome dear,….excitedfor next update…Whenever u update,please send me link.Shrinju….Love u ? ?
Thanks a lot Niyu di..?
Yeah, I’ll give you the link for sure
Very nice
Thanks a lot Sandhiya..?
Fabulous start.
Loved it…waiting for next.
Thanks a lot bhaiya.. ?
nice …….
Thanks a lot Harneet..?
Oh! Sweety… Awesome… I loved ur writing style yaar… Pls sent me links as u update… Luv u???? well done sweety!
Thanks a lot Pavi?
please please next jaldi update kardo… can’t wait for it… it’s amazing…
Awesome one shrinju .. post next one soon
Nice