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Chap -14
Nilima is watching them secretly as soon as they leaves she proceeds to her work.She stole the dresses from the room n comes outside of the company..She pours kerosene on the dresses n burns it..
Nilima smirking – Sanskar u did wrong messing up with me..Tch..tch..See u have to pay so big price for that..(angrily) U r praising that swara in front of me na now i will see how ur swara will save ur reputation n place in this competition..
She laughs evilly..She smirks remincising how she enters from the backdoor of the ofc n after that switch off all the Cctv camera n when swasan leaves she continues her work.Nilima went from there..
Watchman smells of something burning..He goes there n gets shock..The watchman hurriedly calls laksh n sanskar..After an hour swasan n raglak n some staff of company are present over there..
Sanskar is totally shocked by seeing his dream burning..
Laksh angrily -Watchman..Howzz all this happened..??
Watchman – Sir..I don’t know..I didn’t get away from the gate for a sec nor i sleep..Till then no one came there i don’t know who did it n when it happened..??
A employee came running to laksh..
Employee – Sir..I think that person is too intelligent..All the recordings are deleted of before an hour..
One more watchman comes n says – Sir..That person enters from the back door of the ofc..I saw someone’s shoes print on the backdoor’s gate..
Rag – Laksh..I think we should call police now..
Lak – U r right..I call them now..
Sanskar is just sitting near the ashes with teary eyes..Swara is watching him continuously..She comes to him n puts her hand on his shoulder..
San painfully – What’s all happened..?? Before an hour we r happy n now…A tear rolls down from his eyes..
Swara – Sir..This is not the time for cry..We have to do something..
San – Now what we can do..?? After 10 hrs the event is there nd we don’t have anything..We lost the first round of the competition swara..I loose it..I am a looser..
He breaks down..Swara sits down close to sanskar.She holds his cheeks between her palm n make him see to her eyes..Sanskar’s eyes r filled with tears..
Swara consoling – Sir..If u break like this then how we will get out from this tough situation..You have to be strong sir..U have to be strong..
Rag – But What we can do in this much less time..??
Swa – We have 10 hrs ragini..If we all work together then the work will get complete..
Rag – But we have not the designs..The old designs are very time taking n we have not materials also..
Swa – U don’t worry for the designs..I’ll make it..
Lak – I am taking responsibility for bringing raw materials..
Like this each n every employee of the company takes the resposibility of some or other things..Sanskar is just seeing all of them amusedly..Swara smiles by seeing everyone’s cooperation..
Swa – Sir..If we have so much loving n supportive person around us then we have to didn’t worry about anything..
She forwards her hand to sanskar..Sanskar looks on to swara..Swara signals him to keep his hand on her palm..Sanskar holds her hand n stands up..
Swa smiles – Now We want only ur orders sir to proceed towards our work.
Sanskar smiles n seeing into her eyes says – yess..
A curve appears on her face near her lips..They have a cute eyelock for a sec..
After that everyone hurriedly went to their respective work..
@After 5 hrs..
Laksh n Ragini are talking with eachother..
Laksh – Ragini..How much work is left..??
Ragini – Till now only 2 dresses are made up till now..Nd the 3rd is on the way..
Lak worriedly – Oh nooo…4 dresses are still left..I don’t know how will all this complete..
Laksh gets restless n ragini keeps her hand on his hand assuring him that everything will done on time..
Ragini – Don’t worry laksh everything will get completed on time..
Everyone reached where the event is going to happen..Nilima is also present there n he gets confused by seeing sanskar n his staff there..
Nilima – What they r doing here..?? (Smirks) Koi baat nhi now it will be more fun to see his insult in front of everyone..
The stage is prepared elegantly n beautifully where models will do the ramp walk with new designed clothes by their designer..After n hour the show starts..The ankur announces..
Ankur – Hello ladies n gentleman of the kolkata welcome in the ” Milan fashion week ” Where several fashion companies will compete with eachother n top 3 Designer company selected by our mentors will go to New york for the finale of Milan fashion week where they will compete with international companies n become the no 1 fashion company of the world..Now we should start the event without any delay..
One by one all company’s models come and the mentors give them appropriate marks..Sanskar’s models also come one by one n mentors give them marks..The event gets ended in 2 hours n its the result time..All the participants comes on the stage in which sanskar is also included..
Ankur – So guyzz result is with me in this envelope n i am going to open it..The ankur opens the envelope n says n the no 1 company who is going to paris for further competition is..
1.Nk designs..
2 one is TR Fashion mart..
N the 3 rd one is..
Swasan are seeing towards the ankur with hopeful eyes..
3 is Dk fashion..
Swara closes her eyes sadly n gets hurted becoz after so much hardwork they do not win..Sanskar’s rivals are getting happy becoz they think that sanskar will win but he loose..Nilima also gets so much happy becoz her plan works..Swara painfully saw towards sanskar who is clapping for the winners happily..
Ankur – So these are the three company who will go to new york..All the partcipants started to leave from the stage sanskar went towards his team who is now totally broken n sad.Sanskar cheers them all n says to leave from here..They r going when ankur stops them..
Ankur – Wait a min guyzz our one mentor from U.S.A. wanna say something..
Sanskar n his team stops.The ankur forwards the mike to mentor
Mentor – Actually till now me n all other mentors are deciding to give a chance to one company who extremely well done in this competition..We recently listened that company’s problem n we decided to give a wild card entry in this competition..So..That company’s name is…
SR FASHION COMPANY..
Sanskar gets extremely shocked by listening his company’s name..Swara jumps in joy..Everyone hoots n clap for them..The rivals which are getting happy before a sec gets jealous again..
Sanskar went on the stage Ankur give mike to sanskar..
San happily (in mike) – What i say i didn’t get any words to describe my feeling.First of all thank u so much mentors for all this nd my team who helps me in every way..(Raglak with others wave their hands standing down.Sanskar smiles) I don’t wanna say this but without saying i can’t stay also..Actually all our dresses which are made for this event by me n my team are burnt last night only..I don’t know who did it but he/she will be my rival only who will be jealous from me n don’t want me to win this competition..But apart from all these things I want to thanks that person who support me in my toughest situation..She help me at that time when i loose all my hopes..Nd dresses which u all see before some min all are made by her only in just 8 hrs..U can imagine 8 hrs n that girl name is….
……..
….
Swaraaaa…
Swara gets shocked by listening her name.She doesn’t responding anything..
San continues – Swara i know how much i say thanks to u will be less only becoz u did a big favour on me which i didn’t pay in my future..Thank u thank u so much for coming in my life , in my ofc n thank u for everything u did for me..Becoz of u only i am standibg here n i wanna do something for u..
He claps for swara n slowly everyone starts to clap for her..
Ankur – Miss..Swara gadodia plzz come on the stage..
Raglak – Go swara..
Everyone says her to go n she goes on the stage..She gets bit nervous by seeing so much crowd infront of her but by seeing sanskar smile all her nervousness fades away..
Ankur – Come on guyzz give a very big hand for both of them..
Everyone claps for them..N swasan happiness is beyond the earth..Nililma gets angry n by stamping her foot on the ground she goes away from there..
Swasan gets down from the stage n raglak n everyone congrats them..After that everyone leaves n swasan n raglak are left there..
Rag happily- Hufff..Everything is done perfectly n we got the chance yipeee..
Lak loudly – yess ragini..Now its the time for treat which is given by sanskar to us..
San – Treat n that at this late night..Which restraunt will be opened..??
Swa – Restraunt will be not open but one thing is there which would be open at this time..
Sanraglak – Which place..??
Swa grins widely – Dhaba…
Rag excitedly – Woww..I listened that dhaba’s food seems to be very tasty..
Swa – yess ragini u listened right..Even everytime me baba n adi goes to dhaba n eats food there only..N wahhh..What a food they made
Rag gulping the saliva which is coming down her throat – I never gone there..But by seeing ur reaction I want to go to dhaba..
They hurriedly leaves for the dhaba..Ragini n swara are eating non -stop as if they didn’t get food from years..
Sanlak see both of them amusedly..Swarag see towards them n stops eating..
Swara (to sanskar) – If ur staring session is over then can I eat..
San clear his throat n started to look other side..
Rag – Laksh what r u seeing just eat na see how tasty tasty food are kept in front of us..
Lak seeing the paratha which is totally dipped in desi ghee..Laksh make weird faces n says yess darling..So much tasty food..
San in ear of laksh-bhai by seeing them i felt like they never get food from months..
Laksh – Not months sanky..Say years..
Sanskar gives out a laugh..
Swarag saw towards sanskar n he started eating..
After the eating session sanskar goes to pay the bill..Raglak sitting talking in one corner n swara is standing in a one corner staring the sky..
Sanskar comes to swara n stands beside him keeping his hand inside his pocket..
San – hmm..So u r counting stars..
Swara gives out a laugh – Sir I must say u crack nice jokes..
San acted like a child – Really..thank u so much..
Swara smiles by seeing his face..
San seeing her – hmm..I am right..
Swara confusedly – Right.!!! But for what..??
Sanskar stares swara from tip to toe..Swara checks herself n see towards sanskar confusedly..
San suspiciously – There is a big secret..
Swara confusedly – Sir..What r u talking..?? Secret..Which secret..??
San – Aree secret of ur fitness..
Swara confusedly – hmm..
San – What hmm..?? Aree I saw u on the table how much u eat n u know the dhaba food is so much oily but see ur self u r absolutely fit..A slim – trim perfect girl..Surely there is something big secret is behind ur fitness..
Swara laughs whole heartedly..
Swara between her laughs – Seriously sir..I mean..She laughs again..
Sanskar also laughs with her..Sanskar stop for a min n he stares at swara’s face which is glowing due to happiness..Unknowingly sanskar feels happy by seeing her smile..
San lovingly – Swara..U look beautiful during smiling..
Swara looks on to sanskar n sanskar stares in her eyes..
Swara clearing her throat – I think its gonna late we should leave for home..
San smiles – yess sure..
Sanskar is standing in front of swara..She started to go from there as she took a step forward her leg gets twisted becoz of some stones..She stumbles n falls directly on the chest of sanskar..Sanskar holds her by waist in the nick of time n swara is putting her both hands on either side of sanskar’s shoulder..They have a beautiful eyelock..They are too close to eachother that they could feel eachothers heartbeat which is beating very fastly now..
Raglak came there for informing them to leave but by seeing the scenario they gets shocked..Raglak clears their throat n swasan came out from their fantasy world…They see towards raglak n hurriedly seperates away..Both are feeling awkward as well as embarassed..
Lak – Bhai..This is public place..Don’t start here only..
San widens his eyes n swara blushes hard..
San stutters – Wh..at do u m..e..an laksh ..?? Swara..had..just…fall..en..d..own..n i..am just helping her..
Rag naughtingly – yess..yess..U are helping her..We know that we saw everything..No need of explaination..
Swara embarrased- Ra..gini…U r unecessary pulling the talk…It’s nothing like that..
Raglak started laughing n give hi – fi to eachother..They laugh hard..
Ragini laughing – Laksh just saw their faces..
Laksh laughing – yess..
They laugh non stop for a min by holding their stomach..Swasan are seeing them with confusion stretched all over the face..Ragini stops laughing..
Rag – U both are explaining us the thing like really u both do something n got catched red handed..
Laksh still laughing – Ragini u r absolutely right..For some sec i got feeling of inspector who is investigating them..
They again started laughing..
Sanskar now give a glare to laksh..
San – So till now u both r making fun of us..
They nod their head in yess n laugh more loudly n swasan gets angry by seeing them..
Swa – U both will pay for this..When I will caught u red handed for anything na then at that time i will laugh on u..
San determined- hmm..Not only u swara i am also with u..I will tell them at that day..
Rag – Ok..ok..tab ki tab dekhi jayegi..Now we should leave hmm..
All four leaves from there..
Huff guyzz done..I hope this is good chappy..If u like it then shoot ur comments n once again thank u so much for commenting on my previous epi..Next episode will be on Friday..Till then stay tuned..Bye bye..
22 Comments
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hey eku!want to say something..!some people are asking it raging and sanskar previous ff vivah or something like that..!clear them that it is not your work but it is stella’s “Tujhh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai” swasan ff?as u copied from her..!I got to know recently..!and suggestion to u..don’t copy others work and take credits..!it will be good if u clear them..!or else we should inform them personally or what..?it will be good if u accept mistake in front of them rather than we inform to each n every person..!
ragini*
Ok i will inform them..
good to u…clear that as soon as possible in ur new ff making a note…orelse..we swasan fans will not mind to make a post and let them know what u did..!
and also delete that ff which u copied…that is purely our SWASAN FAMOUS WRITER STELLA’S FAMOUS FF..AND THAT FF BELONGS TO OUR SWASAN…!!
and don’t you dare to copy others work. and I have posted in administrator ‘s wall. good if you see the whole post and say sorry pubicaly. and don’t forget to mention the name and author of the ff. your so called famous ff vivah’s true fans must know whose ff it is.
and one more thing, you delete the parts of vivah from tellyupdates.co.in and if you can’t then ask the website to delete it.
Its so lovely dear , swara helping sanskar and he giving credit to swara. Their progressing love story. I am loving it
nice
Awesome
Awesome dear……
Awesome dear…..read all parts….Amazing….loved it
Nice to see there positivity
Good one dear
hmm the story is nice lets see how swasan love story proceeds. can i ask you a question if you don’t mind and if you don’t feel bad are you a swasan fan or a rag——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————san fan????
Dear i am swaragini fan..I like all the four characters..
Nice chap. It’s long enough but the content is a bit less. But still enjoyed it nicely. Update soon..
awesome dear
Awesome dear
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