Hii darlus tq all fr ur cmnts…actually today obe function in my home i thought of not updatng but aftr tis i dnt knw if i can update till tuesday as my mom wil be thr if possible i ll try to upload..ok nw to the stry…
Months passed…it was 8th month fr pragya and alia…they were very weak but abhi and vijay were not leavng them alone fr evn a minute…one day all were sitting and talkng…abhi and vijay were forcing them to eat..they were troubling…
Abhi:fuggy..pls one mouth..pls eat na baby pls…
Pra:iam not baby…
Abhi:iam not tellng u…iam tellng my baby to eat…
Pragya stared…
Abhi:accha ok dnt eat me by ur stare…eat tis pls baby..
Pra:y r u torturing me abhishek..
Screen shifts to alia…
Alia:ohh god tis vj is killing me somebody save na…
Vj:alia..y r u takng my life fr eatibg tis…pls eat dear…
Alia:u wil tell easily u knw hw much difficuot to eat tis..no salt..no spicy..nthbg..its like eating mud…
Vj:arey but u hve to eat tat oly…doc has said na…
Alia:ohh vj..pls..y r u…ahhhh…
Suddenly she screamed in pain…
Alia:ahhhh..vj…ahhh..its..its paining…ahhh dadi…
Vj:alia..alu..wat hpmd…ohh god…alu…wat hpnd…
Dadi:i think she has got delivery pain…
Vj:wat…but dadi…she s oly 8 mnths na…
Abhi:arey nw no time to talk all tis..we ll take her to hospital cme fast…fuggy u stay here..careful..bulbyl take care of her..
Vj carried her…abhi and purab drove to hospital…
Aftr sometime they reached hospital..vj carried her and rushed inside…
Vj:doc..doc..pls attend fast..she s oky 8 mnths..but she got pain suddenly..
Doc:dnt wry we ll see…
They took her inside ward…time passed…doc came out…
Doc:mr.vijay…she s already very weak…also nw oly 8 mnths..so i dnt knw hw much strong baby wil be..but still we cant leave…we hve to do her delivery nw…u sign tis form tat u take full responsibility of evrythbg…
Vijay stood shocked…tears were flowng frm his eyes…abhi shook him…
Abhi:vijay we dht hve time..sign fast…we ll believe tat nthng hpns wrng…
Vijay cane to senses…
Vj:i knw nthng wil hpn to my alu and my babies..i ll sign..u carry on doc…
Doc:gud dbt wry we ll do our best..
Doc went in…alia was screaming in pain…vj was not able to hear tat..he cried…abhi and purab consoled him..dadi amd tanu came thr…
Dadi:abhi..is she fyn..whr s she..
Abhi:dadi..relax..doc is seeing her…she s critical oly byt dnt wry nthng wil hpn to her…tanu y u came here leaving fuggy…
Ta:arey bulbul and nikhil are thr..dnt wry…
Time passed…suddebly alia let a huge scream…aftr tat theu heard babies cryibg..all got happy…happy tears started flowng frm all eyes…doc cams out…
Doc:congratz mr.vijay…u hve got a boy and a girl…
All were very happy…
Vj:thank u doc…thank u so much…
Suddenly nurse screamed frm inside…
Nurse:doc..doc..both babies r finding it difficult to breathe…
All got panicked and rushed in…alia too gained conscious…doc did some treatments..
Alia:wat hpnd to my babies..bacchon..mumma ko dekho..ohh god…
Doc:dnt wry since tyey hve born in 8 mnths itself tos prblm…they hve to be kept in incubator fr some 3-4 hrs…
Dadi:wat..hw can u separate a new born baby frm a mothr..
Doc:no maa..tats nthbg..jst sometime we ll bring back again..
Abhi:dadi…dnt wry..tats nthng…
Nurse was abt to takr them..alia stopped…she took them and kissed them..vijay too kissed them…ten she took..alia cried…all consoled her…abhi called and infrmd othrs at home…all were very happy…
Pra:abhishrk..pls i ll cmr..i hve to see them..
Abhi:no fuggy..u shld not travel nw…
Pra:abhishek..pls..i want to see tat tiny babies pls pls pls…
Abhi smiled…
Abhi:ok wait i ll cme and pick u..
Pra:no need i ll cme wit nikhil and bulbul…
Abhi:no no u wait…i ll oly cme and pick u…i wnt trust anyone in tus…
Nik:ok ok my responsible husband..u iyself cme and take ur wife..
Abhi laughed…
Abhi:buddhu fuggy..wbt u say tat phone is on speaker…
Pragya laughed and cut the call…aftr sometime abhi came and picked them…
As soon as they reachd hospital..pragya got down frm car and rushed…
Abhi:hey fuggy wait dnt go alone..i ll cme…
She dnt listen…abhi ran and came..as she stepped on the stairs it slipped…she shouted..luckily abhi and bulbul caught her…she got tensed…she was nervous…abhi gve water fr her to drink…aftr she drank he started his anger…
Abhi:dnt u hve sense..iam telkng na iam cmng..ten y u r rushing..tat too do u think u r a kid..cmng fast..dnt u hve any sense idiot..wat of smthng had hpbd..
Pra:iam sry..but ntyng hpnd na…i was very eager to see babies…
Abhi:haan..fr tat u ll risk my baby life…
Pra:abhisgek..its our baby…
Abhi:haan be crct in tis alone..irritating idiot…
Pragya got angry..but she knw tat it was her mistake…she was sad…abhi walkd away in anger..aftr gng few steps he came back…he gve hand fr her to take her..pragya smiled…
Abhi:dnt smile iam still angry on u oly…i came oky fr my baby…
Pragya pouted and stared…she ten walkd wit him…they reachd room and saw alia lying dull…
Pra:arey alu dbt wry…in few hrs they ll bring baby…anyway congratz dear…
Alia:thank u bhabhi…but i dht evn spebd a minute wit them..
Pra:dnt wry jst 2 more hrs..ten tgey r always urs…ok…
She kissed her forehead…she looked at abhishek…he turned away in anger..she felt bad…
Abhi:pragya…i think we can leave..cne we ll go abd see babies and go home..u ll become tired..abd u hve to take tablets…
Bul:wat a miracle jiju u calld dii as pragya…
Pragya looked at him sadly…abhi gestured her to cme soon…she webt sadly…they reachd baby room..pragya felt bad to see them in incubator…but they were so cute..she was admiring them..she then kissed them…
Abhi:lets go…u hve to take tablets…
Pragya stared and murmured "kadoos"..
Abhi:wat..
Pra:nthng…
Abhi got smile but still he was angry..he took her without showing his smile…she left sadly to car…
Screen freezes wit pragya sad face…
Hope u all liked it…i knw many askd fr abhigya scenes but since i must end in 2 epi i dnt hve time sry..but in nxt epi u ll hbe one abhigya scene fr sure…tq all fr ur love and support..keep supporting..have happy weekend..see u on wednesday i think..if possiblr i ll gve in bwn…love u all…stay blessed..bye??????
And in tis epi i want each and evry one my readers abd silent readers to cmnt pls..evn if it is one wrd its enough but pls cmnt…since iam gng to end in 2 epi i want to knw hw many read my ff so pls cmnt dears…
Precap:pra"abhishek..tis s too much…u r angry in mumma but u ll talk wit bacchu huhh..whr cms ur baccha without me…"abhi "bacchu..tell ur mumma tat tis tricks wnt wrk nw..iam very angry on hr
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I’am one of ur silent reader. Commenting for the first gym…
U FF is superb n plz continue!!!
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Sry itz tym*
Superb dear
super epi dear……………
happy for 100 th but sad 4 ending
miss it badly dear…..this one of fav ff…………
love u lot n kiss 4 u dear………….
Superb di..
Choo cute epi di..
Happy weekend di..love you..tc
Nice….
Nice…..
Nice
Hi saranya di I am commenting for the first time.your ff is wonderful I m going to miss this badly
Tq madhu maha di lucy priyanka akshaya darlus love u all a lot???
Superb!
Di pls don’t be without writing,u pls continue to write di!!pls!!I can’t be without reading this story,so pls try to continue!!
Nice yaar superb…
Superb di such a beautiful episode di but felt sad that u r going to end this in 2 episode ??? sèe u Tuesday di tI’ll then bye ???love you di with load of love and hugs ???
Tq aliza divya varsha nithya dears love u all?????
Hi saranya…. I’m juz addicted to this ff… I wait for ur updates…. Plz don’t finish it…. A small request… N r u from Chennai???
Tq so much dear but i hve to end it i dnt knw abt starting anothr ff but i ll surely gve some os ts wenevr possible sry da love u????and yes iam frm chennai nanganallur whr r u frm dear?
Hi darling???
Rocking epi as usual???
We’re close our 100 epi…yaayyyy! But sad to know its gonna end soon???
Still hoping you continue after that….or atleast come back with new story…
Sorry for not commenting regularly…been a bit busy….but i have caught up on all ur episodes.
Take care dear….love you????
Hi darlu tq so much its ok i undrstand abd i dnt hve idea abt starting anothr ff as i hbe lots of prblms but surely wil gve os or ts wen possible and wil gve anothr ff during nxt leave love u darlu muuaahh?????
Superbbb
Superrrrrrrr……… Early waiting for next episode……
Hi di..am i silent reader..bt since u said its gonna end n u want us to cmnt i m here nw….i jst luv ur ff..n jst hope tat it could continue..bt if u r ending it pls do continue ur wrks on abhigya plzzz di
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hiiii… dis is d 1st tym am commenting .. ur story is sooo gud.. i luved it to d core…it is close to my heart.. wenever i read ur episodes i feel upp… it’s full of luv,caring, emotions.. package of all in one..u narrated it in a lovable manner..& u know 1thing.. ur ff is d 1st ff i read in tellyupdates.. i liked it & started to read it daily & den i started to read all other ffs too… really.. really… great job.. well.. congrats for 100 epis.. & 1 morething.. try to write new ff.. vl miss ur ff.. than q for giving a niceeee story…
Awesome storyyyy ??????????
Super yaar…I really liked ….may your other ff release soon
Hi,i m aso commenting 4 d 1st time………ur ff is superb…….keep on writing…….
it was awesome akka no no more than awesome but akka doesnt it seem so soon to end this one u know that i am ur crazy fan of ur ff how will i live without this? how will my day will be bright without ur ff pls akka continue it or start new one with the continuation of it pls pretty pls sorry akka comment panna mudiyathathukku so so so sorry 100 sit ups for it ok for not cheating i am doing ten wait………. see i finished dng ten for each sit up one dot now add ten will come hehehe love u akka keep uploading and keep smiling as i love to see u smile love u….
Awesome epi darlu di …u wrote such a cute n sweet epi..I really really love ur ff..happy that u reached hundredth epi..but sad that ur ending..it.ur ff was one of my most favourite di !! U r a wonderful writer n ur epis r always rocking..but I too know u have personal problems too.like I too miss many ffs nowadays because I either have exams or school assignments.. But u write so beautifully even having difficulties that is a greatest thing!! Pls di if u r free try to write any ffs or os cause I love them!! Love u sooooo muchhhh di!! Take care n keep writing!!!loaded of hugs n kisses fr u!! 😀 🙂 😉 …
Hello ,I’m a silent reader of ur story
I had read all episodes without missing
And this is 1st time I’m commenting
Not only this epi all are suberbsuberbsuberbsuberb???
But missing ur story
Oh my Darlu… you really gave me a great shock.. what… you are going to end it in 100 episode… oh.. so sad… really miss your ff..look how many of them love your writing.. please come back soon with another ff dear.. you can do it.. please.. please.. please… but congrats for reaching here.. stoleing our hearts… love you lots… ?????
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Finallyyyyyyyyyyy !????? My Wish is gonna get fulfilled another time !????? My All Time Fav Staranya Is gonna hit Century ???????????! Woaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh ???????????! Lets Partyyyy !??????????
I am Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Sooooooooooooooooooo SORRY di !? I couldn’t comment from long back due to unavoidable reasons . But then I never missed reading your updates . Sometimes read 2-3 updates together !
You are One Amazingggg Writer as well as a Lovable Sister to me !???
I am soo dammn happy now … ???
2 more to go … I am waitinggg it . Will miss This ff a lott . But then as u promised to start a new ff I would make up my mind to love that one too . Love U so much !? and byee for now.
My Staranya’s updates were and are Superb as always !???????