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Home»Fan Fiction»ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-9
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ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-9

Aastha_ReddyBy Aastha_ReddyMay 22, 201733 Comments6 Mins Read
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“Where are you taking me Shivaay”- Annika asked out of curiosity,”where are we both going”.
“Forest..to meet your relatives”- Shivaay teased,”Wild animals”.
“Stop relating me with wild animals”- Annika fumed.
“Wife..wild life”- Shivaay have more fun watching her red face,” Jaan jaan kehti hai..janbaron ki tarah treat..”.(credit to SPA-2017, Nakuul Mehta).
“Oh shit!!”- Shivaay punched the steering wheel,”Again”.
“Whats wrong with your car Mr. Oberoi”- Annika came out of the vehicle,” whenever we go out it brakes down in the middle of no where”.
“My car..its wish”- The cute husband gave power to his vehicle,”like SSO like his car”.
“Not funny”- Annika searched for water desperately,”We have to do some thing”.
“Here take it and drink”- Shivaay placed a bottle,”Don’t throw at me or the car”.
“Aah…”- The Billu shouted then fell down clutching his chest.
A panic strike her..Annika searched for a certain yellow tablet, Rudra instructed last time..she know it.
“Shivaay..open your eyes”- Annika pat his cheeks , her soft hands ran the length of his face, his stubbles, closed eyes, jutting chin, forehead caressed his messed hair,”don’t do this to me..to us. now when I have realised that you are my world..don’t snatch it away from my life”.
He remained unmoved..no change except for the heartbeat..his and her..their one..Keeping match with her ghanti..some mich michi..a lot of raita.
“I know that I love you now..I discover it for me.. a family and feelings around you”- Annika cried,”I love you Shivaay..I do”.
“My ears are not working properly..”- He winked then sat to check his ear and ,”Did I hear something personal or was it a repeat of incidents”.
“I don’t know”- Annika flushed . It is repetition of the same incident from the time they both end in forest while following Omkara. His heart problem with her hanging on a height of tree..
“I know every thing”- His heart filled with unknown happiness as he hugged her ..kissed her several times..,”The alien feelings ..the mich michi, raita and Ghanti have a meaning now..a relation from heart husband- wife, best friends, support-trust and now.. alien feeling is no more alien its familiar to me “.
“I said the same thing to you the previous time also”-Annika have nothing more to say, tongue tied condition but her black eyes talked more with his green pair,”you never heard me that time”.
“The way to avoid me, hide under couch, dining table after we return home “- Shivaay felt amused at her red flushed face,”I knew then some thing was right( it can’t be wrong).. some thing is wrong with you”. “Aap toh bade chamtai nikle”- Annika removed her shy to back seat and jumped to hug him real tight,”Chamtumai Billu”.
“Why did you pretend to loss memory then for the second time”- Shivaay pouted, a fake sadness engulf his inner smiling eyes ,” Hiding some thing from me Annika”.
“No.. not at all”- Annika chocked on her throat,”nothing to hide from you”.
” I will wait for that”- He resumed his patience after the yalneer incident,”I know you..I trust you”.
“Where are we going??”- Annika asked about their journey and destination.
“This journey is most beautiful and my destination is”- Shivaay pulled her b
very close to him, encircled her arms around his waist and rest his cheek on her head,”this destination is perfect for me”.
Annika blushed more.. tough competition to tomato and beet.
“Annika…”- He closed his eyes to feel contented in her embrace,”you are blushing”.
“We are going to bring Saahil back home now”- He assured and the vehicle started.
“You khotiyya”- Annika muffled ,”the car is not sick”.
He smiled in a cheeky way,”I said few minutes ago..my car..its wish”.
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“Glucose Biscuit in green tea”- Omkara made an annoyed face,”Who adds and frinks??”.
“I and you did the work respectively”- His Bulbul answered frankly.
Buamma and Jhanvi peeped in to the kitchen,”OmRi moment in kitchen”.
“I added some curd in your rice the other day, a piece of papaya in your orange juice, some peanut in your green gram dal, some piece of bitter guard inbetween cucumber salad and few drops of honey in your lemon water after exercise daily”.
“Oh my maatha”- Omkara sat on the slab,” Patni nahi milabat ki dukaan ho tum”.
“Obro moment with out me”- Rudra interfered then,”oh!! romance in kitchen”.
“Rudra.. my books”- Soumya came, face fallen, eyes lost twinkles,”You have few of my books, give me , I have to pack”.
Rudra felt his throat went dry..he wanted to shout, cry, scream,”Sumo..forget the things..we are friends forever..just remember you have a friend in India when you are in Austrelia.. in all your need”.
“I will call you”- Soumya agreed the fact that they are best friends after all mishaps. She went away.
“You should stop her Rudra”- Omkara suggested,”It is really hard to let go of a thing or person we love”.
“Let her go O”- Rudra rubbed the tiny drop of salty water from the corner of his eyes,”She had been through a lot..we all have been through a lot of problem and I personally hurt her.. she will come back to me one day and that day there will be love with Interest”.
“Ishq pe hoga yakeen..ishq ho jaane ke baad”- Omkara used his old words,”It happened to Shivaay and now you too paraya dhan”.
” We are together..ready to fight all problems O”- Ru hugged his brother, a child grown to a married man suddenly,”I know Sumo will be back soon”.
“You know Shayaries”- This side of her husband is new for Gouri,”wah wah wah…”
“He is expert in that”- Rudra smiled , a little relieved, ” You can ask him for some personally only for you”.
“Door se dekha toh ek sukoon sa rahat thi , zindegi mein”- Rudra left before his brother continue more to dedicate shayaries to his newly wedded wife.
“I am not going for you”- Om too left kitchen.
“Don’t be shy my Jatadhari hippi”- Gouri shouted from behind..smiling inside the kitchen.

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    33 Comments

    1. zaveesha on May 22, 2017 11:40 pm

      Woww..finally it is revealed that anika was acting…but why??..for that we have to wait till next episode…m waiting…

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 7:34 am

        Zaveesha..Happy birth day first.
        Hmm.. wait Darling wait. The reason will be revealed soon.

      • zaveesha on May 23, 2017 8:05 am

        Thank u soo much Astha di….m very happy…thanks for remembering…

    2. fffan1234 on May 22, 2017 11:49 pm

      Superb

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 7:35 am

        Thanks Friend .

    3. mehakchalag on May 23, 2017 12:21 am

      Finally woh part aa hi gya jiska sabko tha intezzar.Suspense se parda hat hi gya.Spa seen, i loved it. when i watch that scene first i m laughing like mad.Today shivaay is on full in naughty mood huh?Di this episode is excellent.Personally,I m missing om shayaris.Hope we get back that om.Alien feeling aaj maine bhut enjoy ki.

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 7:42 am

        Mehak…Hmm.. parda uth gaya. Bechara Shivaay Bhaiyya was in romantic mood to make her accept truth.

    4. Surbhi Sharma on May 23, 2017 1:55 am

      Ohh , toh finally finally revealed ani was acting . ShivU ke saath saat mera bhi head spinning thoda kam hua .
      As usual , ekdum Dhinchak wala epi .???
      Post soon . ???

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 7:44 am

        Surbhi…acting shakting end here. but trust me not the head spin for you all.

    5. Banita on May 23, 2017 2:43 am

      After 8 part finally revaled anika’s ki fake memory loss drama…… Nd omki somki milabat khana kha raha tha apne bulbul se… Hahaha….. Lol

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 7:48 am

        Bunny…Gouri ne Daal mein jamal ghota nahi milake Omky to khilaya sukar hai Shankarji ka.
        Fake is revealed now.

    6. Shivika on May 23, 2017 9:12 am

      Awesome…..
      Finally Shivaay is relieved….Dramebaaz SSO….
      Omri scene was cute….
      Rumya babies~ I miss them…..
      waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 9:29 am

        Shivika… for some time take a break from head Spin any time that can be back on any one. Its 23rd of MAY you see!! Naughty Shivaay bhaiyya is very cute hey na to make her confess love.

    7. Nita D on May 23, 2017 9:16 am

      Nice chappy…..so it was fake memory loss only….But today u can’t say that the story hasn’t progressed…..
      Shivika confession…..Awwww…
      OmRi moment was so sweet…. milavat ki dukan???
      Saumya is leaving in your ff also ??

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 9:37 am

        Nita…a little progress only. Milabat ki dukaa se Shaadi karliya hamari Omkara Bhaiyya ne. “Jaane nahi dunga tujhe…jaane tujhe dunga nahi”- for Soumya.
        Its Annika confession not Shivika confession.. he was taking advantage and enjoying only. He have to voice out his feeling and love in three words.
        wait for a little more head spin.

    8. Dhar on May 23, 2017 9:26 am

      Hey we will miss sumo , but this one was a very very very awesome episode ?? plzz post the next episode ?

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 12:21 pm

        Dhar… no need to miss Sumo. I will try to post soon the next part.

    9. dwet on May 23, 2017 9:38 am

      Awesome. Loved it. ?

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 12:23 pm

        Thanks dwet dear.

    10. Niriha on May 23, 2017 11:09 am

      Awesome…fabulous part dear

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 12:23 pm

        Sweety Darling Niriha..Thanks yaar.

    11. Tanz on May 23, 2017 3:32 pm

      Awesome Astha Di….Finally we know it was fake memory loss…mera shak sahi tha?Loved this jungle scene too?
      Milavat ki dukaan -??kya kya mila diya omki ke khaaneme…hayee..
      and Rudra’s maturity-I like it?
      Post soon??

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 6:04 pm

        Tanz.. finally some revelation. Thanks yaar keep the essence of alien feelings in your heart.

    12. Madhuani on May 23, 2017 3:33 pm

      Finally it’s revealed anika was acting oh god wait but due to which reason.
      Have to wait for it now anyways shivaay was being very romantic while making his billi confess her feelings.
      Really anika couldn’t see anything happen wrong with her bagad billuji arrgghhh sorry cute singh oberoi.
      Gaurika scene was also good .
      Rumya parting ways but with a good note n a promise to return back.
      Post next soon.

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 6:07 pm

        Madhu…Naughty Singh Oberoi winked too. hmm…hmm.. enjoy the alien feeling that have a name of “Ishq” now.

    13. gayathri.visu on May 23, 2017 4:22 pm

      Fake memory loss!! But why di? SSO in naughty n romantic mood….I m blushing di. ‘My car…..its wish, seriously di…lol! Rikara’s scene is awesome n good. Sumo….I miss her di!!

      Di, now I watched yesterday’s epi…. For me its good epi! I love ShivOm’s dashing entry, Rudra’s expressions n words, that little family hug, Sahil’s cute expression, SSO’s guilty for his past incidents n finally Rikara’s 2 kiss!!

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 6:13 pm

        Gayathri…what you Tamil girls call it..”semma semma” right. the episode of mahasangam is a lot of more semma for me and perhaps for all.
        Thanks and wait for more revelation. keep blushing(wink wink).

    14. alekhika20 on May 23, 2017 8:26 pm

      Superb update

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 9:39 pm

        Thanks Alekhika dear.

    15. Nila on May 23, 2017 9:03 pm

      superb Astha me too blushing like Annika amazing feel thank u

      • Astha_Reddy on May 23, 2017 9:43 pm

        Nila… blush blush unlimited.

    16. Jerry_36 on May 23, 2017 10:56 pm

      Hwy Aastha di, its amazing. Everything was smooth and sweet. Shivaay is such a dramebaaz, but still loved his way of making his wife accept the feelings lingering in her heart. Post soon di?

      • Astha_Reddy on May 24, 2017 7:35 am

        Jerry…dramebaaz Shivaay Bhaiyya is naughty too.

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