Hi guys kem cho maja ma …kemti acha ….kaise ho sab and first of all a big sorry to all becoz I have posted my recent epi and it got posted but I don’t know how instead of twinj Dp abhigya Dp got posted… Due to which many of u don’t give it a read…thinking it as a bhigya ff really sorry for that….
And my comments have decreased…so very badly …I don’t like to drag things. ….and I know ke sab ke exams hain….I am ok with it…but I don’t want ke u guys don’t even cmnt for long long time. ..
So this is my 13 eoi may be I will wrap it up in 15 epi may be……
I know many of felt ke I am blackmailing u for cmnts but that’s not the truth my health and my family problems are so much frustrating that I can’t concentrate on anything ……
Some of u messaged me.and I found that on my chatbox but plz guys contact me through my email I’d becoz its tough for me to come on tu and login ….
My mail I’d is [email protected]
Link for my previous epi
http://www.tellyupdates.com/always-part-12/
Hope it works yr
And now
Happy birthday to u
Happy birthday to u
Happy birthday happy birthday happy birthday to u………
Happy birthday sidhanshi ….though we never talked but dear plz register soon so that we can chat….na ….and thanx for ur through out support on my tu journey ….
Love u loads muaaaahhhhhh…..
So now let’s start the epi…
Our twinj were happy shocked emabrassed..and wht not they were blushing all the time thinking abt their recent encounter and its happings …
Ku himself thought that why was he smiling like a maniac…and on top of that he was blushing like seriously…….he brushed of all his thoughts and engaged himself in work…
Here tw was also not in diff situation her cheeks were as red as tomato…looking like Punjabi cute si tamatar…..she menu laughed at her own state how kunj presence always effect her…..she again left those thoughts and goes to get ready …..
Around 6 in the evening the sangeet hall was all ready for the sangeet to be held…it was decorated beautiful with flowers and colour combo was white and pink…..Punjabi great Indian fat wedding wives were already coming….from the atmosphere the hall was decorated like a bride with a stage for the DJ also…..the place was not less than a palace …
Everybody was dressed up in their best busy in gossiping or clicking selfie or….giving their respective songs to DJ for their performances…..
Then came our handsome hunk our kunj …looking ever so handsome in navy blue half coat sherwani and golden pants….hair perfectly geld up and a small smile playing on his lips…..( haye kash main wahan hoti yr)
Shivika rumya and ishkara also came dressed up well
So: khaye kunj looking so smart….yr
Ku : thanx somu u r also not looking less than a fairy….
Ishika: ahem ahem….
Ku: han han all the three ladies are looking so preety ….
Om: AGR sari tareef inki to tw ke liye my achoda hai han…
Ru: are o don’t worry he would say something special na…wait yr…
Ku : shut up guys…..
An: waise kunj where is tw ….
Ku(sighs) hogi shishe ke age baithi hui apna makeup theek karne …
Is: are kunj …makeup krna humara Janam sidh adhikar hai yr.
Ku : ya……
Trio: aacha we will come with tw ok bbye.
And they leaves. . .
Ru: thank god they they went….waise all Th arrangements are done na for our ….bachelor’s night. …
Om: is it necessary guys….
Shi: of course yr om be a man…. And get ready for it…wt say kunj…
Ku: hmmm guys timhara ota nhi but maine apni taraf se Tim logon ka intezam kr diya hai so enjoy….
Ru: u will be there na…
Ku: hmmm..
Shi: so done deal….tonight is our Freedom ki night …. .
Trio: yessss….
After sometime the hall went dark and suddenly a spot light falls on the stairs…on our bride accompanied by anika ishana and soumaya…..
Tw was looking less than a angel who is descending from the stairs…just like a angel from heaven…..
She was wearing.. A navy blue lehanga …accompanied by a golden embroidery work on it .. With night neck choli….hair tied in a side loose bun with few flicks left…with silver pearl earrings…and a star bracelet …..with minimal make up pink lipstick …and a natural blush…coz
Kunj was staring at her like a kid who was watching a icecream wendor……
Tw felt his hot gaze on her. …she felt goosebumps ..she thought kunj have the capability to make her waek on her knees…..
Ku was just amazed by tw beauty…she was just a angel made for him only for him …and she is HIS angel… ……
Twinj shares a cute eyelock….
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.maine kha tha eyelock ka feel ana chahiye….
Twinj were now sent on a couch on the stage and the other people were below the stage….
Twinj were sitting on a royal kind of couch…..closely….
Ku: waise aj tu….. …
Tw was expecting him to compliment her but he….
Ku: waise aj tu theek that lg rhi hai….
Tw face fell …..
Tw: r u serious kunj mai n aj itnni pretty lg rhi hi. Bilkul Punjabi pataka …and u told me just theek that like seriously…..
Ku: han waise bhi I jusy always said truth I don’t believe on false hopes…
Tw: ( irritated) u r impossible….kunj sarna ..hmphhh….sadu kahin ke….
Ku smiles at her antics…..
Kunj leaned towards tw as she was looking straight so ku is leaning toward her she was unaware of it ….kunj came near her ear and speaks in a voice full of love and passion…..
Ku: waise tu aj bahut hot lag rhi hai ….
This was all for tw her face shows blush ..happiness ..shock … …..and wt not. …..her eyes pooped out …..and she instantly looked at him……
As kunj was still leaning towards her …both were very close to each other their noses were almost touching each others…..
Both shares an intense eyelock….
Mann yeh saahib ji
Jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji
Dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)….
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.their eyelock is broken by the announce ment of DJ both came out of tjier dream land. …but the song is still playing….
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo
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DJ: so all my uncles and aunties and dear friends ….gear up ….and puul on shoes to shake a leg on the dance floor….so here goes our first performance……
The hall went dark…..tw got terrified so held kunj hand tightly…kunj also held her hand sensing her fear……
A spot light falls on a couple….
They are our devakshi. …
Both dances on kala chashma ….same as tha song….everybody….cheers for the.m.
Their dance ended……
After that shivika dances on kr gayi chul….
Ishkara on manma emotion……
Rumya on party on mind…..
Later everybody dances well and sngeet came to an end. ..
Dj: so guys now let’s cheer for the last performance by our bride and groom twinkle and kunj…….clap guys…….
Twinj first resist but later agreed …
Both head towards the stage….hand in hand….
The lights got dimmed it was perfect romantic atmosphere….
Phir le aaya dil majboor kya keeje
Raas na aaya rehna door kya keeje
Dil keh raha use maqammal kar bhi aao
Wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai….
Twinj were dancing hand in hand so romantically everybody was in a awe looking at the chistry b/w the young couple….
Karte hain hum aaj qabool kya keeje
Ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
Dil keh raha use mayassar kar bhi aao
Wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si… aanch baaki hai….
Kunj was on cloud nine becoz he was dancing with tw on a romantic no..he was most luckiest ..guys on earth at that time….his hand s were on her waist ..clutching it protctively…..while their hand were entwined….
Kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
Milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
Dil keh raha hai use musalsal kar bhi aao
Wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai…..
Tw was not at all in diff situation…she was happy …not happy she was delighted that she was in secure arms …in which she can spend her whole life. ….
Song ended and twinj dance got over…..
Both came back and soon the sangeet got over. ..shivika twinj and iskara rumya… Were sitting when the noticed that the boys had leave Th hall silently…….
They found it fishy …and decided to do something.. …
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So guy here is part 13 so guys do tell me how’s it if u don’t find it up to the mark..then tell me…if u don’t like my ff then plz cmmt on other ff writers ff vecoz all ur cmnt can motivate them to write further more….plz guys cmnt on those whom u liked…plz guys…it Hart takes 1 min…yr common….
And han sidhandhi once again a happy bday. I don’t now when it will get posted …but still
A happy wala bday dear….
And guys do cmnt + ve or – ve.
Bbye love u loads…
22 Comments
Thank you!!! Thank you!!! Thank you soooo much… U don’t know how i’m feeling now after reading it… Now i’m on cloud infinity… I’m really blessed to have u guys in my life… Nd bulbul dear i really want to chat wid u personally… Nd tried many times to register, but i don’t know why it failed every time… I couldn’t understand why this is happening… Can u help me nd tell me the proper way so that i can clearify my mistake… Btw awesome epi… Loved it from the core…
Amazing❤
Hey that was amazing.Loved it?And plz continue your ff
Amazing!!! Please don’t end it
Amazing super lovely
N plsss don’t end
N plsss yr.
Loved it
Super epi bulbul!!..Please don’t end ur ff…it is one of my fav..
Bulbul…plz plz plz plz plz plz..don’t wrap it up..agar concentrate nahi kar paa rahi then take a break yaar…but plz don’t end…pljjj lequest???….
Inna sa karlo mere liye …
I loved this epi..and yes I just checked last epi par mera comment post nahi hua!!..it was seriously very long one…
So my b’day is 18th Dec…
Waiting for next…
And plz don’t end it yaar…plz plz
Loved it Bulbul especially Twinjs cute moment 🙂 Post soon 🙂 And Take care and Get well soon 🙂 Love you 🙂
And Yeh if possible don’t end Take a break but then return back with a bang 🙂
Hey bulbul
Pls pls don’t end it
Is amazing ff ko end mat karo yeah meri request hai
and episode was amazing…
love u
take care
bye
Awesome amazing fabulous…..
awesome amazing fabulous cute epi…loved it
awww…so sweet epi chul bul… I really loved it..
Really cute episode! Write soon x
Awesome bulbul…loved it….
specially the song…. and aaj tu theek lag rhi hai????…..bichari twinkle….
and i love every couple u chose….sorry badi late se padha???…. but padh liya…..?????… hehe….
love u and do cont….
nd plz dont wrap it up???
Amaxing epi.. loved the way kunj complimented twinkle.. Plz don’t end it.. but take a break.. do cont soon ?
Bulbulll❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
Awesome
Itna amazing episode
Loved it
Mazaaa agayaa
Nd tu ?????????? Hats of to u really ???????? Really u r ending it really
U know that i love ur ff alot and i ask again amd again u too uplaod it. Really u r gonna do dis to me???
Plz dont end it plzz
Heyy yaar!
Today’s epi was extremely fabb!! ???
I enjoyed it too much! ? please post next episode soon!
Yr sorry for late comment but this was just amazing yr
And don’t you dare end it plshh
Amazing dazing
Wah wah wah wah …… what am amazing episode detective Bulbul rani ?????( name yaad hai na aaj morning mai diya hai Maine aapko) ……
Sacchi yrrrr episode was sooooooooooo cute yrrrr….. specifically all songs u selected were superb…..
The way u described Twinj feelings…. their craziness…. their happiness…..made me go bowled over ur writing skills……hats off to u for soo lovely episode…..
Love you????
Yaar Anarkali… Ur ff is beautiful like… It’s very interesting…. I can’t believe my Anarkali is such a writer… Keep it up yaar outstanding… I liked ur song selections… It was amazing… And sorry for being late… Ur mind blowing…. I just loved ur ff… Fantastic… I feeling to hug… Thank you soo much for such fabulous ff… Keep writing… Love you lots…
Loved it cutie though I won’t say u to not end it I understand ur situation so no problem but whenever u will be free write season 2 loved twinj scenes haye main mari java kunj ki adao ne to mar dala so jealous of twinkle loved it to the core love ya