Hi guys iam Ashnita .Thank you guys for loving it sorry I didn’t replied to your comment becz iam not feeling well and I was in cloud 9 to read ur comments. Sachi me rula diya . To be honest guys I want to clear it now just today I watched Arya 2 and I love that movie that’s y writing it this in kanchi ff. If u guys have watched Arya 2 I have same plot but little changes . Do you want me to continue this. Thank you for your comments.
Episode starts
A man is taken on a stretcher to ot
A handsome boy with red eyes comes running he is none other than veer.
VEER IS OWNER OF SDCH
Veer – the man taken on a stretcher is none other than my friend kabir.Ever since I got acquainted to him, I didn’t have anymore enemies because if u have a friend like Kabir u dnt need another enemy at all .
(Fb starts )
MOTHER THERESA ORPHANAGE
Warden – Name, age
Little boy – Kabir Raichand 9 yrs
Warden – Any relative
No Kabir replied in attitude
Kabir was sitting alone and thinking to himself i want a friend.
After that Kabir went to near stairs and slowly put bubble gum on stairs. Veer was coming running and stepped on it. Kabir saw veer and smirked.
Kabir was sitting near the sea
Veer – who r u? Y r u sitting in my place
Kabir – I’m ur friend
Veer -friend? A friend must help did you
help me till now?
Kabir – do you know how to swim
No I can’t Y?
JUST THEN KABIR PUSHED VEER IN THE SEA
Help help veer shouted
KABIR DIVED IN AND SAVED VEER
veer – friends
Yes Kabir replied
( TWO DAYS LATER )
Veer , Kabir sir is calling you both a man shouted
IN WARDEN OFFICE
Kabir , veer they liked u both, but they want only one of u two. You both r friends decide who will go with them
Kabir – 1 min let’s toss head or tails?
Veer – heads, no tails.
KABIR WON , VEER WAS CRYING
U go said Kabir
Y ? U won the toss, right?
Heads u win and watever u win is mine. Mine is urs now go said Kabir
Veer ( I was very happy not because I was leaving but for going away from him. I thought I left him for all gud but. ….. )
Precap : will Kabir & Veer ever meet.
A boy is shown beating blue black red and other colors to goons
So this was episode 1 I hope u guys liked it and pliz do comment how’s this and should I continue. Lots of love to u all
Keep smiling
Regards
Ashnita
22 Comments
I KNOW THE MOVIE……..ITS SUPER AWESOME…REALLY LOVED IT……I LIKED IT THAT YOU ARE CONVERTING THAT MOVIE INTO AN FF…….IT WILL REFRESH THE MOVIE AS I HAD SEEN I LONG BACK…..THE HERO [ ALLU ARJUN] WAS VERY HANDSOME….SO IS KABIR…..I AM REALLY GOING TO COUNT ON IT….WANNA SEE HOW YOU MELD THE PLOT INTO YOUR STORY
PLZZZZZZ POST SOON
SIYA
Awesome ashnita really a good start keep it up dear
Will be waiting for nxt one eagerly……
Awesome start ashnita just loved it u r an amazing writer I am just spell bound sweetie continue soon
Thanks one just remind me of arya 2….iam a great fan off alluarjun…..it will be interesting to see sanchi as kajol agarwal
Hey dear I don’t think so ur ff will work for more days I don’t have a personal enemies with u but I recommend u should close this Ff listen no replies back and criticism is not welcome
nice episode. But please dont mind me saying this ,I think this is the story of arya 2 movie in telugu .Even your introduction is same as that of the movie.
Ofcourse ashnita u should continue…nailed it dear amaz marvellous epi a gud start nd plzzzz nxt time plz made epi bit longer it just a request post nxt epi fast…
Is this story of movie arya … actually I don’t remember whole name but if it is then it will be fun to read it as a medical drama
Wow…. It seems really interesting….. Ashnita dear you left me speechless….. You are an amazing writer…. Keep going!!
Love uh so much!!
Awesome ! Just try to write a bit longer. ..full of suspense ..update soon
Awesome
It was amazing sis.
Pls continue ur writings. ??
omg…Ashnita dear…..u r just an amazing writer……….just luv the hate-coated friendship of veer & kabir…………keep up the good work & eagerly waiting for the nxt one………
Nice epi dear ??? do continue and take care of your health!
Hey that’s one of my favorite movie and I really liked kabir s character like allu wowww…too good
Ashnita dear…that was a really good epi..loved it….please post soon dear
Nice one
Amazing episode loved it
Amazing Ashnita.. i have not seen this Film yet so still this story is a new one for me.. and i must say i totally love this plot. The beach scene was unexpected but best one i ever read till now. Go on
Awesome Ashnita u nailed it its amazing dear continue ur ff
Fabulous… Loved it…
Nice yaar….