Hi guyz…
Hope you are good and fine. So this is my first FF and I am a little nervous about this.
Ok so without and further delay I should start with my story.
Ok so the story is basically about Shivika, but it is different from the ongoing track of Ishqbazz. Om and Gauri are also are aslo part of the story but they will be like supporting actors and I am not sure about Rudra and Bhavya yet, but I guess I will also include their story. All the other family members are same but the story of Shivay and Anika is different. Pinky is not the evil Pinky, infact she is sweet and caring (I think they ruined her character in the drama by making her evil and selfish) and secondly Gauri and Om are married and living happily but the only difference is that Gauri considers Om as a goof friend, only a good friend, however Om is in love with her but he knows that Gauri dose not love her so he never forced his marriage on her, he thinks that someday he will make her fell in love with him.
A GLIMPSE FROM PAST (4 years ago)
Shivay, Anika and Daksh were college friends. All three were very close, they use to go to each other houses for study and fun. Anika was a very jolly and fun loving girl, she has her own vocabulary which Shivay was always unable to understand but he always admired her as a person and as a friend. Time passed and Shivay fell in love with Anika. He did not even knew how this happened but he was just deeply in love with Anika. During lectures he use to stare at her, how bold and beautiful she was. Khidkitor girl. He thought several times to propose her but could not gether up the courage. On the other hand Anika use to share every thing with Shivay, he was like his bestttt friend but she realized that she is in love with her friend and that friend was not Shivay. Infact it was Daksh. Yes Anika fell in love with Daksh. She wanted to tell this to Shivay because she was very excited about this so she decided to tell this to Shivay on the last day of the college. Shivay was convinced by Om that he should tell his feeling to Anika so finally on the last day of the college he decided to propose her. On the last day when every one was clicking pictures and selfies, Anika came running towards Shivay and told him about her feelings for Daksh. Shivay was dumbstruck, he could not believe his ears but Anika was soo happy while telling him her feelings about Daksh. Shivay just gave her a warm hug and let go of her love, she went to Daksh and told him every thing, Shivay saw both of them hugging each other and he just stood there looking at his love with someone else, it was the first time that Shivay felt an intense pain in his heart, as if something is piercing his heart. He wanted to cry but he was Shivay Singh Oboroi, he cannot cry, he has to be strong. It was the last day when Shivay saw Anika. After that day he never saw her and Daksh, he tried to contact her several times but her number was switched off and her house was empty, he even tried to contact Daksh but he was also gone and to his amazement she also never ever called or contacted him. He was heart broken, first time in his life he was failed. Only he knew what he was gone through. Time passed and every thing changed but the only thing which remained the same was Shivay love for Anika. Every single night he think of her, imagine her and pray for her. WHEREVER YOU ARE ANIKA, JUST STAY HAPPY. Every night a sorrowfull smile crept on his face when he thinks of his love.
PRESENT
OM: Shivay! Why did you left the breakfast table all of a sudden?
Om came running after Shivay and asked him. He knew that his younger brother is irritated right now. On the breakfast table Pinky anty was asking Shivay to get married and it is not the first time, this happens many time in Oboroi mansion that Pinky is demanding from Shivay to get married. However everyone know that Shivay was once in love with Anika but the past is past, everyone thinks that now he should get merried and settle down. But he was busy with his business and secondly he could not forget Anika, although it has been 4 years since he last saw her.
SHIVAY: Om why don’t mom understand that I don’t want to get married, I mean to marry someone will mean to cheat someone. I cant forget her then how can I marry some other girl. Every girl deserves happiness, care and love from her husband and I can give happiness and care but LOVE, I cannot love anyone.. I just cant
Om felt bad for his brother. The world famous businessman was so broken from inside. He just moved forward and hugged Shivay. Om just wished that he could do anything for his brother, anything…
OM: Shivay you don’t worry, I will talk to barri ma but Shivay you also have to understand her situation. You are his only son and she has some dreams for you. She is a mother Shivay and her heart ache when she looks at you all alone.
SHIVAY: I am not alone Om, I have you Rudra and Gauri. You guys are enough for me. I am happy with what I have. Seriously Om I am happy, believe me.
He said while giving him a huge smile. Om knew that his brother is smiling but he knew that he was not happy. They both went down and starting having breakfast in the kitchen. Gauri came there and also joined them. Om looked at Gauri with love and Shivay starting teasing them both. Roars of laughter started coming from the kitchen when Rudra joined them and started entertaining them with his senseless poetry and jokes. Happiness was flowing at that moment in the Oboroi mension.
Jhanvi, Dadi and Pinky were standing on the corner of the kitchen and were looking at their kids.
PINKY: OH MY MATA mummy g, look at Om and Gauri, look how happy they both are and my bacha…I know he is alone. What should I do to make hi happy? For once if he says yes then I will marry him like a prince but always says no, he don’t even look at the pictures of girls I have selected for him.
JHANVI: give him some time Pinky, I know he will understand, just give him some time. He is very responsible specially when it comes to his family. I am sure one day he will understand your concerns.
DADI: Yes Pinky, Jhanvi is right, Shivay is very sensible but went through allot. We all knew that after his college he was shattered, the only girl he loved left him but still he was not broken, infact he diverted his attention towards his business and now look at our business. Its all because of our son, just give him some time…..
On the other hand a girl is shown and she is going through some old photographs. She held a photograph in her hand which shows her throwing a glass of water on a boy in front of the whole class. Everyone was smiling in this photograph, even the boy was also smiling. She held that photograph in her hand and looked at her for an hour, memories were flashing in her mind, how she make fun of his extra English manners, how he always use to correct her language and how they both use to fight with each other on stupid things and on the end they always make each other say sorry. There was no expression on her face, she was just staring at those photographs, why this happened with me, what was my mistake? There were many questions like this in her eyes but her face was expressionless. Someone knocked on the door and she packed her memories back in the box and went towards the door.
MOTHER RIA: Anika today some guests are coming in the orphanage and I want you to give them a tour my child. I hope you are okay with this duty?
ANIKA: Yes mother, of course I am okay. Just let me know when they will come and I will be there to entertain them.
Mother Ria placed a kiss on Anika s forehead and left. She stood there for a moment and looked at the sky, probably it was going to rain and she hates rain.
In the room Gauri was getting ready when Om came.
OM: Why are you looking soo beautiful In the morning and secondly where are you going this early?
GAURI: I told you na that I have a vist today in an orphanage, don’t worry I will come back in the night, it’s a very important visit. Tej uncle was asked for the donation so they asked me to go and check the orphanage my self.
OM: At night? No no no you are noy going alone. I am coming with you, you know how dangerous it is for a girl to travel alone at night?
He said and then he realized that Gauri hates these kind of things. A girl should not do this or that blah blah… he knew that know she is going to argue with him on women liberty and feminism and Om hated that argument.
GAURI: Om I know that you are worried but believe me its safe, and if I gets into any trouble then I am going to call you na. please don’t worry I will take the driver and guard with me as well okay? I know you have a meeting today with Shivay bhaiya and you cannot miss that, otherwise I would have never went without you.
OM: (Om was shocked on her mature reaction, its definitely dadi who has taught these normal things to this pagal larki)okay but please do call me when needed, don’t be superwomen.
She gave him a smile and started dressing her hair in front of the mirror. Om just kept staring at her, she was not the beautiful women but still whenever he looks at her,he forgets everything. She took her colorful dupatta and turned towards Om who was already looking at her in a way an artist looks at his painting, admiring each and every feature of her, feeling proud on her every beauty detail. Gauri waved her hand I front of him and he came back to his senses. She was looking towards him with a questioning face, he knew what she wanted to know. Every time she gets ready she always questions him “how am I looking?” and he always answers her back by saying “breathtaking”. She didn’t know why she always wants to hear this word from him but it makes her feel complete and satisfied.
OM: You look breathtaking Gauri.
He honestly meant this because by looking at her his heart just skipped a beat. She was smiling and she about to go when she felt a tug on her hand. She turned back and found him holding her hand and slowly he dragged her towards him. She hits his back slowly and his hand crept from her elbow to her shoulder. She wanted to react, to say something, it was not normal, he never does this but all the words were stuck in her throat. They were married 3 months ago but they were living just like friends and it was the first time that he went this close to her. Gauri clutched her dupatta with her one hand which about about to fall and Om on the other hand placed one hand on her shoulder and his other hand was bussy in removing her hair from one side of her shoulder. She was just standing astonished as she don’t know any thing about this emotion which was raising in her, a pair of two warm hand touched her earlobes and she also sensed his face very close to her from the back. He was adjusting her jhumka which due to lose stopper was about to fall. He took his time and adjusted her jhumka and then he took a step back and folded his hands. Gauri just stood there for some seconds and the after saying a thankyou in a very low voice she left the room almost running. Om just stood there smiling, he knew that one day he will make her realize his love and Gauri on the other hand was also smiling and confused.
PRECAP
Anika in Oboroi mansion, every one is shocked to see her specially…?
Hello guyz!
Hope you like it. I am new at writing so I need your support and opinion. I will be very honored and glad if you can spare me your precious time by commenting. Eagerly waiting for your response. Feel free to say whatever you want to say about this.
THANKYOU
37 Comments
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Intersting one dr…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt.,
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This is superb dr….what happened to Anika??? Where is Daksh???? Will they both get together….
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And just wait a little dear, i will try to make it more intresting
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Thanks, i have submitted the next part and will be available soon.
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