Hiii..guys I write first time in Tellyupdates page a small OS for cute couple Nairan. I hope u guys enjoy my OS..n guys please forgive my mistake because i have no knowledge about story but i will try so i write something . Ok now start my OS..
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Let me introduce to every 1
Nairan are cute , sweet marriage couple . He is army soilder and lived in India border. Naina is a housewife . And she lived in Chauhan Mention with all family member….Nk, dada ji , nirmala , khiyati and Meghnal with their naughty , cute son Piku. They are always sweet n happy family ?
One day karan called to Chauhan Mention..
Karan : Hello, naina
Naina : Karan…..( she is vry happy to listen her
karan voice in a long time)
Karan : Yeah its me…n I’m coming to home
tomorrow.
Naina : Really
Karan : Yes … Its true , im coming home for a
long time …n now I’m sitting to train.
Naina : okk Karan …I’m waiting for U….?
Karan : okkk ?
They cut the call
Naina is a very happy because karan come to
home ….so she inform to all family member this
good news. They are also very happy and
waiting for karan. Nirmala n naina are cook
some karan favourite.
So tomorrow will come …..they waiting for karan n after some time karan was coming..
All are happy to see karan….and karan also happy to meet his family for a long time n specially naina . Because he was not meet & not time spend with her after their marriage.
This time their house was like a comedy house …they are laugh, some fun, masti , n loads of talk to each other. After that they are complete their dinner n go to every 1 room n sleep.
In nairan room….
Their room create of some romantic some emotional scane…???
Karan & naina sitting their bad from very long time . N happy together meet once again.??
Karan : So Mrs. Naina Singh Chauhan…. U miss me???
Naina : Yeah Karan I’m missing always???
N u karan???
Karan : My sweet n cute wife , I’m missing every day, every hour, every minute or every second dear? N u know that , how much I miss U??
I Love U Naina ?
Naina : I Love u a lot???
They are hug to each other in tidely ….karan kiss her forehead , cheek, n slowly he start to kiss in her lip?
So it was very romantic movement for them (but i dont know im create a romantic movement or not but i m try). N some emotional movement because they are never time spend together after their marriage days.. So that night very special for them..
Day to Day passed….
Their romance will be increase n strong n they live happily.
Suddenly one day..karan sitting their room n watch a TV show..n naina was cook in kitchen with maghna..Nirmala doing a puja with dada ji, Nk read a news paper, kunal wait a breakfast but read some book….khiyati or piku dance in their room.
When karan phone was ring….that call is come to Army Headquater.
Karan pick the call..
After a time karan cut the call n he come to down in hall.. He look the all people n they are busy their work…So karan said to every1..
Mom, dad, dada ji, bhai, meghna bhabi , khiyati , piku n specially naina please come here.. i tell u something to every1.. So all are running to the place where karan standing .
Dada ji : karan beta what happen n what u tell me??
Nk : Yes… Whats problem??
Karan : okkk ….just Army Headquater call me…n say I’m join to duty very soon …because two country figth together…in border face in very difficult problems….so he call me n join the duty. Now I’m go to ready. N he running their room n get ready…
Naina was crying …she said karan please dont go …please karan dont go…this time not good in border for u..so please stop.
Karan was not listening her n said Im very sincere soilder so i will definately go…n he last time hug her tidely I Love u naina …
Naina was not stop her crying n said I Love u too Karan..but please listen to me ….please dont go because i dont live without u.
Karan : I know naina but its my duty so please try to understand..
He was ready n coming the hall…all people said karan please dont go….but he was not listening to every 1. Last time he said ..I will definately come n meet again.
Naina please dont cry..? n take care.
Okkk bye…karan was going.
Naina was crying ….?????
All are crying…??
In border
Fight was vry angry mood.in day by day it was continuouse process.
Most of soilder died on the fight. More of soilder weak to day by day . Karan was also weak..he have no enargy on his body. But other country not stop fight…they are vry strong .
That movement was speechless n most of place are destroyed in India.
Suddenly other country throw a grenade( its like a small bomb) to India. This bomb go pass by karan n he did not know about bomb where beside him. After a second bomb was blast n karan was died——
This time all soilder cry for him..he was only one best soilder in border.. N he was died….
All soilder pray to God , for his soul get to peace .
In Chauhan Mention
At time Naina was pregnant. All are happy that listening to good news .
Naina was not stopping her smile for a long time. Because their love story will be a fulfill coming soon for a small baby.?.
But she is actually very excited to tell karan this good news.
But before that Army Headquater call to Chauhan Mention…and tell every thing that…..
Karan was died…………….
This movement Im not express in word , it was totally heartouching, heart broken, emotional, crying etc etc……??????????
Naina heart was broken into million pieces??????……she was not stopping her crying..But she said..No No it is not true ….My karan was not died…they are said lie..I know that My karan was live..But she was not stop her crying …n she behaviour like a mad people this time…just she feel …..
” Agar Tu Hota Toh Naa Rote Humm…. Agar Tu Hota Toh Naa Rote Hummm….???????????????????????
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So, thats my small little OS , I know it was boring and not good but I’m try to write 1st time.
Mostly I say to every 1 , please do not bad thing about me because this OS karan was died. It was small concept in my mind then i write. And Ur guys know that Nairan always made for each other. And i have a lot of mistake so please forgive me.. I hope ur guys enjoy and please do like and comment …and specially say how is it???
Loads of love to every 1. ????
By Minakhi?
30 Comments
Awesome
loved it.
Thank u so much Fenil?… Im glad that u loved my os
Hi it was good ? you should write more
Thank u sofia…im glad that u love my os..n sure i will try some more write…
It was really good! Oh god Karan died!??? Feeling so sad for Naina!! But this was really good! I loved it… You should write more. Loads of love.❤❤
Thank u so much jiya…sry jiya i know u feel bad for read im os bcoz karan was died…bt it was my cncpt dear so i write…n yeah i will definately try to write more…
N loads of love?
Superbb.ur first try made my day..so cute i really loved it…cute cute and cute…karan ko kyun maara??but the last scenes were fantastic. So emotionalll..
Thanks dear
Thank u so much …im glad that u love my os….n sry dear my os karan was died bcoz i was my little cncpt in my mind so i write..n once again thnx?
Thnak u so much Sofia?
Im glad that u loved my os… N sure that i will try write more …
awesome o.s di it is the best and I just loved the ending di ur writing very good pld do continue writing.love u di
Thank u so much Aiha…im glad that u loved my os…n yeah sure i will try write more ..
So love u Aiha❤
Hey di!!! I loved this..u write very well..try to write more..it was really emotional and I can feel the pain of Naina bcoz my uncle is in Indian navy and he sometimes get chance to meet wid us..so I loved the way u expressed this..keep writing..loads of love ❤❤
Thank u so much Akanksha..im realy glad that u loved my os…n yeah i write some extra concept so that is os write…n yeah i will sure write more.
So thnx ur support
Loads of love❤
Nice story friend totally loved it. And Karan dead sad ?. U write well ?
Thank u so much Sid..n yeah i know sad when read my os so i request plz do not bad thing about me…bcoz thats my small concept so i write n u r guys know that Nairan always made for each other…btw thank u for ur support.
Nice…. You can try even ff… You can do do it well….
Thank u so much Aafiya…n yeah i will try to write more..bt this time i have no idea bt i damn sure that i will write more..n thank u once again ur support.
My pleasure to support you.. Take care..
Very beautiful and heart touching os. But pls do write articles with happy ending. It’s just a small request and about ur first writing. U rocked it dear. Keep rocking. Take care ☺☺
Thank u so much Priyanshipp..i know it was very heartouching os bt this one in my mind so i write . N sure next time i will write with happy ending.
N thank to for ur rocked name give for me bt i dont know im realy rocked or not…n thank for ur support dear.
Hi Minakhi. I read most of these FF’s silently but just had to comment on this one. You created a unique story and I loved it. Keep writing 😉
Thank u so much Zaynab for ur support…n yeah i will always write unique story n extra ordinary then other so this one os i was write..
Yeah sure i will write some more story.
OS is really nice di u wrote well ???? keep writing ur plot for the story was really gd n realistic specially in the last coz usually there’s always a happy ending -_-. Even I do the same sometimes -_-‘ but urs was something real. Keep writing!!!!!! ??????
Thank u so much ManyaPV5…im glad u love my os…bt i dont know it was gd or not gd bt this was the small cncpt in mind so i was write..n yeah i will write some more. So keep reading?
di u don’t need to call me ManyaPV5 you can just call me mannu or vippu
Awesome…..such a emotional story….I am really sorry for late comment di…u described everything very beautifully ….waiting for your next writing…lots of love ? ? ? ?
Thank u so much Niyati.. N its okk i understanding for ur late comment..
Loads of love?
Wow Di! ?
I’m so sorry for the late comment, I just saw this post now…
You nailed it! ?
The ending was amazing! I didn’t expect it to end like this, so I was pleasantly suprised! ?
Loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️
First of all thank u so much Naina. N plz dont be say sorry.
Im glad that u love my os …so plz love n support me n keep reading..
Loads of love❤❤
Call me Nainu or Mannu Di…