Hello friends!! How are you all? Thank u all my lovely readers for your beautiful comments… Without wasting any time, let’s start the journey of love….
Scene 1
In the chawl, sanchi is drying her hairs standing in the balcony . She is looking very beautiful in white kurta and green pajama with a simple green colored cotton dupatta with golden earrings…. Someone, at a distance is looking at her and admiring her beauty…. Suddenly, her friends Tina and meena called ” sanchi let’s go we are late for the college”.. In between, we also have to visit temple for mahaarti….
Sanchi : 1 minute, I m coming
She immediately took her bag and ran downstairs… Come, let’s go now… Tina, meena, sanchi by holding each others hands went to college…
Near by the road, kabir with his goons are busy in chit chat…
One goon : look bhabhiji is coming
Other goon : she is looking so beautiful
By hearing their words, kabir fumed and slapped the goons… U stupids “how dare u to see her”..i only can see her(laughing evilly)… Agar woh meri nahi huyee toh kisi ki nahi hogi… He ordered his goons to keep an eye on sanchi…
Scene 2
Veer in his chawl calling someone : kaki, main thela lagane ja raha hu….
The lady : OK beta, don’t worry I will take care of your house…
Time skips to marine drive, where veer was shouting ” khilone le lo “beautiful, beautiful toys are there,..red, blue, green, yellow every color toys are available..
(OMG someone is running, let’s see who is that? She is sanchi hiding from kabir ‘s goons n collided with veer’s thela)
Both fall down.. Sanchi on top of veer and toys are spread all over..they had an intense eye lock…kabir’s goons didn’t noticed sanchi due to lots of people gathering the place.. After some time, veer panics “look what u have done ” my thela is totally broken… Take out money u gawad chokri…
Sanchi cries n pleads : please, forgive me… I don’t have any money… Please save me from the goons…
Veer : OK come with me… I will take u to my home…
Sanchi : no no, he will find me at any cost… Can you take me to some safe place?
Veer : OK.. But first u tell who was following u?
Sancho answered all his questions how kabir looks at her and follows her to everywhere… She further tells, I hate him.. I just can’t bear his presence near me… I want to become doctor but if that kabir will be there then I can’t achieve what I want… My parents also wants me to marry him.. Please help me
Scene 3
At kabir ‘s home, the goons informed him how sanchi disappeared before their eyes…
Kabir (holding a gun) : I need her…
He killed one of his goons.. “mujhe na sunne ki aadat nahi “…just get lost n bring her back to me…
Scene 4
Next day in the morning, veer and sanchi reached kolhapur by train… He pacifies her ” I will make u a doctor “…today itself, I will go to my friends house to make all the arrangements… U no need to worry, I m there for u.. I will never leave u.. (by holding her hands)
Sanchi became so emotional that she hugged him tightly…. …she whispered in his ears (thank you) ..i also make a promise that I’ll never leave u chahe meri maut hi kyu na aa jaaye…
Note : friends, confession part is next…sanchi started to love veer but veer is not aware of anything
OK friends, ending here itself… In this story no songs will be included… Today, I m very busy in navaratri celebrations.. Please forgive me for short update… If u liked it then please drop your comments or u can throw anything..
Take care n love u all
With regards
Anu
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Anu dear, first of all, a Happy Navratri….May Mata Katyayani bless u with amazing thoughts & ideas so that u can write more & more for us……….hehe……..just kidding……….btw dear, it was osm, fabulous, ek dum jhakaas……….plz update nxt one asap…….luv u loads dear……….
Riya sweetie thanks a lot for loving it… Actually I don’t know what I have written…i was in a hurry…wish u a very happy sasthi… Maa bless u and your family yehi meri duwa hai…
Nice episode
Thanks anu for liking…
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Thanks Alia dear for your lovely comments…
Happy navratri dear… may goddess Karni blesses u with lots of happiness in ur life..
Love ur story and ur interpretations dear..
Lots of love to u
Thank you khamoshi for loving the story… Aise hi bharosa Karna mujhpar…. I too loved your ff… It’s beyond everything…. It’s fantastic, mind-blowing, fabulous… I always waits for your ff.. Love u a lot… Umaaaaa\aaasaah
Thank u so much for ur kind words dear.. it really means a lot to me. Heyy can i call u sister? If u don’t mind..
Btw i am submitting my next update tomorrow.. do give me ur opinions on it dear..i will wait for ur response siso.
Arey yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai.. U can call me anything whatever u want…yippee excited to read your story…. Please update it fast
Is it a sanveer story? By the way update wad ossum and it reminded me some of my past…ok leave it ..give next part soon.
Thanks yashi.. I will try to update soon…
Awsome nu dear nd sorry for late commnt m lill busy nowadays nd happy navratri post nxt one
Amazing… Awesome .. Marvelous epi.. Loved it..