Hey annika..???m i right..??…”asked a confused boy facing the girl
Excuse me….!!do i know u??how do u know my name????…”asked the girl in irritating tone
I m shivaay…same school,,,rmmbr????….”said shivaay
Ohh yeah…..my competitor…how can i forget…!!!after a long time…how are you???…”asked anika
Thnk god u recognised me….I m fine…..what about u???frnds..????….”asked shivaay
I’ll meet u later…i m late right now…”said annika nervously n left that place
(So shivaay n annika were classmates in their school…now both are medical students in same college..Anika dont make frnds easily due to some past incidents and is kind of reserved person and on the other hand shivaay is vry frndly)
LUNCH BREAK
Shivaay is searching anika….he wanted to talk to her n ask her why has she behaved so strangely in morning…
He found annika in cafeteria….
Shiv–hii annika….why are u sitting alone here???u didnt make any new frnd???
Ani–I dont like anyone’s company…i m more comfortable with myself…
Shiv–wohhooo….are you the same anika whom i know????I mean u were so chirpy,,chattrbox kind of prson in school…always wander here n there like buttefly….
Ani–I dont need to tell you anything…will u plzz leave me alone otherwise I myself will leave….
Shivaay was shocked with this rude behaviour of anika….n he thought …”what does she think of herself…am i dying to talk to her…get a life anika…..i dont care how u live…..”……n he left that place…..
Like this 6 months passed…..
As expected anika is all alone..she doesnt have a single frnd…shivaay wanted to talk to her bt aftr that incident ,his ego didnt allow him to do so….
Both of them topped in frst semester….n there was a party for them….bt anika denied to join them…bt aftr insistence of whole class,she agreed…
AT PARTY
Everyone is enjoying the party except two prsons….anika wasnt enjoying due to her reasons bt there is someone else too who is too much bothered about anika’s condition….
Anika asked waitor for a glass of water bt mistakenly it was exchanged by shivaay’s drink….
When shivaay took the sip of his drink ,he realised its water….he rushes to anika to stop her bt anika has drunk half glass of wine….
Drink wasnt that much alcoholic bt its enough for anika to spill the truth…..
Shiv–anika….(seizing glass from her hand)….are u ok….its not water….
Ani–what..,(in drunken state)….(starts laughing)…..my life everytime cheats me like this….(n she walks towards door)
Shiv–anika where are u going….wait I’ll drop you…
Shivaay makes anika sit in the car n they left from the party….
In midway,,,shivaay’s care broke down…
Shiv–shit…srry anika…my car just broke down n its too late to call any mechanic….we’ve stay in car….
Ani–ok….
Shiv–anika…can i ask something..??
Ani–yaa sure!!!!
Shiv–why u dont make frnds ???? N prefer to stay alone!??
Anika’s eyes get teary…!!her past incidents are coming as flashes infrnt of her eyes…n she just break down in shivaays arms….
Shiv–hey anika,..,what happened????plzzz stop crying….(wiping her tears.)
,
Ani–shivaay….u remmbr gauri???
Shiv–yeah..ur bestfrnd in school….
*FLASHBACK*
Anika n Gauri are the bestest frnds…..they are world to each other…..they cant imagine a single minute without each other….they know each other since childhood….
Gauri is very sensitive girl….she cant handle any emotional situation,,,,so anika stays always there for her…
After 10th…they have joined an institute for preparation of medical…n they share the same hostel….[for admission in any medical college,,student have to pass the test which is organised by institute].
Both are very studious…n everyone was sure that they’ll qualify the exam easily…..
Bt sometimes our planning doesnt match with our destiny…..
In their institute,,,there was a boy (played by daksh)..whom gauri has started liking….initially it was just crush like thing….,bt when gauri n daksh started talking,,,,gauri’s feelings for him started increasing…she didnt know about daksh’s feeling bt the way he was treating her,she has assumed he also liked her…
Ani–gauri….is there something b/w u n daksh…
Gauri–dont know about daksh yr..,bt i really like him,,..n he is so sweeet with me…
Ani–gauri dont assume anything otherwise u’ll be hurt…just share ur feeling with him…
Gauri–yeah u r right…i’ll talk to him tmrrww….lovee u yr….u are always there for me….tu nahi hoti to mera kya hota….
Ani–chal senty na ho zada sojao…love u tooo…..
NEXT DAY
(Daksh wasnt that much good as gauri n anika in studies….bt he dont like to be defeated ,,n definately not by girls…
He was frndly with gauri as he wanted to distract her from studies which was okay for him….he used to borrow her notes…take her help in tests,…)
Gauri–daksh…i want to say something to you…its totally my point of view…if u didnt agree with it ,,its ok…
Daksh–what happened gauri??
Gauri–daksh i’ve to say that i like you or may be more than that….i like ur company….i like to chat with you…i like everything about you…
Listening all this daksh was happy,,,his plan is working…gauri is distracting from her aim….n now he’ve to just deal with anika….
Daksh–really gauri!!!!i also feel the same for u…u r really spcl for me….
Listening all these words gauri hugged daksh….n they proceed to their class room….
AT NIGHT HOSTEL
gauri is chatting with daksh …
Ani–gauri,…what are u doing yr…i can undrstand u like him…bt dont forget why are we here….frst focus on ur studies….we’ve mega test after a week….
Gauri realizes her mistake…
Gauri–srrry ani…see m holding ears….yaa…these days lots of distraction,,,bt i promise i’ll be back with bang,.n i’ll top in the test….(smirking)
Ani–achhhaaa….lets see who’ll top….
They pass smile n hug each other n went to sleeep….
NEXT DAY
Gauri tells everything to daksh n ask him that we should frst concntrate on our studies….we’ll talk each other on weekends….my career n you both are imp for me,..
Daksh–ok gauri no problm….
TEST DAY
Last 5 min are left….
Daksh has asked gauri to not write her name on test paper as he’ll take it at last min to match his ansr..n if her name is wrttn ,may be they’ll caught by the teacher….
Gauri did the same thing…n in last 5 min she handed over her page to daksh…..
RESULT DAY…….
Gauri n anika was so excited for their results,..they reach the hall area n start searching thier name on notice board…..
Daksh’s rank 1st n anika’s rank 2nd……AniRi search for gauri’s name….bt gauri’s name wasnt there in top10…..
Gauri was just shocked,..she knew she has worked hard..
Gauri–(fake smiling)….yeah ani….u r in top 2….its party time…i m going i’ve to arrange so mny things…will meet u at night….n she left from there…
Ani–(to herself)…i know gauri,how r u feeling right now,,,i told u to be serious at ur studies…(being sad).
AT NIGHT
Anika was stilll in institute as there was some kind of celebration….
Ani–where are u gauri….u r not picking up my phone too….i think she must be in hostel….i should also leave
HOSTEL
Anika enters the room…why is so dark here….
Gauri where are you…..she switch on the light….
Ani–GAURIIIIIIIIIII……
*gauri is hanging to the fan*
Anika rushes to gauri n somehow put her down..
Ani–hey gauri,.gauri…what happened…wake up,,.see plzz dont do this kind of stunt..(tears started flowing from her eyes)….why is this tear flowing from my eye….just stop there…nothing has happened to her……gauri(slapping her cheek)…..wake up….dekhna what i’ve brought for you….hey gauri plzz dont do this,…u were saying we’ll do party,,,,,see i’ve brought ur fav biryani….why are u not listening…….okk i’ll never scold you…..(ani is literally shouting).,,plzzz gauri ankh kholna n…,,
She hugged her tightly…hey gauri,,,why did you do this…we were frnds forever n….plzzz open ur eyes..(anika was crying badly)..gauriiiiiiii
Other girls from hostel reach their room…everyone was shocked….they rushed to anika to console her….n everyone was crying
Ani–what are u doing…haan,…why are u crying…meri gauri ko kuch ni hua…mzaak kr rhi h ye…(smiling at her)….see she’ll wake up soon…..gauri uth jana dkh ye log kya kr rhe h….
Girl1–anika,…she is no more…she has left us….control urself…
Ani–are u mad..just stay away from me….
Anika’s eye caught a piece of paper near gauri’s body..,
She read it..
Gauri–hey ani….I know tu mujhse bhht naraaz hogi….bt u dont know how m i feeling right now….I just want to end my life….U know how much i worked hard for that test n that daksh,,he ruined my whole life….u were right….i should have listen to you..after seeing result,,i went to daksh n he told me he has never submitted my ansr sheet,,,he has put his name in my ansr sheet…n all his promises,,love,,everything was fake….I spend two yrs with him bt it hasnt any meaning for him…..I cant live with this guilt anika,,,,i m leaving you,,srryyyy….bt u’ve to promise me…u’ll become the bestest doctor…..n u wont stop ur life….pinki promise…..
****************FB ends****************
Anika is still hugging shivaay n crying vigorously…
Ani–i lost my only frnd…without whom i haven’t imagined my life….(sobbing in b/w)…
I dont trust anyone….my innocent frnd who has just started enjoying life,,,everything get ruined…!!
Why this happened to her…..!!
By this time,,,shivaay is also crying…he can feel the trauma through which anika is going….firstly he calmed himself…the he wiped anika’s tears n cupped her face…
Shiv–annika…it would be so mean,if i say i can understand ur pain….i cant even imagine what u’ve been through….bt i can promise you,,i’ll be always there to reduce this pain….I can never filll the emptiness of gauri in ur life…bt i’ll try to introduce new colours in ur life….i’ll never impose myself on you’..bt whenevr u feel,,u can talk to me..!!
N then he hugged her n realised that she has slept….
He lay down her on back seat cautiously…
NEXT DAY.
Anika wake up n have headache due to yesterday’s hangover…..she remmbrs everything,,her convo with shivay…(I told u she isnt heavily drunk)
Ani–shivaay….I want to go home….
Shiv–yaa sure….car is prfctly fine now….
On the way,…
Shiv–anika may i ask one thing,.
Ani–hmmm
Shiv–after all that happened to gauri….what happened to daksh???
Ani–I’d filed case against him…n aftr copy rechecking,,its found that hadwriting was of gauri,,,n he was jailed…
U know what shivaay,,gauri was right..,she had told me that she’ll top n indeed she did…!!!
AFTER ONE MONTH
As decided by shivaay,,,he didnt force anika to befrnd with her…he wanted anika to be comfrtble with him…whenever there was any break,,,anika herself used to talk to him bt only about studies….
Shivaay has started liking her…bt he wasnt expcting anything from anika….
On his b’day…..anika was the frst one to wished him by texting….
He was shocked at frst,,,how she got her nmbr…bt he then thought forget all this,,,she has wished me,,,thats too much…..
Shivaay has asked anika for dinner n she said yes…
On dinner date….
Ani–shivaay u r really a nice person….after that incident i’d stopped believing anyone….bt u are different….U always wanted to befrnd with me bt i never give you that chance…bt now i’m asking you….will u be my frnd.???
Shiv–of course anika i’ll love to be ur frnd…u r really spcl to me…
Ani–shivaay ,,i really trust you….bt before starting our frndship,,i just want to say something….I’ll give my 100% as a frnd…bt plzz dont expect anything else from me….I dont want to complicate our lives…
Shivaay was shattered by her last line as somewhere he has fallen for her….bt he was happy that she will be there as his best frnd….
Shiv–i’ll never break ur trust…..frnds..?????forwarding her hand…
Ani–no……(shivaay shocked)…..FRIENDS FOREVER….!!n yeah….i m really a mad prson,,so u have to deal with it…
Shiv–anything for you madam…!!!!
Lets DANCE…
Ani–sure…..
RAABTA SONG PLAY in background…..
Khte hain khuda ne is jhan me sabhi k lye
Ksi na ksiko hai bnaya kr ksi ke lye
Tera milna hai us rab k ishara
Mano mujhko bnaya tere jaise hi ksi k lye
WILL “”SHIVIKA” BE JUST FRNDS FOREVER..???
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta…
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta..
Kaise hm jane hame kya pata..
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta…
WOULD THERE BE ANY POSSIBILITY OF LOVE???
Tu hamsafar hai phir kya fikr hai
Jine ki wajah yahi hai mrna isi k lye,.
WILL THERE BE ANY ”RAABTA” B/W THEM..??
SHIVIKA–FRNDS FOREVER OR SHIVIKA–LOVE BIRDS….
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Stay tuned for next part….
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Hi guysssssssss…….
I’ m wrting after soooooo mnyyyyy days…..
I m really hoping u all have enjoyed it….
I’ve wrttn it with a lot of emotions..n while wrting gauri part,,,i was soo emotional….
Plzzzzz guys put ur commnts below,,atleast two lines long….plzzzzz…..
This one is esp for rufi,,,,lovee uu dear….see i’ve wrttn it in just one day…..
Plzzzz guyss read n commnt…..n i’ll write second part on the basis of nmbr of commnts….
Loveee uuu
Insta id -@kanfi_6
Lots of love
Kanfi
76 Comments
hey kanfi im happy that ur back with a superb emotional story ………..really im happpy to see ur ff ………..gauri’s part was heart touching ………….the whole update was nycccc ……hope u get good number of comment so as u to continue …………….love u drrrrrrr
Awwweee…
.lovee uuu sumi….
I think its ur longest commnnt….
?????
Fantastic and emotional, feeling sad for Gauri and Anika??????
Thnk uu sam…??
Yeah that part was emotional???
Wow Knafi
Its so awesome
Aflatoon chappy.
Yrr emotional chappy.
Salty Tears are not stopping from my eyes yrr.
Innocent Gauri trapped in Daksh bad motives but good that he got punished but whats the matter Gauri ends her life.
Anika made herself in some limits and now those limits or say lines will crosses by Shivaay and Anika by Friendship.
Loved it to the core.
Rufi ki bachhi mere se long comment mat dalna.:P:P:D:D:D:D
Fenil…
Again knafi??
Gauri committed suicide as daksh cheated her n her dream of qualifying medical was shatterd..
N i told it in starting..she cant handle emotional situations…
Thnk uu sooo much fenil….
N u know what..rufi k commnt zarur lmba hoga??
Bhai check my comment it’s tooooo short one
Wow di you are back and with a bang
Really amazing and so emotional i was literally crying while reading gauri and annika part?
You have written very well di
The dinner date part was also awesome
I’m egarly waiting for the next part
I can’t wait anymore!!
I’m in love with this story
Pls post soon
Love you ??????
Yuhoooooo…
I m sooooo happpy u liked it….
Loveee uu somuu..??
I’ll try to come soon
AWESMO EXCELLENT EMOTIONAL INTERESTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
Dear kanfi
Gauri ki story padkar main bhi bahuth emotional hogayi yaar??????????story is superb??????keep it up?
Take care?
Thnk uu uff…
I m glad u liked it????
U too take care
It is awesome dear… Back with the bang
Thnk uuu nikii???
Super
Thnk u dear?
Hey kanfi di, wonderful chapter. I liked shivika’s chemistry. It’s different from other stories. And aniri friendship. Wow. It was really emotional. Poor gauri. Hope shivika’s friendship turn to love soon. Waiting for the next…
Loveeee uuuuuii radhss????
I m glad u liked it..
Thnk uu radhs????
I m happy u liked it
wow !!!!! loved it !!!!!!!!
post asap….
tc…..
Thnk u dear???
It’s just fab di. I was really missing you and your earlier FF but this was a bang.love you di and gauri part was so emotional. Each emotion was clearly written . Thanks di for writing such a ff
Awwwee soo sweet of u yr…
Lovee uuu dear???
Amazing update
Thnk u dear??
Its sooo beautiful kanfi..!! It honestly made me soo emotional. I literally have tears in my eyes right now..how beautifully you depicted friendship and pain for the lost one. Seriously kanfi you deserve loads and loads of comments and praises..!! And i mean it when i say that you are an amazingggg writer…luv u loadsssss ????
Awweeeeeew lovee uuu soooooo muchhhhh…..
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Annika… Poor girl seems too much attached with her only best friend Gouri. I was being emotional about this mark- cheating- love topic this morning with our friends in IB written episode page. You wrote the thing that was deep inside my heart from last six years and I was unable to share my problem with any one. I finally did it and you just, I don’t know what I am feeling now. It really hurts after being cheated by friends in exam and Annika like friends are not always present in All Gouri like girl’s fate to give too much of Love. I am feeling relaxed now from today morning and trust me I am crying after reading this one shot.
On the other hand Shivaay and Annika…I will wish them to be together as a couple soon as Shivaay seems to be a good guy. Waiting for the next.
With LOVE @ Kanfi.
Thnk u soo muchhh astha….
N yaa its really dusgusting feeling…to be cheated by someone close….
Bt we shouldnt hold things for long..sometimes let go is the best solution…n if u find someone to share our emotions is the best thing…
I m really glad u liked it..
Lovee uuuu????
Hey Kanfi!!!
I’m glad you are back dear….with seriously a bang on update….wow…..loved it to the core….totally khidkitod update
I had posted some new updates in your absence I would be further glad if you will read them and comment too…
Link-https://www.tellyupdates.com/user/11688/?profiletab=posts
I hope this will work if not then pls visit my id as you know ur comment meant a lot for me….
And yeah post your next part asap…I will be waiting for it…..keep smiling dear…tske care always….??
Ashlyn
Awwwweee….
Thnk uuuu ashlyn dear…
Love uuu????
I’ll surely read n commnt tooo
Hey kanfi…. how are you…. You back with a bang….haaan….. ? Nice srart yaar. Waiting for the next part….
I m fine katz….
Whay about u???
Thnk u dear…
Love u??
Awesome….fabulous part dear I’m really happy ur back now.. waiting for next update soon
Thnk uuu dear..
I m glad u liked it…
Love u??
Hey kanfi … Hw r u…
Today’s episode was awesome emotional n heart touching one…
Felt so sad of gauri… U killed Her…
Excited for the next part… Post it soon…
Hii sagi..
I m fine dear..
How r u??
I m glad u liked it…
Lovveeee uuu bhhht sara ????
Love you Fathi..It’s was almost one month you completed your previous ff LANLL ,IE June 11 . You promised that you will come back with a new ff but u come back with a new ff after one month.Iam happy for your come back, you are come back with a bang dear.
#I like you new ff dear .The first part
was very emotional. While reading
Gouri ‘s part I was emotional, feeling
bad for goury ,she was betrayed from
Daksh who she thought her love. She
was commit suicide in that situation, I
can understand how she feels that
time,If anika with her in that time then
she is not do like that .Anika ‘s believe of not friendship with anyone that was justified .Shivika’s friendship was started.Shivika is not only friends forever or love birds.Iam sure their
friendship turn love soon. I feel it was
anika who propose shivay first.
#while reading Gouri’s part I was remember a Malayalam movie “Nassrani” In this movie The heroin ‘ s step sister have a best friend .Both are medical students. Her friend loves a boy he was son of Cheif minister ,I don’t remember the compete plot of the story ,my memory is correct then he too also an medical student. He
was betrayed her ,After that she was
commit suicide from the terrace of the
college. So Heroin’s step sister try to kill him for betraying her friend .the story progresses on the basis of his murder and who is killed him.
While reading Gouri’s part I was remember that movie, iam waiting for next part your ff .update soon dear. And send me the link of your ff through Hangout.
Good night dear .
*LAFSNLALS ff
Oh my god ahsu…
Suchva long commnt??
Loveee uuuuuu sooooo muchhh…..
???
U rrmmmbreed the last day of my ff..so sweet of u…
I havent watchdd that film..
I’ll try to post soon n wll share the link too…
Love u
Love you too Fathi
heyyy kanfi di..
don’t mind me calling you di..
I know that u don’t know me but I know you quite well..akansha di used to talk about u ..but now as of her exams are going on she has removed her account on insta temporarily..i know u might be know I the Same …
coming to the chappy
this was hell emotional
I’m having my eyes moist..
after completing the reading part i was left speechless and was spellbound..
gauri killed …aniri(gauri and annika) part were tooooooooooo emotional …
post soon
lots and lots of love
Sairish
Hii sairish…
Yaa u can call me di…
Yes akku is back as her exams are over…
Are u on insta???
Whats ur id….??
I m really glad u liked it…!!l
Lovee uuu?????
When did u join TU????or are u old mmbr??
Gd night
really..akansha aapi is back ..actually I was on insta..i have removed my acc.due to studies but unlike akansha di ..i did it permanently…
amm…we have talked earlier as well
my insta acc. was ahmedkarizma2003 ….
I joined TU maybe a month back or 2-3 weeks before . ..
..
gn
take care
Sairish
Ohh..
Yeah she is back…
We’ve talked!!!!Its like i’ve seen username bt i couldnt rmmbr when we’ve talked?
Gd mrng dear
wow this is too cool….i’m in loved with your unique ff….truly amazing…….quite emotional…but still okay…..you are really creative….please update soon…thanks for this lovely epi
Awwwwee..
Thnk uu dear???
It’s Fabb dr….. Nd yeh emotional also…. Post nxt chappy soon dr…. Can’t wait more after reading this Amazing one post soon…
Thnk uu sooo much bani????
Hey kanfi !! Your back gal !!!!!!…. That was an emotional update. I enjoyed it. And.. where are you from?…
Thnk uuu anagha….????
Lovee uuu
I m from patna ..bihar…n u???
I don’t have words to say and I am completely speechless Kanfi di. I was really touched by their friendship and by Gauri’s death. It’s so sad to get betrayed by someone who means so much to us. Just like she promised she has topped the exam and kept her word. I know what kind of feeling it would be to get nothing after putting your heart into it but please don’t do something stupid like this and not only studies are the part of life but many more are there to live for. I liked how developed the Character of Shivaye too, he was friendly, polite and everything. I felt myself being emotional and you truly are a blessed writer di. Amazing and interesting plot. I just have a request can you send me the link of this because I loved it and wanted to know the rest of the story but it is rare when I come to TU now a days. It would be great and all the best for it.
I love you di, take care. Hugs and kisses? ???
Awwwee sana….
Ur commnt made my day yr…
Loveeee uuui soooo muchhhh…
Yaa sure i’ll
Lovee u???
Hey Kanfu ???
First of all welcome backk…
I was damm mussing ur writingss…
And coming to the episode…
It was Beautttttttifulllll n Speechless…
It took 30 minutes to read n imagine the story…n even i am listenjng the RAABTA song…?????…Best part was Shivika’s hug…
Gauri n Anikaa’s friendship was beyond words..Poor gauri bcoz of that bl**dy daksh she commited suicide…??…Hope Shivika’s friendship will turn into LOVE ??…one day…Plus dance was Romantic ??❤️❤️…
U definitely should continue…
Best Regards…u made by day ❤️
Haaayeeee…
Tmhare commnt dirct dil p gya..
Thnk uuu soooo muchh for these lovely wordss…..
I have a khidkitod smile on my face right now…
Loveee uuu???
Welcome dearie…n soon my Saturday Os will be published…i will send u the link…??
Hey Kanfi !
Sweetie you made me numb, with your awesomeness overloaded writings ! Thank you for giving all of us here a masterpiece, you are an amazing se bhi upar writer.
Love it so much, so emotional and beautiful at the same time. You have great skills dear, love you❤
Thnk uuuuu soooo muchhh jerry…
I m reallly glad u liked it…..
Loveee uuui ?????
Gd night
Thank u thank u thank u kanfi dii for posting this one
Late comment but with all my bak bak bak stuffs ready
So let me start from the starting
Shivaay going forward n talking.thank god he is not showing his tadi here.Jovial SINGH oberoi
N dii u love medical this much?? Like u made anika n Shivaay studious here n medical too Ohh goddd
N Shivaay competitor of anika.but I guess Shivaay was smart ??? because he Is my bhai.
N then the party.She denied for the party were She is the main heroine.
I liked the party idea.N in drunk state revealing truth.
Shivaay has a good jesture to drop her home.Break down at perfect time.
N gauri past ???????? emotional
??????? bechari anika n gauri
She committed suicide for betrayal ???????
Daksh ??????????? but one fault was of also gauri why did she give her paper she should have denied.
Anika can’t even think of the thing that gauri is ________ I can’t type it too???.that part soooo emotional.n the letter Ohh godd so emotional
Anika breaking down in shivaay’s arms n shivaay’s dialogue there was just ??????perfect.
Then anika herself ready to forward hand of friendship was good n the last one don’t expect more from me was a correct one at Anika’s place.
Shivaay already fell don’t know what will happen next.
Living without a friend is really difficuilt n hurting n it’s natural not to believe others easily after the bitter incidents.
It was awesomeeeeee mind blowinggggggg amazing but more than that was soo emotinalllllllllllllll
Loved it
Keep writing.Waiting for the next one.Post it when u have time but before 21st.
N bhai u can’t compete with me in commenting.see the length of my comment.I am expert in commenting big.???? free tuitions available but I am a busy tuitor slow n steady wins the race u will learn it soon bhai #Fenil
N kanfi diii u have got me well.i will comment biggg u know I first type it on notes n copy paste as they r long n don’t ever expect a small comment from me
Love u diii
Oh my god….
Such a long commnt….
I knew u’ll be there with bang….
The whole analysis of this chap…
Lovee uuuu dear soooo muchhhh….
Itniiiiiii bari wali smile hai abhi mre face p….
Yaa..I’ve made them doctor???
Loveee uu rufiiii….
Gd night????
Yaa saw , too short hnn…
You r challenging me hnn…we will see…And i don’t need tuition woh bhi aap se bilkul nahi.
This time u won….Just wait and watch.
Yeah I will wait n watch bhai.u will win one day that day is coming soon but this week u can’t just win me
Am so happy ur back with a new ff… and its
It’s a really nice concept. Can’t believe our shivay is so free and likes to make friends and is a medical student as well. Poor gauri, she had to lose so much in life just caz of daksh… he not only ruined her career but her entire life as well… feel so bad for her. Anika is truly an amazing friend, she gave justice to her best friend gauri by sending daksh to jail. Shivay tryin to find out wht’s bothering anika, awww so cute. At least anika did friendship with shivay… as they say friendship is the first step to love. Am a fan of hospital dramas (especially dil mil gaye, it was one of my favourites), am so happy to read a shivika ff based on it. Can’t wait to see their friendship and the beginning of their love story.
It’s so great to see u back with a bang… do post next one soon. ???
Thnk uuuii soooo much maryam..
Such a long commnt…
M reaallly supr dupr happyy,..
Lovee u?????
Gd night
So I guess I m really late to comment…..sorry kanfi…i don’t know how I missed to read such an appreciating work….really dii it was a combo of everything….emotions..friendship..cheating( really hate that daksh)…love ( which is only from shivay’s side but still it is there and I hope anika also realise it soonnnn…)….really dii it had everything….I remember I asked you to come with something new and you replied to me also….thanks for replying..but this is not fair dii…I had expected something really good from you but this one was……..excellentttttttttttt?????????????excellentttttttttttt????????????? amazinggggggg…….??????……fabulous……????…and what not …..it was beyond my expectations…..I had read all the comments above…and dii you deserve all this appreciation…and not only this ….but more than this…just now only I saw your msg and I was like wow kanfi dii remembered mee….wow shyra…that’s great…you don’t know dii how much I admire you….your half girlfriend OS….I read it almost 10 times….and I was literally crying each time…..it was beautifully written…comeback to this new ff just want to say you nailed it diii….you nailed it…..all these words which I am writing to you is coming from my heart really dii….I wish I could meet you and give you a tight hugggggg???????……it was just amazing ……and dii you have set a new level of writing…..so I m expecting very much….pls come with next khidkitoddddd epi soon….will be waiting for it….and one request will you pls tell me whenever you update next so that I don’t miss it again…..I m not feeling to stoppp….but I have to…again I wanted to say it was remarkable……?????????
With lots of love
Shyra Kapoor…
Shyraaaaa……
Ur commntt?????
Thnk uu sooo much…
U liked it..i m soooo happyy..
I was regular reader of ur ff bt due to my studies i stopped coming to TU so mny parts were missed n now i’vs read all parts….
I’ll try to post sooon…
Loveeee uuuu????
Gd mrng
Are u on insta?
Hii diii!!!I think i am commenting on ur FF for the first time!!!!!Damn happy abt that!!But at the same time i am too late for giving a comment!!Really so sorry dii!!
Talking about ur long time FF,i feel i just don’t have the right words to express!!!!!!!
U r really talented dii!!!I donno how u think such concepts……….
Starting frm the first…..I loved this new form of Shivaay.He was very generous n too lively person!!!
Din’t knw that aapko medical se itna pyaar hai ki u gave the role to Shivika!!!!!I just hope u get what u desire diiii!!!Shivaay desparate to talk n want to be frnd of ani was nice!!!!!!!Both r always takkar ke competitors in everything (Ishq,studies………all)!!!
The Party idea n ur description about the same was fabulous…………Ani naashe mein n shivaay taking care of her even though he is not her frnd!!!!Loved it to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
N The most beautiful bond was Aniri!!!!Thoroughly enjoyed their friendship!!!!U made gauraksh which was unique……….but i really feel so sorry for gauri n ani!!!!Actually not sorry but i pity on gauri for taking such a step!!!!!!This is the case happening everywhere n u showed it in ur FF also…which i liked it!!!!!!
Its true that pyaar mein log andhe ho jaate hai but at that time we should listen atleast to our dear ones bcoz they understand us more!!!!Gauri should have listened to ani but its not hrr fault also………till some selfish ppl r there like Daksh we can’t do anything!!!
Then ani hugging shivaay………oh my god i am just loving it by imagining dii!!!!I don’t knw what i will do if it happens really!!!!!Yaa its very difficult to come over after such a big thing happens in our lives!!!!
Shivika crying together aisa scene kabhi nahi milega diii……..really feeling sad for ani……but jitna emotional u made the ff u balanced it wid the Dinner date!!!!
Even i was surprised that ani knew shivaay’s b’day n texted him!!!!??Shivaay would be in cloud nine……….he is falling for her…..
I liked ani’s gesture of asking him to be her frnd saying that she will give her100%……..But yaa shivaay is thinking more than that……..well, too much excited what is going to happen n how these birds r going to bcum Love Birds!!!I am sure no one is better than shivaay for ani!!!!
On the whole,a very emotional,heart-touching n amazing episode!!!Perfect title for the FF dii!! I think comment bada hai but its the first time….so chaltha hai!!!Damn excited for the next one!!!!Love u fathi dii!!!!!!!!!
Radhs…
I m just speechless..
I’ve no words…
Ur commnt is just??????
O m really glad that u r also a part of my life..
Love uu soo much???
Hi kanfi….
It was soo emotional…literally I was shocked when Gauri suicide….feeling sooo sad for anika…
Good story dear…
All the best…
Thnk uuuu soo muchhhh zavi…
Love u??