Some major turns – Shivay confessed his love 2 her wiffey Anika after her come back from her short term comma. Anika too confessed.
Pinky doesn’t accept Anika as her bahu but as her daughter.
She came back 2 Oberoi Mansion
ALL BECOME WELL ???
FEW DAYS LATER
IN SHIVIKA ‘S ROOM
Shivay : Anika , aaj mai busy hu to direct dinner me aaunga so no kitchen time
Aaj hotel se dishes mangua lena as u know well
Nowadays I don’t like maid’s food .
Anika : Uski koi zarrorat ni h Shivay aaj dinner mai bana rahi hu
Shivay : Really ????? Anika r u serious
Anika : Ha to isme itni khirkitor smile dene ki kya baat h
Aapko kya lagta h mai khana ni bana sakti ??
Shivay : isme lagne vali konso baat h Anika
I know about it very well
Anika : Mai bana sakti hu aur mai banaungi aurwo bhi aapse accha
Aap khud khub maje se khaenge
No ni ni aap to tab khaenge na jab aapko mileage aapko ko mangvana h mangva lijea kyoki mai aapko iska taste bhi ni dene vali ???
Shivay : Thank God ???
Anika : Omru kaha ho tum dono
Just then Omru enter
Rudra : Gud morning bhaiya bhabhi
Om : gud morning both of u
Shivay : morning omru ☺☺☺
Anika : kahe ki Gud morning meri to morning hi buri hui
Rudra : Kya hua bhabhi
Om : Shivay tune hi kuch kiya hoga tum dono ki larai hui
Rudra : Bhabhi aap bolokya hua ???
Shivay : Ooooohhhhhh hllo u both tell me 1 thing tum dono mere Bhai ho ya Anika ke
Dekh raha hu mai aajkal tum dono Anika ki kuch zaada hi side le rahe ho
Not fair ha ???
Rudra : O, kahi se jalne ki smell as rahi h na
Om nd Anika laughed loudly ???
Shivay : Shut up Rudra
Anika : Om Rudra tum dono ko ask mai apne haato se dinner bana ke khilaungi
Rudra : Really bhabhi yes yes yes aap na duniya ki best bhabhi ho ??? U r de best my superbhabhi
Om : Wow !!!!! Anika seriously I m really very excited
Anika : Awwwww !!!!!!
Mere devars kitne cute h
Rudra : Bhabhi, O ka to ni pata but u r right I m literally very cute
Om patted on his head
Rudra : U know what bhabhi mai wo boring continental dishes se bore ho chuka hu
Shivay : Tu to gaya Rudra ???nikal ja mere room se warna
Anika comes in front of Rudra 2 save him from his angry young bro
Anika : Warna kya Billu ji
Anika walks forward
Anika : Aap shayad bhul rahe h par Ab ye sirf Aapka ni mera bhi kamra h
Aur Rudra mujhse Milne aaya h so usse dur hi rahiye to accha h
Samjhe ???
Shivay What de f**k !!!!!!!
Rudra : When my sweet nd cute bhabhi is here then y 2 fear ???
Luv u bhabhi ???
Om : Ok ok an mai chalta hu
MERI art galary ka remodelling chal raha h so mai chalta hu
Bye every 1 ?
Rudra : BYE O
Shivay : Tujhe to mai baad me dekhunga bhabhi ke chamche
Meri important meeting h mai bhi chalta hu
Anika : Ha to jana h to jaiye na roke kisne rakha h
Shivay : best of luck Anika ???
Anika : bare aaye best of luck bolne wale ???
Om nd Shivay went from there
Rudra : Bhabhi mai bhi chalta hu mujhe bhi Jim jana h
Don’t be nervous bhabhi wo SSO h to aap bhi ASSO h. ………..
Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi
Anika : Ha Rudra, tum Sahi kah rahe ho
Rudra; Always ???
Rudra also went from there
Now only Anika was present there
Anika : Maine kah to diya par Mai bhi Janti hu ki mai kitni great cook hu
Mujhe to Sahi se kuch bhi banane ni aate h
Par Ab to mujhe banana hi padega
Ab mai kya karu
Sometimes later
In Shivay ‘s car
Shivay phone rings
He picked de call nd answered
Shivay : Hllo
Another side (AS) : ________________
Shivay : What de f**k! !!!!!!!!
Meeting cancelled suddenly
How is it possible? ???
What happened? ???
AS : ___________________
Shivay : nd u r informing me now
AS : __________________
Shivay : What sorry? ???
Listen from now onwards mujhe turant inform karoge
Understand
Shivay cut de call nd instructed de driver 2 move back 2 Oberoi mansion
Driver back de car
In de kitchen
Anika nd Chulbul r present
Anika : Chulbul maine challenge accept to kar liya h but ab kya karu mujhse ni ho payega
Chulbul (Cb) : Anika bhabhi kossis kariye kossis kariye
kossis se San ho jata h
Kahte h na wo
Kossis karne walo ki kabhi hat ni hoti
Anika : Mujhe pata h chulbul lekin w/o bagad billa na ???
CB : Dekhiye ga bhabhi ji
Khanna itna accha banega ki bare bhaiya ungliya chat chat kar khaenge
Anika : Thank u Chulbul ???
CB : Man me shanka lag gai Lanka ???
Anika : Kya hua tumhe
CB : bhabhi mai to gai
Wo omkara ji ne hame unke gallery aane ko kaha tha aur hum abhi tak yahi h
Anika : Ooooh !!!!!!! Chulbul tum jao jaldi
CB : Par aap akele ho jayengi
Anika : koi baat ni chulbul mai manage kar lungi tum jao jaldi
CB : To mai chalti hu
Anika : ?????hmmmm !!!!!!!!!!??
Precap : Anika’s special dishes
Shivika nok – jhok
Shivika Shivika nd only Shivika ?????
A big thank u 2 my dr ishqies because of which I inspired much
Nd able 2 write my own ff
No matter it is good or bad but u all de reason of my inspiration
Especially AASHTA DI, VERNA DI , MAHA DI, NILASH DI, VHM DI
nd u all too but a bit little than them CHANDINI , AHAANA DI, GANGU DI,
JENNY, JERRY, ANAH
sorry if I miss any name please mention in de comments if I m
As my memory is very weak nd poor in this aspect
UR ff really inspired me………..
Nd a tight nd warm hug nd thank u 2 all my dr ishqies
I know this is too large if u don’t like it please comment about it also
All comments nd suggestions r welcome whole heartedly
Luv u ishqies ???????
89 Comments
Nice epi…
Congo lily
U r first 2 read nd comment my 1st ever ff
Thank u for liking this ………..
Amayaa yeeeeeeeeeeeee I was willing to read your ff though I never mentioned it thank God you listened to my secret wish… ya ek aur baat shivika ka confession wala scene please likho na flashback me padhne me maza ayega….
Hey Amayaa what about some chulkaaraa moment in next to next episode with Rudy’s interference
Amayaa it’s up to you I will respect every decision of your’s
Dekho tumhari bimari abb mujhe ho gayi itna bara comment please sorry agar zyada bara ho gaya ho to…
Nilash di
I don’t like short comments from my dr ones but a long long 1 like ur comment
YA di u r right
I learn ur secret wish secretly nd wrote this ff
OKKK di I’ll definitely show this in precap in a new way in de next part
ND Chulkara moments with Rudy interference
Amazing idea di
I’ll surely add this
awww… my dr amayaa ak baat kahun wayse to mere dimaag se idea hardly nikalta hai but it’s you dr a very close friend of mine and ha mai bhi ye question puchne waali thi jo Ahaana ne pucha mai to bakwaas likhti rahti hu jo dimaag me aata hai wo likhti hu to tum ye mat kahna ki maine inspire kiya hai haan i secretly wished to read you ff and it happened… amayaa dr shivika mamoent ke liye mujhse aur wait nahi hota please jaldi post karo na next part…. pata hai subha se mai atleast 10-12 times tumhara first episode padh chuki hu.. ab please post the next one pleaseee…
Hmmmm NILASH DI
U r absolutely wrong
Ur ff gave me inspiration dr
Who said this 2 u that it ffis bakwaa
It is not
U r really crazy di
I m also a big big fan of Shivika so I understand ur eagerness
But di i m sorry but this is a weekend gift for all of u
That’s why
I’ll post de next part next week
I m very glad that u like my ff so much
But dr u have 2 wait UPTIL next week
Amayaa kameeni jis gun se Anika ko shoot ki tum mujhe ussse goli maar do nhi to Shivika k chaaku se stab kar do par please ye mat karo please.????????
Nilash di
Y r u saying like this
I can’t understand
Please do clear 2 me
Nd don’t say like this again
Is pagal pan ke liye mai hi kaafi hu di aap aise mat bolo na
Amayaa dr dying to read the next part and you will post it next week??? but it’s ok Sabra ka fal meetha hota hai oh nhi sabra ka fal Shivika romance hota hai… hehehehehe dr will be waiting for it eagerly and this part of your post inspired me a lot for my ff… ???? love you loads dr ???
Ooooh Nilash di so this is de reason
U r right
Sabra ka phal meetha hota h
What r u saying
I I I inspired u
Like really
Please don’t say like this
Mai pahle hi jam pagal no hu
Ab to Mar hi jaungi
Ohhh my darlo please mar mat jaana Shivika ke confession scene k pahle or else you’ll be missing the most awaited event of your life??? just kidding…. well I’m waiting for your next part and ha usse iss part se bhi long banana it’s my humble request dear???????
Nilash di
Now I m thinking 2 post de next part tomorrow only instead of next Saturday
As i got such a beautiful responses
WHAT SAY ??????????
Yessss yessss yippee…… ????? ???? mere to aankho se khushi ke aansu nikal aaye loooovvveeee you…. you are so sweet..
Woww nyc1??? plz next update soon I’m waiting… Seriously supb yr
Awwwww
Really arya I m so glad that u like my ff so much
Awesome
Thanxxx anaya
Amayaa…I saw the craziness of you here with Shivaay.. a naughty one…
and for Annika bhabhi…koshish karne walon ki kabhi haar nahi hoti… bass beijjati ho jati hai…hope bhabhi ki saath aisa na ho…and bhaiyya should help her in learning cooking in a romantic way….
Rudra toh Annika bhabhi ka mantra jap raha hai….
Waiting for the next crazy part….from my crazy sweety Amaya…
Love you…..
YA di i m really crazy for Shivay ……….
Wait wait wait as a sis only
Really di u r amazing
Please don’t say further
Warna mere next part ka pura summary hi pata chal jaega
Luv u di ???
Ha ha… Amayaa… main toh anjane mein teri ff ka Oh my maatha karne chali thi….I will keep guessing like this…for your next parts also… but I love you… just remember the three magical words from Astha Reddy….lolz…
wow amayaa wow
it was very awsome and kitchen nok jhok was really good but please han make anika’s dishwes good kyun ki she is asso so i want her to win the challenge
I m so sorry SHAB but I can’t fulfil ur wish now
I also want Anika bhabhi 2 win
But I can’t
Well dr
Wait for de next part that 1 be really khirkitor
Amaaya when did i inspired u …. aisemat kr yarr itna pyara sa cute sa likha hai aur upr keh ri h maine inspire kiya .. dusro.ka toh pata ni but maine kab kiya …. aur vaise itna cute saa writer hoga toh uske cutness uske writing mai dikhegi hi ??..
but i don’t know why j included my name but still may be u might hav found inspiration from me then a very big thanks from my side for including me in ur thanksgiving. .
luv uhh
Hey amayaa!..Well i definitely know u from ur long,long,looonnnngggg cmmnts…
Nd i was literally shocked as how could someone talk sooooo much…
Well i am really happy that u finally posted ur first ever ff…congratulations…nd its marvellous…fantastically written…eagerly waiting for the nxt…update asap!
YA bhavna
U assume right dr
I become de most talkative girl when i come 2 de TU PAGE
Nd thank u dr for liking my ff so much
YA Ahaana di u r right
Ur ff is so good which inspired me extremely ……………
Hmmmm I m really very happy that u like my ff so much
My happiness is beyond my reach ???
Hey plz post it in English plzzzzzz bcoz I don’t know any other language. ..but nice episode yaar. ..
Ooooh ho
That’s de problem
But dr de words r suits in Hindi only
That’s why
If u don’t mind , I have small request, if u can post ur FF in English I don’t know Hindi pls……….
Annanyaa dr
I don’t mind it nd i also want 2 post in English
That is easy for me also
But de dialogues r suit in Hindi only
It is nice crazy…. Lovely update dear…. Waiting for the next update…
Thank u dr
de next part will updated on next week
Amaaya dear,astha baby ke long lost sis.it is sooooo sweet. Keep it up.
Just 1 word 2 say ARPU
“Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww”
That was nice.
A big big thanks to u Archisha
Awesome update ?. Loved it totally ? Eagerly waiting for the next one. Post soon dear ? ? ? ? ?… ..
Thank u Sofia…….
Nice one?
Thanku thanku arya
I mean thank u dr
Super yaar…I loved ur ff the dialogues very super yaarrr…..
Thank u diya
Dialogues the na ekdum khirkitor ???
Awesome
Thank u rashi ???
Hey Amaaya you are such a wonderful writer. So good yaar. Loved your work. Shivika moments were too awesome. Great going yaar !! Keep us entertaining. I am eagerly looking forward to your updates. And thank you so much for mentioning my name. I will also try to give you wonderful updates. Do post soon. Thus one was fabulous☺
Awwww really Jerry
I m a good writer
Thank u dr
I can’t believe it …………
Nd this is just a reflection of ur creativity nd skillllll
Thank u ONCE AGAIN Jerry
The next part will updated next week ??
Jerry
Now I decided 2 post de next part tomorrow only
Is it a good idea or bad? ??????
Yeah !! You should. No need to ask☺
Hi Amayaa
Kaha se shuru Karu..ok will start from the devars n bhabhi moment, actually I miss them a lot, I used to enjoy aniru convo,which they don’t show anymore.. Tat made your ff unique.
Coming to shivika, I loved their convo,more than their romance, I love their nok jhok
I liked it tat u kept proper pacing between the lines, made it easier to read.
All in all I really loved ur ff.. Keep writing an pls post the link of the next part on the IB TU page..
Hoping that my an other comments bring a lovely smile on ur face?:) As u had said tat if I don’t read ur ff, u r gonna ? ?
Sorry wrong smiley.. Just wanted to put this ☺ ☺
YA Archiya
I too liked de Bhabhi Devar convo de most
Hmmmm Shivika ‘s nok jhok nd care for each other is more good than romance between them. ……..
But dr u r de member of blushing club right
Not only de member but also the head
Then how it is possible? ?????
Well dr thank u very much for loving this nd for giving ur precious time 2 my ff
I’ll surely post de link on ishqbaaz usual page
But for this U have 2 wait for a week
As i post de next part next week ???
YA archiya dr
Ur comment bring a khirkitor smile on my face
Thank u once again ???
Amayaa
If u give me blush an nok jhok in the same episode.. Than of course I will chose the blush part ??? being a member of the blush club
Hmmmm Archiya
Then wait for de next part
There ur wish definitely got completed
Nd u got both of them
Amayaa
Eagerly waiting both for iB as well as ur ff ?
Archiya
Now u don’t need 2 wait more
Ishqbaaz nd Oberoi family moments both come soon
I mean tomorrow only
Amayaa its amazing dear devar bhabhi convo was good i liked that very much
Thank u firdose for liking my ff so much
A wide smile appeared on my face
Amazing amaaya dear….loved your ff…the obro moment with anika was supurb….
Ooooh thank u so much dr for loving my ff
I m flying in air now
Amayaa u r just crazy… Aniru convo is amazing. They r the bestest bhabhi-devar! Coming to Shivika’s nok-jhok sooo cute… U know what I really loves Shivika’s nok-jhok more than romantic scenes! And the kitchen scenes r very nice dr…
But I want ask u 1question, why u will post next part next week??
Awwwww
Thank u di
YA ur AMAYAA is really a crazy girl
I too luv their nok jhok nd aniomru moment de most
Wo di actually
I wanted 2 give a weekend gift as a refreshment for all of u
De next part is ready
But u have 2 wait for a week
Oooh so sorry for this di
Heyyyyy visu di
Now I decided 2 post it tomorrow only
What’s ur opinion about this ??????
Asum
Thanxxxxx Alekhika
pls write in english
Preethi
From next part
I’ll surely post in English too
Nyc one dear…waiting for next part…
Oooh thank u dr
Amaaya omg….seriously you rocked with the first epi itself???anika and rudra?I love them they are some rare pagal combo….caring and loving shivaay??
And one more question how and when did i inspire you
Agree Chandu
They r real pagal
Aur hum bhi to kam ni h
Mental ishqies (especially me)
Hmmmmmm why all of u talking like this
Chandu u didn’t inspire me but actually ur ff inspired me extremely
Uske Samne ye kuch bhi ni
Amayaa it was awesome dear!!!!! ek dum khidki tod starting….. Shivika nokjhok was superb….. can’t wait more post asap…..
Yes banita
Ekdum khirkitor
Anika bhabhi wale style me
Ha ha ha
Thank u thank u so much banita
Amaaya .
Huhh , mai kya bolu . Tum hi bata do yr . Speechless chor diya.
Especially ani ru convo . Vo toh tumhara ff ko aur mast bana diya .
Ab jaldi post kar na . Plzz ha .
Surbhi Surbhi Surbhi
U made my day dr
Such a beautiful comment
I m dancing like mad
Thank u very much
Hmmmmmmm so sorry dr but de next part will come on next week
But believe me
That 1 will also khirkitor
Amaayaa…the way you are chirpy …your FF is reflecting the same……..i am really in awe with the crazy Oberoi moments which we miss in the original serial…this is such a fresh breeze , a refreshment from routine …go lady go… i will just say you have a long way to go….and one day when you become a successful writer do remember us………if your first shot is so awesome then i can imagine how will the upcoming ones be……….kudos dear…way to go………..
After reading ur beautiful comment
I m too enjoying an awwww moment
Thank u for appreciating me so lovingly
But wait di
” Go lady go ” ni “go girl go”
I m in 10th standard only
A big big big THANK U 2 u di
YA I’ll try my best 2 make de next part a khirkitor 1
Then i must actually write Go baby go….