Me: Frst of all u guys shd clap fr me…
Seriously!!!
I m wrtng this epi fr third tym..two tyms it had been deleted by mistake…… bt still i m wrtng….
Thnk u all of u fr cmmntng on my all epis… specially on d last one.. it had record cmmnts..
Thnk u all of u fr liking n apprecitng my story as well as my poem….. i wll surely wrt another ff jst to keep in tch wd u guys….
Suman is very much distrbd by d behaviour of shravan…. hr patience lvl was almost at an end….
Bt shravan didnt left any chance to taunt on Suman ……
One day Suman entrred the class vry hurrilly.. n suddenly dhapppppppp
Suman banged wd shravan……
They had a cute small eyelock…..
D
Shravan broke d eyelock on hooting of class….. he lft harshly…..
Suman heard him scoldng his frns after class……. she,was happy today…. after a very long tym she had sweet momnt wd his shravan…
After that day…. shravan’ behavioir started changing…….
Me: His taunts decreased….. n slowly get completely ended……
She was happy…
Bt the prblms get chnged……
Now shravan’ s frnds cmmnt on her. Suman was very shy typ. She nevr answrres thm… even her frnds smtym anserwed thm in anger. Bt Suman never……..
Suman jst look on shravan. He looked helplessly on his frnds….
Bt he nvr stop his frns… Suman was happy to see this ltl changes…
Shravan somtyms becm rude bt the strang thng was that his eyes n behaviour express two diff things… hus behaviour may be hard smtym bt his eyes were always in side of Suman .
One day ……..
Saket a boy who study in d same coachng wd Suman n Shravan cm to Suman —
” Suman i need your bio copy….cn u gv me??”
Suman was srprised to listen this.. saket had no interst in study. Thn why he was asking abt it??
Bt Suman was kindhearted. She said yes to him…..
Suman boght that copy nxt day bt saket didnt asked fr it……
Suman didnt gave….
She kept watchng saket behaviour… after four days again saket asked fr d copy. Thn Suman told him abt her reason fr not giving her copy. He agreed that hee will ask it tmrw.
She noticed that SharavaN was listng all cnvo.
A
Next day after noticng thm she got to kn that the copy was actalyy asked by shravan …
She,was extramly happy…..
N the whole copy exchng process was ovr cute…..
She finally made shravan kn that she knew the secret betwren saket’ copy asking…..
Those days again made her dying fr him. His act was too cute…… n actually funmy too….
Now she was sure that not every thng hv ended berween thm. Their untold love for eachother was still alive( i hv said love for each other is a bit cnfsn bcoz shravan hv not cnfssed his feeling.)
Shayad next epi last ho…
plz guys cmmnt n spprt……..
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Without reading clapping for u this has also happened with me 3 times anyways let me read
thnx ufaq π
Awesome inspite of being out of station u wrote and plzz don’t end I love it and u also anyways shravan is also good and biooooo copy haha love u di
thnx ufaq a lot……..
btw hw cn u cll my shravan good… i can only call him….
jst joking…. π
love u too yaar
OK ur sharvan is akro that’s OK hahaha
Nope seriously ur sharvan is also good
ohhhhh next epi will be last π will miss it alot
but today epi was nyc finally sharvan melted π
and plz reveal the truth of that convo
thnxxx angel…
bt i wll start the new ff jst aftr this…….
and clap for u hahaha π
Oh…I appreciate you for writing it again n again,….Good that you will come back with another ff….But next episode the last one??Oh,so something really bad is gonna happen..because now everything is almost fine na…Sometimes he might leave from the school forever…Just a wild guess…Anyway iam eagerly waiting for the next episode…?
Shravu was cute…Hope he will not hurt her again..
hi abhi thnxx a lot fr readng it…
i hope i wll get same support on next ff
thnx yaar π
@ufaq i,ll definitely read can u plzzxx provide me link
No I can give u the name
Love has brought the season of spring
amazing..nd hats off yaar.. 3 times..
wow..
thnx yaar……
i was really trd wrtng yesrerday……….
bt readers happiness give me strenghth
superb… awesome… your story touched my heart…. (L) (l) shravan was cute π π .. really what say u r superb… next episode is last π π .. but i m happy that u r coming with new ff .. yee π π
thnx yaar…….
hope u will like my new ff
of course …
hi abhi ufaq angel….
where t u guys????
heyyyyy π
i,m in books hahahaha physics total headache
oops sry to dstrb thn…….
rply whn u got free……
no physics is murdering machine yakkkhhh i hate it
Here iam…feeling disturbed by this moderation…?
ya really they take much tym fr their so called moderation……
I was also busy in books now free sorry
n also hi bhoomi….
Hi lovy… Can i call u lovy ??
ya of course of bhoomi…….
btw in which class u r??
i m waiting for my 10 th board results .. what about u ??
i hv jst passed 12 th…..
i,m free π whats up guyzzzzz
all good…
aur hw is your exam gng on???
by mistake i wrt exams in place of studies… :p
all good.. hw is your stdy gng on???
studies well yar wbu
@ Abhi.. i m waiting for your ff (edkv) .. when r u posting it ?? plz post it soon…
I will post it tomorrow….Sorry for the long gap di…Was quite busy with classses,..
Also when will your result come??
no sorry …. its ok….. my result is on 1 june …
All the very best for result…??
Thank u soooooo much…. π π π
Ohh…that was an awesome story..is it her real life story??
When is your birthday guys?@angel,lovy,Bhoomi,ufaq…
ufaq u hv told in your story that your b day is cmng… tll us na
9 march & yours ??
29th March..?
my is on 8th march
…..
wow most of us r born in march………
hmmm .. u r right lovy di…
23 rd feb…
2 June guys 2 days to go
U r just too good
Good episode plz don’t end it so soon
thnx gravita……..
actually it is a true story. n the story this much matter yaar…….
oppssss sorry i got busy ohhhh u all r in march
i,m in jan 1st jan
nyc date yaar…. happy new year
Bhomi plz don’t call her di she is my di only tell her na cutey di sorry yr I am little bit possessive about my sibling sorry bhomi
@angel…jan 1,
..aww…thanks quite rare…wow,…on new year eve,..u can celebrate ur brthdy..wow.?
angel thats good u can enjoy 2 eves together i much say u r money saver from ur birth hahaha
hahahahahaha
ahhhhhnnnn this telly upddates i am feeling like to murder them who the hell has suggested them the phenomena of moderation hell with that person they r seriously getting on my nevers idiots fools
awsm cmmnt yar … dil ko chu liya…….
kabhi kabhi lgta h ki moderation wale kharrrate maar k sone lgte h
Hahaha.i lvd it??
hahahahahaha yeah @abhi and lovy
and u knw thn every one wishes me happy new year instead of birthday to tease me π π
good idea i wll also do that π
hahahahahaha kya yar π
That’s a nice idea to tease?
π
@lovy aj ka epi long chaheye plzzzz last h na π
ha u r r8 angel…..
bt i m sry i will post d nxt epi on 2 june….
i hv my entrnc on 1 june…. n i wll be whole day in train tmrw…….
one thng in last epi i will wrt wd point of view of Suman. that is every whr i will use ‘i’ in plce of ‘ Suman ‘ ….. it will perfectly explain separatn of shraman… m i rt??
ohhhhh 2 ok will wait for it π
yeah that,s good idea u should use i
sharman seperation nhhhhhhhh π
in my last epi shraman wll get separated………
in real story they r seperate fr 2 years, 2 months.n 15 days……………….
yup i will w8 for ur epi on my birthday lov u
Yaar.plz dont do it…i ur lyf did u evr cnfss ur lv to him????eagrto kn
aaawwww so cute……….
really love u yaar π
Yes,…will wait for it…feeling sad that someone else also got a sad ending wala story,…but will they(u) reunite after 2yr 2mnth 15days..??
I told you guys na i wrote a story n got deleted…Actually that story is about my another best friend…whom i got after loosing sanskar(name nahi bata sakti)…
This newbestie was so caring…but there also some problem occured…But thankfully we are not separated..but this situation is worse than that…what can i say for this situation??ahhh”Apna hokar bhi apna nahi keha sakta”That’s the situation..?
Will post it soon..?
ooo yaar….
its ok sab thik ho jayega…..
tum apne sare crsh ko best frn kyu khti ho… jst joking dear…….. π
Yuup di is ri8 that’s why sweety its better to stay away from boys seriously they r headache my friend is suffering from the same headache so don’t worry whatever this feeling is u name it urself because I don’t have experienced it and remember stay away from boys…… Joking yar
@lovy,…Most of the boys to whom i hav a crush are my bestiees…Not all,only two 2,one sanskar…n other,about whom iam gonna write….
@ufaq…not all the boys are headache…some are there..who is caring,irritating (cutely)…?
wrt that story fast……
Haha
.nice qstn drr…crush ko bestie banana acha hai.koi puche tho besti par dil mein crush..nice idea @abhi
abhiiii post that soon na excited to knw
but tell me who will u chose btwn sanskr and other π
see love has that much pain islye i keep it away π
@ ufaq ok i will call lovy not di .. ok ?? No need to say sry its all right π
@Lovy All the very best for your entrance (y)
thnx bhoomi…….
@angel…most difficult question…But I will choose the other one..not as a boy friend or lover ,i will choose him as a best friend?…..Not sanskar,Maybe because now me n sanskar are not in contact…
ohhhhh π but when will u post it?????
Saturday or Sunday..?