hey guys… m new here..plz do comment whether u lyk it or not..in both cases..plzzz..nd plz tell whether I shud wrap it in 2 or 3 epi or shud make it a little longer..so plzz comment..
now let’s start..all character r same as in serial…
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a girl z sitting in beautiful bridal attire on bed…decorated wd flower…she z waiting for her husband..
it’s their wedding night…
her POV
” How lyf changes suddenly…some hours before I was swara gadodia…nw m Mrs swara sanskar maheshwari..a slight smile came on her lips…lyk every other girl I also have many dreams of my marriage..my prince charming…I always dreamt of a handsome dashing guy…who falls in love wd me on first sight..who loves me more than anything in d world..who cares for me even for the little things..who cn do anything for smile…who trusts me..who cn fight with the whole world for me..who surprise me…nd ya he shud be romantic..nd many more things..like our grand wedding..lot of celebrations…and of course there z a big fat grand wedding…but there z no prince charming…lyk a girl from a traditional middle class family..these things r only for dreams not for reality..love nd love marriage or not allowed…girls shut marry to d person of their parents choice…same thing happens wd me…one day sanskar came wd his parents..to see me..they liked me..nd our marriage got fixed…everyone was so happy..nd obviously I was also so happy..after all its my marriage..for which I have dreamt of so many years..but along wd it I was so much scared..as I don’t know my would be husband how he would be..will he love me..will he care for me..nd wat abt his family..like every other girl a lot of things abt marriage came into my mind..some positive some negative…of God..!!! my marriage z fixed nd I have not seen my would be husband properly..I hav steal only 2- 3 glances..he z luking handsome..my family was very happy as they were quite rich nd well natured…nd sanskar was a famous businessman…in between I was in so much confusion..abt my upcoming lyk..how it would be..abt my new family which z supposed to be mine..
our marriage date z fixed..it’s after two months..in these two months..I nd sanskar hardly talk to each other..once during our wedding shopping ,2-3 times during our wedding ceremony which or very short convo..nd 3-4 times on phone..which r also short talks…nd mostly our talk started either by himself or by my sis ragini or his brother laksh..i was most of d tym silent listner..sumtyms coz of shyness..nd sometyms coz of fear….may be dis z d reason he didnt calle frequently..although our parents asked not to talk before marriage..but our siblings..”
her thoughts were going on..den she see his husband pic on side table..she smiles seeing it..thinking how handsome he z….she rememberd their sangeet when he came to her family..all ladies were chatting..dat he z looking lyk a prince..
she thought he z so handsome famous rich..then y he married me..will he lyk me..will he find me beautiful..den she jerks her thoght..obviously he will lyk me..no no..he liked me dats y he said yes to our marriage..den suddenly she thot wat happened if he was not allowed to tell his liking lyk she was not allowed..
all her thought came to halt..wen she heard a knock a door..she looked slightly turning her gaze…her heart beat starts raising…it was him..her husband..Sanskar..!!!!
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guys plzz tell how’s it..I know it’s not perfect..but I think upcoming episodes vl b better Dan dis..
24 Comments
Nice
Nice
Make it longer
Hi gugu
Awesome start. Please post next episode soon.
Awesome start dear plzzz continue
Nice one jasmine.. ! Do continue …
Superb. Plz continue..
Nuce
nice
nice….continue
Superb plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
Nice. Continue soon
Nice..
superb….awesome….waiting to know about sanskar’s pov…. 🙂
Thank you soooooooooo much for Swasan yar….bz now a days….there are more ff of ragsan swalak 🙁
plz update next part soon…. 🙂
awsm……..
Osum
Nyc
thanks every one…next epi I vl make it longer..
Lovely
Its really very nice
It’s superb….plzzz upload soon
Awesome
awesome dear… sorry for commenting late … but yr concept is mind blowing….. I m must say u r a great writter … yr every ff is out standing…. and different from each other… thats the best part…..
love yr writings a lot…. wld be waiting for chapter 1
and plz anynone could send me the link … for prolouge of swasan destiny season 2…. plz
keep smiling