Hey guys!! This is my first story ever…… and I would love to dedicate it to my favorite ff writer, Aleyamma. She inspired me to read ffs and praise the writers for their incredible stories. I definitely won’t be able to write as good as her but being a teenager, I just want to explore if I can write something good. Please drop in your valuable comments and let me know if I should continue the ff.
Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai (YUDKBH) was a show that has always been really close to my heart for the magic of the 1990s which I have never experienced myself but would have loved to. So I decided to write my first fan fiction for the magical Jodi Samaina (Sameer n Naina). I really apologize if it hurt somebody’s feelings as that’s not my intention at all. Hope you like it.
The episode starts in Jaipur with Vishakha and Vivek sitting on the dining table for breakfast and Vishakha calling out, “Sameer, come on son, be quick otherwise you’ll be late for school on the very first day!!!” Sameer is a simple and decent boy who belongs to a middle class family. All dressed up in school uniform, he looks really cute. “Coming!” says Sameer from his room. He comes down with a red rose in his hand behind his back and says while giving the rose to his mom, “Goodmorning girlfriend.”
Vishakha smiles but at the same time tells Sameer, “PLEASE AVOID TERMS LIKE GIRLFRIEND OR BOYFRIEND. We are simple people and society doesn’t use these terminologies, alright?” “Ok MUMMY!”, says Sameer in a sad tone. Vishakha and Vivek quickly hug and console him on seeing his puppy face. “Ok come on, you are in 11th standard now. You are a big boy. Come, I’ll drop you to school.” says Vivek. “Ok papa and bye mummy”, says Sameer as he goes out with his dad to school.
IN LONDON
“Naina, Preeti, come on princesses be fast or else we all will miss the flight.” calls out Rakesh, their dad. Naina and Preeti are sisters cum best friends. They both are arrogant to the world but love each other from the bottom of their hearts.
“Get up Naina otherwise dad will enter the room and start shouting right above our head”, says Preeti in a dizzy voice as she isn’t awake yet. “Hmmm”, says Naina. Rakesh enters their room and snatches the blanket off them while shouting, “We’ll seriously miss our flight and I’ll deduct the amount from your guys’ pocket money.” They both quickly get up and rush to the bathroom. Rakesh smiles and goes back.
Soon, Preeti sees Naina beautifully dressed up and sings in a flirty tone, “Na Kajre Ki Dhar Na Motiyon Ke Haar Na Koi Kiya Shringar Phir Bhi Kitni Sundar Ho”
“Stop it Preeti… That’s why I keep on telling you that you must have a boyfriend so that you flirt with him and not me.” says Naina while mocking at Preeti. “And what about you? Why don’t you search for someone who would go head over heels for you.” Says Preeti. Naina gets upset and says, “You know I don’t believe in stupid stuff like LOVE.” “Then who said that I believe in LOVE? So please let me flirt with you, my sister”, says Preeti while laughing. They both hug each other and move downstairs.
Downstairs, Rakesh, Seema, and Manika are waiting for them with big bags. “What about breakfast?”, asks Naina while she moves her hand around her tummy. “You girls look gorgeous. Anyways, you can buy something on the airport as we are already late.” says Seema. Manika quickly signs them to rush to the car.
“Will somebody tell us where are we going?” question Preeti and Naina .
Rakesh, Seema, and Manika shout in excitement, “WE ARE GOING TO JAIPUR!!”
I hope you guys liked the episode. Seema and Manika are characters added by me and I will reveal more about them in the next episode. I hope I did not hurt anybody’s emotions. Please leave your precious comments to let me know if I should write more episodes or just forget about discovering this new talent of writing in me. Stay Safe!
With Love, Shanaya
15 Comments
Good start??. Go ahead. It was short indeed but it’s okay since it is your first work. You exchanged Naina and Sameer’s economic status, that was also good thought. Try to catch up with 90’s vibe like what was popular movies, songs ,trend ,etc . It may help you to make your upcoming episodes interesting. All the best!?
Thanks a lot. I’ll definitely try my best to create the 90s vibe
I had dropped a comment for you from behalf of Aleyamma on her author’s note. Hope you will read it!
I really have no clue about this serial or this couple, but you are a fantastic writer. I wish Aleyamma reads your FF too after she is done with her research work, she will definitely love it and will be proud of you!
Naina and Preeti’s scene was funny and cute and so was Sameer calling his mum his girlfriend!
I’m telling you, you should have started writing long ago!!
Love u!!!❤️❤️ Thanks a lot for boosting my confidence.
The ff is from the very beginning, so even if u have no idea about the show, I hope you’ll find it interesting.
Thanks again
@Shanaya
I never watched this show,so I don’t know anything about the serial,but I really loved the way you started this ff . I am really looking forward to see what’s gonna happen next and how you will progress the story .
As you mentioned that this is your first ff ,so all the very best for it. Really enjoyed reading this update.
Thank you so much ??. I never expected my writing would get so much love ??
I’ll update as soon as possible since my university isn’t gonna begin until September. Thanks again
@Shanaya
MY pleasure ??.
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You wrote such a beautiful and nice episode!!!! And please I have got a request for you: please stop saying negative things about your FF that you may stop writing because of others comments, because your FF are so so good!!!, Although I don’t think anyone will write something wrong about your FF… Please update ASAP…
Please tell me you are in which class???
Once again please update ASAP
I got so emotional reading tour comment. You are so sweet ❤️❤️
Actually I have never written anything before, except school exam essays ??. That’s why I didn’t have much confidence about it. I am currently in 12th standard n will be going to university from September
I’ll write the next episode today itself and it’ll be uploaded by tomorrow
Thanks for all the love
correction: your*
I agree with all the others here Shanaya! You have a great talent inside you, so keep it going!
I loved the way you have introduced the story, made the plot and revealed all the characters, Everything was just perfect!
You have it in you Shanaya! Keep it up!
I don’t know if I will present to give in more of my opinions but I am really really proud of you!
And thanks a million for dedicating this FF in my name. Even though I personally feel, I’m not worth it, but thanks from the bottom of my heart for this reward of dedication!
Wishing you all the success! Keep going and never let anything stop you until and unless it’s something really more important than writing!
With loads of love!
Aleyamma
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Lovely opening and a very good start. Keep going. All the best. Waiting for Samaina’s first meet.
@Shesha485
Thanks a lot for your comment. Samaina’s first meet will be very soon. so keep watching
Firstly I m so so happy that u were able to post your comment. And I totally understand about the time issue. And trust me you are worth it that’s why I decided to dedicate my first ff to you coz if ur ffs weren’t there, I would have never thought about starting my own. All the very best for ur education. stay safe ❤️❤️??????