Hi guys iam ur suspense queen. Iam again with emotional episode. I hope u like this. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads
Let’s start
Kabir propose sanchi.
Kabir -i luv u sanchi will u marry me
Sanchi – i luv u too.
They hugged eachother.
Days passed love makes life beautiful. They like to get wet in the rain and gets drenched in love.
They like to laugh together .
In church
Kabir – i will always love you until the end of time
Sanchi – Kabir i will love u forever
Everthing seems to be fine for some days but one day.
Veer – sanchi u r so beautiful
Sanchi -thank you Veer. I like u
Veer -really u like me then y u having relation with that khadoos.
Sanchi – rehna parega pyar karti hu
Veer – so u will sacrifice everything for him
Sanchi -yes
Kabir was listening everything is was teary eyed and went. Sanchi went to him
Kabir -Sanchi do u really love me or just
Sanchi -or just wat u mean Kabir
Kabir -or just time passing
Sanchi gets angry and slapped him and went with tears. Kabir knew he was wrong.
In the morning
Kabir waits for sanchi to cum. Sanchi came.
Kabir -Sanchi I’m sorry I was just angry pliz forgive me
Sanchi – Kabir i think I’m done with u .I need a break with u
Kabir was shock
Kabir -wat Sanchi i told u i love u
Sanchi went without listening. Kabir doesn’t give up.Though sanchi hurts him. And refuses to talk to him.Kabir still believes that sanchi loves him and believes one day she will talk to him.
After one week.
Kabir -Sanchi pliz talk to me
Sanchi -kabir iam said I’m done with u. Just leave me alone. If you love me pliz go away.
Kabir gets teary eyed
Kabir -u want me to leave na. I’m going sanchi forever. I luv u and always will. Aakri Alvida.
Kabir leaves sanchi. Though she loves him too. .her ego and stubbornness dnt let her speak to him.
After a month
Sanchi feels Kabir absence she misses all the joy…fun and laughter. She misses being loved. She misses Kabir very much. She realizes her mistake.
Sanchi calls Kabir
Kabir – hello
Sanchi gets teary eyed as she heard his voice a long time.
Kabir -helo sanchi i know u called wat happened r u alright.
Sanchi doesn’t talk
Kabir -kuch toh bolo Sanchi r u ok .Oh u dnt want to talk to me. OK bye. Aakri Alvida
He was going to hangup just then he heard sanchi voice his tears flows from his eyes.
Sanchi -kabir where r u
Kabir -at home wat happened r u ok y r crying
Sanchi -kabir i want to meet u pliz
Kabir gets happy
Kabir -really
Sanchi -yes will u cum
Kabir – i promise I will cum.
They gets happy and cut the call.
On that day
Kabir goes to shop he buys a rose bouquet and heart shaped balloons, chocolates a teddy written I LOVE U and ring.
Kabirs is happy and dances
Bg plays
Aaj me upar aasman niche aaj me aage zamna hai peeche.
Kabir pov -Finally I’m going to meet u. I love u Sanchi.
Sanchi waiting in Garden where Kabir proposed her. She is desperate to meet him.
Kabir cums running and closed sanchi eyes. She feels his touch.
Sanchi -kabir i know it’s u
Kabir -Sanchi thank you for talking to me
Sanchi cries – Kabir iam really really really sorry.
Kabir -for wat
Sanchi -for not understanding ur love.
Kabir -it’s ok sanchi i can’t see tears in ur eyes. If you cry again then aakri Alvida.
Sanchi – kabir I missed u so much and I love so so much
Kabir- i missed u too so so so much and I love you so so so much.
Sanchi -kabir wats this
Kabir took ring and gave to sanchi. They hugged eachother tightly and ate lots of chocolates .
Kabir -sanchi i don’t believe that I’m with you.
Sanchi – Kabir this is not a dream.
Exactly at that time sanchi phone rings. She saw Kabir missing.
Sanchi – hello wat
Sanchi runs as fast as she could. She reaches near road.
Sanchi eyes got widen tears flows from her
eyes she kneels down and cries badly.
Veer -sanchi last time pliz see ur Kabir
Sanchi -no no i can’t
Isha -sanchi aakri baar dekh lo tum aage nhi dekh paoge
Pragya – sanchi Isha is right pliz see him
They encouraged sanchi
She somehow manages to see Kabir lying in the road with pool of blood. She saw chocolate ring teddy and all things kabir bought for her lying with him. She saw her ring missing from her fingers.
Man -beta immat rakho.
Sanchi -yeh sab kese hua.
Man -beta he was very happy and crossing the road just then truck hit him and he died same time.
Sanchi was crying badly she recalled Kabir and her moments .she saw Kabir caressing her face and kissed her forehead and said Aakri Alvida.
HIS LOVE IS PURE AND EXTERNAL. HE DESPERATELY WANTEDTO MEET HER. EVEN DEATH COULDN’T STOP HIM FROM MEETING HER TO SAY AAKRI ALVIDA ON LAST TIME…
HE GAVE HIS BEST TO SAVE THEIR RELATIONSHIP BUT SHE DIDN’T CARE WHEN HE TRIED TO CONVINCE HER. ..
…BY THE TIME SHE UNDERSTOOD THE VALUE OF HIS LOVE. …
…HE IS GONE FOREVER.
THERE IS NO LOVE WITHOUT FORGIVENESS.
AND. ..LIFE IS FULL OF UNCERTAINTIES. ..
TRY NOT TO HURT OR LOVED ONES ,
….BECAUSE….A MOMENT OF ANGER COULD BE LIFETIME PUNISHMENT. ….
THE END
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LOTS OF HUGGS AND KISSES TO U GUYS AND LUV U LOADS
Regards
Ashnita
16 Comments
This was amazing. But u left me crying. Pls don’t write these sad os. ???take care
a moment of anger could be lifetime punishment
well said dear
loved it
awesomeee
This was superb
But u mad me cry seriosly tears made their way from my eyes
But the os was heart touching
Just awsm…it ws so emotional… almost cried…nd ur last dialouges were vry touchy and mindblowing…
So emotional OS my suspence queen. I agree at you every point dear. Though i am a fun loving girl but i like sad stories from bottom of my heart .You had done great job .Lots of love to u dear.Happy Dussehra to u dear.
Niyu.
Ashu dear, I literally started crying……..& what u said in the end is absolutely correct……bcz sometimes we may not know the true value of a moment until it becomes a memory………….thanku sweety for this heart touching story……..luv u a lot dear……….
It was Superb….You gave a beautiful message through this.. so hats off to you…. Take care.
It’s amazing dear superbb
It made me cry…… Loved it very much
U again made me cry.Why these tragical OS dear???
Plz plz plz give a happy ending though through a sequel.
Wowww so awesome…….but really heart touching ………ashi love uh ………and really ur msg is conveyed beautifully !!
Hey ashi awsome but rondu os yaar itns hearttouching serieously nd u r ri8 ego nd anger r humans most powerfull enemy making decision when u angry nd based on ego always spoil ur life nd gave a life time punishment.. u loss ur precious most valuble thing i.e realtionship or loved one… Nd plz itna mat rulao ki baadh aa jaye plzz post nxt happy sappy os nd yaar aisi egoistic lill bit agar sanchi show me hoti to dono boys ki jaan bach jati..hehehe post nxt one tc
awwwwwww yes it was so emotional os……
come back with another & keep writing dear…
You made me cry dear….?…it was very heart touching one
Hey u made me cry dear super
Ashi dear… Rula diya yaar…. Yeh baat toh sach hai ” kisi ki ahmiyat uske milne se pehle aur uske khone k baad hoti hai “….bohot hi khubsurat kahani thi… Love u yaar… Tumhare tarif k liye alfaz kam par rahe hai…. Kamaal ho, lajawab ho tum…..