Guys I want to make it clear Ashoka the Great is a Fanfic not the show Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat. So don’t get confused with the show.
PATLIPUTRA
Radhagupta’s POV
2 weeks have passed since the death of my guru, the one who established the mauryan empire, The hero of Magadh Acharya Chanakya but still Patliputra was in sorrow of losing Acharya Chanakya.
Death of Acharya Chanakya lead to turnaround in events. Rajkumar Ashoka was set to depart for takshshila instead of Rajkumar Sushim who found a way to escape from this mission which was to be his. All the rajkumars & warriors of Patliputra were training in the training ground. Ashok was training with Vasunandan and Subhao. They were his most diligent students at the Rajkiya Vidyale. Humble as well. Ashok has been a good influence on them. Subhao and Vasunandan were showing Ashok how to defend against spear and shield wielding warriors. Rajkumar Abhimanyu the son of samrat & Queen Kaveri who died while giving birth to him returned from his maternal home a week back & has shared a good bond with Ashoka & is set to depart with him to Takshshila.
FLASHBACK
RAJ SABHA
Abhimanyu: Pitaji Maharaj I will also depart to Takshshila with bhrata Ashoka to give him a backup.
Samrat : I can’t let you go Son you are too young for this.
Abhimanyu : Pitaji I didn’t ask for your permission I am informing you about my departure.
Everyone present there was stunned by this.
Sushim: Don’t you have manners to talk to your elders & that to with pitaji maharaj.
Abhimanyu : It would be good if you don’t teach me manners bhrata Sushim.
Sushim fumed in anger. Samrat Bindusara interrupted.
Samrat: If you have already decided who am I to stop you. But is Ashoka ready to take you with him(Looking towards Ashoka.)
Ashoka : I don’t have any problem pitaji.
FLASHBACK ENDS
Rajkumar Abhimanyu was angry at his father for keeping him away from the palace for these years.
Abhimanyu was sparring with some soldiers & he was actually good with the sword.
Maharani Charumitra was standing with Khallatak who was talking to Sushim near the edge of the ground. Indrajeet, Sushim’s sparring partner stood near them. Sushim wore an expression of smug arrogance as Khalnatak spoke excitedly. It was no secret that Khallatak was an avid supporter of Sushim. They seemed unperturbed by the grief that has overtaken Patliputra. This did not surprise Radhagupt. Charumitra and Khallatak could not stand Chanakya since he had on many occasions shown Sushim in a bad light in front of the Sabha.
Samrat Bindusar and the rest of the royal family stood under the canopy of the palace. Rani Dharma stood next to him. Her hands locked around his arms. He could see that both of them were grieving. Samrat’s dried tears in his eyes mirrored my own.
Rani Subrasi stood behind them holding Drupad. She gazed wistfully at the two of them. I didn’t dwell on that. As Rajmata Helena caught my eyes. Rajmata Helena seemed very happy. A rare sight. Her eyes could barely contain her joy. Radhagupt knew if anyone had reason to rejoice for Acharya Chanakya’s death, it was the Rajmata. Suddenly Rajmata’s expression changed. He followed her gaze towards a commotion.
An intense duel was going on. Siyamak was fighting fiercely against his sparring partner. His eyes were manic and desperate. Radhagupt could see the turmoil of emotions almost breaking out of the prince. Understandably so. Radhagupt knew what Siyamak had gone through the past few months. The young Prince had to live through the horrific shock of his mentor being a Rajdrohi. Then his grandfather. Then his mother. Not only did he lose his loved ones. They were all traitors to boot.
Siyamak’s sparring partner fell under the sheer force of the sword strikes. Siyamak was about strike him with his blade but Ashok stopped him in time. Siyamak angrily looked towards Ashok & jerked his hand & stormed off the ground.
Helena’s sudden concern for Siyamak in many ways, was a weird thing to see for me Acharya Chanakya discussed it with me. But in passing. Something had happened. And Acharya intended to find out what.
Episode ended on a confused & determined face of Radhagupta.
Guys this was all Radhagupta’s POV if by mistake his name is mentioned somewhere please forgive me.
Please comment guys I need your support to continue.
I have dropped the idea of Sushim’s Sister.
Abhimanyu Maurya is played by devish ahuja
https://www.facebook.com/devish.ahuja
67 Comments
it was a nice episode …..please continue
Thanks
very nice explanation is written here … too good (chapter 1)
Thanks
What happen to you guys. We want written episodes here only.
U do
Some other ppl like this ff so go away.
Fantastic
Thanks
soooooo nice
bt y dropped the idea of sushim sister?????
Thanks.I will bring her after some episodes.
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Asdf telling you for the last time be in your limits or it will be harmful for you.
Hershey’s and IDK are the same person btw.
Are you all satisfied with casting of abhimanyu ?
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! episode…………… I wish u continue writing
Awesome one Abhinav..
And who is Abhimanyu????
Read the prologue pari
why u guys are so excited with the fan fiction and all i just don’t get it if u guys hav so much free time then pls do a favour to update the episodes on time…
has evry1 bcum nuts???
how cn u chng de actual history n make a fan fiction out of it???
is it some kind of a joke?!!
ohkk..make another fan fiction of ramayan in which ram has been made to marry surpnakha!!! 😀
or make akbar a prisoner.. or let india enslave britishers!!!!!
lol!!! u people r sooooo funny
pls request he yar is serial ki wat mat lagao phle jaise hi aane do updates.
At least plzz update us wid the story which happened in the episode.. I thought the reason to u update the stories is bcz u want to help those who missed the shw due to some reasons.. But u r writing a fanfic.. Plzz don’t do this.. U were my last hope cz I m not able to see the episodes cz of my studies..
Excuse me….I think everyone has the right to imagine things.It does not change the history.And I think it is a way of showing respect to the great people.I fully support you Abhinav.
I was glad that atleast there werent any fan fiction series in Ashoka!!
There you go, spaming the main page of telly updates!!
Why dont you guys rename the page from telly updates to fanfiction updates?
If you miss a day’s episode, one has to scan in between so much to be updated!!! So annoying!
What’s ur problem?
Like Sai said everyone has the right to imagine things. How about u go and yell at the CAS page as well bcz it’s not like their showing u real history. And like I said what’s going to happen if u miss one episode? There are so many other ways that U can get info of the epi. And if u can’t then just miss the f***ing episode. U won’t die if u miss one epi will u ?
Don’t do a fanfic?
Have u lost ur mind? I’m not sure about you, but to me it seems disrespectful to make a fiction thing out of something historical. You could have done something else! Thank god you are not writing a fanfic about Ramayana or Mahabharata! Tht would have been beyond excusable!
Where is today’s epi? Is it not here because of this epi? Can you plz not continue, no one needs fanfiction to become history!!!
Hey it’s not because of me the writer didn’t upload is it my fault i uploaded this on sunday don’t blame me.
Hey that’s very rude of u ppl. If want to see only the updates related to episodes,press only episodes option.Don’t blame the fanfiction.
Thanks Sai I don’t know why they people are blaming me.
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Shame on you for using such language!
You all are reacting like Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat is showing you real history.
It’s also a fiction.Stop blaming me .
Abhinav…. its good.. in fact better then the current telecasted story
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If you don’t have time don’t read it.We wont lose anything.Stop it already!
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Total shame.Look what they have done to you.
Dear Poonam/asdf
2 u think we don’t know that Poonam and asdf are the SAME person. Don’t try 2 get yourself backup bcz u don’t have any cuz ur a LONER.
Where are you POOJA – Please save us.
Hey all of you listen I am not liable to update CAS it’s pooja’s job & she might have been busy.
Why are you guys blaming me I am not a tellyupdate writer I am just a fan.
Are you all mad is it my fault Pooja has not uploaded stay in your limits or it won’t be good for you all.
Take Sai’s advice if you have so much problem don’t comment here comment on 22nd April’s episode.
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ekyo tumlog bekar ki chijo me pade ho… Vaise he es serial me rahu – ketu laga he aur aab kyo esko sani grha lagva rhe ho khane ka matlab ye he ki ak to youtube par nhi deta he aab kam se kam written bhi nhi dega to socho kya hoga…..
gussa mat ho abhinav ham tum pe blame nhi laga rhe….
People have totally gone mad.They are killing the young talent. Do you think that the show is 100% true?Its only 5% correct.So what is your problem guys?
If you did not get the update written is it his problem?No,you are just mean guys who are just being mean.Shame!
U agree with Sai guys it’s true that latest epi of ‘ashoka’ is not updated but what happened to u all? Why r u blaming Abhinav.. Abhinav is not responsible for this if you don’t know the whole thing you can’t blame anyone even fans can update their fan fiction by writing their chapter n posting to telly update site they are then posted by the telly update writers…just B’coz the epi isn’t posted n Abhinav posted the fan fiction on that very day it doesn’t make it Abhinav’s mistake
Thanks Cherry.
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