hi everyone…aytac here again…………….i hope u all are fit and fine…….guys at the end i have something for u…..
so first of all read the os:blessing
life is full of blessing……….mankind is the one who makes their life complicated by themselves…….otherwise god has made our lives full of blessings.he told us what is wrong?and what is right?and now it depends on us how we spent our life……….here is an os………abhigya are married and they have son named adi…….and he is 2 months old only..
scene starts from trio are sleeping .abhigya on bed ends and adi between them……..
.voice over says:zindagi mai sub se important kiya hota hai?family…..right……ye in ki choti si duniya hai……(what is most important in life?family……this is there small world)
sun rays hit abhi eyes.he wake up and kiss his son forehead…………when he kiss him.he opens his small eyes…………..he picks him and says……….
abhi:hmm…..so u are already awake………..
kid smiled…………..
after sometime pragya wakes up and sees abhi and adi playing ………….she kisses adi and asks abhi to get ready…….as they have to go for shopping…….
abhi:early morning……….are u out of your mind fuggi? i am not going this much early……….
pragya stared him and says .i said na……….thats it……….
abhi sees adi and says .yr ……..common na……….jldi se baraa ho ja……..
pragya smiles at him and left……..
he says .han han…now laugh ………smile……….as much as u want …my time will also come…..(hns .lo ………..smile………kr lo…jitna chaho………itna hns ….lo………..mera bhi waqt aye ga………)
voice over says:laughs……….this is common ………this is the scene of every house ….because wifes are born to win………..and husbands have to bow down………..but u all know what?this is the real blessing ……….real happiness……….(ye tu rishtey ki khubsurti hai….)this is beauty of relation
pragya enters the room and abhi comes towards her and says:
teri ankho mai kayi khwab dekhey hai
(i have seen many dreams in your eyes)
teri sanso se jurey hr din ko mai ne itna jiya hai
(i have lived this much every day connected with your breaths)
bus……. jo dil ki baat tum se juri hai wo tum pr khatam
( the heart talk connected to you …. ends on you)
janey kaisey…… janey kaisey
(i don’t know how…..)
pragya smiles and says……..oh .common………my poet …….he also smiles at her……..
abhi:i know i know ..u love my poetic avatar………and winks
pragya;oh …please ……..are u ready?
abhi:ji ji……….wife ji…………lets go………
voice over says ;life ……is full of blessing………..we feel it………when people whom we love …….daily reminds you that u r the biggest blessing of life for them…………
u know what …….what nice ……honest …sincere ……..people wants………they just want love ….they want a friend …who is sincere with them……..who loves them just the way they love ……..they don’t want money……….they don’t want fame………..nothing………they just want honesty and sincerity from their friend or loved ones ………..nothing else
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one year passed………
now adi is of one year…………today is his birthday………..
abhi and pragya are so happy ………..they are busy in arranging party ………..
voice over says:birthday ………..hmm…………….the most beautiful day …………the most important day ………….for our parents……………because we are a blessing for our parents…………they are the one who daily reminds us that we are a blessing for us………..and on birthday ………..their happiness knows no bounds ………..because they remember the day when you were born…………..
abhi;fuggi.when adi will 10 na……….then…………i will invite the whole world………
pragya laughs:why?
abhi:arrey…….i want everyone to know that ……i want to tell everyone………..that after me .my son will be the next rockstar abhi…………and smiles….there is a shine in his eyes……
pragya smiles ………
voice over says:parents bhi na……….when we are only one na .they want us to be 10 ………and further………they expect from us from our childhood…that one day we will …..a famous person………..they just think about us……….they spent their whole life for our career ………ooo…………..ok…lets attend the adi birthday party…………
abhi and pragya and adi ..cut the cake…………there is different kind of happiness………..there is different kind of shine in abhigya eyes……………
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after 10 years:
now adi is…….11 years ………..they are living a happy life ………..just a happy family…………
now adi is going to school……….and after coming from school……..
adi;mammaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……………………………………………where are u??mama…………………………………………….where are you?
pragya is busy with her 2 year old cute princess…………….
adi sees her ………but pragya was busy ……so she didn’t listen adi’s voice……….
adi goes to his room………and started crying…………..
pragya comes to the room…..and sees adi crying and asks what happen?
he didn’t reply……….pragya caresses his hairs and asks
what happen my prince……….
adi;prince mother don’t love him anymore .because she loves her princess not me..and started crying………
pragya hugs him and says:
u know beta…….who is called a mother?
adi:prince mummy is called mother……….
pragya smiles……….not only prince but princes also ………u know what beta ….mothers have a biggest responsibilty………she has to grow her child………she has to keep her house maintain…………she has to handle her all relations at a time……..u know its to difficult…….one mistake……..only one mistake……can break your relation…….forever…and for humans nothing is more important than relations ………..and if she lost her one relation for the sake of other relation …..then it hurts beta……….because for mothers every one .every relation is equal….
adi is just admiring her ………and hugs her …….and says:
sorry ………mama..next time i will not say like that………..
pragya kisses his forehead and says beta…….today u have say sorry ……but next time if u will do that and again say sorry na ..than it will not work…because sorry means ..after that i will not do that again ……..ok understood……
adi:yes maa………..
pragya:ok now tel me .why were u calling me…..
adi;areey maa……….when a child returns from school na……….he wants to see his mother first …….
pragya hugs him ……and smiles …..
abhi was standing at the threshold ,,,,,he smiles and enters the room……..and says….
queen prince talk finished ….so welcome king please ………
they both laugh and says;
welcome king ………..
abhi picks adi and kisses him and says:
prince ji……u only wants to see your mother after returning from school not your father……..
he says ..prince see his father in the evening ……..when he will return from his so called studio
abhi:hey u ……..
adi ran from theree……………..
abhi runs behind him…………………..
there is echo of laughter in the mansion……………….
voice over says;life ……this is called life ………….when u have a quueen …………….a king ……..and prince ..princess……life becomes a blessing by itself………bus .reality is this ………family ..family …….and family………….for kids parents are blessing and for parents kids oue blessing……….its better to live ………laugh……..and eat ….rather than crying……..and complaining………….just enjoy your life…………but remember one mistake …………one misunderstanding………….can break all the relations ………..and you are the only one who can make your life blessing or hell ………..so kindly …..take care of all relations ……..because every relation has its own place …….every relation has its own beauty….so just enjoy your life………….
the end
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so ………..here is the last os ..of aytac alp……..from now on…………..no os…….no ff…….no ts……no writing……because bus…u all know very well………so here i am leaving the world of tu………..but not this world people………ab tu tb hi choro gi jb mar jao gi………..but now i can’t write anymore……so …….here is something for all of u
surbhi:hmm……gigi………you are the only one ……….who forces me to join this world………..you are first one who force me to comment ………….and your sof…………my life…..seriously……….just ..no words to describe that ……wo bus ik jadoo hai jadoo…………jo bhi padhey ga pagal ho jaye ga…………like me………..and yr ….mujhe muaff kr dena mai comment nhi kr pao gi……….pta nhi padh bhi pao gi ya nhi ……….because tumhara sof agr padh lu na tu .dil hi nhi krta chorney ka ….jb tk 10 dafa ladh na lu na tu ..maza hi nhi ata …….so wo jadoo kr deta hai mujh pr ………..hmm………. ….and i don’t know when i will be back……….
but i have something for you…….
asmano se utara noor hai koi
asmano se utraa noor hai koi
aisa lgta hai ke
hoor hai koi
asmano se utara noor hai koi
hnsti hai tu sang teray
phool khil jata hai
asmano se utara noor hai koi
tu jo chehra uthaye tu din nikalta hai
asmano se utara noor hai koi
aisa lgta hai ke hoor hai koi
somiya:han ji ……..madam ………ap se kiya khey hum .bus yhi khey ge ……..ke ap hi wo shks hai jinho ne hum se likhna ka kha ………tu hum ne likh diya…….bus itna hi likh sktey hai kyun ke .bus….humein likhney ka shoq koi nhi hai bus tu ne kha tu …likh diya ………han tu teray bhi papers honey waley hai na tu .best of luck!!!!!!meri duein teray saath hai……in sha allah .top kri gi top ..and u khush girl………hhaha…………..aww,,,,,,,,so enjoy your life ….khush rho ..jo bna hai bno ….phir ye lahore ko bhi dekh lena …..hahaha..mujhe pta hai tu ne kon sa ana hai …….
here is something for u:
ishq phele tha
ya ashiq pheley
aye moshoq tu…….
ashiq phely
ishq ke haath lge hai jb se
aisey madhoosh phirey hai tb se
ishq dil ke dr pr aya tha .
han ya tha .yun ya tha……
so hum nzr utarey ,…………
haye re hum ……….
sadqey tumhare ………
haye re hum sadqeu tumhare ….
ishq ka ik hi wird hai
ishq mashoq ke gird
hai ye becahain hai ye tabiat ……
ishq hai yai ya drd hai
is trha aj miley hai sub se
dhoondtey hai kiya aisa jag se
ishq dil ke dr pr aya tha .han yun aya tha
so hum nzr utarey …..
haye rey hum sdaqey tumhare……………
haye re hum sadqey tumhare………………
tumhare ..tumhare………..sadqey ……….tumharey…………
ye bhi teray leye ……..
schi si hai ye tarrefien dil se jo mai ne kri hai
jo tu mili saji hai duniya meri humdum
ho asman mila zameen ko meri
teray naam pai meri zindagi likh di meray humdum
na seekha kbhi jeena …teray bina humdum………..
ok itna kafi hain………mojey mar………
maya:han…….ib i hope u are fine ……..its being a long i have talk to u ……i guess everything is fine …….i have read your updates…..yesterdays game ..that was so ……i have read all…………u na ….such a ib ……so ….be happy always ………here is something for u
zindagi gulzar hai
hum ko iss se pyar hai
zindagi gulzar hai .
ye ishq ka darbar hai
kisi ke gham ko batna yhi
pyar hai
zindagi gulzar hai
ye ishq ka darbar hai
yha ghamo ko palna bekar ahi
han ,,,bekar hai…………
zinadgi gulzar hai ..
chalo ye bhi mana ke apno se behtar hai ajnabi …….
zindagi gulzar hai
aliza;aloooo…………paper honey waley hai .tu concentrate on your studies ok……..just focus on your studies…….good girl…..because u have only these 4 years to make your life …ok .so beta …..just concentrate on your studies,,,,,,,,,hmm….aur ye tumhare leye
yha titliya muskrati hai
yha jugnoo jb jgmagatey hai tu
rang bn jatey hsi
ye mana ke ankho mai anso hai
dilo mai bus basi bebasi
yha rastey dushwar hai
.aur manziley uss par hai .
magar issey jeenay ko dil tiyar hai …………
so .common girl .u can do it…………my prayers are with u!!!
reshu:i hope teri hnsi abhi tk chal rhi ho gi….hnsti rhey .musjrati rehey ,,,,,khush rhey aur hum kiya keh sktey hai……..ye teray leye
jeena jeena ……..
dehleez pai meray dil ki jo rkhey hai tu ne qadam
teray naam pai meri zindagi likh di
meray humdum
han sikha mai ne na jeena teray bina sikha teray bina humdum……..
nive;hi……heloo………..yr u didn’t show me your creativity…….ok koi nh jb ao gi wapis ao gi tu dekho gi……….
teray mast mast ………do nain …….meray dil ka le gye chain ………….
hahahahahahaha…………..bus itna kafi hai ……………hahahahahahahah i don’t know why choose this song for u……..
so guys ………enjoy .and many others writers ……u guys are rocking .keep rocking………..so bye everyone…………..
stay haapppppppppppppppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy…………………………….alwayssssssssssssssss………………………………keeppppppppppppppp………………..smiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilliiiiiinnnnnggggggggg…………….
guys i waannna say something ………..
life mai problems chltey rehtey hai ………problems tu life ka part hai .tu it dosen’t mean ke ap life ko enjoy krna cho do …….first of all keep your problems aside .even mai tu kehti hun…dustbin mai phaink do ………..just enjoy life …….don’t let your problems ….cover your life ……let life blessings covers all problems ……..iss se phele ke problem ap ko draye ke
dekho mai kitni bari hun
just tell your problem that
ke mera khuda kitna bara …………
so enjoy life ……..and don’t let others people be the reason of your sadness………because u all guys deserve to be haappyyyyyy.aur jb kbhi sad ho tu just read the sof …………one and only sof …………..tu my prayers are with u all ……..keep laughing and make others happy….give your time to your loved ones because they may not tell u that they need your time……. nothing else ……so give your precious time to your loved ones……byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…………………………………………love u all…………………………..
teray naal pyar hoya
dil beqar hoya
teray naal pyar nibhanwey mai ana hai
sajna .way sajna,,,,,,,,
way sub kuch chor ke …….mai ana hai ………………..
so i will be back ….but not as a writer.because ….i am not a writer………………hahaha………..ok ……luvv………………..u……………….alll…………….
15 Comments
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Awesome os
It’s just Awesome…hattsoff to u Aytac !.I’m feeling so much happy by reading ur Os..Keep Rocking…stay blessed dear… waiting for ur Re-entry
Its awesome but so sad y r u leaving dear but anyway love u waiting fr u????
Aytac di loved it diawesome di wowwwwwwwww but saaaaaaaddddddddddd that its your last os all the best di for your bright future life hope you dont forget this choti of yours i hope you remember me di heres this for you
A mysterious writer who hided came into light as a butterfly n spreads colour to all places n gave joy to those who saw it now returning back to its place …….
OYEEEEEE PAGLIIIII,ITS JUST AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!JO CONTENT THUNE EXPRESS KI NA………….THATS REALLY VALUABLE………..LOVED IT SOOOOO MUCHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh Aytac I just saw ur name and thought of reading your OS as it’s always different and right now I am not really free to read ffs or any other thing but then once I saw urs…then I just read it but in the end u gave me a shock!
Ya it’s been a long time that I talk to u! I miss our crazy talks yaar??
And the song! Zindagi gulzar hai is always my favourite series and song?????? So i have to give this for u in return ???????????? and u are Angel Aytac who always makes other happy with ur VMs and photo edits???
I would also like to dedicate a song to u:
Dear friend and my silent reader,
Here we go with the song….
Ye duniyan hai badi haseen
Samet lu isse yahin
Jama le rang hai zameen
Nihaar lu kali kali
Jeene ki wajah bana
Zindagi main rang la
Tu bhi uth jara hawao ki tarha
Leke is pal maza
Ab na thahar zara
Magal ho matang hoga, banjara
Rang rang rangaa re, rang rang rangaa re
Rang rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re rang rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re, rang rang rangaa re
Rang rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re rang rang rangaa re rang
Ye duniyan hai badi haseen
Chanda ka chain chura ke pagal kar de na
Suraj pe chao chada ke badal dhak de na
Chanda ka chain chura ke pagal kar de na
Suraj pe chao chada ke badal dhak de na
Ab rukna yahan
Ramne ko hai jahan
Tu chahak jara parindo ki tarha
Hai ye teri subha
Jhoom le tu dil tushaar
Are pyar ke le rang hoga, banjara
Rang rang rangaa re, rang rang rangaa re
Rang rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re rang rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re, rang rang rangaa re
Rang rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re rang rang rangaa re rang
Ye duniyan hai badi haseen
Ye duniyan hai badi haseen
Samet lu isse yahin
Jama le rang hai zameen
Nihaar lu kali kali
Jeene ki wajah bana
Zindagi main rang la
Tu bhi uth jara hawao ki tarha
Leke is pal maza
Ab na thahar zara
Magal ho matang hoga, banjara
Rang rang rangaa re,mmm aaaa..rang
Rang rang rangaa re rang rangaa re rang
Rang rang rangaa re,mmm aaaa..rang
Rang rang rangaa re rang rangaa re rang.
How was this? Hope u like it and don’t say u are not a writer…u are one and someone who writes wonderful writings!
All the best for ur future endeavours and studies especially! Take care and bye! Hope to talk to u soon???
Awesome os
Hey I was very happy to see ur is but you gave me a shock saying this is ur last os we all gonna miss u so much!! But pls come back soon na
awsm OS…i loved the way everything is portrayed…but i will literally miss uuuuuu…..
I really blessed to read this loved it so much
?????????????????????????? sagar si aankho me Teri nasha sa chhaya hai behki si ankho me Teri khusboo ko jagaya hai tu joo…. palkein jhuka de to saaya dhalta hai aasmanoo se utara noor hai koiii…. mera fav song fav serial fav story sab fav kar diya mujhe hi dedicate waisey the os was awesome multiplied by 100,00,000 aur haan waiting for you eagerly ????????????
Superb OS?????
What is this…you are leaving?
Hope you dont mean that 🙁 and you will be back soon….till then take care dear???
It was differently different???????????? and uniquely unique????????????? and then the song u dedicated me???????????????????? Love u????? will be waiting for u…..
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