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AANKHON MEIN TERI – Episode 5th

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EPISODE 5th

Recap :- As ahil planned to visit Riya and find out about Naina , Luckily , He gets to know that Naina is Riya’s sister , He gave her proposal to be his friend , But she declined


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AHIL was standing at the temple and Abhay calls him

Abhay ” Ahil , I’m really sorry Yar ! What happened last day ”

Ahil : It’s okay , If friends will not fight then , Who’ll do that !

Abhay : Hahha ! Come ! We’ve a little surprise for you

Ahil : Wah ! my Abhay has a gift for me .

Abhay : You’ll love it , Come we’re waiting for you.

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Rahul hugs him ” Bro , I’m very sorry ”

Abhay : Really bro , we should have understood your feelings

Rahul : If you want Naina to be your friend than it’s okay

Ahil keeps his hands on their shoulders ” Thanks ! I’m really lucky to have companions like you ”
Abhay : This is for you

Ahil : what is this , In this envelope ?

Rahul : Open it , Hurry up

Ahil opens it and finds few tickets in it , ” What ! Tickets to IPL ” – He exclaimed with joy .

Rahul : Yes bro ! We’ll rock it , All our crazy friends are going to join us .

Abhay : We’ve Planned everything , A basket of snacks , Juice is all ready , Wow !!!

AHIL in his mind with a Joly mood ” Wow God , I just Prayed to you and you heard my prayers , Now , Somehow I’ve to make Naina ready for it ”

AHIL : How many tickets are there ?

Rahul : 5 , For us, three and Gaurav and Rishi .

Ahil : That Gaurav, if we took him along then He’ll just shout and every moment he’ll say ” Hey guys let’s have a selfie ” , We’re not going to take him along

Rahul : Okay We’ll see about Gaurav , Rishi is great !

AHIL : Great really , Remember , Last time Rishi accompanied us to Cricket stadium , When his team loose the game , He started crying loudly , Whole crowd was laughing on us .

Rahul : Shit ! it means my money went into vain .

Ahil : No not at all, We have two friends with us , They can accompany us .

Abhay : Who !!! Wait ! Are you thinking what I am !!!

AHIL : Yes ! You got it right !

Abhay : No , No , Please Riya , Please no .

Rahul : Ahil , You know how it’s like to go to a match with girls , Please

AHIL : Okay then all that pocket money which your mom gave , It would be useless .

Rahul : No no , Okay we’ll take her along .

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RAI’S HOUSE …

Riya was sitting at sofa , She had hidden her face with a scarf . Kamini is ordering Pinky to clean floor nicely .

RIYA : Mom , Should I call , AHIL .

Kamini : Pinky , See there’s dirt , What are you doing Ha !

Riya : Mama are you listening to me ?

Kamini : Yes , You can call him if you want to

Then AHIL and his friends reached their Home . Ahil ” No Aunty there’s no need , We’re here ”

Riya pops up ” Ahil , Abhay and Rahul you all ”

Kamini : welcome son , Welcome , Come , Come in .

Abhay : Hi Riya how’s you .

Riya : I’m fine , Sorry AHIL yesterday I couldn’t meet you , You came home and …

Ahil : It’s okay , Riya .

Rahul : Well we’ve a little surprise for you .

Kamini : Wait ! First you all sit down and wait ! pinky get some snacks and tea.

Abhay : Riya ! We’ve Planed to go for a Cricket match , IPL

Riya : what ! wow I’m really excited for this , Mom can I join them

Kamini in her mind ( If Riya goes with AHIL then maybe he likes her and then my daughter will get a rich husband )

Kamini : Yes ! yes ! Why not

Ahil whispers something into Abhay’s ears ” Tell her about our Plan ”

Abhay : Well, Riya , There’s a problem , Actually , We’ve got 5 tickets and we are 4 , One is still left .

Kamini : Can I go ?

Riya in her mind ( My mom is crazy , Whenever she has something for free , She gets insane , If she came with us , Then how’ll I enjoy with Ahil )

Riya : Mom , Think about Dad .

Kamini : Ya ! you’re right . Actually I’ve to go to meet my Friend today , Sorry

Rahul : It’s okay aunt , What should we do now .

Ahil : what about Naina , Riya’s sister .

Rahul : Yes , She can join us

Riya : But Guys , What’ll she do there , She can’t see anything .

Ahil got a little angry ” So what , If she can’t , Riya , Don’t you have feelings , She’s your sister ”

Kamini to herself ” Riya ! What ! Are you doing , The friendship will break before coming into effect , Show them you’re good girl ”

Kamini : Riya , Girl , Take her along ( Sweetly )

Pinky : But , Do I need to accompany you all .

Kamini in her mind ( See, Now a maid also is speaking , She also wants to go )

Riya : pinky if you’ll come then who’ll do the household chores , Stay here !

Abhay : Don’t worry Aunt , We all will take care of her , Ahil is there for Naina !!!

Everyone got shocked .

AHIL makes it clear ” He meant , Riya , And we all are there for her , Don’t worry ”

Riya : Okay fine , When’s the match .

Ahil : At 6 pm sharp we’ve to reach there

Rahul : So we’ll pick you up at 5

Abhay : Okay then , Let’s go now , Bye .

Ahil : So we’ll meet at 5 pm , Bye .

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AHIL : Come one guys , Hurry up , Everything is packed

Abhay : Ohh bhai ! We’re going for a cricket match not for a picnic

Rahul : Don’t try to make him understand , He has his friend , Accompanying him , Now he won’t care for us .

Ahil : Rahul are you mad , You’re my diamonds okay , My two best friends .

Abhay : Haha ! Come let’s have a 3 man hug .

They three hugs each other and Shouts ” WITH YOU MY EACH MOMENT OF LIFE IS LIKE HEAVEN , WE REMAIN FRIENDS TILL DEATH , THIS IS OUR WISH ”

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Naina : No I won’t go anywhere without you

Pinky : But now it’s decided you’ll have to go

Naina : No I won’t , I’ll say him no .

Then Kamini comes and hears that . Kamini enrages , She goes to Naina and Hold her chin and squeezed it .

Kamini : Listen girl , Ahil wants you to come , Don’t say no , I don’t want that he gets to know anything about our family matters , So you’re going okay .

Naina was quiet .

Kamini : Pinky see that she’s ready on time , Okay .

Pinky : But how’ll she handle everything

Kamini : Shut up , Just do what I say , Otherwise also if she got lost over there , We don’t care .

Kamini leaves .

AT 5 PM….

Abhay and Rahul reached RAI’S house .

Riya comes out holding a big bag , She’s wearing a dress , A lot of make up , And a hat .

Abhay and Rahul comes out and sees Riya .

Rahul giggles and murmurs to Abhay ” Are we gonna take a cartoon with today ”

Abhay : No actually she’s gonna entertain the people there when there would be a break in the match , So that they don’t get bored .

Riya : Hi guys , So how am I looking today .

Abhay : Very , Very …( confused )

Rahul : Hot ! Beautiful , Just like a princess

Riya :Thanks , Where’s AHIL

Abhay : At the last moment he’s to go somewhere urgently , But don’t worry he’ll reach there on time .

Naina and Pinky comes .

Rahul utters slowly to Abhay ” There comes Ahil’s Naina , She’s so pretty ”

Abhay: Ya ! Remember the Plan

Rahul : Yes !

Abhay : Actually Riya , We’ve come with driver , So in our car only 3 can come , And your bag also needs some space , So Ahil will pick up Naina later .

Riya : what ! no ! i can wait .

Rahul : Riya , Try to understand , We’ll reach there first and then you can book a good seat with Ahil .

Riya : Okay ! let’s go , You’re right !

Riya goes and Sits inside the car .

Abhay goes to Naina : AHIL will come to pick you up , Just in a few minutes , Hope you don’t mind .

Naina : It’s okay , Thanks .

Naina Goes to her room..

Rahul : Abhay you’ve to sit with Riya at back .

Abhay : Rahul , You’re 1000rs /- is left to return me , So you’ll sit with her .

Rahul : How bad are you ?

They both Sat and left .

After sometime , AHIL came ..
He goes and Nocks the door ” Naina come on let’s go ”

Naina opens the door ” Sorry , In don’t want to go anywhere with you ”

Ahil : Why ? Your mom ordered you , Isn’t it ?

Naina : I don’t want to go .

Ahil : wait let me call Kamini aunty .

Naina : Okay ! let’s go .

He helped her to get into the car .

Ahil was driving the car And Naina was sitting beside him .

Ahil : Naina you’re a silent girl isn’t it ?

Naina : I’m not silent , My mouth has been made shut

Ahil : Don’t worry , You can talk to me

Naina : I don’t talk to strangers

AHIL : Strangers ,But we’re friends isn’t it

Naina : But I said No

Ahil : But yesterday , It was Valentine’s day and you with your hands tied this Friend thread on my wrist .

Naina : I only want to say thanks

AHIL : Thanks , In friendship , No sorry no thanks .

Naina : Drive fast and don’t talk .

Ahil : I heard you singing , Your voice is so good .Sing something

Naina : I don’t want to , Why your car dosen’t have a radio .

Ahil : I’ve but my heart only wants to listen to your voice , Please once

Naina : No thanks , I won’t .

Ahil : Okay as your wish . Hey , The route forward is little disturbed , Fasten your seat belt .

Naina : I don’t know how to ?

AHIL : Okay let me help you

Ahil stops the car and brings his hands forward to her to hold the belt . He touched her shoulders .

Naina : Don’t touch me

AHIL : But , Belt .

Naina : I don’t need it .

Ahil : Okay , But later don’t blame me .

He again drove the car . Ahil ” you seem to be very innocent , But you’re very dangerous , Ha ! ”

Naina : what do you mean !

AHIL : Nothing I meant , you’re very amazing .

They both started arguing , Suddenly , A child comes in front of the Car , And Ahil turns the car and stopped it forcefully .

Naina got goosebumps , She started huffing .

Ahil holds her shoulders ” Naina are you okay , Are you fine ”

Naina : I’m okay , But what happened ?

AHIL : Just be in , I’ll come .

He goes out and saws a child crying , Thankfully nothing dangerous happened .

Ahil : Sorry, Please stop crying , Are you okay ?

Child was constantly crying . Ahil ” Where’s your mom , Dad , Are you alone ? ”

Child hardly spoke ” Mamaaaa !!!! ”

AHIL thought he might be lost and his parents must be searching for him , He decided to wait for sometime .

Ahil : Come , Come here .

He took him near his car .

Naina : what happened ?

AHIL : This child is lost , See how’s he crying .

Naina : Do something , Make him smile .

Ahil : wait ! , He sings a song in croaky voice ” Twinkle Twinkle little star , How I wonder what you are ”

The child became more hoarse . Naina ” If you’ll sing like this , Then even animals will start crying ”

Naina puts her hand forward and puts her soft palms on his face .

Naina sings in her melodious and smoothing tone ” Aa leke chalu tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Aa leke chalu tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Milti hai jaha khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
Milti hai jaha kushiyan ”

The child becomes calm and hugs Naina .

Ahil in mind ” You don’t know Naina , Your pure heart , Beautiful eyes , Soothing voice , There are so many qualities in you that can leave even a little child spellbound ”
Then his mom came finding him , Thanks them and went away .

Ahil : Now shall we go

Naina : Drive careful now .

The car took to road again …

Ahil : You know this is for first time a girl is sitting next to me .

Naina : Really

AHIL : Yes ! And your voice , Wow , I think I should throw away the radio .

Naina : Why , I’m here for the first and last time , Now I won’t come in your car .

Ahil : Really , Let’s see .,,

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