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Okay m clearing some doubts… I m not crazy… and someone asked if there is ghost in the house…my advice is please be patient and read to discover… next sorry krystal for scaring u so much… I had no intentions to make u pee ur pants…sorry again…
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CHAPTER 3: my sceptical wife!
I was leaning on twinkle..when I noticed that outrageous thing….i couldn’t believe my eyes…. how can it be… My wife was not visible in the mirror!! Yes…. she was sitting right in front of me..I could see her ..feel her..bt just behind in the mirror..where I could see my face..my wife was not at all visible…. “Twinkle…..” I shouted… as I woke up from the deep sleep… I saw everyone looking at me.. what?? am I in the office?? Was it a dream?? Few of my staff members suggested that m stressed and should leave… I decided to do the same…..
When I reached my apartment it was 7 already… I wondered what twinkle was doing…. I rang the bell. After some time she opened. Our apartment looked beautiful..she had managed to decorate it with all household stuffs…twinkle always aspired to become an Interior Designer….nd i could see the talent in her…
K: are u all right??
T: yeah…why??
K: no..just like that…
T: hmm…u tell howz ur day??
K: bakwas…
T: why??
I went close to her and whispered in her ears… “coz i badly missed u..” she smiled at first then pushed me saying,, “nautanki..” she went to the kitchen…
Yaar i don’t understand girls… if u tell them u haven’t miss them at all they get angry, insecure,,, and sometimes even jealous…bt the moment u say u miss them..they start behaving weird..I mean take twinkle into consideration.. what’s nautanki in this if I tell her i missed her… women and their thoughts!! Unpredictable… really!!!
After dinner I was in my bedroom..working on my laptop…it was already 11:30… but where is twinkle?? What is taking he so much time…in the kitchen… I thought to check once…and to my great surprise…she wasn’t there.. I looked here and there..bt it was of no use…it reminded me of my dream… suddenly i felt someone’s hand on my shoulder.. i was terror stricken… i turned back to see twinkle… “ufff…” said i in a relief tone..
T: what happened??
K: nothing…where were u??
T: in the balcony…
K: so late?? Anyway..lets go to sleep…
T: u want to sleep??
K: yeah… y??
T: oh… I thought we would spent some time together…
I was touched by her words…but i had office the next day..so couldn’t help it… “twinkle…we shall spent time on weekends..as i really have work..” i could understand the disappointment on her face..bt was helpless…. it was probably the first time she wanted something..nd m that unlucky husband who missed it… i knw she also wishes for something..nd we need to give our marriage a chance… although it was arranged marriage!!
She was sleeping when i was thinking about all this… a lot of time has passed since our marriage..but we never thought of consummating it…it was high time now..and our family was also expecting our kids… I thought …. !!
The next day:
I spoke to twinkle about my feelings… “twinkle…tum samajh rehi ho na…I mean.. humein humare rishte ko aage barahna hoga…u knw what i mean…….
“stop blabbering….m I a kid..that i wont understand??” said she.. I was shocked at her direct reply…
Few days passed..i guess both of us were waiting for
the week ends… but I was little sceptical about twinkle’s behaviour… one day she said she was going to the terrace…but when i went there she was no where to be found. When i returned to the apartment i saw her sitting there…. again one day I found her cutting veggies..she cut her hand by mistake.. but didn’t allow me to bandage he finger…i sort of ignored al this….
On Friday night when I returned from my office… i saw the apartment decorated in the same way..as I had dreamt… i was surprised…. twinkle came out in the same night gown…she called me near her…i was a bit hesitant… she grabbed my shirt and pulled me…she pushed me down on the bed…i was again surprised by her wild behaviour…she slowly came over me…she began to unbutton my shirt… somehow I was not liking this… i got up…
T:what happene??
K: twinkle…..
As i was going to tell her….I saw my image on the mirror..nd she was not visible there….I was horrified….i pinched myself..nd it was not a dream..!! i got up with a sudden jolt…. she was surprised… “what happened kunj…?? my love…” i stepped back… “no..no..dont come near me….don’t just…” she didn’t listen….she stepped forward… “kunj aaj toh humare Milan ki raat hain na…tum darr kyun rhe ho” I knew she wasn’t my twinkle…I found a flower vase…nd as she came near..I banged it on her head…nd to my great surprise…the vase broke…bt she didn’t bled…. inow i knew she was….. “where is twinkle??” I shouted…she smiled…. and then she disappeared…
SCREEN FREEZES
To be continued
Okay so most of u might have understood…what has happened… bt yet many mysteries are unsolved…so i guess..it will be 2-3 shots more..so bear me till then…nd one thing..m sorry the episode was adult one…guys frankly speaking horror is associated to it..still kept my explanation limited…as there are people of various age groups reading ff…nd i myself m not very comfortable with it..so i hope this much it acceptable…
bt if u find its vulgar then m sorry… don’t forget to comment..best wishes
22 Comments
It ws sum wat horrible bt ws jus amazing n interesting do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz
Wow what a story line…its the first twinj horror story n must say the best one…plzzzz post asap??
omg i was really scared ?????
it’s just amazing ???????
but please don’t end it soo soon
write more updates
My frnd i didt understand wat was vulgar in that….it was nyc…i lked it very much…i read 1st tym any ff in TU based on horror …n i really like it….plzz post ur next epi Asap…!!! I m dying 2 read it yrr…plzz n….yeah were u seem it vulger i dont undrstand…anyways it was mind blowing fanstic…fab….muhhaa
Awsm
ohhh its so nyc to read a horror stry of twinj frst tym…..bt my quesn is wat did u write dat u were saying it ws adult one…i didnt feel ny sort of tht…it ws normal n it ws neither associated wid adult things nor it ws vulgar….i love this stry…
Plz tell us is twinkle a ghost aur the ghost came in twinkle face and where did twinkle went
Gr8 at last I got to read a horror story like something …u know I love these types of stories…. Keep going… U r really good or I must say 1 of the best….????
hey dear writer i was joking yaar i always pee in the washroom anywys the epi wasss in anil kapoor language jhaakaas
It was amazing dude. And, don’t think about anything it wasn’t vulgar at all.. nothing like that.. and, I’m loving the story.. it has a lot of suspense.. waiting eagerly for the next episode.. frankly speaking I read your first episode at night I guess that’s when it was published.. I was actually having that ghost feeling but, don’t worry I wasn’t scared n all so don’t feel bad that you’re scaring us.. YOU’RE NOT!
Awesome loved it post ASAP
Nice one…
intresting plot…
eagerly waiting for next epi…
It’s just toooooo good.. Can’t wait for the next one.
Iam reading horror story for the first time n it is very good..iam eagerly waiting for the next epi..
awesome…
amazingg
Great yaar horror is depicted just perfectly. Ctd soon
Horror……wow….a hatke story….
First of all don’t sry its ur ff ur choice u can write whatever u want….. i donot knw who u are bt it really hurts when someone after writing such an nice epi says sry …..and from where u find it vulgar… and if it was it was our choice to read it u didn’t said us to read…so plz donot say sry …fell happy for the response and continue to write like this.
And one more thng from ur bak bak (sry) i got to knw u r vry sweet as u think abt ur readers so much.
No dis was not vulger at all i hav read many ff bt dis hatke
I was waiting for this to upload .. I am afraid if horror movie but i srsly don’t mind reading them .. So im enjoying n im waiting for u to post the other chapter asap
first time reading horrer story….first I used to thought hw could anyone scare by writing a story on it…but u proved me wrong…its amazing really amazing. ….