Guys I want to make it clear Ashoka the Great is a Fanfic not the show Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat. So don’t get confused with the show.
PATLIPUTRA
Radhagupta’s POV
2 weeks have passed since the death of my guru, the one who established the mauryan empire, The hero of Magadh Acharya Chanakya but still Patliputra was in sorrow of losing Acharya Chanakya.
Death of Acharya Chanakya lead to turnaround in events. Rajkumar Ashoka was set to depart for takshshila instead of Rajkumar Sushim who found a way to escape from this mission which was to be his. All the rajkumars & warriors of Patliputra were training in the training ground. Ashok was training with Vasunandan and Subhao. They were his most diligent students at the Rajkiya Vidyale. Humble as well. Ashok has been a good influence on them. Subhao and Vasunandan were showing Ashok how to defend against spear and shield wielding warriors. Rajkumar Abhimanyu the son of samrat & Queen Kaveri who died while giving birth to him returned from his maternal home a week back & has shared a good bond with Ashoka & is set to depart with him to Takshshila.
FLASHBACK
RAJ SABHA
Abhimanyu: Pitaji Maharaj I will also depart to Takshshila with bhrata Ashoka to give him a backup.
Samrat : I can’t let you go Son you are too young for this.
Abhimanyu : Pitaji I didn’t ask for your permission I am informing you about my departure.
Everyone present there was stunned by this.
Sushim: Don’t you have manners to talk to your elders & that to with pitaji maharaj.
Abhimanyu : It would be good if you don’t teach me manners bhrata Sushim.
Sushim fumed in anger. Samrat Bindusara interrupted.
Samrat: If you have already decided who am I to stop you. But is Ashoka ready to take you with him(Looking towards Ashoka.)
Ashoka : I don’t have any problem pitaji.
FLASHBACK ENDS
Rajkumar Abhimanyu was angry at his father for keeping him away from the palace for these years.
Abhimanyu was sparring with some soldiers & he was actually good with the sword.
Maharani Charumitra was standing with Khallatak who was talking to Sushim near the edge of the ground. Indrajeet, Sushim’s sparring partner stood near them. Sushim wore an expression of smug arrogance as Khalnatak spoke excitedly. It was no secret that Khallatak was an avid supporter of Sushim. They seemed unperturbed by the grief that has overtaken Patliputra. This did not surprise Radhagupt. Charumitra and Khallatak could not stand Chanakya since he had on many occasions shown Sushim in a bad light in front of the Sabha.
Samrat Bindusar and the rest of the royal family stood under the canopy of the palace. Rani Dharma stood next to him. Her hands locked around his arms. He could see that both of them were grieving. Samrat’s dried tears in his eyes mirrored my own.
Rani Subrasi stood behind them holding Drupad. She gazed wistfully at the two of them. I didn’t dwell on that. As Rajmata Helena caught my eyes. Rajmata Helena seemed very happy. A rare sight. Her eyes could barely contain her joy. Radhagupt knew if anyone had reason to rejoice for Acharya Chanakya’s death, it was the Rajmata. Suddenly Rajmata’s expression changed. He followed her gaze towards a commotion.
An intense duel was going on. Siyamak was fighting fiercely against his sparring partner. His eyes were manic and desperate. Radhagupt could see the turmoil of emotions almost breaking out of the prince. Understandably so. Radhagupt knew what Siyamak had gone through the past few months. The young Prince had to live through the horrific shock of his mentor being a Rajdrohi. Then his grandfather. Then his mother. Not only did he lose his loved ones. They were all traitors to boot.
Siyamak’s sparring partner fell under the sheer force of the sword strikes. Siyamak was about strike him with his blade but Ashok stopped him in time. Siyamak angrily looked towards Ashok & jerked his hand & stormed off the ground.
Helena’s sudden concern for Siyamak in many ways, was a weird thing to see for me Acharya Chanakya discussed it with me. But in passing. Something had happened. And Acharya intended to find out what.
Episode ended on a confused & determined face of Radhagupta.
Guys this was all Radhagupta’s POV if by mistake his name is mentioned somewhere please forgive me.
Please comment guys I need your support to continue.
I have dropped the idea of Sushim’s Sister.
Abhimanyu Maurya is played by devish ahuja
https://www.facebook.com/devish.ahuja
67 Comments
see we all visit this site because we are unable to watch the episodes on tv.. Now if u all have enough and plenty of time then pls pls at least for our sake give the updates of episode and then do whatevev fanfic and etc etc what ever comes to ur mind.
I don’t think any SENSIBLE person here would care about your stupid needs and wants.
Mr. Fan i am not pooja i am not liable to update you comment on 22nd april 2016 episode.
This is all bullshit. Most of here like to read the written updates of CAS and then discuss a particular episode.
U are deleting those comments which are against u !!!!
Wah bhai wah !!!
U are disgusting !!!!!!!!!!!!!
It’s good that he deleted it. Anyway’s what’s your problem if he deleted it?. Or r u jealous that u can’t right a fanfic as good as him. I completely agree with Sai and cherry and I fully support abhinav. And abhinav can u plz explain to these ppl in baby language that it’s not ur fault Pooja di didn’t update because all of them are sooooooooooooo dumb that they can’t understand proper English. But in case these dumb ppl get even dumber even after u explain to them in baby language then I think u should change the picture bcz it’s the same as the updating one. And Tunisha about the disgusting thing I’m sorry bt ur face is disgusting. Why don’t u ppl stop commenting on this ff if u don’t want to read it. And if u think abhinav is responsible for the fact that the epi wasn’t updated then u shud take a walk back to preschool where they teach u COMMON SENSE which u absolutely DON’T have. And what will happen if u miss one epi? Will u die? I hope so.
Sorry if u are one of those ppl who wasn’t posting bad comments this wasn’t meant for u, but the ppl who posted bad stuff u deserve MUCH more than this.
Why are you saying sorry ?
It’s ok yaar.
I didn’t delete any comment tellyupdates editor might have.
Oh ok… Sorry
good episode abhinav.u just write your thoughts .its really good .accept good comments and advise to improve .and rest of the part just ignore it.ireally liked your ff.plz continue
Guys we know that Pooja isn’t here for updating episodes. Maybe she’s busy with some work. Please stop fighting with each other. Someone updated 26 April episode please read it.
when are u gonna update the next part???
it wasn’t abhinav who was involved in removing those comments. It was me who was behind all this. I was the one who reported to TU and they removed them. You need to stop morons.
Does anyone know the actual history of THE GREAT ASHOK. Why are some of you bashing abhinav? The way you are bashing him- he is not freaking nuts. In fact you all are. Do you believe that the writers of Ashok are showing correct history. In fact they have also taken creative liberties and too much of it. Don’t you get this simple thing? The actual episodes show you so much negativity. Do you believe that samrat bindusar was such a king? He could have never been so. I have never read your episodes Abhinav but if some people are trying to write a fan fiction with positivity, they are surely doing a better job. Even the writers have made a mockery out of history. There is only one LINE for you all- go get a life.
And it’s not that by writing a fan fiction, we are making a mockery out of it. We are not disrespecting Ashok the great. We are just highlighting him in a positive way. When it’s clearly mentioned that it has nothing to do with history, then you all also have a problem. Stop bashing him and anyone else.
Listen guys i am thinking of shifting this ff at fb or they will uneccasirly bash me so what do you guys think.
ONLY FOR THOSE WHO WANT TO READ THIS FF.
i dont think so abhinav .u han all right to write here so there is no need to shift your ff to facebook
no Abhinav I request you not to shift this ff overlook all the comments which are stopping u to do so plllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t stop this ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz………………
many of us enjoy ur ff………
I request you to update ur next episode soon!!!!!!!!!!!