The Abyss-Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi
Prolouge
The sound of rain drops echoed around the mansion. It was the month of July so it was a common sight in Mumbai. In the stillness of late afternoon, a heart raged as the tears collected in his deep brown eyes.
Another day ,alone. His head rested on the so-familiar table looking outside watching the raindrops as they crashed against the window-sill of his own personal gallery. His brother was out with his hate-love partner; his lips smiled as he thought about them. His younger brother & sister were having a fest at their college so were preparing for it. On usual days, he welcomed this kind of solitude but today he felt lonely; something his therapist had advised him to avoid.
His only source of motherly affection- his dadi had taken ill all of a sudden that morning & was at the hospital; he was worried, scared. He was intimidated by the fact that the fragile lady can leave them any time. He shuddered at the mere thought of it, his fear almost overwhelmed him. Hastily, dazed, he picked up the bottle of his prescribed medicine kept near the table & swallowed one, taking a huge gulp of water. He walked restlessly through the length of the room trying to calm himself. Emotionally over-whelmed , he sat huddled by the window sill as his tears rolled down
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Hello This is Aashi. I’m a new member here & this is my first fan fiction, actually my only piece of writing other than my school essays. I’d be very grateful if u read this & comment your views.
Thank You everyone,
By Aashi.
41 Comments
It is awesome dear… Please continue
Thank u so very much Nikita di
Plz continue to read and comment ??
Superb start dear. Please continue soon.
Thanks Asmi di
Hope u would the story
Keep reading and commenting
It’s abt Omkara right?? But Ishkara or gaukara or just Omkara??
Yes its about Om
Read the nxt chapter to know more
Thanx for commenting
Keep reading & giving ur views on the story
Nyc prologue
Thanks di
Keep reading ?☺?
Aashi dear you are a incredible writer……the way you expressed your ideas and imaginations into words were just beautiful………looking forward to read more of your writings dear……
Thank u, Thank u
Aap sab ki hi to kripa hai ?????
Beautiful style of writing…
Really excited for upcoming parts…..
Waiting dear?
Thank u di…. Will try updating soon
Good start dear…
All the best…
Thank you Zaveesha di
Will try updating soon ???
Awesome
Thank you ?
Amazing start, dear.. looking forward your upcoming chapters..
Thankx Ishu di?
Will update soon ??
Awesome yaar… Pls continue ….
Thank you Sagithya di
I’ll try not to be late
Thanx for commenting
Fantastic
Thank u… Di nd happy birthday again… ???
Thanks a lot Aashi, love you and I’m waiting for your story?????
I loved it….ur writing style is awsm…..loved it……eagerly waiting for nxt episode…..post it asap……
Thanx Yashu…. ????
Will try updating soon… ???
Superb start, Aashi. ??☺
Intense and thoughful Om, just as I like him
Plz update soon……
Thank u #di…. ???
Hope u like d story…. I’ll try updating soon…
Awesome start Aashi…sorry for posting my opinion late…but i loved the prologue and i am looking forward to read the next episodes….way to go girl…all the best !!!
Thank u… VHM di…
I’ll try updating soon
Nd hope u like d story… Nd take care of urself… ???????
Amazinggg prologue dr…. Waiting 4 nxt…
Thank you so very much Banita
I’ll try updating tonight 😀
Nice one dear
Thank you shivika di
I’ve updated the 1st chapter; it’s in pg. 7
keep reading & commenting
Awesome
loved it.
Its Om.
thank you Fenil bhaiya
nxt part is updated
i’m in love with your writing. please post chapter3 asap. waiting 🙂
thank you so very much Samm
Great start…
Thank you Ankita di
Ok found it ?You have the gift of heart-touching expression Aashi. The words you use to describe Om’s emotions and condition are so clear and vivid. Really nice!
I’m glad you found it as I am not able to provide the link
hope you like the upcoming chapters