Dev’s POV
I was standing at the door of the balcony come terrace garden. She was enjoying the rain simply standing still.. and I was just looking at her. I wanted to touch every inch of her body..her wet body..I want to see her vulnerable. I want her to feel how it feels when a girl goes through transformation..from a girl to woman.. I want to give her that extreme pleasure..I want to complete her.. I felt sudden urge to separate each piece of cloth from her body.
Raat javaan mast samaan
Aise mein honthon se honth mila
Jism tera aur ye adaa
Saansein sulagtii hain hosh kahaan
Meri baahon mein aao zaraa
Meri dhadkan mein samaao zaraa
Meri ulfat mein bikhar jaao
Jalne do, bahakne do..
I don’t know whether it is love or lust..but I want her right now..my feelings pushed me towards her. I was standing behind her at few inches from her. I was about to hold her waist and kiss her neck. The loud voice of thunder stopped me to do so. Suddenly I started feeling guilty..what am I doing with this poor girl.
“Just because she is not stopping you. You can not do whatever you want. She has her own choice..and you are certainly not her choice..you forcefully married her, kissed her..just because she is accepting you..It doesn’t mean that you are allowed to do all this. Be a little bit gentle. You can’t keep on doing whatever you want.” My mind was pleading to stop this. I stepped back.
I felt extremely sorry for her condition. I turned to leave.
Sona: Dev, I want you to have some sugar..
I didn’t turn. She came in front of me.
Sona: Won’t you like to have? She was smiling naughtily. I didn’t respond. She kept her hand on my shoulders. I was too tall for her to reach up to my lips..I was standing still.. I didn’t put efforts to help her. She bites her lower lip to find out the solution..I was pleading in my mind like I want her. And she smirked..she put her tiny feet over mine..she was all set to kiss me..and she lost her balance..oh shit.. I held her waist and pulled her towards me..and we made an intense eyelock..her lips touched mine in a very gentle manner.. we parted and she looked at me..”I want you more.. Dev”…and this time she was wild. She was paralysing all my senses. I gave in.. I held her waist with my letf hand and my right hand was holding her head. We were kissing like it’s going to be last kiss.. I don’t know for how much time we were kissing each other. We parted when we were out of breath..I moved to kiss her collarbone.. I was moving down..
From your lips to your hips to your fingertips..
I wanna kiss your body all over.
From the goosebumps on your skin..
Baby you don’t have to say a word.
Use your imagination..
Dev’s on a mission..
To give u everything that your body’s been missing..
I can’t wait no more, I’m gonna explore
I’m waiting, Anticipating, Tonight it’s goin’ down
her blouse was an obstacle for me.. I was struggling kiss her cleavage without removing her blouse. “Dev.. let’s go inside..” I lifted her in my arms..
Sona’s POV
I just can’t wait.. It’s too hot over here..he is too hot to handle. We entered into room. He asked me to close the door as his hands were busy holding me. I thought he will put me on the bed..but my dear husband is in no mood to put me on bed..oh no he..I mean we headed towards bathroom..
Precap: no precap.. sometimes surprises are better than planned things..
Hey guys how was it. I have a question..I know we people are from different age group so please let me know that should I just declare that they consummated their marriage or you would like to read it in detail. It’s up to you..do comment to let me know what you want. So that only I will be able to write next episode. Take care … Love you all
57 Comments
Sizzling romantic. Pls post next episode soooooooooooon.
Thank you.. Will post soon
Oho….baaprey…????????
FIRE FIRE…it was….????
BATHROOM..????????
You write so very well…pro at explaining scenes…and surroundings…very nice..?????
How i wish that it would have been a one episode thing….
As there could be people of all ages over here…so i’ll leave it upto you…you can go the way you want…both things will be fine..
WAITING WAITING…??
Thank you n sorry for late reply..Will post soon
awesomeeeeeeeeee. aaj sayad puri raat wait karwane ka maan tha tu ka. 1 hour se baithi thi… post soon… i don’t know wahat to say. so i am okay with whatever u and other readers decide.
kaal thora jaaldi post karne ki koshis karna plzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Thank you.. I will post soon..Will finish writing next episode tonight
Di, omg….I luved it di…romantic, hot….
Splendid…marvellous di….
Di, u can’t do like this , its too short di….pls post long epis di…plss
Nd ur writing is like easily imaginable..if I start 2 read ur ff…I will go inside..deep the story…I luved this epi a lot…
U made my n8 beautiful by posting this epi…thank u so much di..
I don’t wanna know about conssumation deeply di,…I think it’s enough if u say conssumation is over….
Its upto ur choice di…
Post nxt asap…
Thank you dear.. I will post soon.
Awesomeeee richa??
Dekho Bhai I am 15(ok ok will be 15 in 3months)so it’s up to u!!!
And Haan I posted the 11th part of my ff!!do read if u want to?
Acha ab Jaldi se post Karna and bada wala plzzz?
Thank you..If you are under 15 you better skip reading next episode. I have started writing it in details.. Sorry for disappointment
It’s okay Di I read novels and some have these kind of content I skip them or sometimes don’t?
Then I request you to not skip
Post soon ❤️❤️ Ur ff I am ok with whatever let all the readers reading it decide can’t wait
Thank you.. I will post soon
nice…. but more romance….
Did u mean apko isme aur romance chahiye seriously phir toh ye pdne layak bhi nhi bachega pasta Nhi ye aur kaisa ho jaye
Thank you..OMG you want more?? Then next episode is certainly for you
Please post sooonnnnnnnn
Yup.. I will post soon
Actually it would be very interesting to read in detail ??….as I think all are not of so small age so iathink you should write it ☺☺
Yup..And if I wind-up shortly it will be injustice
And I also think that if you just say that they consummated then you don’t justify their relationship properly according to me soo plzzz do write it detail and write in such way that it’s not vulgur to read for others ☺☺
Al last it’s your wish bt plzzz post soon
Thank you.. I guess we think similarly
Hey I am kk with whatever u r gona post…let the others decide…and plzs..plzs jaldi post karni ki koshish kar
I will post soon
Goshhhhh!!! Now I have to surely cover my eyes??
Post next one soon
Love you
Hehe I’m 15 years old so I prefer consummation BTW I have piece of advice for you richa you should write: mature content for those who don’t prefer consummation
I wish I could do so..But I am really sorry. Once I write they consummated their marriage..It’s not possible to write mature content after that.. I tried but failed miserably..So I gave up
Woahhhhh………… rocking episode!!!
Pls post soon!!
Thank you
The episode was?????????????
i am 15yrs so i prefer consummation but its upto u …and all the others but whatever it be post soon!!!
Thank you dear
let the flow go as per your demand…. keep writing
I loved your comment
u better complete the scene in detail within next episode and mark it as 18+
so that we woul not touch it..
but please dont change any thing in the next episode that makes some confusion in next part
because if u are going to make it elobrate then i could not read it…
and if u do something change in that episode then i could not understand the following episode
but noting it simply as they consummate the marriage life is quite better for me
Thank you dear… I will keep it in mind
welcome dear…
Waitng for DEVAKSHILIOUS ???? epi in detail….???
Sure
please go in detail..just put a 18+ warning…and pls update soon
Thank you.. I will post soon
Awesome episode dear but plzz post the next episode soon as possible
Thank you.. I will post soon
Uggh that was not me richa but my sister… I prefer in detali
I will post soon
Oh Richa Di Richa Di richa Di it is amazing mai toh bas pagal ho gai omg unbelievable plz age Ka portion jaise hi apko time mile lik do vrna mai to suspence me hi mr jaungi plz plz plz
Thank you.. I will post soon
post soon
I was waiting to see your name once again in the comment box..Love you loads. Will post soon
Hi Richa !!
So I started reading your ff after episode 13 but wanted to read the entire thing before commenting.
From the last one hour I’m glued to my phone’s screen & read all the episodes … My eyes are paining but I have a wide smile on my face …..
You are incredible
You are actually an inspiration
Post soon
I am happy that you read all episode. Glad to hear from you. Love you. I will post soon
ok aap ne abi tak writing finish kiya nahi. par kya aap aaj raat ko submit kardoge??? if yes, then we can read it next morning…
So sorry for disappointment.. I am writing it. You can expect it by tomorrow morning.. I am sorry for being late. I want it to be real..Like easy for you to imagine.. Hope you forgive me
oops. maaine notice nahi kiya ki aap details mai likh rahe hai. so i can not read it as i am only 14. so post the next soon.sorry. aaj mai aapko kuch jaida hi pateshan kar rahi hu. kyuki aaj mera pura din boring gaya. again sorry.
16 episode is Published
Awesome …Post it soon☺☺☺
Thank you