Hello everyone!!!!
I think this ff of mine doesn’t fascinate anyone except few. So sorry for that. I had planned this ff to be a long one but due to very less response, I’m planning to end it soon. I’m planning to concentrate on one pair as I don’t find enough responses. Amidst of my hectic schedule, I’m updating this ff with all the pics. It takes me lot of time and work. So, please do leave your opinion about this ff in comments. You can also mention your favorite pair.
Scene 1
Place: Rajkot
Rajshri: Mishti, do you need to go now?
Kuhu: I’m angry on you Mishti.
Varsha: Mishti, no need of going now. You can go there after Kuhu’s wedding.
Mishti: I understand all your worries. But trust me, I will come tomorrow itself.
Kuhu: This is not fair.
Mishti: Oh, my sweet sister, I will come tomorrow. Why are you shedding tears as if I’m doing my bidaai.
Kuhu: Ok, I’ll be waiting for you. Take care. Come soon.
Mishti and Kuhu hug each other.
Mishti bids good bye and leaves.
Mishti goes to a fest with her NGO children and caretakers. The fest is for orphan kids.
Mishti to caretaker: You go with children and wait in the hall. I will fill the applications and will get our room key.
They go.
Abir comes there.
Abir: Hello Madam.
Mishti: Abir…You here?
Abir: Even my NGO is also participating, so I came. How did Kuhu leave you to come?
Mishti: There were so much drama. And how did you come?
Abir: Same…drama….
They both laugh!!!!
They fill the form and get their room keys.
Mishti: Ok Abir, I will see you at eve.
Abir: Bye Mishti.
At eve…
Mishti and Abir come with their respective groups. The kids go to attend dance competition. It begins!!!
Mishti and Abir see each other… They have an eyelock.
Dheere Dheere plays!!!!!
They both imagine themselves dancing with each other.
After the dance completes, Mishti’s NGO children pat her. She come to senses and smiles. Abir too smiles seeing Mishti.
Abir (to innerself): I know Mishti, you love me a lot. I’m waiting for your confession.
He goes.
Kuhu and Kunal go to a restaurant.
Their friends surprise them….
Kuhu-Kunal get happy.
Kuhu: Thank you guys. This is so special.
Kunal: Yes. It matters really a lot.
Kuhu: Guys, one info. Please don’t update any pics on social media. We have come here without the knowledge of our families. They are very strict and have forbidden us to not to meet each other.
Friend1: Its rare as the social media queen instructs us not to upload.
All laughs!!!!
They sit and have a talk.
Friend2: We are very happy for you as your love got succeeded without any hurdles.
Kunal: For this we have to thank Mishti and Abir. Without them, this would have happened. They convinced our families.
Friend 3: But Kunal, I feel pity for you. We cannot handle Kuhu even for little time. But you going to handle her for lifetime.
Kunal smiles.
Kuhu: That’s why I fell in love with him.
They have their chit chat going on!!!!
Scene 2
Place: Patiala
Mini bids good bye to Hanuman, Babita and Arya.
Babita: Mini, I will come during wedding.
Mini: I’ll be waiting for you babes. Take care.
Mini, Neil, Preet and Bobby leaves.
(Bobby is Preet’s brother, Mini’s best friend. He has a one side love for Mini)
They board train.
Preet: I’m excited Mini. We are going for a trip alone.
Mini: Yeah, I too Preet.
Preet and Mini hug.
Bobby: Where are you going alone? Even we too are here.
Mini: Bobby, you know what, me and Preet had planned a trip. But we couldn’t go.
Neil be busy in looking at dishes. Mini looks at him.
Mini: Ok, Let’s play something. It will take time to reach Rajkot.
Preet: Let’s play Dumsharads.
Bobby: Yeah ok!!!
Mini: Neil, what are you doing? Come and join with us.
Neil: No, you all play. I have work.
Mini teases him.
Mini: I know you don’t have any work. The thing is you don’t know to play. So, you are making fake excuses.
Neil: Oh Madam, I know to play. Come let’s play.
Preet: Ok let’s start. Mini, I will tell you the movie name. You act. Let the boys find.
She tells her movie name.
Mini acts.
She touches her heart.
Bobby: dress…
Neil observes her keenly.
Mini shows heart in hand.
Neil: Dil Bechara
Mini and Neil gives hi-fi. Bobby sees them and feels.
Preet looks at Bobby.
Neil and Mini have an eyelock.
They continue to play!!!!
Scene 3
Place: Ahmedabad
The girls and boys after completing exam settle in Red Roses Café.
Naina: I need to tell something.
Munna: What?
Naina: Sameer, I thought you to tell yesterday itself. But you were so happily told me about your sister’s wedding. So, I decided not to spoil your mood.
Sameer: What happened? Is there any problem?
Naina: Chachaji got me application of CA coaching center in Mumbai. Probably after exams, I need to go to Mumbai.
Sameer gets shocked at first and then…
Sameer: This is a very good news. Why didn’t you tell me yesterday itself?
Naina and Preeti look each other puzzled.
Preeti: Naina was scared.
Sameer: Naina, how can you think of me like that? I’m not a person who suppresses the dreams of his partner. We all knew how much knowledge you have and why you came to this grade B college when you had seat at grade A college. Listen to me, I’m always proud of you Naina. I respect you a lot. I don’t want you to be my slave. You should be independent. I love you a lot. At the same time, I want you to create an identity of your own. Don’t worry about me. I will come to Mumbai to see you.
Naina: Thanks Sameer.
Naina smiles holding Sameer’s hand.
All the friends happily look at them.
!!!To be Continued!!!
Signing off,
Supriya_R
17 Comments
👍🏻😃story line is good
Thanks a lot
Pls dont end it soon. It’s very interesting nd I m keen to read it forward. Sameer is soo supportive to Naina and Mineil’s dumb charades was superb.
No I won’t end it. I thought of ending due to lack of readers. But I didn’t expected such a huge response from silent readers. Sure will continue. Thanks for the comment.
The story is good and interesting. I will be happy if you make it long. At least, like Devakshi ff. If it’s like Love bytes it will be great. 🤩😍😍🤗😊😅
Happy to see your comment here. Sure will continue like love bytes. Thanks a lot.
i feel happy all pairs are favorites u can conutine i have recommed my friends also they will be dis
pointed
Don’t worry. Sure i will continue this. This one will be a long one. Thanks for your response. Keep supporting.
Please don’t end this ff because you are doing it in a good way.These four pair have a great fan base and don’t lose your hopes.I will always wait for your episodes.Stay safe Supriya R
No I won’t end it. I thought of ending due to lack of readers. But I didn’t expected such a huge response from silent readers. Sure will continue. Thanks for the comment. I will continue with all the leads.
I like this FF and please don’t end it too soon and it will not be justices with other pairs if choose one pair as this FF is for all the four pairs and they all are lovely. So please continue this ff.
I will continue to write this. Thank you so much for your response.
misbir imaginary dance was romantic.when the friends said that now kunal has to manage kuhu forever kuhu saying that’s why she loves him was sweet.shocking that Bobby loves mini.which actor plays Bobby? damsharad scene sas very nice.mineil eye lock was romantic .good that naina said it to sameer.loved sameer saying that he doesn’t want her to be his slave n he won’t suppress the dreams of his partner.sameer will visit Mumbai or will he shift now itself? mind blowing pics
Thanks!!!! Sameer will visit her.
please dont end this soon. you can write other one couple ffs too
Actually, I am sorry for late comment as I thought of reading it later anyhow four week passed away like this. I read the previous episodes too. It was great. I like the way you set the friendship with YUDKBH youngsters and Swati yelling at those boys were nice. Glad to see Rakesh is supporting the girls. Abir and Mishti’s bond is nice. Kuhu and Kunal pair is cute. And about MiNeil, loved to see the similar bond they shared in Patiala Babes. Good that Hanita is alive with Arya. Is Minnie, Babita and Ashok’s daughter or Hanumant Babita’s daughter? Anyways the PB scenes is just awesome.
Loved the way Sameer telling it was good news. Kuhu-Kunal’s part is nice and social media queen part is funny. Preet, Minnie and Neil’s dumb charades is nice and Dil Bechara too.. Sadly, Bobby loves Minnie oneside.
Hey, nice to see your comment. Thanks for the support.