ANMOL RISHTA- A FEW SHOTS ON RAGLAK, SHIVIKA, ARSHI, RIKARA, RUMYA- SHOT 1
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Thank you for all peeps who commented nd supported me in my frst shot…
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Without any Blah Blah…lets us enter into the story…
BLUE FROG STADIUM, MUMBAI
It was a golden evening surrounded with a lot of people gather to attend a concert. Yeah..Arranged concert for the occasion of Rakshabandan.
The people were cheering for their favourite singer..
The whole crowd echoed “GJ… GJ…. GJ….”
A girls’pov:
Today is raksha bandan. Everybody in this world are happy to share their luv for sibling… but I am unfortunate to be alone.. No parents luv nor siblings luv… Still I remember the day when my Bhaiyuu used to pamper me a lot, I luved to play with him..bt I am so unfortunate that I don’t even remember his name..But I will luv you always bhaiyuuu..(looking into a small Kada). I miss you Bhaiyuuu… This is for you bhaiyuu..
She steps forward from the backstage, holding the microphone and sings…
“Kise poochun, hai aisa kyun
Bezubaan sa, ye jahaan hai
To whom to ask, why is it so,
this world is, as if mute..
Khushi ke pal, kahan dhoondhooN
Benishan sa, waqt bhi yahan hai
Where to find moments of joy,
Even time is like without a sign..
Jaane kitne labon pe gile hain
Zindagi se kayi faasle hain
Paseejte hain sapne kyun aankhon mein
Lakeer jab chhoote in haathon se yoon bewajah
There are complaints on so many lips,
there are many distances from the life..
Why do the dreams dampen in eyes,
when the line leaves these hands, for no reason..
Jo bheji thi duaa, woh jaake aasmaan
se yoon takra gayi ke aa gayi
Hai laut ke sadaa
The wish I had sent,
that collided with the sky such that
a call has come back..
Saanson ne kahan rukh mod liya
Koi raah nazar mein na aaye
Dhadkan ne kahan dil chhod diya
Kahan chhode in jismoN ne saaye
where have the breaths turned their face,
I don’t see any path..
where has the heartbeat left the heart,
and where have these bodies left (their) shadows..
Yehi baar-baar sochta hoon tanha main yahan
Mere saath-saath chal raha hai yaadon ka dhuaan
I, here, think this again and again..
a smoke of memories is walking with me..
Jo bheji thi duaa, woh jaake aasmaan
se yoon takra gayi ke aa gayi
Hai laut ke sadaa”
A lone tear escapes from her eyes….
People cheered “GJ….GJ…..GJ….”
She thanked the people and moved to her van completing her concert with the memories of her bhayuuu and family….
Now the screen shifts to…
MAHESHWARI MANSION
The whole mansion is shining with golden lights, scintillating aroma of tulips and roses…
Yeah…it’s a celebration in the mansion… None other than Rakshabandan alongside decoration of our Raglak Engagement happening the next day.
One person’s pov:
I know I missed you in my life, but you are not away from my heart, I will luv you till the breath of my life. Today everyone s celebrating Rakshabandan, but I don’t have my lil sister by side. I believe you are still alive in this world and forever in my heart. I will find you for sure its my promise to you chutki…
Yes the Girl is none other than our Gauri and its none other than laksh.
“Bhaiyaa .. bhaiya… Where are you , its time for the function” Anika shouted in search of Laksh…
Yes its none other than our laksh missing his lil sister Chutki (gauri)
“I know you will be here” Saying Khushi enters the room.
This room is the Hidden room of the Maheshwari mansion. As it completely contains the memory of their lovable cute lil sister.
Hearing both of his sisters voice Laksh wipe out his tears and turn towards them faking a smile.
Lak: Hey you both, Got ready.. My princesses are looking beautiful
Its Anika and Khushi… Anika wore a golden half shoulder blouse with red beads hanging all over and a long red skirt with golden stole and Khushi in a Dashing White cum Red Saree with dangled earrings. Both looked cute and gorgeous.
Ani: Bhaiyaa..You no need to hide ur emotions from ur sister
Khushi: Haan Bhaiyaa.. We too miss our chutki..bt you know what you don’t love us(smirking nd smiling)
Lak: Choti..You are….crazzy.. saying he taps her head.. By the way.. Where is Ragini?
Rags: I am also here only Laksh
Saying this she came into the room.
Ragini is wearing a Red lehanga with heavy embroided pallu..she s lokking like a princess in red outfit…Laksh get mesmerized..but doesn’t show it.
Lak: You here.. k lets move out before someone find this plaace…
Saying so he dragged everyone out and closed the doors.
Anika and Khushi Left the place saying they have work to give some space for our love birds.
Rags: laksh .. I know its difficult for you to forget that incident..but have faith in yourself and God..It will surely happen.
Lak: Thank you Ragini. If you were not there surely our kids (Meant his bros nd sis) would have suffered a lot.
Rags: Same goes for you too Laksh… After our parents death..Only you were able to handle them..
Lak: you too…Only you could understand my sisters nd me..Thats why I supported Dadi’s decision to get married to you.
Rags: I know Laksh..What this marriage s for..don’t worry I won’t keep any Expectations or will trouble you.. But I promise you..I will try my best to become a Mother for our kids.
“Di…di…..”comes a voice from ground floor..
Laksh and Ragini reaches ground floor….
Arnav : Di..Where were you..I searched you everywhere
Rags: Sorry mera baccha… I didn’t listen to you.. Btw I was with Laksh Talkiii…
Cutoff by Sowmya…
Sow(teasingly): with jiju…Not bad di..u improved…
Waise Jiju… What were you doing?
Raglak(in a embarassing tone): Soooomuuuu!
Arnav: Its k somu.. Tumhara Bhai tumahare sath hai… Let the function finish we will teach them a lesson
Raglak with shocked faces…: U both become very naughty…
“ Bachhon…Its time for Function lets start” Saying comes our Dadi ma
RaglaK, Arnav, somu: Ji dadi ma
Anika and Khshi: Dadi ma….We arranged everything well…lets start..
In pooja room…
EVERYONE( altogether): DURGA MATA KI…JAI…
Laksh and arnav are standing at one side and the sisters proceeded towards their brother.
Anika and Khushi Took aarathi, tied rakhi and fed him sweets.
Ragini and Sowmya Took aarthi of anav and tied rakhi fed sweets to him.
Both Laksh and Arnav give their Sister gft.
Now rakshabandan is done”says dadi..
Arnav: Not yet Dadi ma
Arnav takes the pooja plate from Ragini… everyone wondered what he s doing..
Rags: Chotea…what are you doing?
Arnav: Di..I know rakhi is tied for brothers..but today I wish to change the tradition… After the death of our parents you were there for us in every circumstances of our life protecting us…More than that of a sister, cared for us like a mother….Today..I feel proud to say that my sister is my everything..I luv you di..more than my lyf..
Tears were rolling down her chubby cheeks. Laksh who saw her emotional came to her and side hugged her.
Sow: It maybe Arnav bhaiyaas surprise but..We also luv you a lot di… Happy raksha bandan to my protective sister
Anika: After our mother’s death you were there for me as mother, U fulfilled the gap of my elder sister..
Khushi: You were more than a Sister in law, bhabhi.. you were both a mother & sister ,also going to be the better half of my brother…u r a greatest gift to us.
Anika, Arnav, Sowmya nd Khushi (in chorus): happy rakshabandan di/ bhabhi
Ragini is overwhelmed by their act, She s very happy that she stood dumb , only her eyes could convey the level of happiness.
She just hugged everyone tight for few minutes crying het heart out in happiness. Then Arnav tied rakhi to Rags followed by the others.
Dadi ma who was watching all this was happy with their luv…
OBEROI MANSION
Though they don’t have a grl child in their home, the Bond the brother shared is something we cant explain in words.
Shivaay was getting ready for hismeetings as usaual.
“Bhaiyya…Bhaiyaa”shouted rudy..
Shivaay panicked and rushed out..Even Om ,Tej, Jhanvi also rushed to him.
Lately the sight they made them burst to laughter.
Shi( Controlling his laughter): Rudy..what have you done to yourself..
Om(teasingly): you cant even do a single work properly… Buddhu
Rudy: Bhaiya..stop teasing me yaaar..O plz help me out
The place is kitchen. Rudy was tryng to take something from fridge, But to his misfortune, his leg slipped and all items from the fridge spilled over him and he stood freezing.
Jhanvi: Rudra..Abhii bhi bachhe jaise behave kar rahi ho…kabhi nahi sudharungi tum…
Shi: Maaa…don’t scold he s just a child still.
Tej: yes… When Media comes to know that a Rockstar is immature to handle a fridge..then surely he will be renowned as child…Shivaay stop papmpering him.. you are responsible for all his irresponsibilities..
Om: Papa..Forgive him nah..plzz…
Tej: But this should not be encouraged om…….saying so he nd Jhanvi left the place…
Om: Waise..Budhhu… Whats s the reason for all this?
Rudy: You are such a bad brothers..Aaj kaas din hai..Aur tum dono Bhool gayi….See shivay Bhaiya is ready to go to office.I am mad at you guyzzzz
Shi: What special is it rudy?
Rudy: You people don’t luv me.. I hate you and Rudy left the place in anger(Fake anger).
Meanwhile Om figured out the reason.
Om explained Shivaaay that its Rakshabandhan and he s messed uplike dis to make kheer for us like every year.
Shi: O….then it is quite hard to convince him… Anyway..come lets light up his mood.
TEJVI’S ROOM
Jhan: I miss you Bhai
Tej: Don’t worry, Jhanvi… He may be with us but his blessings will be with us
Jhan: But Tej.. I could not bear my child’s hatred..they are hating us
Tej: every will be sorted out..Dont worry Jhanvi…
Jhan(hugging Tej): Hope sooo
RUDY’S ROOM
Both ShivOm moved into Rudy’s room.
Om: Rudy… where are you man?
Shi: I am really very sorrrr…..
Rudy hugged them from back..
Rud: Happy rakshabandan Bhaiyas…luv you a lot..u r the best thing in my lyf
Par..mein Abhi bhi gussa hoon aapse..
ShiOm: rudy…
Om: Stop the drama feed us Kheer nd tie us the Rakhi man..Without ur Rakhi its incomplete yaa..
Rud:o..waise bhi mein aapka Jaal mein nahi passungi…I am not convinced with you both…
Shi: Rudy..plz..Forgive us nah….Tk… I will what you say
Rud: Really bhai..May be ur request is convincing..Waise O..tum…
Om: Tu…Such a big Dramebazzz…. Kya chahiyee tume…
Rud: r u sure will you give me what I want!
ShiOm: Sure rudy
Rud: Then forward your hands nad promise me that you will be the same even after marriage & will not change.
Om pats his head and says in disbelief “Stupid..Do you think suh will happen. Stop overthinking and tie us rakhi man”
Shiv: I know Rudy y are u thinking like dis.. I know mom is suffering bcoz of her luv towards Dp uncle…Don’t worry….We will never change also..We will never lose the trust in our relation..
Shivaay forwards his hand “One for all”, OmRu join him “All for one..”…
ShivOmRu: Dil boley Oberoi….
Rudy ties rakhi to his brothers and feed them sweets… All hugs together…Lafzon ka yeh rishta nahi plays in background…
Soon Om gets back.. “Shivay…will they ever forgive mom”
Shiv: We will make them understand
Omru: we are with you shivaay…
Saying they hug him.
The screen freezes here…
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So our chiraiiya(Gauri) is a famous singer and the Lil cutie pie of the Maheshwari’s.
Since the death of the parents, the Maheshwari’s and Raizada’s are living in Maheshwari masion.
What may be the incident made them lose their parents?
What would be the reason for our Gauri’s Separation?
Which kids is Jhanvi talking about?
What is the relation between Jhanvi and Dp?
What is budging the Obros?
Stay tuned to know about it.
Precap: Raglak engagement,
Rikara meeting,
Arshi’s bonding,
Rumya’s nok-jhok,
Shivika’s past.
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