Hi Guys Dis is Reihana..Hope u all remember me..If not koi prob nahi…
i wil introduce now . dis is reihana @ riya..Girl who wants to be happy always..and wanna enjoy everything which was given by my lord..i already wrote FF on Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon 1 in the name #KyaHumareBeechKuchHai…Dat was my first FF…And i loved it so much..
After a long tym now i am back with my OS
i think dis intro is enough for me…
now we will get into my OS..
I am very huge fan BarunSobti..am really obsessed with him and i proud to say that…So i thought to write an OS on his series Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon 3
I am in love with this couple AdNi…
ok lets start
This is story between AdNi..They are a newly married couple…
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In Advay Singh Raizada Mansion
Now its 11.55 p.m
So its tym to sleep
But wait someone is there who is still awake yet now
yeah that is our Adavy Singh Raizada lying in his bed and he is looking at his wife chandni who is lying next to him..
advay sirf chandni ko nahi par baar baar clock ko bhi dekh raha hai..
A : hw could u do this to me chandni?
dis is my first bday after shaadi..hw could u even forget it??????
Advay’s Mindvoice : y are u thinking lyk that..she is tired of doing all work, so that she slept..or Maybe she wanna give you a surprise
Advay was getting so many thoughts and he thought to wake her up.. He takes his hands towards her face..but
chandni hold his hands and smiled with her eyes closed
Advay thinks that she woke up to wish him..
chandni…chandni…said advay
but no..she was doing all these while sleeping….she looked so cute and advay forgot all his complains about her and got mesmerised by her beauty..
And advay hold chandni’s hands back
Tym : 12.00 a.m.
he was continuously starring at chandni’s beauty nd he didn’t notice the tym..
Tik…Tik…
Someone interrupted Advay from looking chandni by knocking the door
Cheeku… Cheeku….Nani called advay
A: haan nani aara raha hu
Advay opens d door and went towards nani
A: nani ab tak soyi nahi aap?
N: hw could i sleep?? hamesha i wanna wish u on 12 ‘o clock ryt? aur cheeku, janamdin mubarak…
A: Thank you nani
and he took blessings from nani
N: Hamesha khush raho beta
Advay gives her a smile
Janamdin mubarak ho bahiya…mein aaj ka din tanatan kardungi….said murali
A : thank you and i know u will
Shirpa : Happy Bday sir..
A: Thank you shirpa
N: cheeku, chandni kahan hai??
A: voh..voh …washroom gayi thi
N: she wished you first ryt??
A: haan nani…she wished me first…bas abhi gayi thi
N: ok ckeeku..bohut der hogaya…go n sleep..wil meet tomo morning
A: ji nani..
Nani, shirpa and murali went back to sleep ..
Advay closed door and saw chandni now he realised that chandni forgot his bday..
Advay is seriously very angry about that…
but he knows the truth actually chandni was really tired…as a newly married couple AdNi needs to do lots of rituals..so she might got tired by that…aur apni pati ka bday bhool gayi
he goes near to chandni and said slowly aise cutie patni se mujhe gussa bhi nahi kar sakthi…after saying dat he kissed her on the forehead….and went to sleep
In the morning
Advay and chandni were still sleeping..
chandni woke up by rubbing her eyes..
she smiled at advay who is sleeping next to her..
She went near to his ears and said gud morning Rowdy Professor..
Advay woke up by hearing her and pulled her towards to him..
C: chodu advay..bohut kaam hai mujhe..i wanna go
A : Aise kya kaam hai..Anything important?? (still hugging her)
(he asked her by thinking dat she finally remembers his bday)
c : haan..nani said yesterday dat guest are coming today to see us
A: bas yahi???
C : yes..aur kya??
A: Nothing….he said it with little angry
C : aap bhi na??
chandni went to washroom to make herself ready
A : chandni still u didn’t remember??? kaise patni ho tum???
(after sometyms)
advay was still in his bed and thinking how to make chandni to remember his bday
C: aap abi tak so rahe hai??
A : haan..yes
C : kya jawab yeh , utiye..go and get ready
Advay gets an idea to make her remember…
A : chandni, dis is august
chandni gives him puzzled look
A: dis is august month
C: haan august..toh??
A: toh kuch nahi katto gilheri….said advay and went from der
chandni was puzzled y he asked about month??
(In the kitchen)
Nani asks maid to prepare everything which advay would like…and she thought to ask chandni to prepare carrot halwa..
bcoz dat was his fav..and she wants chandni to prepare dat.
Nani: chandni beta…
C: ji nani..aarahi hu
chandni came to kitchen
N : chandni beta..i said them to prepare everything..u just make carrot halwa.. ok??
C : ji nani..i will
( why to cook so many items…maybe aaj bohut important guest aane wale hai and she started to prepare carrot halwa, she too know dat it was advay ka fav )
chandni finished preparing carrot halwa..she took small amount of halwa in a spoon..
aww chandu..u r d best chef…no one could do this???
chandni…chandni…mera white kurti kahan hai….advay called chandni from the dressing room
it will be in the cupboard..teek se dekhiye…said chandni
no it was not der…said advay
chandni went to the room…
chandni…kahan…before advay completes chandni enters the room by saying it will be there….
she begins to search and founded dat kurti
she showed to advay
advay said thank you by having his cute smile
chandni starred at him…bilkul bacho ki tarah behave kar rahi ho tum…
he said badon ko aap kehte hai baghyawan and he pulled her towards him…
C: chodiye mujhe …door is unlock..koi aayega..
A: dis is our room..no one will come without our permission
and he pulls her too close they had an eyelock…
chandni took her hands towards advay face and said
C : Mr.Ajeeb Singh Raizada, i knew dis is our room..but the door is open…so koi guarantee nahi hai..no one will ask permission to enter…so just move away from me…
she said and tried to push him back..
but he didn’t leave and pulls her too close
again they had an eyelock…and it was interrupted by a phone call
Advay phone rings..
chandni goes out to pick his phone…
she took the phone and it was meghu’s call
meghu, yeh advay ko kyun call kar rahe hai…thinks chandni and she gives phone to advay
Advay attends the call
A: haan meghu
M: happy bday to the world’s most handsome jiju…
shikha too wished advay
S : happy bday jiju
A : thank you meghu and shikha
advay looks chandni to check whether she remembered or not
chandni thought why he is saying thank you..baath toh kya hai??
she is totally confused
M : haan jiju, wer is our treat??
S : yes ..hume aapke bday treat chahiye
Advay : definitely i will…
before he finished advay hears kajal mausi voice by saying
arey i too wanna wish him give me the phone…kajal mausi said , she drag the phone
KM : advay janamdin mubarak ho…tum hamesha khush wala happy raho
Advay : Thank you kajal mausi..
mausi gave the phone to indrani
Indrani : Advay Janamdin Mubarak..hamesha khush raho
A: Thank you sasuma
again chandni was confused and gave him a puzzled look
Chandni thoughts sab ko thank you kyun bol rahe hai…kahi aaj inka bday toh nahi hai?? wat is today date
oops…yes aug 21..advay ke bday..chandni how could u forget this
Chandni looks advay..
aur uske chehra se advay ko patha chalgya ki chandni ki yaad aagay
Indrani : advay , is chandni wid you?? i wanna speak wid her
A: haan she is here wid me
advay puts the phone on loud speaker
C: haan ma boliye..
Indrani : chandni, Today we have arranged party for advay’s bday..so u both and nani should come to our house by evening
C: ji ma..
Indrani : tk..hum rakthi hu
chandni feels sorry for her mistake…
C : Advay tum..
Advay raised his eyebrows
C : voh..aap mujhe kyu nahi bathaya pehle
A: Excuse me…i don’t want to remind my bday to anyone..especially to my wife..you should have remember..
C : haan mujhe yaad hai..par aaj batha nahi kaise bhool gayi..aur aap ko jantha tha na ki mein bhool gayi..so you should have remind..yeh husband ki duty hai..Galti aap ki hai
she said it angrily
A: toh sab mera galti hai na??
he asked with his tedi smile
C : sab nahi..but little
A : okay fine meri katto gilheri..i am sorry..now its your turn
C : okay sorry…i wont repeat this mistake ever again
A: sorry nahi baghyawan…Today you should have wish me first..but you didn’t..so ab toh wish karo na mujhe
(Poor adavy??)
chandni smiled and hold Advay’s collar..
she pulled advay towards her..
she is about to say happy bday..
but again advay got a call and its from pp
advay signs 1 min to chandni
A: Haan pp..bolo
PP: bro i need your help..i got stuck here
A: kahan?
PP: airport mein..pls come bro
A: now?
PP: yeah bro, come fast, i dont know anyone except u here…
A: tk PP..mein aaraha hu
advay looks chandni and said have to go now..
C : but bday wish
A: yes but you have to wait thoda der aur, jaise meine kal kartha tha
C: ok come soon…i will be waiting
advay nodded his head and went out
(In the dining table)
chandni and nani were eating..shirpa and murali was standing near them
N : beta y are u so silent? koi prob?
C: kuch nahi nani…i am ok
N: no kuch toh hai..shayad mein dek nahi sakthi..lekin apni bachon ke khamoshi ko samaj sakthi hu..batha mujhe kya prob
C: nani, i forgot advay’s bday..i didn’t wish him yet
Hearing chandni’s word nani murali , shirpa all was shocked and asked at once
kya???? u didn’t wish him???
chandni said yes wid a sad face and she said everything wat happened
N : acha toh cheeku kal apna wife ko bacha raha tha mujhse..its okay beta don’t worry..still this day didn’t finish yet..you could make dis bday memorable for him
C: kaise nani??
N : voh toh tume sochna hai..
S: haan jiji..u just think something big ..and v wil help you
Murali : Haan bhabhi…hum sab aaki plan mein honge ..aur hum sab aaj ka din tanatan kardengi..
chandni decided to do something which will be memorable for advay
C : ji nani…i wil make dis bday very memorable for him
N : haan beta..u just think and say to us we will help you???
chandni begins to think how to make this day memorable for him….
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Advay was in the airport wid PP
Someone complained against PP that he stole his mobile phone (silly na)
Actually he didn’t steal (as we know about pp he is millionaire, he wont steal anyone’s thing)
but by mistakenly the phone dropped in his bag….
he noticed that wen it rings..he is about to give the phone in airport police station…but before that he got stuck…So he calls advay for help
Somehow advay managed to help PP..and he brought him out from that problem..they came out from the police station
A : kya hai yeh sab PP..wherever you go…problems too following you
PP : yes bro..dats wat i am saying..i dont know how??..ok lets have a cup of coffee
A : Coffee…but i need to go
PP : bro pls..i am so tired..chalona??
A : ok come..lets go
PP : dats lyk my bro…
PP and advay went to hotel
in the hotel PP both ordered d coffee..
after sometyms their order came and they begin to drink
PP got a call dat is from chandni..
PP looks at advay and thought maybe she wanna speak to advay..he attends it
PP : hello chan….
before he finish
C : PP mere naam math boliye…and dont let advay know that you are talking wid me..
PP understands the situation and he signs advay to give him some tym
advay nodded his head
PP come some distance away from advay and talks to chandni
PP : ab bolo chandi..what is d matter
C: PP ji…mujhe aapki help chahiye
PP: hmm sure chandi…bolo
C : aaj Advay ke bday..toh i wanna give surprise for him..i need sometym for that…so just hold advay wid you for some more tym..once i finished everything i will inform you..
PP : wow how romantic chandni..okay i wil help you..anything for my friend chandi
C: Thank you PP ji..u r so sweet..nd i wil send u msg wen everything is done ok??
PP : Okay chandi
PP and chandni disconnected the call
PP thinks how to convince advay to hold on
PP went near to Advay
A: okay PP, i am leaving
PP : bro wer r u going..lets finish our lunch too..
A: no PP, i wanna go home..
PP : bro..mein bhi tere saath aaunga…first v will finish our lunch aur kuch kaam hai mujhe…and den wil go together after finishing everything
Advay gave a look for him little angrily
PP: bro i was coming after a long tym..i too wanna see nani, nd ur family..aur u r my best friend na..mujhe yahan kisiko nahi janta..so…lets go together
Advay gave an huge sigh and said okay
A : okay…i wil inform nani and chandni
PP : good bro..i wil order lunch for u nd me
Advay called to chandni
A : hello
N : cheeku kahan ho tum
A : nani, mein yahan PP ke saath hu…aur i will come lil today….so don’t wait for me…u both finish ur lunch
N : tk cheeku
A: nani, wer is chandni?
N : voh..meghu and shikha aagayi unke saath bath kar rahi hai voh
A: tk nani mein raktha hu
N : Tk cheeku
Advay nd nani disconnected the call
Nani said to chandni
so PP convinced advay to hold on there..
Now u could start your plan chandni…
Murali : vaise aap ke plan kya hai??
chandni smiled and said
plan toh yeh hai k advay ko bday wish karna hai..
Shirpa : Toh jiji.. y did u make sir to stop there
C : kyunki i need to do some work for that
tum dono meri help karogi na
M : just say wat to do…hum tana tan kar dengi
nani, shirpa, chandni smiled after hearing murali’s words
(In The Evening 5.00 p.m.)
Advay asking so many questions to PP..
PP somehow managed advay to stay with him…but more than two hour he couldn’t handle the situation
And advay said
PP bohut der hogaya..aur it seems you don’t have work any more…so lets go
PP : voh..ek aur kaam hai bro..
A : PP…
PP : Just one work…
PP mob vibrates dat was a message from chandni… he reads the message
Everything is done??..ab advay ko leke aap aajyenge
That was big relief for PP..
PP: okay bro..come lets go
A : but you was saying something else before reading the msg??? whose msg is dat?? show me
PP : voh..voh..it was a bank message….aur haan mujhe kaam hai…lekin i am so tired and you too looks so tired..so i thought to finish it by tomo
A: pakka??
PP : sure..
Both of them started from and reached Advay Singh Raizada Mansion
Advay was surprised that chandni didn’t call him yet now
He thought pehle chandni mujhe wish nahi kiya…aur ab she didn’t ask about me at all…not a single call ….i came out from there in the morning…and now it is 6 p.m. she didn’t called me yet
PP: bro..wat r u thinking, come lets go
advay nodded his head and both of them went inside the house
Advay opens the door
house seems little dark…there was a candle here and there…and also balloons
PP : Bro koi party hai kya?? it seems to be someone giving surprise to you
A: lagta hai yeh chandni ka idea hai…
PP : happy bday bro…
PP said it with a smile and advay understood that making advay to stay outside the house was chandni’s plan..and PP helped her
A: so u r too in her plan right
PP :U r too smart bro ..
advay and PP went some steps forward..still the house was little dark…they couldn’t find anyone…. Advay called everyone chandni, murali, shirpa, nani..but he didn’t get any answer..
with the help of candle’s light they could see led screen there which projected chandni’s picture…
Advay went towards the screen..
PP :Bro lets play and watch that…maybe there will be a msg
A : u know wat is the plan??
PP : my work is just to hold u dee….aur kuch nahi jaanta mujhe
A : Achha!
advay press the play button in the remote and they seated themselves in the nearby sofa
and the video begins
Chandni is speaking in that video
Advay..its me aapki chandni…
( Advay smiled at once she said aap ki chandni and he listens to her)
Aaj Aap ke bday hai..
but it is really bad wen his wife forgot it..Voh bhi shaadi ke baad pehla bday hai..
it was really really bad…
But meri pati…meri pyari pati ko…apni patni se iss baath ko lekar koi gusse nahi…
i am shocked as well as embarrassed…
hw could u forgive for this mistake..
U are so sweet advay..itna pyari pati ke liye mein toh kuch kar na hi padega…
Agar patni apni pati bday bhool gayi toh???
So patni must do something
And I wanna give you something special…and it should be lovable…
i know everyone would love you..that was a fact..so i thought to get a wish for u from ur loved ones..it will be a gift for u if ur loved one wished on this day and
today i went to speak with your loved ones, i recorded their wishes for you
here is the small video for that…
(that video showed a kindergarten school photo,yes that was advay kindergarten’s school photo and advay recognised that)
advay smiled on seeing dat
after that picture..it showed some lady who is about 40-45 years old
(and advay recognised her too)
Jancy Mam..my kindergarten teacher advay said with an excitement
PP: bro u still remember her
advay nodded his heads
And the lady begins to talk…advay i knew u would remember me…u r my sabse fav student tha…in childhood advay was very naughty…
as soon as chandni heard the naughty word, she interrupted her and asked
C: advay??? naughty???
JM: yes dear..he was so naughty..he will always tease his friends..and one day he kissed a girl who sit next to him…
though he was very naughty..he was good in everything….thats y you are my fav advay
and i wish you very happy bday..may god bless you and give you all happiness in ur lyf
(Jancy mam wishing video ends here)
chandni is back on that video
aap ki fav mam hai na yeh…i heard this from nani…and i want her to wish u on this day…and ur childhood was so cute…u kissed some girl…(chandni smiles a lot, and PP too begins to laugh)
Advay feels so shy???
chandni continues okay ab school days ki bari , yes i went to ur school too
ISM matriculation school
(advay’s school photo was showed ..and some of advay’s photo..he is in school uniform..he is so cute) after that pic
it showed some man was there in the video who will be about 50 -60 yrs old
(PP: Bro, now who is he??
A: my school’s HM
PP: oh)
HM continues…
Advay my brilliant boy..one of the most intelligent student in my school…he will participate in every events, quiz, competition..i could say him as our school pride…(PP said wow bro)
and advay i heard that you are professor in some institute….dat was a great job..
Many More happy returns of the day..God bless you my child…
(Head master wish ends here..)
(again chandni is back)
chandni said
wow advay i am so proud dat my pati was his school’s pride..aww..very good???
she continued
now we will go wid ur college fav person…i heard this too from nani
she is your sabse bade fav in ur college…hai na?? she asked with having fake angry face
(Advay smiled )
(video showed advay’s college pics..some of advay pics when was in clg…and it also showed on girl photo her age will be 25-27)
PP : Wow she is gorgeous
advay turns to PP and starred at him
PP: bro i was just said that she looks beautiful..who is she bro??
A: she is my college mate..Nivetha Joseph..My senior
(Now Nivetha joseph is going to speak about advay)
Hi advay..i am nivetha…i hope u remember me…before wishing u i have to tell this that ur wife is so cute and beautiful advay….
C: Thank you nivetha..aur yeh bathayiye wen did you met advay??
NJ: I think we met in a protest…yes in protest.. we clg students were protesting against clg…we were all sitting in the ground..and some people distributing water packets….der i saw him….after that we met several tym and we became frnds…
nivetha continues..aur advay chandni ne abhi abhi kaha ki tu mujhse pyar kartha tha tab…is dat true???
(Advay was shocked…PP looks at advay.)
agar yeh baath toh mujhe pehle hi janthi thi..toh i definitely said ok for you…
Nivetha looks on chandni and said with a teasing smile sorry chandni but this is actual truth..every girls would fall for him…
and advay u have got a best wife now..i couldn’t do anything…
Anyways happy bday my lil boy…
(Nivetha wishing video ends here)
chandni back with dat same fake angry face..
so u have loved someone else in ur lyf advay…
(Advay was confused that hw he would convince if she asks this in direct)
okay i wil deal this with u directly…ab Nivetha Joseph ke wish kadam hogayi..
Next i went to ur institute..ahhh…. advay…i dont know…are you even a professor there…you are having so much of fan girls there…
here is the proof for that dekhiye….
Advay’s working institute was shown in the video..
And there were a group of girls whom are all studying there..
Chandni is saying to all those girls…
girls tell something about your professor and wish him..
One girl come forward and said
Advay sir…He is the best professor in this institute..
another girl came forward not only best professor but also
he is our hero, rockstar, prince charm
chandni’s expression is lyk ????
and dat girl said sorry to say this…but sach toh sach hota hai na…chandni ji
(Chandni remembers Nivetha Joseph’s words ki every girls would fall for him…True)
bas bas….ab unke bday wish karo….said chandni
And all d girls said HappY bday sir…we love you???
(Institute students ki video ends here)
again chandni back
ufff….
i am so Jealous…hw i am going to handle all these…they all gone mad for you…Itni saari pagal girls aap ke liye…Mr. Advay Singh Raizada…i wish they would tie a Rakhi for you on Rakshabandhan???
chandni continues
kindergarten, school, college, ur working institute we have seen everything…and now family tym
(And now in the video there were nani, murali, shirpa, sasuma, kajal mausi, meghu, shikha except chandni)
and everyone wished advay
Happy Bday advay said indrani and kajal, happy bday cheeku said nani , happy bday jiju said meghu and shikha, happy bday sir,l said shirpa, happy bday bhaiya said murali
(family members wishes video ends here)
(again chandni back)…
kitni pyari log hai na sab…everyone loves you so much..and i am sure their love gives you more happiness….
Advay sab aap ko wish karliya except one….
Me, your wife
meri lyf ki sabse badi galti hai aap ke bday bhool na…..aur i wont repeat this Again…
Mere pyari pati
i wish you a very happy bday…and i hope we will be together in all your bday
…….
****(Video ends here)****
once the video got finished…lights in the living room got on…
Advay and PP hears everyone saying Happy Bday Advay…
Both PP and Advay rubbed their eyes as lights on suddenly ..and they could see now everyone is coming down from the upstairs…
Everyone came down..
Advay took blessings from nani, indrani and kajal mausi..
They gave blessings and wished him again…
Advay looks on chandni…chandni winks at him by asking hw was d surprise…
Advay just gave her a smile as he couldn’t do or say anything infront of everyone?????
PP : u rocked it chandi…surprise was really awesome
chandni : thank you PP ji
after everyone wished advay…they take him to cut the cake…Elder peoples were enjoying the bday party by sharing their feelings and eating the cake…And younger people enjoying by playing and applying the cake to others
Atlast it becomes really a very memorable day for advay…
(Night 9.00 p.m)
party kadam hogayi…
vashisht family went to their house after finishing the party..
And here Raizada family was going to sleep..
Nani said good nyt to chandni and advay
they too said good nyt to nani…
advay and chandni enters into their room…
Chandni asked to advay hw was the surprise..
A : i really loved ur surprise…though you forgot my bday…u rocked it now…i am impressed…
good chandni…she said to herself
C: I wil…mein toh Mrs.Adavy Singh Raizada hai na???
A: Hmm, Ofcourse…but actually you forgot something
Chandni thinks for sometym and said
C : no i didn’t…i said sorry and i also wished u…then wat???
Advay Naughty Boy points towards chandni’s lips..
C : I was doing so many works from the morning…mujhe neend aarahi hai…
she said it by running away from him
and Advay follows her??????
******STORY ENDS HERE******
18 Comments
Reihana….I loved this OS as well.
Its so magically written by you.I lost in it.So beautifully described each and everything.Advay’s wait for get wishes from his wife then he reminds her his birthday and live pp and Advay bonding,Chandu plan and Surprise was just so Awesome I loved it each thing.In last my eyes become moist as i remembered something….
I loved it and enjoyed it
thank you so much fenil…loved ur feedback
Iloved it.waiting for wish from wife side.pp baba is good.
Love nivaay
thank you so much AB..Thanks for reading my OS
lovely os
sooo nice
Thank you
Superbbbbbbb……..what a gift it is…loved it!!!!!!!!
Asr hai hi aisa kisiko bhi usse pyaar ho jayega????????????????????????????????
Thank u…nd dose lines were true..
Birth day blast!!!!??????
Thank u for reading dear
U Rocked it❤❤❤
Amazingggg one…
Thank you so much
Reihana,Thank you for alerting me…I am day by day admiring adni…Thay look adorable…Loved the total OS…I liked the nick name “Rowdy Professor”?????Poor advay??He forgived her…??But after seeing his disappointment she impressed him in a very unique way by collecting wishes from his kindergarten mam,School HM,Nivetha joseph??(Andha water distributor idea marina protest nala vandha inspiration thaana????,Appo neraya per andha maadhiri water,food distribute pannadhaala thaan protest romba naal nadandhuchu…Illana paadhilaye ninnirukum…Epdiyo kadasila jallikattu nadandhuchu)Really loved this to the core…Come up with more ffs like this dear…Enaku shivani ,barun aa romba pudikum…Thats why i included shivani in ishqbaaz ff…?????keep rocking dear…Atlast indrani is not evil here…Adhudhaan periya sandosham…I hate her in serial…Pana pei???Thanks for such a precious OS On ADNI????????take care…i posted my 12 th part..please do read and comment dearrr…
Thank u so much logesh bro for reading my OS…den protest la apdi laam nadandhucha????
Yes dear??????
AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT MIND BLOWING ROMANTIC SUPERB???????????????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thank u dear..thank you for reading