Hello everyone..Eva here…my 9th ff….i’m so happy….so thanks to u all…u all appreciated me,,encouraged me to write more……that’s why i’m here…..
Scene:Mount College
First day of the first year students…..in the college
Some boys r seen playing basket ball…….and girls r cheering for them…..but only one name could be heard……LUCKY………..yes its Mr Laksh Maheshwari….the captain of the basket ball team…..3rd year student…he is quite famous…smart and talented….he is an obedient son…and loves his family the most….he is not a flirt but someone who respects girls……in all…he is something we call a good human being….
Laksh was about to put the ball in the basket…when he was stopped by another handsome man……he snatches the ball while playing and puts it in the basket…..he in none other than our Sanskar….Sanskar Mehra…another excellent player…..2nd year student…
The bell rings…they r going…..just then Sanskar comes and blocks Laksh’s way….
Sanky:Today i just snatched the ball……wait and see how i snatch your position too….
Laksh:U r junior to me……i won’t say anything bad to u…..or else their won’t be any difference left between us…
Just then Rishi,Sanskar’s bestie comes there…
Rishi:Sanky lets go…see…..some freshers…..ragging toh bantiii hiii hai boss…
Sanky smiles evilly and leaves with Rishi…
Sanskar’s group:Kavita Roy,Kavya Malhotra,Sahil Sengupta,Rishi Shah and Rajat Khanna
Just then…they see a girl entering the college…..she has wore an anarkali suit…..wears glasses and has made a ponytail…..
Kavya:Mil gayi bakri….
The girl sees them and gets scared..and is about to run…..when Kavita puts her leg in between and makes her fall…her chin starts bleeding….
Kavita:Oh o…sorry…..i did not see u…..
She stands and is about to leave….
Rishi:Beta…what’s your name?
The girl stammers;Sw…ar….a….(Yes that girl is Swara)
Kavita;What?Sw..ar…a?Aisa bhi koi naam hota hai bhala?
Everyone starts laughing…
Kavita:Accha….prove that u r uselful….i mean..dance or sing…..do something……………
Swara starts crying…..
Sahi;Ole le le….baby…don’t cry….
Kavita:Just see her hair….full of oil..champi…
She is about to touch Swara’s hair..but someone holds her hand……nope..if u r thinking that its Sanskar……then no..its not Sanskar….Laksh bhi nehi…..its a girl..and she is none other than our Ragini….
Ragini:Stay away……don’t u dare to do this thing again…
Kavita:Who the hell r u?
Ragini:Ummmm…yeah…i’m DAKUBASANTI…..
Sanky’s group is shocked….other than them everyone is laughing….
Ragini:Stay away from her….
Ragini is wearing a pink top and jeans….she grabs Swara’s hand and leaves….She makes her sit…..Sanky’s group follow them…..
Ragini:See…if anyone insults u..then u have to fight back..u have to answer them…. if u stay quite then they will insult u more…to stop them from doing this…u have to answer them…and everytime…this dakubasanti won’t be there to save u….u have to save yourself…
Sanky and his group hear this convo….
Kavya:We have to teach this dakubasanti and her Sw…ar..a,,,,,,a lesson…..
Laksh’s group:Arjun and Abeer…
Abeer:Pearl V Puri
Arjun:Aham Sharma
Laksh:This Sanskar and his group will never change…..
Arjun:Ha….
Their classes end…and everyone is leaving…..
Laksh is walking on the road….Sanky drives his car towards Laksh…
Sanky:Ajke baadh..he won’t be able to play basket ball…and anything…..
Laksh doesn’t see the car…the car is about to hit him when a veiled girl saves him..both of them fall down….
Sanky stops the car and looks from the looking glass…
Kavya;Sanky….start kar car…we need to leave…..or else….they will catch us…and police case na banjaye….
Sanskar drives away….Laksh gets some scratches….he looks back and sees that the girl is gone…
Laksh;Where is she??
He looks here and there….and his eyes fall on a silver chain….with a love shaped locket…..he keeps it with him…..
Precap:Nehi patah…
My first ff…where u’ll find the mystery later….please do tell me how it was….my first try….trying to change my writing style….. 😀 😀 :D.
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Ye eva bhabhi ka chakar kya he
Long story…There is a virtual Maheshwari family here..and I’m Mrs Laksh Maheshwari ?..so my devars and nandjis call me bhabi..?
Please get me also in the family anyone exept parvati is okay
thik hai…..u be Laksh’s sis….
update next part soon
Yes..i will?
Hello Eva.. SHANAYA here.. I am using Riya’s id.. How’s u .. I am too late .. Many reasons.. Chaddo use.. I came na.. You are awesome . Awesome .. Awesome .. Yeh Riya kapoor ne Meri behena ka naam ekdum kharab kar diya .. True jalkukari.. Mujhe pehle lagta tha ki uske nuts loose hai par an pata chala hai ki uska dimag Khali hai to use intact rakhne ke liye koi nuts hi nahi.. And yaar she loves us so much.. Itna insult karane ke baad bhi baar baar waapas aa jati hai.. So selfless love .. Hai ki nahi
No comments on Riya Kapoor..and Shanaya I’m fine..Riya wapas kab ayegi??Anyways thank u?
Riya ka discharge date abhi tak confirm nahi hua hai.. 12th ko uska ek final test hoga.. If results clear honge then discharge kar diya jaayega.. Idk why but I don’t want to login so I am using my id
Riya Ko jaldi thik honeko kaho…her kiddo and everyone is waiting for her..
Good storyline… Continue…
Thank u Mukti?
Hiiiiiiii eva , tu didnt posted my earlier comment , eva i know ur a just fab writer ….
I will surely read ur ff if its swasan and raglak …. please please do it for me *widest puppy dog eyes i can make* ….
And ya i didnt red ur earlier ffs because they have swalak and ragsan …. so kaan pakad ke sorry ….
Plzz dear don’t read my ff with expectation of your fav couple….i donno..what I’ll do next…so no surety..
Meine peile bhi comment kiya tha par post nahi hua i think so phirse comment kar raha hun?
Very nice start wifey???
Tumne 8 ffs likhe hai?? u r great wifey
Vaise uss pagal Riya kapoor ko dhyaan mat dena. U know mujhe yeh dundne me itnaa waqt laga lekin uss Riya ne toh bohot jaldi dundliya tumhe. Lagta hai ki wo tumhari fan hai . Jahan tum hotiho wahan wo dhodi chali aati hai???
Love u wifey????
Baki sab garwale kaise hai?????
Love u all??
We r fine bhaiyo what about u
I am fineeeee.?
I have the same question..tujhe nehi Mila..par useh milgaya…kesa pati hai mera??
wow…….eva…………..wonderful chappy……………………i loved it…..but sanskar seems to be a big villian here…………please, please ,please don’t make him a very big villian……………..actually please don’t make anyone villian……….i well the veiled girl seems to be swara to me…………..i wish it is swara only…………because then it will be fun seeing different shades of swara………………loved swaragini scenes and i literely need more of it……..please………………..and yup not to forget DakuBasanti…………………..waiting eagerly for next chapter………….love you……….be happy……
Hey Piya…good to see u here…i’m a regular reader of your ff…and u r an awesome writer..plz post your ff..dil ki dor…and i donno about negative and positive characters…keep guessing..love u too…
oh , ok dear…………well i will post it soon………………….school restarted so not at all getting time but i will post soon…………………….and yup i’ll have to keep guessing……..what else can this masuum the bacha do…………………post soon………love you………be happy……..
Lol…massum sa baccha? And do u knw what happened to Shloka?I haven’t seen her from a long time….
hey eva…….well shloka is attending her cousin’s wedding and out of town so she isn’t able to come on tu……………..well am here checking this page daily for your updates………..i know 9th is a difficult class so no problem but please if possible try to upload soon…………..
Awesome starting Eva dii plzz continue it & waiting for next part.
Thank u Menaz…
Teri starting bohot achhi hai..kamaal kar di tune!! Mystery haan??!! Waiting… Isse age muh seal hai. Bad me. Tata!!
Thank u papaji….guess karte raho..i’m sure kabhi guess nehi kar paoge….mera dimaag sabse hatke hai.. 😀
hi eva dear it was awesome can you plz read a hate to love story ( a SWASAN fanfic) it is my story its first episode has been published it is in 1st page please read it and comment
Ok dear..I’ll read it…..?
Gud Eva Congo fr ur 9th ff continue plz waiting fr nxt part
Thank u Avniesha…