This is my first story hope u guys like me ..
Characters of story ..
Sanskar- a hard-working man … He is 21 year old… ., loves her wife . his world started and end on her wife. He always wanted her wife to be happy ..
Swara – sanskar’s wife.. She is very confused personality. Loves her hubby .age -20
Sahil – SANSKAR’S best friend . He has a crush on swara . he frequently used to meet swasan ..
Lucky – SANSKAR’S brother.
Ragini- lakshaya wife .she doesn’t like swara.
Plot..
Sanskar’s POV
So finally after 5 weeks I’m returning to my home , to my shona. It’s very hard to pass these 5 weeks without her. I’m badly missing her and I know her condition would be same. But this work is also important na. I didn’t inform. Her about my arrival.. I want to give her a surprise. She always wanted a sweet home.. And I didn’t tell her that I had saved money for ours house.. The Construction work also started. I’ll give her surprise.. When our dream land completed
I still remember the first day I saw in school. I just pass out 10th she was new in school .. Most beautiful girl I have seen. Every boy wanted her to be his girlfriend. I was little bit shy. But thanks to my chemistry teacher who made us partner in project. He started spending time with her… We started falling for each other.. But I got shocked when I found out that sahil , also like her. On our farewell party , sahil mixed alchol in her drink . thank to him because it she kissed me in front of whole school ..
Situation became worse after that , when our parents got to know about it. I saw her after a week in the hospital, like me she was badly beaten by her parents.. He swallowed . Cheeks , marks of belt on her hands.. I couldn’t able to tolerate it. And we decided to eloped . after that we get married.. My bro helped me a lot .. But ragini don’t know Y she was against our marriage.. Leave her
Finally I reached , it was raining outside.. I was fully drenched.. I knocked the door.. It was more than 5 minutes. I was getting panicked ..” Is she alright. ” I called her she was not attending my calls. I cried out ” swara.. Jaan “.. Finally she opened the gate ..
I immediately huged her ” jaan r u OK .. ”
” I’m perfectly alright hubs.” She smiles..
“Where were u, I was very much scared “. I enquired .
” hubs woh I.. ”
” jaan u are fully drenched . r u were in the terrace ”
” ya hubs.. ” she placed her head on my chest ” I was badly missing u ”
” me too jaan . ” I looked towards her Rosy lips.. My wife looking damm hot in wet sari. I touched her cheeks.. And place my other hand on her waist.she closed her eyes I was about to kiss him
” hello guys .. ” sahil came towards us . with a smiling face.
” what r u doing in my house , at this time.. ” I noticed he was coming from terrace . he was also fully wet.
” hubs. He came here to meet u ” she explained
” ya sanky . it’s too late meet u tomorrow ” he left ..
After dinner .. We went to our room. She wear a nighty .. She was standing before mirror .. Combing her hair.. I back hugged her .. Slightly removed her hair . ” u r looking too hot ”
” thanks for the compliment hubs ” she smiled ..
I started kissing in her neck.. She is also loosing her control .. But she immediately stopped me
” what happened jaan, it’s so many days.. We were far from each other.. Today I want to make love with u ”
” not now hubs. I’m very much tired .. ” she said and then laid down to her side..
This was the first time she denied me. But I find something fishy when I saw sahil ,in my house his smile was saying to her that he was also in the terrace.. ,, no no sanskar how can u think this about swara .. U know for u she left her family .. I looked towards her.. She is looking like an angel.. I couldn’t bear this sahil any more. Only tolerating him because he is the owner of our house.. Moreover he helped me in my hard time.. But I can’t deny the fact that he had a crush on my wife. . Although he said now he is move on but I can’t believe him. As our dream house would be completed I’ll take my jaan with me.
I kissed her cheeks ” good night jaan ”
I slept hugging her …
Guys this is my first attempt.. Please encourage me.. If u like this. . only then I’ll continue it.. Your lovely friend nilu ..?
27 Comments
Hehehehehe u made mistake in the beginning.. * her. .. It’s must be his but anyways it’s nice
NYC…pretty interesting dear…
Thanks dear
so swara and sahil are cheating on sanskar..nice..
May be
Don’t sepetate them
Okie
Interesting… Continue
Nice
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nice..
Interesting dear
Thank u
Is swara cheating on sanskar
Plz don’t separate swasan
It’s a small very small Walla request plz accept it
Awesome chappy
Wait for sometime u will get to know everything
huhuhu.. i smelt something fishy too.. omg..
Haha? something is fishy
Interesting..swara cheating sanky???
May be or may be not seebu ?
interesting
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nice..
Nive…but hope swara is not cheating sanskar…something fishy
I can smell something is Fishy !!! let it be… thnk u..
Okie ????
Awesome